2014中考英语书面表达（4）及参考范文

2014中考英语书面表达（4）及参考范文
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中考书面表达（1）【浙江省温岭市2014模拟】
最近你利你的同学就“中学生目前存在的问题”展开了讨论。 现在请你以此为话
题， 参照表内提供的信息，写一篇短文。
Problems
Causes
Advice
1．argue with parents
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have a talk with parents，
understand each other
2．can't sleep well
before exams
anxious about grades
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3．feel lonely
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Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems．
注意：l、开头部分已写好，你只需接着写。
2、所写内容必须包括表格中Jack的想法和你的至少三个想法。
3、词数要求80．120。
【参考范文】One possible version：
Recently l've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems．Some of my
classmates say they often argue with their parents．That is because their parents always ask
them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like．If they have a talk with
their parents，they can understand each other．
Some say they can't sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades·
They should take a long walk tO relax before going tO bed
Some also say they feel lonely because they don’t know how to make friends．As the only
kid in the family，students should take part in some after—school activities and learn to communicate with others.
中考书面表达（2）【2014兰州市模拟】
书面表达（满分15分）
假如你班就“如何为中考做准备”将开一个主题班会，请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿，谈谈你对中考备考的建议和想法：How to Prepare Well for the Exam?
Don’t be nervous or stressed….
Have proper aims and learn to plan well…
Communicate more with our parents, teachers and classmates….
Keep a good balance between study and rest…
注意：1. 词数80左右，开头和结尾以为你写好（不计入总词数）；
可适当增加细节，使行文通顺连贯。
Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams? Here are some suggestions.21世纪教育网版权所有
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With these done, I believe we can be successful in the exams.
【参考范文】书面表达
Boys and girls, the final exams are coming. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exams? Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, it’s important for us to be in good moods. Don’t be nervous or stressed. Otherwise, we will not have the courage to face difficulties. Secondly, we should have proper aims and learn to plan well. If we aim too low, we may become lazy. If we aim too high, we may lose confidence. Thirdly, we’d better communicate more with our parents, teachers and classmates. They can help us get out of trouble if any. Fourthly, keeping a good balance between study and rest can make us energetic. Finally, a healthy diet is very useful as well.
With these done, I believe we can be successful in the exams.
中考书面表达（3）【2014参考范文】书面表达 （满分15分）
最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼”(“Don’t keep your worries”) 的调查活动，请你用英语写一篇短文。（10分）要求：1、内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、对老师和父母的建议。2、词数80左右。
Our school has made a survey — "Don't keep your worries"．Here are the results．
【参考范文】书面表达：
Our school has made a survey — "Don't keep your worries"．Here are the results．
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day．And they feel stressed too much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．
Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we want to take more exercise to keep fit/healthy,/stay healthy．We will try/do our best and we also want to play on our own．
中考书面表达（4）【2014兰州市模拟】书面表达 （满分15分）
??? 同学们快要初中毕业了，不久就要开始新的学习生活。请根据下表内的提示内容写一篇综合素质自评报告。在自评报告中，请分析你在初中三年的学习生活中所取得的进步以及存在的问题，并谈谈今后的个人打算。
进步
问题
能与同学友好相处
很少与父母交流
喜欢阅读与思考
觉得英语很难学
积极参加体育锻炼
上网太多
今后打算：……；……（自拟两点）
1．要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2．词数90 左右。报告的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
3．条理清晰，语意连贯，字迹工整。
During the past three years, I have made great progress. 2·1·c·n·j·y
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【参考范文】书面表达：
During the past three years, I have made great progress. I get on well with my classmates so I have many close friends. Reading and thinking are my favorite. In order to keep fit, in my spare time I take an active part in exercising. But I also have some problems. I find it difficult for me to communicate with my parents. To learn English well, I need to devote more time and efforts to it, as I often spend too much time getting online.

中考书面表达（5）【2014模拟】书面表达 （满分15分）
在你的成长过程中，父母倾注了大量的心血，他们对你的生活和学习除了给予关心和帮助外，也会提出一些建议，但作为子女的你总会在某些问题上和父母有分歧。看看下面的提示词语，搜寻你记忆的长河，看有没有值得你回忆的事情呢？拿起笔来写一写吧！　
要求：句式工整，书写规范，语句条理性强，词数80词左右。文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
提示词：watch TV, be strict with, as usual
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【参考范文】书面表达
My mother is a kind and nice woman, but she is very strict with me. One Sunday night, when I was watching the film Harry Potter very happily,? mother asked me to go to bed. loved the film so much that I didn't move. But for awhile, I noticed that she didn't say anything, then she got angry and turned off the TV. I was so sad that I went into my room and cried. I thought,?? "I have only two nights in a week to enjoy TV, why doesn't mother allow me to watch TV?"? The next day when she was cooking, she talked with me as usual. I pretended not to hear, but she didn't mind and told me she wanted me to have a good rest.? Then I understood her.
I love my mother
中考书面表达（6）【2014兰州市模拟】书面表达 （满分15分）
安全对每个人都很重要。请根据以下信息内容提示，写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示： 1. 体育锻炼2. 上下楼梯 3. 交朋结友4. 食品卫生
要求： 1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯；2．短文可以适当发挥；但要包含以上要点。
3．词数：80—100词。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.______________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t quarrel or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
中考书面表达（7）【2014福建省南安市英语模拟试题（1）】
书面表达（15分）
众所皆知，节约是一种美德。但是如今，校园浪费也成为一个越来越严重的问题。粮食的浪费，资源的浪费，时间的浪费……同学们，让我们从小养成勤俭节约的好习惯，从我做起，抵制浪费。
请你以“Stop Wasting at School ”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，说说我们在校园里怎样减少浪费，制止浪费。 21教育网
温馨提示：1、所给词不计入总词数。
2、语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。
3、文中不能出现真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称等相关信息。
参考词汇：serious, resources (资源), save, reduce…
Stop Wasting at School
As we know, saving is a good behavior. But nowadays, wasting has become a


【参考范文】
Stop Wasting at School
As we know, saving is a good behavior. But nowadays, wasting has become a more and more serious problem.
When I pass the school dining hall, I can see there’s so much food left on the plates. Some students forget to turn off the tap after washing hands. Lots of paper which can be used is seen on the ground. Also, some students waste time playing computer games…
All these are harmful to us. As a student, we should have good habits of saving resources. We must set a good example to reduce waste at school. It’s our duty to let everyone know our country is lack of resources. So stop wasting from now on!
评分原则：
本题总分为15分，其中内容和语言占13分，词数占1分，书写占1分。按五个档次给分。
评分时，先根据短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。不少于70个单词，不多于100个单词，加1分。书写清晰、规范，加1分。
各档次的给分范围和要求：
第五档：（14-15分）能扣紧主题，语言基本无误；行文连贯；表达清楚。
第四档：（11-13分）能扣紧主题，语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯；表达基本清楚。
第三档：（8-10分） 语言有一些错误或较多错误；但仍能达意；行文不够连贯。
第二档：（4-7分） 离题，语言错误多或很多，影响意思表达或只有个别的句子可懂。
第一档：（0-3分） 词不达意，不能写出一个完整的句子；或只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词；
说明：若写出自己和老师的真实姓名或学校的真实名称酌情扣分。
中考书面表达（8）【2014兰州市模拟】书面表达(15分)
近来，“光盘行动(Clean Plate Campaign) 悄然流行，提倡“节约型社会(economized society)"已成共识。请你根据下列表格中的信息，用英语为某英语报社写一篇短文，谈谈作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该如何勤俭节约、反对浪费，并作简要评论。 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
What to do
What not to do
◆ turn off the light
◆ save as much paper as possible
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◆ not use one-off chopsticks(一次性筷子)
◆ not spend money buying unnecessary things
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注意：(1)短文须包括上述要点，应适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2)词数：80词左右，短文的标题和开头已给出(不计人总词数)。
Let's start with the things around us!
Recently, the "Clean Plate Campaign" has been very popular with many people. Our government is doing its best to build an economized society.
As a middle school student, I think ______________________________________________21·cn·jy·com
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Let's start with the things around us!
Recently, the “Clean Plate Campaign" has been very popular with many people. Our government is doing its best to build an economized society.
As a middle school student, I think we should join in the campaign. We can start the things around us. Firstly, make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room. Secondly, we can save as much paper as possible. Thirdly, it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used. What's more, we must not spend money buying unnecessary things. When we eat, we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food.
In a word, saving energy is very important. Let's work together from now on! (97 words)
【参考范文】书面表达：
Let's start with the things around us!
Recently, the “Clean Plate Campaign" has been very popular with many people. Our government is doing its best to build an economized society.
As a middle school student, I think we should join in the campaign. We can start the things around us. Firstly, make sure that the lights are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room. Secondly, we can save as much paper as possible. Thirdly, it is important for us to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used. What's more, we must not spend money buying unnecessary things. When we eat, we'd better not use one-off chopsticks and we mustn't waste food.
In a word, saving energy is very important. Let's work together from now on! (97 words)
中考书面表达（9）【2014兰州市模拟】书面表达 (满分l5分)
学校作业多，学生嫌负担重；学校作业少，家长又担心的不得了。参考表格中所提供的信息，用英语写一篇70—90词的短文，谈谈你对这一现象的看法或态度，并明确阐述你的观点。
家长／老师
学生
多做习题，巩固所学知识
作业多，没时间运动，身体弱
多做练习，提高成绩（21世纪教育网校对）
作业太多，厌学
如果作业少，学生贪玩(电脑游戏，电视等)
特别是周末作业多．没时问培养兴趣爱好
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【参考范文】书面表达
Many people think the more time is spent, the more work will be done. So students have to spend the whole day doing work except three meals. It is common to see students struggling in a sea of school work both at school and at home.
Modern students usually have many interests. They love music and sports. They like reading and watching TV. Especially, a two-day weekend can get them away from too much homework. But they have no time to enjoy themselves. Students are really tired of their weekend homework. So they usually don’t do their weekend homework until Sunday night. And there is not enough time but much work, students have to finish it carelessly. The poor weekend homework makes teachers angry.
中考书面表达（10）【2014四川省模拟】
书面表达（共15分）为配合你校创建“绿色健康学校”工作的全面展开，校学生会发起以“Make Our School Greener”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下信息写一篇英文短文。文章题目和开头已给出。
1.爱护校园内的花草树木；2.保持校园整洁，不乱扔废弃物；
3.节约用水，离开教室前记得关灯；4.坚持锻炼，增强体质，努力学习；
5.礼貌待人，同学间相处融洽，尊敬父母和老师。
注意：1．词数80左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2．覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：爱护 protect; 乱扔废弃物 drop litter; 坚持 keep on doing; 尊敬 respect
Make Our School Greener
In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in， it is suggested that we students should do many things, which can be listed as follows.










【参考范文】书面表达 Make Our School Greener
In order to make our campus green and harmonious to live and study in， it is suggested that we students should do many things,which can be listed as follows. First, we should protest the flowers and trees in the school. Secondly, We shouldn’t drop litter and try to keep the school clean and tidy. Thirdly, we should save water and turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. Fourthly, we should study hard and keep on doing exercise to keep healthy. Lastly, we should be polite to others , get on well with our classmates and we should respect our parents and teachers. I think our school will be greener and more beautiful if we follow these rules.
中考书面表达（11）【2014兰州市模拟】书面表达 （满分15分）
母亲节那天，你们班同学用不同的方式为妈妈庆祝节日。请根据下列所给信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你认为哪一种方式最好，并简单说明理由
●有人花很多钱为妈妈买礼物。
●有人自制礼物或贺卡给妈妈。
●有人帮妈妈做家务。
●你的看法和理由。
注意：1．词数：80～100。
2.文中不要提及自己的姓名、学校等相关信息。
3.无需写标题，内容可适当发挥。
参考词汇：pocket money零花钱


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【参考范文】书面表达：
May 11th was Mothers’ Day. My classmates celebrated this special day in different ways. Some of them spent lots of pocket money buying expensive gifts for their mothers, or made cards and gifts by themselves. Some students did as much housework as possible to help their mothers.21·世纪*教育网
All the ways above are OK. Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. Our mothers have given us so much love and care, so we should give them more in return. What’s more, working hard and being good kids is also a good way to make our mothers happy. Let’s take action to express our love to our mothers heartedly and faithfully.
中考书面表达（12）【2014模拟】书面表达（共1题，计20分）
下面是Lin Tao 通过网络在“天涯论坛”上发表的一个求助帖子， 描述了他学习英语的烦恼和担心。请你以网友Tom的身份，根据Lin Tao的帖子和下面的提示，给他发一个回复的帖子，针对他的问题，结合自己的学习经验，提出建议，80-100词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1、听的方面：听并跟读英语录音（listen and follow the tape）、看英文节目、唱英文歌曲、看英文电影等。
2、说的方面：课上尽可能多说英语，课下多参加英语俱乐部或者英语角活动，说英语时不要怕出错，通过这些活动提高自己的口语（spoken English）
Dear Lin Tao,
I know your problems. Just as you say, English is very important. But I think
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What’s more, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. I hope it will help you. Please never give up!
Tom
【参考范文】书面表达（20分）
（一）one possible version：
Dear Lin Tao,
I know your problems. Just as you say, English is very important. But I think it isn’t so difficult to learn. If you learn it in the right way, you can do it well. Now let me give you some advice.【出处：21教育名师】
In listening, we should often listen and follow the English tapes, sing more English songs and watch English programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us.
In speaking, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. After class, we'd better join the English club or English corner to practice with others. It is a useful way to improve our spoken English.
What’s more, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. I hope it will help you. Please never give up!
（二）评分说明：
要求考生用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语，完整准确地表述所提示的内容，书写工整。分四档评分：
１、短文通顺完整，表达清楚, 语言基本无误，15－20分;
２、短文较通顺完整，表达基本清楚，语言有少量错误， 11－14分;
３、能写明基本要点，短文不够通顺完整，语言有较多错误，但尚能达意，7－10分;
４、仅能写明少数要点，短文不完整，语言错误多，影响意思表达，0－6分。
中考书面表达（13）【2014广东省调研测试】书面表达（本题15分）
根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
成于勤俭，败于奢侈，这是我们的古人很早就提出来的警世箴言。近日习近平主席针对社会上很多人浪费粮食的现象，发出了“光盘行动”的指示，目的是为了让人们节约粮食、杜绝浪费。节约是一种美德，节约更是一种智慧。请你写一篇以“No Wasting”为题的短文。内容包括：
1．你对“光盘行动”的看法。
2．在生活中你看到了哪些不节俭的行为。
3．列举两件你在生活中所做的有关节俭的事。
4．号召大家参与到节俭活动中来。
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；?
2．语句连贯，词数在80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
No Wasting
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【参考范文】
No Wasting
Ancient people told us that success lies in thrifty while failure lies in luxury. Chairman Xi recently has launched an action called “Empty your plate”, which aims at letting people cherish food and reduce waste.
In my opinion, I support the action, because we really need to know how bad it is to waste food. No wasting, start from myself. In our daily life, we can see different kinds of wasting. For example, some students often forget to turn off the electricity when they leave the classroom. Others even don’t turn off the tap after washing their hands.
As for me, I am trying my best to keep saving. When I go shopping, I use cloth bags instead of plastic bags. And I go to school on foot or ride bikes. Besides, I try to recycle the energy in my daily.
In a word, saving is necessary and important. I hope there will be more and more people to start saving from every little thing.
中考书面表达（14）【2014兰州市模拟】书面表达（15分）
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇100词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:
1.父母规矩太多、过于强调学习成绩、不理解自己等问题;
2. 你对这些问题的看法;
3. 你与父母保待良好关系的做法。
How to keep good relationship with parents
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【参考范文】书面表达：
How to keep good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have two many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at nights. They don't allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don't quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don't allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.　　21*cnjy*com
In order to keep good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.
中考书面表达（15）【2014模拟】书面表达(共1小题;满分20分)
合肥某学校九年级(3)班举行了“读好书,促成长”的主题班会。会上同学们积极发言,请根据发言内容写一份倡议书,倡议全班同学认真读书,丰富自己的课余生活。
读书的重要性
读书可以获取知识,增长见识,使人聪明,使人快乐,有助于学习,有助于成长。
班级读书情况
许多同学在上网、看电视、听音乐上花费很多时间,读书时间太少。
发出倡议
多读书,读好书。
参考词汇：获取知识gain knowledge;增长见识open the mind
My dear friends,
Reading plays an important part in our daily life.__________________________________
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【参考范文】书面表达
My dear friends,
Reading plays an important part in our daily life. We can gain knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more books. Reading also helps us grow as a person. 21教育名师原创作品
However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as surfing the Internet, listening to music, and watching TV and so on take up too much of our reading time. So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should spend more time in reading books and reading good books. It will do good to us. Let’s start reading now.
中考书面表达（16）【河南省邯郸市2014模拟】书面表达（共计10分）
91. 同学们！你们正处于初三的冲刺阶段，时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的，但有些同学仍不知道珍惜，他们经常把时间浪费在看电视，上网，玩手机上……请你根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。
提示：1. What things do students waste time doing?
2. What’s the importance of saving time?
3. How can we save time?
要求：1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2. 短文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 词数：60~80个。
How to Save Time
We have ever heard of “Time is money. Time is life.”________________________________
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【参考范文】One possible version:
How to Save Time
We have ever heard of “Time is money. Time is life.” But we can see some students waste their time doing something useless everywhere. They spend much time playing computer games, chatting online, watching TV and so on. It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time. Time is very important to everyone. If we don’t save time, we can’t improve our study. But how can we save time? We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class. We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time. If we can make good use of time, we are sure to make more progress.
中考书面表达（17）【2014中考英语山东省茌平县洪屯中学模拟试题（2）】
（15分）自从“阳光体育运动”工程启动以来，全国各地的中学生都在加强体育锻炼。人们喜欢体育主要是因为体育锻炼能给我们带来快乐而且让我们保持健康。你最喜欢做什么体育运动呢？打篮球？游泳？跑步？打乒乓球？爬山？。。。。。。 请你以“…makes me happy and healthy”为 题，写一篇英语短文，让我们分享你的感受。词数：80左右。
温馨提示：l、先选择一项你最喜欢的运动把题目补充完整。
2、这些词汇也许对你有帮助：
favorite, cycling, table tennis, skating, volleyball, share (v．分享), happiness( n, 高兴，快乐)
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【参考范文】One possible version:
A plan for the coming summer vacation
The summer vacation is coming. During the vacation, I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will get better results when I feel relaxed. Also, I plan to read some books because reading books is interesting and I can get much knowledge from books as well. I will spend as much time as possible helping my parents do some housework. I will take part in some social activities so that I can know the society better. If possible, I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit.
I’m sure I will have a pleasant summer vacation.
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中考书面表达（18）【2014模拟】书面表达
我市今年举办主题为“把希望带给贫困孩子”的活动。现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下（括号中的词汇可供参考）：
1、许多贫困家庭无力负担孩子去上学；（afford）
2、孩子们没有足够的钱去买学习用品和衣物；（school things and clothes）
3、每个孩子都应该有上学的权力；（have the right to do something）
4、我们应该尽最大的努力去帮助他们，比如……； （try one's best to do something）
5、让我们一起给贫困孩子创造一个更美好的未来。（work together）
注意：
1、文章开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数；
2、词数80左右。
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school.
Thanks for your joining!_________________________________________________　
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Students' Union
【参考范文】
Dear students,
In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. Because their family can't afford to send them to school. At the same time, children don't have enough money to buy school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for them. So we should try our best to do something to help them, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We believe if we work together, we can make a better future for them. Thanks for your joining!
Students' Union
中考书面表达（19）【江苏省泰州市2014模拟】
书面表达（本大题共1小题，满分20分）
假定你报名参加了校学生会组织的“和谐校园你我他”为主题的英语演讲比赛活动。请按下列要点写一篇演讲稿。（参考词汇：respect尊敬，voluntary志愿的，haze雾霾）
1. 中学生应遵守校规，尊敬师长，团结友爱；
2. 中学生应积极参加校园内外各种志愿者活动；
3. 最近，泰州出现雾霾天气，给人们的日常生活带来很大伤害，中学生应该注意保护环境；比如……（请例举两例）
4. 中学生应安排好自己的时间，学会搞好学习和爱好之间的平衡
5. 中学生应学会感恩，包括……
注意：1.演讲稿应包括上面要点，可适当发挥；注意：
2.要求词数100左右；
As we all know, a beautiful, peaceful and harmonious school is very important for all of us to grow up healthily……






【参考范文】书面表达
As we all know, a beautiful, peaceful and harmonious school is very important for all of us to grow up healthily.
In my opinion, as middle school students, We should first follow the school rules, respect our teachers and get along well with classmates. Secondly, we should often take part in all kinds of voluntary activities so that we can enjoy the sweet feeling of helping others. Recently, there’s haze weather in Taizhou, it does a lot of harm to people's daily life. We students should pay attention to protecting the environment .For example, we can plant more trees and ask our parents to walk more and drive less if possible.Also, we should organize our time well and achieve the balance between studies and hobbies. Finally, we should learn to be grateful to others, including our parents, teachers, friends and even strangers, and devote ourselves to our society in the future.
中考书面表达（20）【江苏省兴化市2014模拟】
书面表达 （本大题共1小题，满分20分）
一个民族有自己的“民族梦”，一个国家有自己的“国家梦”，同样，每个人也应有属于自己的“美丽梦想”。最近，你班就“我们的理想职业”展开了一次调查。 下表是你们小组的调查情况。请根据表格内容写一篇英语短文，向英语校刊投稿。
组员
理想职业
原因
现在表现
Mary
教师
喜欢和孩子们一起工作，有耐心
现在刻苦努力,对各门功课有兴趣,和老师相处好并能和老师交朋友
Kate
芭蕾舞演员（ballet dancer）
身材苗条,擅长跳舞
在空余时间将绝大部分精力投入到芭蕾舞训练中去
Mike
作家
愿意与别人分享精彩故事
每天坚持读书和写作
你
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注意：1. 100词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
3.在必要处作适当发挥。
Our ideal work
Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas.
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Hopefully, everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
内容要点占分：
组员
理想职业
原因
现在表现
Mary
教师(1分)
喜欢和孩子们一起工作，(1分)有耐心。(1分)
现在刻苦努力、(1分)对各门功课有兴趣、(1分)和老师相处好并能和老师交朋友。(1分)
Kate
芭蕾舞演员（ballet dancer）(1分)
身材苗条、(1分)擅长跳舞。(1分)
在空余时间将绝大部分精力投入到芭蕾舞训练中去。(2分)
Mike
作家(1分)
愿意与别人分享精彩故事(2分)
每天坚持读书和写作。(2分)
你
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评分标准：
1．本题总分为20分，按５个档次给分。
2．评分时先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。www.21-cn-jy.com
3．词数少于100从总分中减去1分。
4．书写潦草，卷面不整洁以致影响交际，从总分中减去1分。
5．各档次的给分范围和要求:
1)第五档（很好）（17—20分）要点齐全，语言流畅，书写规范、工整，基本无语法或拼写错误。（有1-2处错误）
2) 第四档（好）（13—16分） 要点基本齐全，语言较流畅，有少量语法或拼写错误。（有3 -4处错误）
3) 第三档（适当）（9—12分）要点基本齐全，语言欠流畅，有一些语法或拼写错误，但尚能达意。
4) 第二档（较差）（5—8分） 要点不全，语言不流畅，错误较多，影响理解。
5) 第一档（差）（1－4分） 仅写出１－２个要点。
6)０分：未写任何内容；内容太少无法评判；写的内容均与所要求的内容无关；所写内容无法看清。
中考书面表达（21）【江苏省扬州市江都区2014模拟】写作 (计10分)
随着经济的发展，手机在我们日常生活中的使用日益广泛。而在学校中学生是否应该拥有手机，有些学生和老师拥有不同的观点。你们学校的English Newsletter正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。
观点
理由
一些学生
赞成拥有
方便与家长联系；
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一些老师
反对拥有
有学生用手机玩游戏；
有学生用手机考试作弊；
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你的观 点
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1 …
2. …
要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some students and teachers have different ideas about if the students should own their mobile phones at school.www-2-1-cnjy-com
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【参考范文】写作（计20分）
With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some students and teachers have different ideas about if the students should own their mobile phones at school.
Some students think that they may have their own mobile phones. If so, they can contact their parents when necessary. On the other hand, they can read news with it. Besides that, they can easily search for information they need.
However, some teachers are against it. They think that students not only play games but also send answers to each other in exams with mobile phones. What’s worse, students spend too much time on them at night so that they are sleepy in class in the day time.
In my opinion, students needn’t own mobile phones. We must focus on our study. Even if we need call somebody, we can ask our teachers for help.
写作评分标准及评分说明
一、评分标准：
一档文 17-20分：写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个），基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。
二档文13-16分：基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。
三档文9-12分：写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。
四档文 5-8分： 写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太通顺，语法结构单调、错误较多，只有少数句子可读，影响理解。
五档文 0-4分： 词不达意，不知所云；只有2-3个短语可读。
二、评分说明：
短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大错扣1分。
通篇人称、时态、标点错误，统扣2分。
拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。3个小错相当于1处大错。
相同错误，只扣一次。
词数不足90词扣2分。
文中若出现自己及学校等真实名称扣3分。
书写潦草，卷面不清，乃至影响阅卷，扣2分。
内容要点：（10个要点）
一些学生的观点：1.赞成拥有； 理由：1.方便与家长联系；2..…。
一些老师的观点：1.反对拥有； 理由：1. 有学生用手机玩游戏；2.有学生用手机考试作弊；3.…
你的观点：… 理由：1….; 2….
中考书面表达（22）【2014模拟】
初中生活即将结束，你心目中最美的老师是谁呢？他（她）的性格如何呢？他（她）给了你什么帮助或鼓励呢？你对他（她）有什么祝福呢？请你以“The teacher I never forget”为题，写一篇80-110词左右的英语短文。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
The Teacher I Never Forget
How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a junior school student. _______
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【参考范文】
The Teacher I Never Forget
How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a junior school student. My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. I will never forget her, she is a beautiful lady. She’s very friendly to us. There is always a smile on her face. Her English classes were always interesting and lively.
Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. She likes me very much. She said that I’m a cute boy and I can make great progress on study. I am very encouraged and try my best to improve myself.
This is the teacher who impressed me deeply. I think I will never forget her all my life.
中考书面表达（23）【2014缙云县模拟】书面表达（20分）
76.对于学校要求“在校学生必须穿校服”这项规定，同学们反响很大，议论纷份。有人叫好，有人反对，以下是部分同学的意见，请你看完后，写一篇作文并发表自己的看法。
同意穿校服（60%）
1、少花钱在衣服上
2、对外表的关注减少，把精力更多地集中在学习上
同意穿自己的衣服（40%）
1、校服不好看，不能显示个性
2、校服质量不够好，不舒服
你的观点
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要求：1、不少于100字。
2、所给内容必须全部用上，并合理发挥。
3、参考词汇
school uniform show off one’s personality quality（质量）
concentrate on（集中注意力在……上） care about
something fashionable
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【参考范文】
At our school, we have to wear school uniforms every day. But not all of the students agree to obey the rules.21cnjy.com
Most students, about 60 percent agree the rule, especially those whose families are not rich enough. They think parents may spend less money in buying clothes. And it can help students not to care too much about they way they look. As a result, they would concentrate more on their studies. But 40 percent of the students don’t agree to wear the school uniform. They think the uniforms are ugly. Wearing the same clothes doesn’t make them look cool, and they like to wearing their own clothes to show off their per sonality. Beside this, school uniforms are usually not comfortable because the quality isn’t good enough.
In my opinion, we are teenagers, we like to look different and cool. We hope to choose clothes by ourselves. But as a student, I think we should wear school uniforms on weekdays. In other words, you can wear any clothes you like at weekends.
中考书面表达（24）【2014兰州市模拟】书面表达 （满分15分）
某中文网站提出 “走路去上学” 的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约70词的英语短文。
内容提示：1. 走路有利于健康且安全； 2. 和同学结伴可以相互了解，相互帮助；
3. 不需要父母接送，学会自理；4. 道路上车辆减少，城市不再拥堵；
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要求：1. 要点齐全，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 文中不得出现真实校名及姓名，否则不予评分。
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：be good for , each other , send , no longer, crowded
Walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise.


【参考范文】书面表达：
I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
中考书面表达（25）【2014模拟】书面表达（满分12分）
“广元是我家，文明靠大家！”作为中学生，我们应该积极参与文明城市（civilized city）的建设。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文（开头已给出，不计入总字数）【版权所有：21教育】
尊敬老人，对人礼貌；2.帮助他人，友善待人；3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不
闯红灯；4.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不乱踩草地。
参考词汇：respect（尊敬）；be polite to; obey（遵守）;traffic rules ;zebra crossing(斑马线)
要求：
短文应包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯；3.文中不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名；4.请把文章写在答题卡相应位置的横线上。
Guang yuan is now making its effort to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do?
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【参考范文】作文（12分）
“广元是我家，文明靠大家！”作为中学生，我们应该积极参与文明城市（civilized city）的建设。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文（开头已给出，不计入总字数）
尊敬老人，对人礼貌；2.帮助他人，友善待人；3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不
闯红灯；4.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不乱踩草地。
参考词汇：respect（尊敬）；be polite to; obey（遵守）;traffic rules ;zebra crossing(斑马线)
要求：
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Guang yuan is now making its effort to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do?
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us.Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When we cross the streets, We should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we should protect our environment. For example, we mustn’t step on the grass and climb trees. Litter mustn’t be thrown everywhere.