07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（浙江舟山市）（含答案）

07：【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）
（浙江舟山市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书信作文
1．假如你是李华，美好的初中生活即将结束，在这三年里，你的家人、老师、朋友都陪伴你一起度过了很多难忘的日子。在毕业之际，请你写一封英文感谢信给你的家人、老师或者朋友，感谢他们对你的照顾、帮助、鼓励或者支持。
内容包括：
1. 表达真诚的谢意；
2. 说明感谢的理由；
3. 回顾一件具体的令你难忘且感激的事。
注意：
1. 感谢信内容必须包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 感谢信中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：80-100。
Dear ________,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假如你是某英语报的编辑Linda，收到一位中国母亲的来信，信中她向你反映了“双减”政策 (double reduction policy) 实行后她所遇到的困惑。请根据信的内容，给她写一封回信，帮她解决困惑。词数：80~100（书信的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear editor,As you know, the double-reduction policy has had a great influence on children’s study and life. My son used to take lots of after-school classes, but now he has less homework and seems to have nothing much to do on weekends. I’m worried about him. Here are my problems. Could you help me 1) Should I give him other homework to do on weekends Why 2) Should I encourage him to take up a hobby on weekends Why I’m looking forward to getting your advice. Yours, A worried mother
Dear madam,I can understand how you feel now._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my advice will help you a lot.
Yours,
Linda
二、电子邮件
3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Alan最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
1. 很少用电子产品；
2. 坚持做眼保健操；
3. 经常做户外活动；
4. ……
注意：1. 邮件必须包括所给的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实姓名和校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：80~100。邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hi, Alan,
How’s it going I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，体育中考后，学校取消了体育课，你觉得不妥。为此你给笔友Carol发了一封电子邮件，请他谈谈对此事的看法及理由。
Dear Carol,
How’s it going I haven’t written to you for a long time. Recently I have passed the PE test and got full marks. But our school decided to cancel our PE classes. I feel very sorry for that. Could you give me your opinion and reasons
Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
注意:
（1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80-100；
（4）邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
Glad to hear from you. Congratulations on your full marks. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Carol
5．假如你是李华，最近收到外国好友 Henry的电子邮件，请你根据该邮件内容给Henry回复。
Hi, Li Hua, How are you I hope you’re fine and not too busy! I’m so interested in Chinese culture these days. Could you tell me something about one of the Chinese traditional festivals And how do you celebrate it You may tell me about the time, food, activities….Hope to get your reply soon! Love Henry
注意：
1. 请回复邮件中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：80～100 词，开头和结尾给出部分不计入总词数。
Hi, Henry, How’s it going _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
三、话题作文
6．Write at least 50 words about the topic “I will possibly be a ... in the future”. （以“我将来很可能成为一名……”为题写一篇不少于 50 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following questions for reference（以下问题仅供参考）
What will you possibly be in the future
Why do you think so
What are you good at
What are you poor at
What do you have to practise more
What do you have to learn
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四、材料作文
7．根据提示，以“My dream job”为题用英语写一篇短文(80词左右)
提示：
1.想成为一名记者，会遇见很多有趣的人，交很多朋友。
2.打算多读书，给报纸、杂志写文章。
3.高中毕业后想去北京上大学，因为那里会有更多的工作。
4.想在一家电台工作，并环游世界。
要求：1.必须包括上面提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要精准，意思要通顺、连贯；
3.不要出现真实校名及姓名。
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8．李明是初三学生，自愿参加了学校的晚间托管班，但在中考前两个月，他想在家晚自习。他不知道自己的想法是否正确，于是在英语论坛上发帖求助，请根据贴子的内容，用英语回帖，提出你的建议和理由（理由至少两点）。词数：80-100（帖子开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Topic: Should I continue attending the school evening self-study class
Li Ming Hello! I’m Li Ming, a student of Grade Nine. The entrance exams are coming in about two months. To get better grades, I plan not to attend the school evening self-study class any more. I prefer to study at home. I wonder whether my idea is proper.Could you give me some advice Many thanks!
I understand how you feel. Here is my advice. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。
内容要点 参考词汇
What do you want to be when you grow up a teacher a scientist
Why do you want to be a(n)… ●be good at communicating ●work with children ●be interested in science ●invent new products
How are you going to do that ●get a good education ●learn how to teach children ●study science hard ●do scientific research
Where are you going to work ●… ●…
When are you going to start ●… ●…
注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
(3)词数80～100。
My dream job
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10．目前很多学生整体部忙于学习，成却不理想。请根据表格内容，结合白身实际，写一篇关干“怎样提高学习效率”的短文。
学习方法 1.listen to the teacher 2.takes notes 3.review in time 4.correct mistakes ...
体育锻炼 1.exercise ...
其他方面 1.make good use of time 2.ask sb. for help ...
要求：
(1)短文应条理清楚，行文连，段落分明，100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
(2)短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
(3)短文应括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。How to Improve Our Study Efficiency
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their studies. How can we solve the problem Here are some suggestions.
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If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Dear Mom,
Thank you for being with me and helping me all the way through. Whenever I need help, you are always there, supporting me and encouraging me.
I still remember those days when I was under too much pressure. At that time, I could hardly eat or sleep well. You took me on trips to get me relaxed, cheered me up with lovely gifts and even helped me with the schoolwork I had left behind. Thanks to you, I recovered quickly and got back to school.
I feel so lucky to have you in my life! Thank you again, mom!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信写作。根据所给要点写一份感谢信，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用书信格式进行写作，人称使用第一、第二人称，时态使用一般过去时和一般现在时相结合。首先表达谢意并说明理由，然后描述具体的一件令你难忘且感激的事，最后再次表达真诚的谢意。写作中注意多种句式交替使用。同时注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
2．例文
Dear Madam,
I understand how you feel now. In my view, you needn’t worry about it. The main purpose of the “double reduction” policy is to lower the students’ pressure, so your son shouldn’t be given other homework. As we know, more homework doesn’t mean getting good grades, because the best way to improve grades is keeping their brains active in class.
As for taking up a hobby, I think you should encourage and support him. The earlier kids learn a skill, the better it’s for their future. But remember not to push him to do what he dislikes. After all, it’s more important to have a happy child.
Hope my advice will help your a lot!
Yours,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意书信中的问题就是写作的基本方向，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用自己的观点说明周末该不该给孩子做其他作业及原因；
第二步，用自己的观点说明该不该鼓励孩子在周末养成爱好及原因；
第三步，提出希望，希望自己的建议能帮助对方。（文中已给出）
[亮点词汇]
①worry about担心
②in my view在我看来
③the best way to do sth.做某事的最好方法
④remember not to do sth.记住不要去做某事
⑤after all毕竟
[高分句型]
①As we know, more homework doesn’t mean getting good grades, because the best way to improve grades is keeping their brains active in class.正如我们所知，更多的家庭作业并不意味着取得好成绩，因为提高成绩的最好方法是在课堂上保持大脑活跃。（使用because引导原因状语从句。）
②After all, it’s more important to have a happy child. 毕竟，有一个快乐的孩子更重要。（使用句型it’s+形容词+to do，表示“做某事是怎样的”。）
3．例文
Hi, Alan,
How’s it going I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于电子邮件作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍保护视力的方法：很少用电子产品；坚持做眼保健操；经常做户外活动；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
4．例文一:
Dear Li Hua,
Glad to hear from you. Congratulations on your full marks. But I’m sorry to hear that your school decided to cancel P.E classes after the P.E exam. In my opinion, it’s not good for your body and study.
Firstly, having P.E classes can build your bodies and keep you healthy. It also makes you feel relaxed if you stay in the classroom all day. Then you can study in an effective way. And you can get lots of fun from doing sports. What’s more, in P.E classes you can learn some new skills and teamwork. That will strengthen your relationship with the classmates.
So, if possible, ask your school to have P.E classes again and do sports after school. All in all, having PE classes is good for you!
Fight for the coming senior high school entrance exam!
Yours,
Carol
例文二：
Dear Li Hua,
Glad to hear from you. Congratulations on your full marks. I think canceling P.E classes is good for you. As the high school entrance exam is coming soon, you don’t have much time left. You can make full use of the time to review what you’ve learned. And now you are often stressed out and have no more energy to do sports. So having no PE classes helps you reduce your stress in some way. When you are tired at school, you can relax yourselves by listening to music.
In a word, I hope things will be better for you.
Yours,
Carol
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作需要回复的信件内容给出，考生应注意弄清“信件”中的主题，针对李华遇到的问题进行回复。
[写作步骤]
第一步，安慰李华，并表达自己的观点；
第二步，讲述自己的理由；
第三步，提出自己的建议；
第四步，表达祝福，鼓励李华。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion在我看来；
②be good for sb对……有好处；
③What’s more而且；
④strengthen加强；
⑤All in all总的来说。
[高分句型]
①It also makes you feel relaxed if you stay in the classroom all day. （if引导条件状语从句）
②All in all, having PE classes is good for you!（动名词作主语）
5．例文
Hi, Henry,
How’s it going I’m glad to know that you are very interested in Chinese culture. I’m very glad to tell you something about traditional Chinese festivals. I’d like to introduce a Chinese festival, the Mid Auturmn Festival. The Mid Auturmn Festival is on August 15 of the lunar calendar when the moon is believed to be the biggest and fullest. To the Chinese, a full moon is a symbol of prosperity and family reunion. The main traditions and celebrations include eating mooncakes, having dinner with family, gazing at and worshipping the moon, and lighting lanterns. By the Ming and Qing Dynasties, it had become one of the traditional Chinese festivals, with the same name as the Spring Festival. I sincerely hope that it can be passed to the next generation forever.
I hope you like the Mid Auturmn Festival. I hope you can come to China during the Mid Auturmn Festival.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合Henry的电子邮件进行写作，根据该邮件内容给Henry回复。可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。首先介绍自己愿意为他介绍中国传统节日，从而引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍中国传统节日中秋节；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望你能在中秋节期间来中国。”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①By the Ming and Qing Dynasties, it had become one of the traditional Chinese festivals, with the same name as the Spring Festival.（one of……之一）
②I’d like to introduce a Chinese festival, the Mid Auturmn Festival.（I’d like to do想要做某事）
6．例文
I will possibly be a writer in the future
I will possibly be a writer in the future. Maybe writing is hard, but it can bring me much happiness.
When I was young, I liked reading and writing very much. And I also had a good imagination. So I would like to be a writer in the future. I think writing is interesting and it can make me interested in the beautiful world.
To be a writer, I should do many things. I am supposed to read more and write more. I need to gain much knowledge and practice writing skills. If I study hard and practice more, I believe I can be a good writer in the future.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于半命题作文，要求以“我将来很可能成为一名……”为题，参考所给的问题，进行写作。
2. 写作指导：本文综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时，采用第一人称口吻。第一段主要点明作者将来很可能从事的职业，第二段具体说明原因，第三段阐述应该如何做并结尾。注意语句通顺，无拼写和语法错误。
7．例文：
My dream job
Everyone has his dream. They work hard to make their dream come true. I have a dream, too.
I want to be a reporter in the future. I can meet lots of interesting people, and make many friends.
I am going to read more books so that I can write articles for newspapers and magazines.
I plan to further my study in Beijing after graduating from the high school because there are many job opportunities there. I hope I can work for a radio station and travel around the world.
I think my dream can come true one day, because there’s an old saying “where there is a will, there is a way.”
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料写作，在写作时可以根据所给提示分成对应段落，类似条目可以合并。首段把梦想这个关键词提出，中间段落按照条目进行罗列，最后一段再进行总结。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称进行陈述；时态采用一般将来时为主，对于将来意愿的词汇要尽量避免重复；每个条目保证罗列全面，注意词汇和句型的多变，保证条理清晰。
8．参考范文：
I understand how you feel. Here is my advice.
I don’t think it’s a good idea to study at home in the evening. One of the main reasons is that you can’t get any immediate help from your teachers or classmates when you have problems with schoolwork. Also, you’ll find no friends to play or chat with during the break time. After all, to relax yourself is important as well before the entrance exams. There is another advantage of attending the evening self-study class. When you are being lazy, you might be encouraged by the hard-working spirit from your classmates. So you’d better not change your learning place.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。对于李明存在的问题提出自己的看法。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。分为两段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段就李明的问题提出相应的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
9．例文：
My dream job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream to be a scientist. I have always been interested in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s life and I also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take actions right now. First, I’m going to study science really hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我梦想的工作”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己梦想的工作是什么；第二段介绍自己如何让自己的梦想实现。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
10．例文：
A great number of students can’t finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their studies. How can we solve the problem Here are some suggestions.
First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as previewing new lessons before class, listening to the teacher carefully in class, taking notes in time and so on. We should review in time and do homework on time. Don’t forget to correct mistakes at any time. Then, it’s helpful for study to have good health. So we should spend at least an hour exercising our body every day. Besides, we’d better make good use of time. Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow. We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions.
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。点明“怎样提高学习效率”的主题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学习方法、体育锻炼以及其他方面提出建议。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a great number of 大量的
②in time及时
③such as例如
④at least至少
⑤put off推迟
[高分句型]
①Then, it’s helpful for study to have good health. （it作形式主语）
②Don’t put off what we can do today till tomorrow.（祈使句）