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读后续写:必须知道的四种情绪描写
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Part 1必须知道的四种情绪描写
有些同学在背诵素材的时候,发现自己平时积累了很多描写情绪或心理的句子。这些句子无论是从结构,还是从含义上来看,都非常好,但是问题在于:要么自己记不住;要么就是在考试的时候用不出来。这就需要我们了解读后续写这个题型的特点。读后续写中情绪描写有规律吗?肯定有!如果同学们细心的话可以发现,大部分读后续写中的故事中,人物是从“负向”情绪,最终转化到“正向”情绪的。
今天,我们将学习两类主要的情感描述。第一组是:紧张和恐惧,可以用在故事的开头和中间;第二组是:快乐和感动,可以用在故事的结尾处。
在讲解例句的时候,我们将通过两种描写方法将他们分类。一种是直接描写法,即句子中直接出现表示情绪的单词。另外一种是间接法,通过表情和动作来体现某种情绪。相当于把这种心理情绪,进行细化。
第一种:恐惧
“恐惧”是一种比较极端的心理,常常出现在以脱离险境为主题的读后续写中。比如迷路,遇到狼,遇到暴风雨等。
直接描写法:
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。
这个用到了with复合结构,这种结构我们在前面的课程中,提到过很多次了。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
这句话用“creep爬”这个动作,拟人的修辞手法,恐惧“爬到” 身上,非常传神。
③A flood of fear welled up in him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。
这句话把fear(恐惧)与flood(洪水)联系起来,很亮眼的一个表达。
2.间接描写法:
①Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。
这句话没有直接写“恐惧”,而是用脸色苍白,舌头打结来表现恐惧。
② She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。
这里的“她浑身颤动”也可以换成“Her heart beat so violently她的心跳得厉害”。needle针,pin大头针,feeling like sitting on pins and needles翻译成“如坐针毡”,中英文在这个表达上有异曲同工之妙!
【高分情绪描写句子】
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转向我,眼睛里充满了恐惧。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延在她身上。
③She was struck with horror when...她被吓坏了。
④She was choked by fear.她被恐惧噎住了。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她的脸色苍白,站在那里。
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.一阵恐惧涌上心头。/恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated(窒息).她的心跳如此剧烈,几乎窒息。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身发抖,感觉像坐在针上。
第二种:失望
“失望”这种负面情绪,在“心灵成长”或者“帮助人”等主题故事的开头和中间,出现相对较多。我们一起来看看有哪些表达!
直接描写法:
就是在句子中直接出现disappointment等表达失望的词语。
① Overcome with bitter disappointment at his failing to win a prize, he locked himself up in his room. 他对未能获奖感到极度失望,于是把自己锁在房间里。
② He was dismayed to learn of their disloyalty. (他得知他们对他的不忠,感到很失望)
2、间接描写法:
① When I saw the pile of dirty dishes, my heart sank. 我看到那一堆肮脏的餐具时,感到很扫兴。
这句话里“my heart sank”,我的心一沉,也间接表达了“失望”。
② The news that he didn't win prize immediately threw him into low spirits.他没有获奖的消息立刻使他精神低落。
这句话里“threw him into low spirits”,把我扔进了这种低落的情绪中,是不是很有画面感?
③ I feel like all my insides have been drained out and I feel empty and let down. 我觉得我所有的内心都被排干了,我感到空虚和失望。
drain本意是“排出,流干”。“all my insides have been drained out ”,内心已经被排光了,流干了,直接对应了后面的empty。
第三种:开心
你会发现大部分读后续写都是皆大欢喜的结局。于是,如何表达开心,快乐,是我们必须学会的重点。
1、直接描写法:
也就是在句子中,能看到直接表达喜悦的词汇,如joy, overjoy等
Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy.听到这句话,每个人都欣喜若狂。
2、间接描写法:
间接法,就是用表情和动作来表达喜悦。想一想哪个动作最可能表达“喜悦”呢?对了,就是“笑”!请看下面三个句子:
A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
She laughed, with her eyes shining with excitement. 她笑了,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
【高分情绪描写句子】
① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.
④ Laughter lingered around the room.
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.
⑥ A wild gaiety(快乐) took hold of her.
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.
⑧ I was wild with joy.
⑨ I was pleased beyond description.
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.
第四种:感动
直接描写法:
直接描写“感动”的表达,秘诀就是把“感动”的事情表达出来,即因为什么事情而感动,请看下面的句子:
①让我感动的是....:I was touched to find that…
你可以把感动的事情接在这个句型后面。I was touched to find that they had prepared food for me.发现他们为我准备食物,我很感动。
② Touched deeply, I…被深深感动,我……
这个句子后面可以添加什么内容呢?在“感动”的同时,又做了什么。比如:Touched deeply, I waved goodbye to the family.我深深地感动了,和这家人挥手道别。
间接描写法:
间接描写“感动”,主要是通过眼泪来表达。比如下面的一句:
Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。
也可以用With tears streaming down her face “泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来”来代替“Tears filling her eyes,”前一句是写眼泪还在眼睛里,后一种是写眼泪流了下来。另外,细心的同学其实已经感觉到了,“眼泪”这个词,在许多情感中,都是用来展现“悲伤”的。
而流泪,当然也可以喜极而泣。所以这句话的后面“she offered her heartfelt gratitude”(表示衷心的感谢。)很重要,解释清楚了流泪的理由是:感动。我们再看八省联考里的一个句子:
Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.
我紧紧地拿着纸袋,一动不动,一股暖流涌入心头。
用“a warm current rising in my heart”即“一股暖流涌入心头”,用这格句子来表达感动,是不是很有逼格呢?
当然你可以可以把moved和tears结合起来表达。比如:
Mac feel moved with tears in one's eyes.(麦克感动得热泪盈眶)
①Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动,我们……
② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heart felt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。
③ With tears streaming down her face,she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,……
Part 2 语料库积累:表示喜悦的口诀
【描述喜乐心情的常用词】
1.难以形容的开心:indescribably wild joy
2.极为感动:be overwhelmingly moved
3.几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情:can hardly conceal his excitement
4.既兴奋又开心:a mixture of excitement and happiness
5.激发某人的激情:kindle sb. with/to passion
6.显示出极大的意愿:show a greater readiness
7.被强烈地吸引:be powerfully attracted to
8.心情愉快:in cheerful spirits
9.振作精神:keep up one·s spirits
10.满意的表情:a satisfied look
11.对...感到满意:be content with
12.对...很高兴:be delighted at
13.为成功而欣喜:be excited/ thrilled with joy at the success
14.被...场面所吸引:be fascinated by the spectacle of
15.被她的美貌所吸引:be fascinated with her beauty
16.因...而高兴:be joyful over/about
17.喜爱,对...着迷: be keen on
18.快乐至极:be overwhelmed with
19.高兴地跳起来:dance/jump for joy
20.欣喜若狂:be wild with delight
21. —个令人鼓舞的表情:an encouraging expression
22.过一个愉快的假日:have a pleasant holiday
23.心满意足,非常幸福:on the top of the world
24.对...感到非常高兴:overjoyed at/to do
【描述喜乐心情的常用句】
The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face. 他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.(ripple n.波纹;涟漪 vt. 扩散全身)一阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.(linger继续逗留)笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥ A wild gaiety(快乐)took hold of her. 一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. 令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光,嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧ I was wild with joy. 我欣喜若狂。
⑨ I was pleased beyond description. 我高兴得难以形容。
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face. 她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
Her smile lit up the whole room. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
She shed tears of joy. 她高兴得流下了眼泪。
Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds. 她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
She was overflowing with happiness. 她洋溢着幸福。
Her flushed face was shining with excitement.(flush v.发红) 她激动得满脸通红。
细节描述的万能小技巧:
可以把这些词和so/such.+adj./n....that...句型连用或者用with+n.
当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。
When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.
2.When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.(激动得两眼放光)
3.When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)
4.When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自已)
当妈妈亲吻他时,小baby开心极了。
When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.
When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)
When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed (堆满笑容)and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间)
When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, he danced with joy and sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)
情传全身(envelope, sweep, run through)
笑布满脸(wide grin, light up, break into a broad smile)
心花怒放(flower bloom, leap with joy, spread, overwhelmed, sweep)
千里闻笑(roar with, laugh echo, scream with, shake)
眼舞光芒(dance, shine, bright, wide, well up)
基础词汇
happy / h pi/高兴的,快乐的
cheerful / t f l/高兴的,快乐的
content /k n tent/满足的,满意的
pleased /pli zd/高兴的
glad /gl d/高兴的
delighted /d la t d/高兴
thrilled /θr ld/ 非常兴奋的
overjoyed / v d d/大喜过望的
ecstatic / k st t k, ek-/欣喜若狂的
joyful / d f l/欣喜的
pleasure / ple /愉快
joy /d /欢乐
delight /d la t/喜悦
be in a good mood心情好
be (sitting) on top of the world 愉快自信至极
be over the moon非常高兴
cheer up / t r p/使振作起来,使高兴起来
raise/lift somebody's spirits使某人振作,提起某人的精神
brighten up再高兴起来;再活跃起来
例句:
She seems a lot happier now that she's got a new job.她有了新的工作,好像开心多了。
‘Fine, thanks,’ he replied in a cheerful manner.“好啊,谢谢。”他高兴地回答道。
I was in quite a good mood till you asked me that.在你问我那件事情之前,我心情是挺好的。
We were perfectly content to go on walking until it got dark.我们十分满足地继续行走,一直到天黑。
‘That was quite a performance,’ he said, looking pleased.“表现不错。”他说道,显得很满意。
She was glad that the birthday party was a success.生日晚会开得很成功,她很高兴。
Andrea was delighted at the chance to go to the Bolshoi ballet.安德烈娅有机会加入波修瓦芭蕾舞团,感到欣喜若狂。
Louise is thrilled with the changes she has seen in her son's behavior.路易丝看到儿子行为上的变化,感到非常兴奋。
After Mark got the promotion, he was sitting on top of the world.马克升职之后踌躇满志。
When she discovered she'd got the job she was over the moon.当她得知自己获得这份工作时,快活极了。
Naturally I was overjoyed when I was offered the part in the play.我有机会演戏中的这个角色自然是欣喜若狂。
The kids were ecstatic when we brought home the new video game system.我们把这台新的电视游戏机带回家时,孩子们欣喜若狂。
The streets of the city were filled with joyful crowds celebrating the New Year.城里的街道上到处是欢庆新年的人群。
I tried to cheer him up by telling a joke.我讲了一个笑话,想让他高兴起来。
The chance to get out of the house for a few hours had clearly raised her spirits.能从屋子里走出去几个小时,显然使她精神焕发了。
‘Oh, I know the answer!’ she said, brightening up.“噢,我知道答案!”她说道,高兴起来。
Most craftsmen get a lot of pleasure out of making things.大多数工匠在制作过程中都得到很大的乐趣。
The toys will bring great joy to countless children.这些玩具将为无数孩子带来极大的欢乐。
People at the wedding laughed and danced with joy.人们在婚礼上开怀欢笑,尽情跳舞。
I was so excited about getting the job, I nearly jumped for joy.我得到这份工作非常兴奋,高兴得差点跳起来了。
The sisters hugged and cried tears of joy.姐妹俩拥抱着,喜泪纵横。
Paul's delight at being asked to play the piano for us was clear.保罗被邀请为我们演奏钢琴,他的喜悦之情是显而易见的。
Robin laughed with delight as the birthday cake was carried in.罗宾看到生日蛋糕拿进来时开心地笑了。
Part 3 综合演练【模拟题】
读后续写模拟专练
读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Have you ever had to overcome an extreme challenge in your life
My teenage years had been insane. From schoolwork to athletics, I had always been running around. Everything was so difficult.
Throughout my hectic teenage years I have been faced with many extreme challenges that have required extreme focus and hard work to overcome. If it hadn’t been for hard work, none of these challenges that I faced would have been conquered.
Two years ago, when I was a freshman in high school, I dealt with an extremely significant injury. This took place in my tennis tournament in Januaty. In the climax of my match, I jolted my back to the left and soon after felt a sharp, painful shock run through my spine. I knew at that difficult moment I seriously injured my back. I was rushed off the court and my parents made an appointment with an orthopedist (矫形外科医生) for the next morning.
I walked into the office extremely nervous and suffering from excruciating pain. My tennis season for school started in three months and I absolutely needed to build up the strength.
After about twenty minutes of waiting in the office, which felt like an eternity, the doctor walked in to examine my X-rays. With a sorrowful face, the doctor looked into mine and my mother's eyes and said, There is a 50/50 chance that Lucas will be able to participate in this yearns tennis season. Lucas broke his L5 vertebrae in his lower back." My heart dropped and I felt a sadness come over me. The doctor said that I would be sitting out of physical activity for two and a half to three months.
Those three months were the longest three months of my life. I was so eager to get back to practices for the season.Every day, I would think about how it was going to be when I was fully healthy. I asked myself, "Am I going to be out of shape Should I even play this year I probably won't have a successful season. "
From that dreadful day on, I decided that I was going to put in the work to be back in top form and have a successful season.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
After I got the "all clear" from my orthopedist l was going to get to work.
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My hard work proved to be very effective.
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1. 训练将在两个星期后开始,我决心重返赛场。
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2. 我对成功的渴望使我甚至在赛季前一天就开始了两个小时的比赛和锻炼。
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3. 通过练习,我会去健身房,努力增强受伤前的力量。
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4. 我度过了我职业生涯中最成功的一个赛季。我进入了决赛。
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5. 虽然我真的很想赢,但我知道能站在这个位置上对我来说是一个巨大的成就。
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6. 这次受伤几乎是件好事,因为我向自己证明了我有能力实现我所追求的目标,当然是通过努力工作。
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7. 那个赛季是我职业生涯中最有收获的一个赛季。
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8. 在赛季结束时,我觉得自己很有成就感。努力工作总有回报。
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参考答案:
1. 训练将在两个星期后开始,我决心重返赛场。
Practices were going to start in two weeks and I was determined to get back on the court.
2. 我对成功的渴望使我甚至在赛季前一天就开始了两个小时的比赛和锻炼。
My hunger for success made me play and work out for two hours even day before the season.
3. 通过练习,我会去健身房,努力增强受伤前的力量。
Through practices, I would hit the gym and try to build up the strength that I had before the injury.
4. 我度过了我职业生涯中最成功的一个赛季。我进入了决赛。
I had the most successful season of my career. I made it to the finals.
5. 虽然我真的很想赢,但我知道能站在这个位置上对我来说是一个巨大的成就。
Although I truly wanted to win, I knew that it was a great accomplishment for me to be in that position even not in the first place.
6. 这次受伤几乎是件好事,因为我向自己证明了我有能力实现我所追求的目标,当然是通过努力工作。
The injury was almost a good thing because I proved to myself that I am capable of achieving goals that I strive for, through hard work of course.
7. 那个赛季是我职业生涯中最有收获的一个赛季。
That season was by far the most rewarding season of my career.
8. 在赛季结束时,我觉得自己很有成就感。努力工作总有回报。
I felt so accomplished at the end of the season. Hard work always pays off.
参考答案:
Paragraph 1:
After I got the "all clear'' from my orthopedist I was going to get to work. Practices were going to start in two weeks and I was determined to get back on the court. My hunger for success made me play and work out for two hours even day before the season. Through practices, I would hit the gym and try to build up the strength that I had before the injury.
Paragraph 2:
My hard work proved to be very effective. I had the most successful season of my career. I made it to the finals. Although I truly wanted to win, I knew that it was a great accomplishment for me to be in that position even not in the first place. The injury was almost a good thing because I proved to myself that I am capable of achieving goals that I strive for, through hard work of course. That season was by far the most rewarding season of my career. I felt so accomplished at the end of the season. Hard work always pays off.
(2022·广东汕头·一模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After a very meaningful conversation with my dad about the old days, we came up with an object that we both remembered clearly. It was my very first bicycle. My mind told me I got it when I was seven, who was cheated to ride it for fifty yards alone the first time I tried!
My dad put together all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called, “Your own car.” Of course I knew he had some magical ability, but I didn’t think he could make such an awesome object. He added the seat and the pedals (踏板) so that I would not have any problems. My dad recalled the bicycle was the smallest he could find while I remember how huge it was. I was so afraid of it and there was no way that I was going to control that monster-sized material. The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month because I refused to ride it. Honestly, I was scared to try it.
After a month, my dad gave me a lecture to teach me what being a man was all about. I was finally determined to try it. My dad was proud of me and I felt very manly. He and I went to the park to see what we could do there.
The park was empty when we arrived. I had no doubt that my dad told everybody not to be there because we had to use it. I felt sorry for other people, but I was proud to have such an omnipotent (全能的) person as my dad.
We found a smooth and open space. My dad was holding the back part of the seat to make sure I didn’t fell. He promised me that I was not going to fall because he would be running right behind, holding the bicycle.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I turned around and found my dad was not behind.
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I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.
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参考答案:
I turned around and found my dad was not behind. I was so scared I felt like I was going to fall at any moment. Sure enough, after shaking my body several times, I fell to the ground. I was very angry with my father why let go of my hand and let me ride alone. My father smiled and said to me: "It's OK, stick to it for a while." Then he started to teach me how to keep my center of gravity in balance. I learned the skills my father taught me, and repeated the practice several times.
I started to pedal and the bicycle moved. The bicycle moved when I pressed on the pedals. I rode for some distance and I felt my body was in balance. I felt that I could ride independently slowly, while my father was cheering for me. Finally I could ride a bike just like a free bird flying happily in the air.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和在和爸爸就过去的时光进行了一次非常有意义的交谈后,他们想出了一件我们都记得很清楚的东西。就是作者的第一辆自行车以及作者第一次骑自行车的经历故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
① 由第一段首句内容“我转过身,发现爸爸不在后面。”可知,第一段可描写爸爸想放开手让作者独自骑行。
② 由第二段首句内容“我一踩踏板,自行车就动了。”可知,第二段可描写作者通过反复的练习,慢慢的开始会骑自行车了。
2.续写线索:转身发现爸爸不在后面——爸爸放开手——我摔倒了——爸爸教我骑——反复的练习——慢慢会自己骑了
3.词汇激活
行为类
①反复练习:repeated the practice/ practice over and over again
②.学会技巧:learned the skills/master the skills/get the skills
③.转身:turned around/turn back
情绪类
①对某人生气:be angry with/be mad with
②害怕:scared/ afraid
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I was so scared I felt like I was going to fall at any moment.(运用了be+形容词引导的宾语从句,其中省去连词that。)
[高分句型2] I felt that I could ride independently slowly, while my father was cheering for me.(运用了while引导的时间状语从句。)
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Shrieking Toad and Dancing Ant
Kids got nicknames at a summer camp, and mine is Shrieking Toad (尖叫的蛤蟆). I guess it was my fault that I couldn't get a cool one.
A bunch of us campers were on our first nature walk. When we broke for lunch, we sat down on logs. I was on my nuts when a tree frog dropped onto my shirt from the branches above. I shrieked. It was totally unconscious and I didn't even know I could make a sound like that. Most kids forgot about it except Stan. Whenever I walked by, he'd shout, “Shrieking Toad, show us how you can hop!” I corrected him that it had been an eastern gray tree frog, not a toad, but that just made things worse.
Three days later, Counselor Matt announced we would be paired for a treasure hunt. Excited whispers spread through the camp. But when he read “Jay and Stan” as a team, my nerves got completely fried. Stan shouted, “Great! Shrieking Toad!” Then he called to the group, and I went red at what came out of his mouth. “Guys, if mosquitoes are bugging you, ask Shrieking Toad to eat them. Toads love bugs!” Kids roared with laughter.
After all the teams wandered off, Stan and I were alone. Then I had a great idea, surprising myself that I hadn't thought of it earlier. I suggested we split up so as to have a better chance of finding treasures. “Yeah, I'd better do what I'm toad (told).” Stan laughed and set off.
Ten minutes later, I heard something that reminded me of myself a few days ago. I ran toward the sound. I never would have believed it if I hadn't seen it with my own eyes. Stan was jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded like “Dance! Dance!” Seeing him scratching at his body and hitting at his clothes made me realize what he was really saying: “Ants! Ants!”
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I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him.
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That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight.
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参考答案:
Para 1:
I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him. He was hitting his clothes violently. I did what must be done. I pulled him into a mud pool. He was shocked at first, and then he must have realized why I did it. The ants went away. Since Stan and I were both covered in mud, we decided to head back. “I guess you’re going to have a pretty good story for everyone,” Stan said awkwardly. “Yeah, I guess so. You’ll probably be known as Dancing Ant from now on.”
Para 2:
That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight. I knew how it felt to be teased; it wasn’t fun. I could see Stan’s worry which then turned into surprise. The next day when I was picked for a basketball team, someone called, “Unfair! Shrieking Toad’s a natural jumper!” Stan shouted, “Knock it off, guys. His name is Jay.” I wouldn’t have minded being given a cool nickname. But being known as plain “Jay”, and Stan’s friend, turned out to be cool too.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者参加夏令营时,被掉在身上的树蛙吓得惊叫,一块露营的Stan给作者取外号“尖叫的蛤蟆”,而且作者每次经过他身边时,他总是拿此取笑作者。几天后他被蚂蚁吓得手忙脚乱,大声呼叫,正好被作者遇到了。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我冲向Stan,试图帮助他。”可知,第一段可描写Stan被蚂蚁吓到后的场面以及作者是如何帮助Stan的。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上,我们照例围坐在营火旁,我清楚地看到Stan的担忧。”可知,第二段可描写作者没有嘲笑Stan,以及解释作者这样做的原因。
2.续写线索:作者帮助Stan——Stan吃惊——Stan担忧被嘲笑——Stan维护作者——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
拍打:hit/pat
决定:decide to/ determine to
嘲笑:tease/laugh at
情绪类
吃惊:shocked /surprised
尴尬:awkwardly / embarrassedly
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Since Stan and I were both covered in mud, we decided to head back. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] But being known as plain “Jay”, and Stan’s friend, turned out to be cool too. (运用了动名词作主语)
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Part 1必须知道的四种情绪描写
有些同学在背诵素材的时候,发现自己平时积累了很多描写情绪或心理的句子。这些句子无论是从结构,还是从含义上来看,都非常好,但是问题在于:要么自己记不住;要么就是在考试的时候用不出来。这就需要我们了解读后续写这个题型的特点。读后续写中情绪描写有规律吗?肯定有!如果同学们细心的话可以发现,大部分读后续写中的故事中,人物是从“负向”情绪,最终转化到“正向”情绪的。
今天,我们将学习两类主要的情感描述。第一组是:紧张和恐惧,可以用在故事的开头和中间;第二组是:快乐和感动,可以用在故事的结尾处。
在讲解例句的时候,我们将通过两种描写方法将他们分类。一种是直接描写法,即句子中直接出现表示情绪的单词。另外一种是间接法,通过表情和动作来体现某种情绪。相当于把这种心理情绪,进行细化。
第一种:恐惧
“恐惧”是一种比较极端的心理,常常出现在以脱离险境为主题的读后续写中。比如迷路,遇到狼,遇到暴风雨等。
直接描写法:
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来,眼里充满了恐惧。
这个用到了with复合结构,这种结构我们在前面的课程中,提到过很多次了。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
这句话用“creep爬”这个动作,拟人的修辞手法,恐惧“爬到” 身上,非常传神。
③A flood of fear welled up in him. 他心中涌起一阵恐惧。
这句话把fear(恐惧)与flood(洪水)联系起来,很亮眼的一个表达。
2.间接描写法:
①Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.
她脸色苍白地站在那里,舌头打结。
这句话没有直接写“恐惧”,而是用脸色苍白,舌头打结来表现恐惧。
② She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她浑身颤抖,觉得如坐针毡。
这里的“她浑身颤动”也可以换成“Her heart beat so violently她的心跳得厉害”。needle针,pin大头针,feeling like sitting on pins and needles翻译成“如坐针毡”,中英文在这个表达上有异曲同工之妙!
【高分情绪描写句子】
①He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转向我,眼睛里充满了恐惧。
②Fear slowly creeps upon her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延在她身上。
③She was struck with horror when...她被吓坏了。
④She was choked by fear.她被恐惧噎住了。
⑤Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.她的脸色苍白,站在那里。
⑥A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him.一阵恐惧涌上心头。/恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated(窒息).她的心跳如此剧烈,几乎窒息。
⑧She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她浑身发抖,感觉像坐在针上。
第二种:失望
“失望”这种负面情绪,在“心灵成长”或者“帮助人”等主题故事的开头和中间,出现相对较多。我们一起来看看有哪些表达!
直接描写法:
就是在句子中直接出现disappointment等表达失望的词语。
① Overcome with bitter disappointment at his failing to win a prize, he locked himself up in his room. 他对未能获奖感到极度失望,于是把自己锁在房间里。
② He was dismayed to learn of their disloyalty. (他得知他们对他的不忠,感到很失望)
2、间接描写法:
① When I saw the pile of dirty dishes, my heart sank. 我看到那一堆肮脏的餐具时,感到很扫兴。
这句话里“my heart sank”,我的心一沉,也间接表达了“失望”。
② The news that he didn't win prize immediately threw him into low spirits.他没有获奖的消息立刻使他精神低落。
这句话里“threw him into low spirits”,把我扔进了这种低落的情绪中,是不是很有画面感?
③ I feel like all my insides have been drained out and I feel empty and let down. 我觉得我所有的内心都被排干了,我感到空虚和失望。
drain本意是“排出,流干”。“all my insides have been drained out ”,内心已经被排光了,流干了,直接对应了后面的empty。
第三种:开心
你会发现大部分读后续写都是皆大欢喜的结局。于是,如何表达开心,快乐,是我们必须学会的重点。
1、直接描写法:
也就是在句子中,能看到直接表达喜悦的词汇,如joy, overjoy等
Joy welled up inside her.她心中涌起喜悦。
She was overflowing with happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
Hearing this, everybody was wild with joy.听到这句话,每个人都欣喜若狂。
2、间接描写法:
间接法,就是用表情和动作来表达喜悦。想一想哪个动作最可能表达“喜悦”呢?对了,就是“笑”!请看下面三个句子:
A smile of understanding flashed across his face.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
Laughter lingered around the room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
She laughed, with her eyes shining with excitement. 她笑了,眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
【高分情绪描写句子】
① The smile on her face shone like a diamond.
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face.
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.
④ Laughter lingered around the room.
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure.
⑥ A wild gaiety(快乐) took hold of her.
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.
⑧ I was wild with joy.
⑨ I was pleased beyond description.
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face.
第四种:感动
直接描写法:
直接描写“感动”的表达,秘诀就是把“感动”的事情表达出来,即因为什么事情而感动,请看下面的句子:
①让我感动的是....:I was touched to find that…
你可以把感动的事情接在这个句型后面。I was touched to find that they had prepared food for me.发现他们为我准备食物,我很感动。
② Touched deeply, I…被深深感动,我……
这个句子后面可以添加什么内容呢?在“感动”的同时,又做了什么。比如:Touched deeply, I waved goodbye to the family.我深深地感动了,和这家人挥手道别。
间接描写法:
间接描写“感动”,主要是通过眼泪来表达。比如下面的一句:
Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。
也可以用With tears streaming down her face “泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来”来代替“Tears filling her eyes,”前一句是写眼泪还在眼睛里,后一种是写眼泪流了下来。另外,细心的同学其实已经感觉到了,“眼泪”这个词,在许多情感中,都是用来展现“悲伤”的。
而流泪,当然也可以喜极而泣。所以这句话的后面“she offered her heartfelt gratitude”(表示衷心的感谢。)很重要,解释清楚了流泪的理由是:感动。我们再看八省联考里的一个句子:
Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.
我紧紧地拿着纸袋,一动不动,一股暖流涌入心头。
用“a warm current rising in my heart”即“一股暖流涌入心头”,用这格句子来表达感动,是不是很有逼格呢?
当然你可以可以把moved和tears结合起来表达。比如:
Mac feel moved with tears in one's eyes.(麦克感动得热泪盈眶)
①Touched deeply/immensely, we…被深深感动,我们……
② Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heart felt gratitude.她热泪盈眶,表示衷心的感谢。
③ With tears streaming down her face,she... 泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来,……
Part 2 语料库积累:表示喜悦的口诀
【描述喜乐心情的常用词】
1.难以形容的开心:indescribably wild joy
2.极为感动:be overwhelmingly moved
3.几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情:can hardly conceal his excitement
4.既兴奋又开心:a mixture of excitement and happiness
5.激发某人的激情:kindle sb. with/to passion
6.显示出极大的意愿:show a greater readiness
7.被强烈地吸引:be powerfully attracted to
8.心情愉快:in cheerful spirits
9.振作精神:keep up one·s spirits
10.满意的表情:a satisfied look
11.对...感到满意:be content with
12.对...很高兴:be delighted at
13.为成功而欣喜:be excited/ thrilled with joy at the success
14.被...场面所吸引:be fascinated by the spectacle of
15.被她的美貌所吸引:be fascinated with her beauty
16.因...而高兴:be joyful over/about
17.喜爱,对...着迷: be keen on
18.快乐至极:be overwhelmed with
19.高兴地跳起来:dance/jump for joy
20.欣喜若狂:be wild with delight
21. —个令人鼓舞的表情:an encouraging expression
22.过一个愉快的假日:have a pleasant holiday
23.心满意足,非常幸福:on the top of the world
24.对...感到非常高兴:overjoyed at/to do
【描述喜乐心情的常用句】
The smile on her face shone like a diamond. 她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
② A smile of understanding flashed across his face. 他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③ A ripple of excitement ran through them.(ripple n.波纹;涟漪 vt. 扩散全身)一阵激动声穿过他们。
④ Laughter lingered around the room.(linger继续逗留)笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤ His eyes twinkled with pleasure. 他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥ A wild gaiety(快乐)took hold of her. 一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦ Unforgettable were her eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile. 令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光,嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧ I was wild with joy. 我欣喜若狂。
⑨ I was pleased beyond description. 我高兴得难以形容。
⑩ She wore a shining smile on her face. 她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
Her smile lit up the whole room. 她的笑容照亮了整个房间。
She shed tears of joy. 她高兴得流下了眼泪。
Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds. 她的眼睛闪着钻石般的光芒。
She was overflowing with happiness. 她洋溢着幸福。
Her flushed face was shining with excitement.(flush v.发红) 她激动得满脸通红。
细节描述的万能小技巧:
可以把这些词和so/such.+adj./n....that...句型连用或者用with+n.
当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋极了。
When the host announced that she won the prize, she felt thrilled.
2.When the host announced that she won the prize, her eyes twinkled with excitement.(激动得两眼放光)
3.When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement. (激动得心砰砰跳)
4.When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide excitement took hold of her. (兴奋不能自已)
当妈妈亲吻他时,小baby开心极了。
When his mother kissed him on the cheek, the baby was happy/delighted/full of joy.
When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on top of the world. (非常开心)
When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, his face beamed (堆满笑容)and his bright smile lit up the room. (眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间)
When the mother kissed the baby on the cheek, he danced with joy and sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)
情传全身(envelope, sweep, run through)
笑布满脸(wide grin, light up, break into a broad smile)
心花怒放(flower bloom, leap with joy, spread, overwhelmed, sweep)
千里闻笑(roar with, laugh echo, scream with, shake)
眼舞光芒(dance, shine, bright, wide, well up)
基础词汇
happy / h pi/高兴的,快乐的
cheerful / t f l/高兴的,快乐的
content /k n tent/满足的,满意的
pleased /pli zd/高兴的
glad /gl d/高兴的
delighted /d la t d/高兴
thrilled /θr ld/ 非常兴奋的
overjoyed / v d d/大喜过望的
ecstatic / k st t k, ek-/欣喜若狂的
joyful / d f l/欣喜的
pleasure / ple /愉快
joy /d /欢乐
delight /d la t/喜悦
be in a good mood心情好
be (sitting) on top of the world 愉快自信至极
be over the moon非常高兴
cheer up / t r p/使振作起来,使高兴起来
raise/lift somebody's spirits使某人振作,提起某人的精神
brighten up再高兴起来;再活跃起来
例句:
She seems a lot happier now that she's got a new job.她有了新的工作,好像开心多了。
‘Fine, thanks,’ he replied in a cheerful manner.“好啊,谢谢。”他高兴地回答道。
I was in quite a good mood till you asked me that.在你问我那件事情之前,我心情是挺好的。
We were perfectly content to go on walking until it got dark.我们十分满足地继续行走,一直到天黑。
‘That was quite a performance,’ he said, looking pleased.“表现不错。”他说道,显得很满意。
She was glad that the birthday party was a success.生日晚会开得很成功,她很高兴。
Andrea was delighted at the chance to go to the Bolshoi ballet.安德烈娅有机会加入波修瓦芭蕾舞团,感到欣喜若狂。
Louise is thrilled with the changes she has seen in her son's behavior.路易丝看到儿子行为上的变化,感到非常兴奋。
After Mark got the promotion, he was sitting on top of the world.马克升职之后踌躇满志。
When she discovered she'd got the job she was over the moon.当她得知自己获得这份工作时,快活极了。
Naturally I was overjoyed when I was offered the part in the play.我有机会演戏中的这个角色自然是欣喜若狂。
The kids were ecstatic when we brought home the new video game system.我们把这台新的电视游戏机带回家时,孩子们欣喜若狂。
The streets of the city were filled with joyful crowds celebrating the New Year.城里的街道上到处是欢庆新年的人群。
I tried to cheer him up by telling a joke.我讲了一个笑话,想让他高兴起来。
The chance to get out of the house for a few hours had clearly raised her spirits.能从屋子里走出去几个小时,显然使她精神焕发了。
‘Oh, I know the answer!’ she said, brightening up.“噢,我知道答案!”她说道,高兴起来。
Most craftsmen get a lot of pleasure out of making things.大多数工匠在制作过程中都得到很大的乐趣。
The toys will bring great joy to countless children.这些玩具将为无数孩子带来极大的欢乐。
People at the wedding laughed and danced with joy.人们在婚礼上开怀欢笑,尽情跳舞。
I was so excited about getting the job, I nearly jumped for joy.我得到这份工作非常兴奋,高兴得差点跳起来了。
The sisters hugged and cried tears of joy.姐妹俩拥抱着,喜泪纵横。
Paul's delight at being asked to play the piano for us was clear.保罗被邀请为我们演奏钢琴,他的喜悦之情是显而易见的。
Robin laughed with delight as the birthday cake was carried in.罗宾看到生日蛋糕拿进来时开心地笑了。
Part 3 综合演练【模拟题】
读后续写模拟专练
读后续写 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Have you ever had to overcome an extreme challenge in your life
My teenage years had been insane. From schoolwork to athletics, I had always been running around. Everything was so difficult.
Throughout my hectic teenage years I have been faced with many extreme challenges that have required extreme focus and hard work to overcome. If it hadn’t been for hard work, none of these challenges that I faced would have been conquered.
Two years ago, when I was a freshman in high school, I dealt with an extremely significant injury. This took place in my tennis tournament in Januaty. In the climax of my match, I jolted my back to the left and soon after felt a sharp, painful shock run through my spine. I knew at that difficult moment I seriously injured my back. I was rushed off the court and my parents made an appointment with an orthopedist (矫形外科医生) for the next morning.
I walked into the office extremely nervous and suffering from excruciating pain. My tennis season for school started in three months and I absolutely needed to build up the strength.
After about twenty minutes of waiting in the office, which felt like an eternity, the doctor walked in to examine my X-rays. With a sorrowful face, the doctor looked into mine and my mother's eyes and said, There is a 50/50 chance that Lucas will be able to participate in this yearns tennis season. Lucas broke his L5 vertebrae in his lower back." My heart dropped and I felt a sadness come over me. The doctor said that I would be sitting out of physical activity for two and a half to three months.
Those three months were the longest three months of my life. I was so eager to get back to practices for the season.Every day, I would think about how it was going to be when I was fully healthy. I asked myself, "Am I going to be out of shape Should I even play this year I probably won't have a successful season. "
From that dreadful day on, I decided that I was going to put in the work to be back in top form and have a successful season.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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After I got the "all clear" from my orthopedist l was going to get to work.
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My hard work proved to be very effective.
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1. 训练将在两个星期后开始,我决心重返赛场。
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2. 我对成功的渴望使我甚至在赛季前一天就开始了两个小时的比赛和锻炼。
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3. 通过练习,我会去健身房,努力增强受伤前的力量。
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4. 我度过了我职业生涯中最成功的一个赛季。我进入了决赛。
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5. 虽然我真的很想赢,但我知道能站在这个位置上对我来说是一个巨大的成就。
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6. 这次受伤几乎是件好事,因为我向自己证明了我有能力实现我所追求的目标,当然是通过努力工作。
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7. 那个赛季是我职业生涯中最有收获的一个赛季。
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8. 在赛季结束时,我觉得自己很有成就感。努力工作总有回报。
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(2022·广东汕头·一模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After a very meaningful conversation with my dad about the old days, we came up with an object that we both remembered clearly. It was my very first bicycle. My mind told me I got it when I was seven, who was cheated to ride it for fifty yards alone the first time I tried!
My dad put together all the small pieces of the bicycle from a beautiful material that he called, “Your own car.” Of course I knew he had some magical ability, but I didn’t think he could make such an awesome object. He added the seat and the pedals (踏板) so that I would not have any problems. My dad recalled the bicycle was the smallest he could find while I remember how huge it was. I was so afraid of it and there was no way that I was going to control that monster-sized material. The bicycle was left in my backyard as a decoration for a month because I refused to ride it. Honestly, I was scared to try it.
After a month, my dad gave me a lecture to teach me what being a man was all about. I was finally determined to try it. My dad was proud of me and I felt very manly. He and I went to the park to see what we could do there.
The park was empty when we arrived. I had no doubt that my dad told everybody not to be there because we had to use it. I felt sorry for other people, but I was proud to have such an omnipotent (全能的) person as my dad.
We found a smooth and open space. My dad was holding the back part of the seat to make sure I didn’t fell. He promised me that I was not going to fall because he would be running right behind, holding the bicycle.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I turned around and found my dad was not behind.
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I started to pedal and the bicycle moved.
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(2022·福建厦门·二模)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Shrieking Toad and Dancing Ant
Kids got nicknames at a summer camp, and mine is Shrieking Toad (尖叫的蛤蟆). I guess it was my fault that I couldn't get a cool one.
A bunch of us campers were on our first nature walk. When we broke for lunch, we sat down on logs. I was on my nuts when a tree frog dropped onto my shirt from the branches above. I shrieked. It was totally unconscious and I didn't even know I could make a sound like that. Most kids forgot about it except Stan. Whenever I walked by, he'd shout, “Shrieking Toad, show us how you can hop!” I corrected him that it had been an eastern gray tree frog, not a toad, but that just made things worse.
Three days later, Counselor Matt announced we would be paired for a treasure hunt. Excited whispers spread through the camp. But when he read “Jay and Stan” as a team, my nerves got completely fried. Stan shouted, “Great! Shrieking Toad!” Then he called to the group, and I went red at what came out of his mouth. “Guys, if mosquitoes are bugging you, ask Shrieking Toad to eat them. Toads love bugs!” Kids roared with laughter.
After all the teams wandered off, Stan and I were alone. Then I had a great idea, surprising myself that I hadn't thought of it earlier. I suggested we split up so as to have a better chance of finding treasures. “Yeah, I'd better do what I'm toad (told).” Stan laughed and set off.
Ten minutes later, I heard something that reminded me of myself a few days ago. I ran toward the sound. I never would have believed it if I hadn't seen it with my own eyes. Stan was jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded jumping around near a mud pool like a monkey, shrieking and yelling something that sounded like “Dance! Dance!” Seeing him scratching at his body and hitting at his clothes made me realize what he was really saying: “Ants! Ants!”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I rushed towards Stan and tried to help him.
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That night, we all routinely sat around the campfire and I saw Stan's worry as clear as daylight.
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