08：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（江苏泰州市）（含答案）

08：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（江苏泰州市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、材料作文
1．志愿服务我先行，幸福温暖洒人间。利用课余时间积极参加志愿者服务活动是新时代中学生的责任和义务。请你以 “My experience of being a volunteer”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你参加一次志愿者活动的相关情况。
内容要点：1. 活动原因；
2. 活动过程；
3. 活动感受。
写作要求：1. 文中不能出现题目以外的人名、校名或地名；
2. 词数80词左右。
My experience of being a volunteer
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．人生不是一帆风顺的，任何人都会遇到挫折和失败。在磨砺和失败中成长，会成就更美好的自己。
某英文网站正在开展以“Learning from Failure (失败)”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的故事。内容包括：你的失败经历，你的态度，以及你的收获。
要求∶
1. 必须包括导图里的所有要点，并适当拓展；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数100字左右(文章开头不计入)。
Learning from Failure
Life is beautiful, but not always sweet. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．本届冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；
2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数：80~100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
4．格言的魅力往往体现在一言可以胜九鼎，一语可以化危机。它简洁凝练，寓意深广。它是人类机智的精华，众人汇成的睿智。请在下列格言中选择一句自己最爱的格言并根据要求写一篇英语短文。
1.No pain, no gain. 2.The early bird catches the worm. 3.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Tips:*What’s your understanding of the motto
*Why do you like it best
*Who or what comes to your mind first when you read the motto Why
*How does the motto influence you
注意：
1.语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。
2.表达中切勿提及真实姓名和校名。
3.内容要涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
4.词数100词左右。
My favourite motto
My favourite motto is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
5．请根据下面的表格信息写一写你的朋友。
姓名 李明
基本信息 16岁，九年级； 高而苗条，带着圆圆的眼镜；很有幽默感。 最喜欢的颜色黄色，原因（发挥1句）； 爱好运动，最崇拜的对象……，原因（发挥1句）。
其他信息 对我影响最大，因为他有条理（发挥1句），有爱心（发挥1句）
存在问题 同学嘲笑他，叫他书呆子；父母亲要求太严，过于关注分数。
解决方法 不在意嘲笑他的学生；……（自拟至少一点）
1.可适当增加细节，使短文流畅。
2.词数100左右。
3.注意书写。Li Ming is my good friend.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．有人如此比喻：散文是海水，诗是浓缩的咸卤，格言是结晶的盐粒。格言给人们以启迪、指导、帮助和教诲，帮助人们完成优秀人格的自我塑造，顺利地度过人生的荒海。
请在下列格言中任选一句自己喜爱的格言，并根据要求写一篇短文。
1、Actions speak louder than words. 行动比语言更响亮。
2、Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
3、Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。
Tips:
1、What’s your understanding of the motto
2、Why do you like it best
3、Who or What comes to your mood first when you read it Why
4、How does it influence you
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、书信作文
7．“抗疫硝烟仍浓，同心战斗不止。”全民都在为打赢这场战“疫”而努力。
假如你是Wu Hao，你母亲所在的医院正在举行“最美医生”推荐评选活动。请你根据以下提示内容，写一封推荐信，推荐母亲获得该荣誉。
要点如下：
1. 介绍母亲的年龄、性格和喜好……；
2. 描述我和母亲之间的1-2段难忘的经历（如帮助、鼓励或参加抗疫活动等），并谈感受……；
3. 希望母亲……；期望自己……；
4. ……。
注意：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；
2. 内容必须包含要点中的信息，可适当拓展；
3. 不少于100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recommend my mother to get “the Best Doctor Award”. I think she has many beautiful qualities for this award.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think my mother is the most suitable person for “the Best Doctor Award”. I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Wu Hao
8．
阳光中学九年级英文网站正举办“Never keep problems to yourself. We can help!”的主题活动，鼓励九年级学生勇敢地说出自己的问题，并号召其他同学出谋划策帮助他们。下面 是某位同学列出的问题清单，假设你是林华，请你针对他/她的问题给出合理的建议。
注意：
(1)必须就所有问题提出建议，并适当发挥；
(2 )表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
(3)词数为100词左右，文章的开头结尾不计入总词数；
(4)照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Dear friend,
I’m also a Grade 9 student. It’s common for us to have such problems. I’d like to give some advice about how to deal with them.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you think my advice is worth taking. Face the year of Grade 9 wisely. It is you who shape your life and future!
Best wishes,
Lin Hua
三、讲稿
9．在初三的英语学习中，我们认识了很多名人，例如：Spud Webb，Tan Dun，Audrey Hepburn，Jackie Chan，Neil Armstrong，Marie Curie，Yuan Longping等。现在学校决定在初三各班星期二下午的延时服务活动中举行英语演讲比赛：MY HERO，请你从课本里的这些名人中选择一位，根据下列提示，写一篇简短的英语演讲小短文。
演讲小短文的内容要涵盖以下所有要点：
1. Who has impressed you most
2. What do you know about him / her
3. Why do you admire him / her
注意事项:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数 100左右，文章开头己经给出，不计入总词数。
My Hero
Dear classmates,
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among them, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you.
10．走过体育赛事按下重启键的2021年，迎来翘首以盼的2022年。对于中国人来讲，2022年将是展示自信和友谊的一年。2022年，北京冬奥会、成都世界大学生运动会、杭州亚运会，中国将成为世界体育目光的焦点。作为泰州人，我们也很骄傲和自豪，因为，2022年8月28日，我们泰州将举办江苏省第20届省运会。作为一名即将毕业的初三学生，请以体育为话题，写一篇演讲稿。
要求：
1．必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
2．不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3．词数100左右。
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about sports.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
参考答案：
1．例文：
My experience of being a volunteer
As a volunteer, you can not only help people in need, but also learn a lot from your experience. That is why I enjoy being a volunteer.
I still remember my experience of being a volunteer last year. At that time, I had to stay at home because of COVID-19. I joined a group to help the neighbours throw out their rubbish. Every morning, I needed to get up very early, wear a mask and collect the rubbish from door to door. At first, I found it hard to get up early. It was very tiring, but I did it for one month. I got a thank-you letter from the neighbours in the end.
I feel proud of being a volunteer, which means I am able to offer help. What’s more, I am also thankful for the people who have helped me.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以 “My experience of being a volunteer”为题，针对自己曾经的志愿者活动经历进行写作，叙述活动原因、活动过程和感受。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍成为志愿者的重要性和好处；第二段叙述自己曾参加过的志愿者活动的原因和过程；最后一段表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
2．One possible version:
Learning from Failure
Life is beautiful, but not always sweet. We may experience failure in our life. When I was in Grade 8, I found it easy to learn physics. So I paid little attention to the teacher in class. As a result, I did badly in the first exam. When I saw the score, I couldn’t help crying. After class, I went to the teacher for help. My teacher had a long talk with me and helped me realize my problem. From then on, I listened carefully in class and corrected my mistakes in time. Through my efforts, I came first in the mid-term exam.
From the experience, I know we should treat our study seriously. What’s more, it’s important to be brave to ask for help whenever we have difficulty.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“从失败中学习”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括谈论自己经历了什么失败，是怎么处理的，从中有什么收获，即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上，条理要清晰。
2. 写作指导：本文写作应该使用第一人称。时态应根据情境运用一般现在时和一般过去时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分开门见山，引出失败这一话题；第二部分根据要求展开，分述失败的经历和怎么处理解决的，要具体；第三部分总结全文，表达感受，感情升华，阐述从这次经历中有什么收获。
3．例文
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient and green.
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给思维导图的提示，以“科技改变生活”为主题，写一篇作文介绍身边的科技及其优点。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。写作时思维导图的提示全部要涵盖在内，可以从四个方面介绍身边的科技：智能手机、机器人、电动汽车以及高铁。针对细节可适当发挥，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
4．例文：
My favourite motto
My favourite motto is “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
I think when you succeed, you may share with friends. But when you fail, the friends who are always around you must be true friends.
Whenever I see this motto, I think of my friend Bob. Once I failed my English exam, I sat alone in the corner crying. Bob saw my unhappiness here. He took the initiative to help me learn English during my break. After a period of study, my English score has finally improved. From this thing, I really understand this motto. In the future, when my friends are in trouble, I will help them in time.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求从所给格言中三选一并结合提示要点写一篇100词左右的英语短文，内容包括：你对所选格言的理解、喜欢的原因、读到这句格言首先想到的人或事以及原因；所选格言对你的影响。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一和第三人称进行写作，时态主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
5． Li Ming is my good friend. He was 16. He is in grade nine now. He is tall and slim, with round glasses. Also, he is humorous. His favorite color is yellow, because he thinks yellow makes him feel comfortable. He also likes sports very much. His favorite athlete is Yao Ming. Because Yao Ming is the first Chinese basketball player to enter the NBA.
Li Ming has a great influence on me. Because he’s organized, but I’m a mess. At the same time, he is a caring person. He often feeds ownerless cats. However, some classmates laughed at him and called him a bookworm. Besides, his parents are very strict with him. They pay too much attention to his grades.
I don’t think Li Ming needs to care about the students who laugh at him and just go his own way.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：表格写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏主要内容，适当添加细节，从而使行文连贯，表达有逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍李明的基本信息；
第二步，介绍李明对自己影响以及其他方面；
第三步，介绍李明的问题以及解决方法。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb do sth使某人做某事
②at the same time同时
③be strict with对……严格
[高分句型]
①His favorite color is yellow, because he thinks yellow makes him feel comfortable.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② I don’t think Li Ming needs to care about the students who laugh at him and just go his own way.（that引导的宾语从句和who引导的定语从句）
6．例文
My favourite motto is Where there is a will, there is a way.
I think that one of the most important things to success is a firm resolution. If a man doesn’t have a strong will to win the final victory, he will never succeed in his life. Whenever I see this motto, I think of many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give up. Later, I made a resolution to improve my English. I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
From this thing, I really understand this motto. There is nothing difficult in the world. If you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end. So I will never give up easily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求任选一句自己喜爱的格言，并根据要求写一篇短文。学生不要遗漏提示中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先引出话题，写出自己喜爱的格言；
第二步，具体阐述如何理解格言、为什么喜欢这个格言、它能让你想起的人或事等；
第三步，讲述这个格言对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①think of想起
②be able to do sth.能够做某事
③give up放弃
④as much as possible尽可能
[高分句型]
①I think that one of the most important things to success is a firm resolution.（宾语从句）
②If a man doesn’t have a strong will to win the final victory, he will never succeed in his life. （if 引导的条件状语从句）
③When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English.（When引导的时间状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recommend my mother to get “the Best Doctor Award”. I think she has many beautiful qualities for this award.
My mother is the person who has influenced me most. She is in her forties. As a doctor, mother often says that she can’t be too careful or afford to make any mistakes.
She is a good doctor with many strong qualities. She has a heart full of love. She is patient and organized. She always keeps things in good order. She spends most of her time on the work. She devoted herself to fighting against COVID-19.
I expect she can spare some time for me and give me some suggestions on how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and hobbies.
I’m proud of her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health, and find more time to relax herself. I hope I can be a person like her in the future. I think my mother is the most suitable person for “the Best Doctor Award”. I hope that you agree with me.
Yours sincerely,
Wu Hao
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，需写为书信格式；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作材料已给出，注意包含所有要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明来信目的；
第二步，具体描述母亲的性格、爱好等以及抗疫事件，说明推荐母亲的原因；
第三步，描写希望母亲做的事和对自己的期望；
第四步，再次表达自己的愿望并希望对方接受。
[亮点词汇]
① devote…to专心研究
② fight against与……作斗争
③ be proud of为……感到骄傲
④ pay more attention to花更多的注意力
[高分句型]
① As a doctor, mother often says that she can’t be too careful or afford to make any mistakes. （not too…to）
② I expect she can spare some time for me and give me some suggestions on how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and hobbies.（宾语从句）
8．例文
Dear friend,
I’m also a Grade 9 student. It’s common for us to have such problems. I’d like to give some advice about how to deal with them.
First of all, be confident. We should believe nothing is impossible. Don’t lose heart, or you can achieve nothing. What’s more, it’s important to be hard-working. If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. Also, we should always remember that a miss is as good as a mile, so try to be careful. To keep a balance between study and hobbies, perhaps you should manage your time better and get yourself more organized. Besides, when having stress or worries, remember to share them with others . It’s also a good choice to go to teachers or parents for help.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking. Face the year of Grade 9 wisely. It is you who shape your life and future!
Best wishes,
Lin Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为建议信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生需就所有问题提出建议，注意“问题清单”中一共有四个问题，注意要点要齐全，不能照抄阅读语篇。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来直接针对问题提出建议。首先针对不相信自己能力这一点，需要自信一些；
第二步，针对懒惰和粗心这个问题，围绕阐述努力学习和细心的重要性展开；
第三步，针对没有时间从事业余爱好，需要做好时间管理，平衡好学习和爱好的关系；
第四步，针对感到压力和焦虑这个问题，可以和他人倾诉或向父母老师求助。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②lose heart泄气
③What’s more除此之外还
④make progress取得进步
⑤share sth. with sb.与某人分享某事
[高分句型]
①We should believe nothing is impossible（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
②If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress.（If引导的条件状语从句）
③To keep a balance between study and hobbies, perhaps you should manage your time better and get yourself more organized.（动词不定式作目的状语）
9．One possible version
My Hero
Dear classmates,
After learning the English text books of Junior Three, I’m lucky to get to know many famous people in different fields. Among them, Jackie Chan has impressed me most.
He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him. He has acted in nearly 100 films and has won many awards. His films successfully join humor and exciting action together.
He also does charity work. He has helped many people in need all over the world. So I admire him very much .
Jackie Chan is considered as a superstar not only for his success in action films but also for his effort in charity work. I should learn from him. I hope to be a person like him.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意内容完整、条理清晰，无拼写和语法使用错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己心目中的英雄是哪一位名人；
第二步，具体介绍他的成就、贡献等；
第三步，阐述自己为什么会敬仰他或她。
[亮点词汇]
① well-known 著名的
② successfully 成功地
③ in need 在困境中
④ learn from 向……学习
[高分句型]
① He is such a well-known actor and director that many people like him.（定语从句）
② Jackie Chan is considered as a superstar not only for his success in action films but also for his effort in charity work.（not only ... but also 不仅……而且……）
10．例文：
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about sports.
For Chinese, 2022 will be a year of confidence and friendship. In 2022, China will be the focus of the world’s sports attention with the 24th Winter Olympics in Beijing, the 20th Games of Jiangsu Province in Taizhou and the 19th Asian Games in Hangzhou. So it’s very important for us to do exercise.
At present, in response to the holding of the games, many teenagers are also actively involved in various sports to contribute their own strength. Doing exercise can not only help us keep fit, but also help to train a person’s character. What’s more, doing exercise helps us to study better. We can do exercise at any time. For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Also, we spend half an hour doing sports with our classmates after school every day. On weekends, we can climb mountains or go hiking with our friends.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中体育话题的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，段首已给出，接下来介绍2002年的体育大事件；
第二步，介绍目前青少年的活动现状，以及体育运动的重要性，同时给出关于体育运动的建议；
第三步，书写结语（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
① in response to响应
②be involved in参与
③not only...but also...不但……而且……；
④go hiking去远足
[高分句型]
So it’s very important for us to do exercise.（it固定句型，不定式作真正的主语）