【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（浙江丽水市）（含解析）

【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（浙江丽水市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、材料作文
1．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友 Eric观看了2022年北京冬奥会开幕式，对开幕式倒计时中出现的24节气(24 Solar Terms) 非常感兴趣。请你结合下面的内容要点，给 Eric写一封信并详细介绍夏至(Summer Solstice) 这个节气。
内容要点 参考词汇
Name Summer Solstice (the 10th solar term)
Time From June 21 and to July 6th this year
Activities In ancient China: a one-day holiday; women made colorful fans Today: eat noodles; hold the Dragon Boat race in Shaoxing; ...
Meanings an important part of Chinese culture; ...
注意：
1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；参考词汇仅供选择；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3.词数：80-100；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Eric,
How’s everything going _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hu
2．青少年的健康问题越来越受到重视，你校英语校刊举办以“Healthy Life”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面的思维导图写一篇短文参加活动。
注意：
(1) 短文必须包括导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数80-100；首句已给出，仅供选用，不计入总次数。
Health is very important to everyone.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．时光荏苒，初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较，你会有很多变化。请以“I have changed a lot!”为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你最重要的变化及其如何发生的。
要求：l. 短文不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息；
2. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示：l. What did you use to be like
2. What is the most important change
3. And how did it happen
I have changed a lot!
My life has changed a lot in the last three years. I used to___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、电子邮件
4．三年初中生活很快就要结束，崭新的高中生活即将到来。假设你是Li Hua，你的美国好友David想了解你的暑假安排，请根据下表给David写一封Email。
内容要点 参考词汇
Study *get ready for *do some reading *...
Life *do some sports *take a part-time job *get close to the nature
Wishes *...
注意：1.文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
3.词数：80~100词；
4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,How are you The summer holiday is coming soon. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是李明，你的美国朋友David 向你了解暑假社会实践活动的计划，请结合下表内容写一封邮件向他介绍你的计划。
Social Practice Plan
What to do Why to do so
●volunteer to do... ●make a survey about... ●have a graduation trip to... ●… ●be helpful... ●learn more about... ●open one’s eyes... ●…
注意：
1）文中必须包含至少两项活动的内容要点，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3）词数：80~ 100；邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,Glad to share my social practice plan with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming
6．假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter想了解你初中三年来的成长和变化。请根据表格中的要点，写一封Email告诉他。
内容要点 参考词汇
In the past Now
Personality quiet and shy… outgoing and active…
Interests and hobbies listen to music,… do sports…
注意：（1）文中必须包含上表中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80~100；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To Peter@
Subject How I have changed
Hi, Peter! I’m so happy to tell you how I have changed in the past three years. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack想来中国旅游并了解中国文化。请根据你所看到的海报信息，写一封邮件，向他推荐这项活动。要求：
(1)文章必须包含所有要点，并适当拓展;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名;
(3)词数80~100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to learn that you are coming to China.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你是李华，请根据下面的要点，给你的美国朋友Chris写一封email，向他介绍你是如何在日常生活中保持健康的。
Diet eat vegetables and fruit don’t have too much junk food …
Sports do sports every day …
Sleep go to bed early have enough sleep …
注意：（1）文中必须包含上表中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80~100；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,How is everything going I am glad to tell you how to keep healthy every day.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、讲稿
9．假如你们学校要开设一档有关安全教育的英语广播栏目，面向同学们征稿，请根据以下提示内容，写一份英文演讲稿。
注意：1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点；参考词汇供选择使用；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80～100；
4. 演讲的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
内容要点 参考词汇
What happened What should we do
At school 1. Go up and down the stairs walk slowly, right side,...
2. Find someone getting hurt not lift him up, cover...with...
On the way home 1. Go across the road obey the traffic rules,...
2. Ride a bike not listen to music...
Dear teachers and students,
I’m glad to give a speech about safety. As is known to us all, safety is the most important in our life.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I hope my speech can be helpful to you.
四、通知
10．假如你是学生会主席李华，学校“英语角”将举办一次以“缓解压力(Cope with pressure)”为主题的心理主题讲座。请根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一则通知。
Topic how to cope with pressure
Speaker Dr. Chen, Beijing University
Time next Friday, at 3 p.m.
Place the school hall
Participants (参会人员) all Junior Three students
Attention …
注意: 1. 词数80~100；2.通知的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.不得出现你的真实校名和人名。An Announcement
Dear students,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Student Union
May 20
参考答案：
1．A possible version:
Dear Eric,
How’s everything going Here is something about Summer Solstice.
As the tenth solar term, Summer Solstice begins on June 21 and ends on July 6 this year. In fact, it’s the longest day of the year. In ancient China people had a one-day off and women made colorful fans to cool themselves down. Today, people celebrate it by eating noodles. And people in Shaoxing hold the Dragon Boat Race! In my hometown, we have rice mixed with beans and meat.
As one of the 24 terms, Summer Solstice is an important part of Chinese culture. It guides people’s farming and teaches people to live healthily.
Sounds interesting, doesn’t it
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，要求我们根据要点提示向外国朋友详细地介绍夏至。写作时必须包含所给的内容要点：节气名、节气的时间、活动和意义，同时可适当地添加合理的内容，使文章内容更加丰富。
2.写作指导：这是一篇介绍型作文，时态为一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。例文开段就点明介绍的对象——夏至；然后介绍夏至的时间，以自己家乡绍兴为例，介绍节日的活动；接着开段介绍夏至节在中国文化中的地位及意义；最后简短结尾。
2．例文
Health is very important to everyone. Then how can we keep healthy
Firstly, I think eating habits are really important. We should eat more vegetables and fruits and keep away from junk food that is harmful to us.
Secondly, it’s a good way to get some exercise. Life lies in sports. We can play basketball with our friends after school.
Thirdly, learning how to relax also helps a lot. We can relax ourselves by listening to music and watching funny movies.
Last but not least, we’re supposed to get enough sleep. It’s good for both the mind and the body.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般现在”时态；
③提示：根据思维导图写一篇短文，要求包含所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：第一段开门见山，提出如何保持健康；
第二步：第二段至第四段从饮食习惯、锻炼、放松这三个方面阐述建议；
第三步：自由发挥补充最后一点，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①keep away from远离
②be harmful to对……有害
③lie in在于
④by doing sth通过做某事
⑤last but not least最后但同等重要
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, learning how to relax also helps a lot.（动名词做主语）
3．例文：
My life has changed a lot in the last three years. I used to be fat and short, but now I am thin and tall. I was hard to get on with, but now I am popular among my classmates. Most importantly, I didn’t use to study hard, so I couldn’t get good scores on my exams, but now, thanks to the help of my teachers and classmates, I do well in my studies. They encourage me to work hard and not to give up my dream. They have helped me grow to be a better person.
I’m happy with all these changes because now I’m healthy, hard-working and popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作提示已给出，考生注意写过去与现在的对比时需要变化时态。重点介绍“最重要的改变”及其“是如何发生的”，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头点题，说明主题是“这三年自己发生的改变”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌、性格、学习”等方面介绍自己发生的改变，并重点介绍最重要的变化及其原因；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感想。
[亮点词汇]
① used to do sth.过去常常做某事
② get on with与……相处
③ encourage sb to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
① I’m happy with all these changes because now I’m healthy, hard-working and popular.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② Most importantly, I didn’t use to study hard, so I couldn’t get good scores on my exams, but now, thanks to the help of my teachers and classmates, I do well in my studies.（so和but连接的并列句）
4．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you The summer holiday is coming soon. I’m looking forward to making it meaningful. Now I’d like to share my ideas with you.
I plan to do plenty of interesting and colorful things. First, I will keep learning to get ready for my high school. And I will read many books. We know reading makes a full man. In my daily life, I would like to do some sports, and I want to take a part-time job. In addition, I hope to go hiking and get close to the nature.
In short, I hope I can have a happy and meaningful summer holiday. Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干表格中给出的提示描述自己的暑假安排，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时和第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从学习、生活等方面具体介绍自己的暑期安排；第三段表达希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
5．例文：
Dear David,
Glad to share my social practice plan with you.
As it will be the last summer holiday in junior school, some classmates and I plan to go on a graduation trip to Hangzhou, the capital city of Zhejiang. By enjoying the beautiful scenery and colorful cultures there, we can open our eyes and bring some unforgettable memories. After the trip, I will volunteer to help in our city library, sorting out books, guiding readers to the right bookshelves, and of course, communicating with different people. I’m sure this experience can not only enrich my life but help me understand the true meaning of learning by doing.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封邮件作文。向David介绍自己的暑假社会实践活动计划。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般将来时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段根据材料提示内容介绍自己的计划；最后一段表达期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
6．例文：
Hi, Peter!
I’m so happy to tell you how I have changed in the past three years.
When I started junior high school, I was really shy and quiet. I wasn’t brave enough to ask the teachers any questions. I wasn’t good at English and always felt worried. I lost myself in listening to music all day long. Luckily, I have made great progress and become more confident with the help of my English teacher. She always encourages me and tries to bring out the best in me. Now I am not only good at all subjects but also interested in sports. You will see an outgoing and active young adult when we meet next time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇应用文写作，题目要求根据所给表格中的要点提示给你的笔友写一封信谈谈你初中三年来的生活变化。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称，结合一般现在时和一般过去时来行文。邮件开头已给出，第二段主要写过去和现在的变化。写作时，注意保持主谓一致，行文连贯，无单词和语法错误。
7．例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m happy to learn that you are coming to China. I can’t wait to tell you something about a great summer camp in China. It will last for two weeks, from June 15th to June 28th.
In the camp, you can stay with a Chinese family and experience the local people’s life. Then, you can enjoy many outdoor activities, like climbing mountains, taking a trip and so on. Besides, you have a chance to experience the Dragon Boat Festival. You can watch Dragon Dance races as well as eating zongzi. I think it’s a special way for you to learn Chinese culture well.
Hope you have a great time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据海报中信息写电子邮件向Jack推荐海报中的活动。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。邮件正文可分为三段式：第一段引出活动；第二段具体介绍这项活动；第三段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
8．[例文]
Dear Chris,
How is everything going I am glad to tell you how to keep healthy every day.
First, we should eat healthily. We should eat more vegetables and fruits. And we shouldn’t eat too much junk food. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Second, exercise is necessary. There is no doubt that exercise can give us strong bodies, so we should do sports every day. Finally, we should form good living habits. We should go to bed early and have enough sleep every day. What’s more, never drink coffee before going to bed. If we start now, the change will show.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给表格提示，介绍自己是如何在日常生活中保持健康的，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍从饮食习惯上如何保持健康；
第二步，从运动上介绍如何保持健康；
第三步，从睡眠上介绍如何保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①There is no doubt毫无疑问
②living habits生活习惯
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
If we start now, the change will show.（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．例文：
Dear teachers and students,
I’m glad to give a speech about safety. As is known to us all, safety is the most important in our life.
When we are at school, we should protect ourselves. For example, when we go up and down the stairs, we should walk slowly on the right side instead of rushing. If we find someone hurt, we must tell the teacher first. And remember not to lift him up. We can cover him with a coat and make him comfortable before help arrives. In addition, on our way home, we should obey the traffic rules. When we ride a bike, we mustn’t listen to music or just use one hand. It’s very dangerous.
All in all, I hope my speech can be helpful to you.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。要求根据表格提示内容介绍如何在学校和回家路上保证自己的安全，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍在学校和在回家的路上的时候，我们可以怎么做来保护自己；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
10．Possible version:
An Announcement
Dear students,
In order to help us to cope with pressure properly, our school will invite Dr. Chen from Beijing University to give us a lecture on it in our school hall. Dr. Chen is very famous and experienced in this aspect and he will introduce some effective ways to take off the pressure. All Junior Three students are required to take part in it. The lecture will begin at 3 p. m. next Friday and last about two hours. Be on time there.
Please take your notebook with you and keep quiet during the lecture.
Student Union
May 20
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是应用文写作，根据所给内容，写一则通知，注意要点齐全，适当补充。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。写作时每个要点都要包含，不要遗漏，通知类文章可多使用祈使句。最后行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。