(共16张PPT)
Unit 2 Success
Writing Workshop
A Life Story
目录页
contents
Get Ready for Writing
I
Read for Writing
II
III
Structure and Language
Compose Your Writing
IV
Get Ready for Writing
I
Brainstorm: New words and phrases
iron _______________
hammer _______________
recognised _______________
contribute _______________
style _______________
retire _______________
retire from _______________
leadership _______________
devotion _______________
铁;熨斗
榔头;锤子
公认的;经过检验的
捐献;促成
方式;特点
退休;退职
从……退休
领导;领导地位
奉献;忠心
Get Ready for Writing
Pair Work. You are going to write a life story of a person you like or admire. Discuss with your partner. (Ex.1)
1. Who are you going to write about
2. What is special about him / her
3. What big events did he / she experience in his / her life
Ⅱ
Read for Writing
Read for Writing
Because of her strong and powerful playing style.
1. Who is Lang ping
2. Why was Lang Ping named “Iron Hammer”
One of the China’s most recognised athletes.
A volleyball star.
The most popular figure in China’s volleyball history.
Read the article. Answer the questions. (Ex.2)
Read for Writing
She played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
Her team achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics, the 1982 World Championship and the 1981 and 1985 World Cups.
3. What’s Lang Ping’s experience as an athlete
Read for Writing
4. What is Lang Ping’s experience as a coach
After retiring as an athlete in 1986, she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the Unit States and Italy.
In 1995, she returned to become the coach of the women’s national team who won the 2015 World Cup.
Read for Writing
5. Why do people like Lang Ping
Because of her devotion to her career and her huge influence on the sport of volleyball.
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Structure and Language
Structure and Language
Label the paragraphs (a-c) in the boxes of each paragraph. (Ex.3)
1
2
4
3
a important life or work experiences
of the person
b general introduction of the person
c major awards and comments
Structure and Language
Sentence Builder
during Lang Ping played on China’s national volleyball team during the 1980s.
at Lang was a member of the team when they achieved a series of success including gold medals at the 1984 Olympics ...
after After retiring as an athlete in 1986 she has been successful as a volleyball coach in the United States and Italy.
that year That year, Lang Ping was given the Best Coach and the Sports Special Contribution awards ...
Write 2-3 sentences about the person that you are going to write about. Use the Sentence Builder to help you. (Ex.4)
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Compose Your Writing
Compose Your Writing
Writing Help
Writing a Life Story
It’s important to:
focus on what is special about the person you are writing about;
choose important events and achievements to show why he / she is special;
use time expressions to describe past events or experiences;
use past tenses to write about events in the past.
Compose Your Writing
Step 1
Step 4
Step 3
Step 2
Find more detailed information about the person you are going to wrtite about.
Outlining Complete the outline of the person’s life story based on Activity 3.
Drafting Use your outline and the Writing Help to write your first draft.
Editing Edit your essay in pairs. Then share what you have written in class.