07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（江苏常州市）（含答案）

07：【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（江苏常州市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书信作文
1．
Alex clever …
organized Green …
White …
Yellow …
Alex非常聪明，他家中有一个美丽的花园。平时，他根据自己的喜好，在花园种植各种各样美丽的鲜花。他管理得井井有条，各色鲜花四季常开。因此，他得到了包括老师与同学的一致好评。现在，请你（Jim）根据上面表格提示，向班主任Mr. White推荐他担任班级生活委员。
要求：1、推荐信必须包含提示内容，并适当增加细节(根据颜色、性格等形容词，必须用相应的行为动作进行描述)。
2、短文开头已经给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. White, I’m writing to recommend Alex as our new life member in our class. We think he has many strong qualities for this position.
He is very clever. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely
Jim
2．近年来，国家越来越重视中小学生的劳动教育，要求各学校对学生进行热爱劳动、热爱劳动人民的教育。假如你是Sigmund，请阅读初三学生林涛的求助信，根据来信内容用英文写一封回信，帮助解决问题。
Dear Sigmund,I hear that our government now pays much attention to education on the hard-working spirit among students in China. Students should get basic working ability for their life and their own development. However, as a Grade Nine student, I spend so much time on my study that I seldom do any housework at home or voluntary work in society. I want to be an excellent student to develop the hard-working spirit. Can you tell me what I can do both in and out of the school I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lin Tao
注意事项：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数不少于100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：education on the hard-working spirit 劳动教育
Dear Lin Tao,I’m glad that you work so hard in your study. However, as a student, we should also learn to do something meaningful for our school, family and our country.
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3．“双减”政策已经实施一段时间了，假如你是Sam，你的英语网友Tom写信要了解一下“双减”后你的生活，请你给Tom写一封信，告诉他相关的事情。
Dear Sam,
I’m very glad to know you have made great progress in your study. I hear that your school carried out the “double reduction policy” in 2021. I am interested in the policy, and have the following questions:
1. Has your life changed after carrying out the policy Can you tell me the changes
2. As a student, what will you plan to do in your free time after carrying out the policy
3. What do you think of the policy
I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Tom
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要全，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数100左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
参考词汇：
双减政策：double reduction policy
校外培训机构：off-campus tutoring institution
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to share my life with you.
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Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Sam
二、话题作文
4．作为九年级毕业班的学生，我们如何成为更好的自己？请以“To Be a Better Man”为题，写一篇100字的英文短文。从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通等方面进行描述。
写作要求：
1、文中不得出现姓名、学校名等个人真实信息。
2、词数100字。开头已给，字数不包括在内。
Everyone wants to be better. In order to improve myself, I have made some plans. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假如你是 Sigmund Friend，有一位叫李涵的九年级学生向你求助，面对中考，他压力比较大，想找周围的人倾诉，但有各种担心。请根据来信内容，用英文写一封回信，帮助李涵解决问题。
Dear Sigmund,
I am Li Han in Grade 9. I have a problem and I need your help.
As the high school entrance exam is coming, I am feeling quite stressed. I am under too much pressure. I can’t keep it to myself. I want to find someone to talk with about it. Can I ask the teacher for help Can I talk to my parents Can I tell my friends about it
I don’t know what I should do. Would you please give me some advice I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Han
注意∶
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3.词数不少于100。文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Han,
Thank you for your letter. I hope I can help you. It is common that the Grade 9 students face lots of stress before the high school entrance exam comes. I think talking with others about your worries is very necessary.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Sigmund
三、材料作文
6．假如你是Simon，你的同学Judy在微信群里发布了一条信息，向大家求助。请你阅读Judy的信息，参考以下给出的建议，给Judy回复一条信息。
要求：
1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.100词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
You are not alone. I have the same problem as you do. Here are my suggestions ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope these suggestions are really helpful to you.
7．某中学生英文报Your Voice栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。
It’s not very easy for teenagers to make true friends. Some of them make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to.Share your ideas about the topic. 1. Is it wise to follow suit in order to make friends 2. How can teenagers make true friends Don’t forget to support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。I want to share my ideas about the topic.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．Labour education（劳动教育）has been popular since President Xi Jinping emphasized（ 强调）its importance at a conference. He points out that labour education should be included in the comprehensive assessment（综合评价）of a student. Not only the school, but also the family and the whole society should make effort to develop a man with labour skills.
According to the information above, please write an article to talk about the labour education for teenagers. Your article should include:
1. Why is labour education important to teenagers
2. What housework do you often do in your spare time
3. How can we improve or develop our labour skills
要求：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称：
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数不少于100字。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Labour education is considered of great importance to everyone, especially teenagers.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、电子邮件
9．假如你是Emma，收到了笔友Josh的电子邮件。
请根据来信，给他回一封电子邮件。先说你的看法，再给出建议。
To: Emma@
Subject: Ask for your help
Dear Emma,
I have a problem and I need your help. My parent are strict with me and they want to control everything I do! For example, when I go out with my friends, they always ask, but they don’t listen. Why is it so hard for them to understand me
Josh
更求：1.词数100左右。回复信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope this help!
Emma
10．假如你是Emma，收到了笔友Josh的电子邮件。请根据来信，给他回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法，再给出建议，并适当发挥。
To: Emma@
Subject: Ask for your help
Dear Emma, I have a problem and I need your help. My parents are really strict with me and they want to control everything I do! For example, when I go out with my friends, they always ask, “Where are you going Who are you going with ” I try to talk with them, but they don’t listen. Why is it so hard for them to understand me Josh
要求：
1. 词数100左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数。
2. 回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Josh, Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope this helps!
Emma
参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Mr. White,
I’m writing to recommend Alex as our new life member in our class. We think he has many strong qualities for this position.
He is very clever. He always comes up with good ideas and he has won several Maths and physics competitions.
He has a beautiful garden with a lot of nice flowers with all kinds of colors in his home. He often gets high praise from others. He is organized. He plants green flowers, because green represents energy and nature. He is relaxed sometimes, so he also plants some white flowers in order to help him calm down. As he knows that yellow represents wisdom and success, he would like to enjoy the yellow flowers in his garden when he has difficulty in learning.
We think Alex is the most suitable person to be our life member.
We hope that you agree with us.
Yours sincerely,
Jim
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息向班主任推荐Alex担任班级生活委员，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示要推荐他当班级生活委员；
第二步，介绍Alex非常聪明以及他如何把花园管理得井井有条；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①come up with想出
②all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①He plants green flowers, because green represents energy and nature. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②He is relaxed sometimes, so he also plants some white flowers in order to help him calm down.(动词不定式作目的状语)
2．例文
Dear Lin Tao,
I’m glad that you work so hard in your study. However, as a student, we should also learn to do something meaningful for our school, family and our country.
First of all, in order to have a good place to learn knowledge, we should keep our classroom as well as other parts of the school clean and tidy. When attending courses in the youth centre, we can make full use of the good chances and learn more skills which can’t be learned from textbooks.
As for our family, our parents are getting older now and it’s time for us to do something for them. Why not cook dinners for them when they are busy and spend more time communicating with them when they are free. There are also many things we can do for ourselves like washing our shoes and clothes.
Last but not the least, we must learn to do some voluntary work for society. For example, we can visit the home for the elderly and donate something to the children in poor areas. Respecting people from different careers for their hard work is also necessary because every job is important.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Sigmun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：对方求助内容已给出，考生应注意就“来信”中“如何去实践生活劳动”提出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，写作时从学校、家庭和社会的角度，分点提出具体建议；
第二步，书写结语，希望建议有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②attend courses上课
③As for关于
④Last but not the least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①When attending courses in the youth centre, we can make full use of the good chances and learn more skills which can’t be learned from textbooks.（when引导的时间状语从句，which引导的定语从句）
②Respecting people form different careers for their hard work is also necessary because every job is important.（because引导的原因状语从句）
3．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to share my life with you. My life has changed a lot after carrying out the double reduction policy.
Our homework is clearly less than before, and I have enough time to do what I like, such as playing football and listening to music. What’s more, I feel less stressed because I have less pressure from schoolwork and exams. The most important is that we can take various activities after school.
After carrying out the double reduction policy, I will not give up my study. Instead, I will try my best to finish my homework and balance study and life. Besides, I will take up a new hobby—running every morning, because I think it is healthy.
I think this policy is good for both students and teachers. We can have more free time and less stress.
Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Sam
【详解】1.题干解读：本文围绕“双减政策”根据朋友来信中的三个问题描述自己生活的变化以及自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自“双减”以来，自己的生活所发生的变化；第三段讲述实施“双减”政策后自己应该做什么来度过自己的空闲时间；最后一段发表自己的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4．例文：
Everyone wants to be better. In order to improve myself, I have some plans.
First of all, I will study harder. I am going to listen to the teacher carefully in class and finish homework on time. When I meet difficulties, I will try my best to solve them. Secondly, I plan to pay attention to my health. I will eat more healthily and do more exercise. What’s more, it’s important to keep a good mood and be happy every day. If I feel tired, I will listen to some music to relax myself. Thirdly, I intend to try my best to get along with the people around me. At school, I will help my friends in need. Besides, I will communicate with my parents more.
In a word, there is no success without effort. I think I can be more excellent if I keep trying.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要求内容，并添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首段已给出。直奔主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从学习方法、生活习惯、交友沟通3方面进行具体阐述；
第三步，书写结语。鼓励自己成为更好的人。
[亮点词汇]
① in order to为了做某事
② on time准时
③ try one’s best to do尽某人最大努力做
④ pay attention to注意
⑤ intend to do打算做
⑥ get along with相处融洽
[高分句型]
① When I meet difficulties, I will try my best to solve them.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② it’s important to keep a good mood and be happy every day.（it形式主语）
③ If I feel tired, I will listen to some music to relax myself.（if引导的条件状语从句）
5．例文：
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter. I hope I can help you. It is common that the Grade 9 students face lots of stress before the high school entrance exam comes. I think talking with others about your worries is very necessary.
Firstly, you can consider talking to your teachers. They know your problem with your study better. Though they are strict, they are ready to listen to you patiently. They will also give you some useful advice about your future.
Secondly, a conversation with your parents is good for you. Parents’ opinions may influence the decision you make. It is certain that parents will devote all they have to giving you a happy life.
Finally, you can share every happy and sad moment with your friends. They may have the similar problems. You can talk with one another freely and find out the solution. Some friends may give you some suggestions that are of great help to you.
I hope my advice is worth taking. Good luck for your high school entrance exam.
Best wishes,
Sigmund
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据来信内容，给一个由于面临中考而压力较大的学生写一封回信，给对方提出建议。
2.写作指导：本文主要内容是给对方提建议，故主要采用第二人称叙述；时态以一般现在时为主；文章结构要清晰，第一段陈述作者的态度；第二段到第四段是主体，从向老师、父母、朋友三方面倾诉，分别表达作者的建议；最后一段总结并祝愿。
6．例文
You’re not alone. I have the same problem as you do. Here are my suggestions.
First, find fun ways to exercise. It’s worth trying because it’s easy for you to keep on while you’re doing something enjoyable. In this way, you will think it is a hobby instead of a kind of exercise.
Second, I advise you to ask some of your friends to take exercise together. I choose to exercise with my cousin. We encourage each other. I can hardly imagine how I could continue without him.
Lastly, how about posting some photos of exercising on WeChat Moments Others will give you a like. When seeing words of praise from others, you will be full of energy. Don’t lose heart. I believe you can keep fit in many ways.
Hope these suggestions are really helpful to you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作时要围绕Judy发的求助信息，给出相应的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，按照提示内容，写出自己的具体建议；
第三步，书面结语，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①worth doing值得做
②instead of而不是
③advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①It’s worth trying because it’s easy for you to keep on while you’re doing something enjoyable.（含有because引导的原因状语从句和while引导的时间状语从句的复杂混合从句）
②I can hardly imagine how I could continue without him.（how引导的宾语从句）
7．例文
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
In my opinion, making friends by following suit is not wise. Because everyone is an individual, with his own interests and personality. So don’t follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do.
We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness. To make true friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you will get a smile in return. You can make friends with those who share the same interest with you or those who are totally different from you. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风是否是明智的；第三段介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
8．作文：
Labour education is considered of great importance to everyone, especially teenagers. Nowadays, parents only pay attention to grades and ignore children’s labor education. This makes many students helpless without their parents and unable to take care of themselves. Thus, labour education is necessary for them. Here are some ways to develop our labour skills.
First, doing housework is a good choice. In my spare time, I often help my mother do some cleaning and cook food. Secondly, undertake campus labor tasks to build a clean and beautiful campus environment. Third, take part in some social service activities, such as helping the elderly in the nursing home, cleaning the park and so on.
As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Only with more participation can we improve our labor skills.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所给的要点提示，谈谈劳动教育的重要性，注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也要紧扣主题进行合理发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来行文。可分为三段，第一段点题，阐述劳动教育重要的原因，第二段写提高劳动技能的方法；第三段总结。写作中行文连贯，语句通顺；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
9．例文
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail.I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them. We are growing up, we are still children and they want to protect us. Sometimes, tell your parents what you are thinking about. Then maybe they will understand you better. After your parents read the letter, you’d better do something you can to help your parents. For example, you can help your parents with some housework.
What’s more, you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life.
I hope this helps!
Emma
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目要求根据笔友Josh的求助，写封邮件给他提一些建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述自己和父母之间也有类似的经历，并具体阐述做法。
第二步，就如何和父母相处给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①have a fight with与……争吵
②want to do sth想要做某事
③For example例如
[高分句型]
①Sometimes, tell your parents what you are thinking about.（what引导宾语从句）
②After your parents read the letter, you’d better do something you can to help your parents.（had better do sth最好做某事）
10．One possible version:
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them. We are growing up, but often, it’s hard for our parents to see this. To them, we are still children and they want to protect us.
If you find it hard to talk to your parents, you can try writing a letter to them. In the letter, tell your parents what you are thinking about. Then maybe they will understand you better. After your parents read the letter, try to talk to them.
In your free time, you can do something you can to help your parents. For example, you can help your parents with some housework.
What’s more, you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life.
I hope this helps!
Emma
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材: 本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态: 本文以“一般过去时和一般现在时”为主
③提示: 题目要求根据笔友Josh的求助，写封邮件给他提一些建议。
[写作步聚]
第一步，先简单谈一下自己的经历，并分析出现这种情况的原因。
第二步，给出建议，可分段提出，包括写信、帮父母做家务以及日常沟通。
第三步，最后表达自己的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up成长
②think about思考
[高分句型]
①We are growing up, but often, it’s hard for our parents to see this.（it作形式主语）
②If you find it hard to talk to your parents, you can try writing a letter to them.（it作形式宾语）
③In your free time, you can do something you can to help your parents.（动词不定式作目的状语）