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读后续写：情感描写速记法（上）（解析版）
Part 1：友情类故事构造“三步法”
第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）
1、内疚
1. 被愧疚感压得喘不过气来的Asad迅速捡起钱包，大步走向Fahad，“我在那边捡到的，我想这是你的。”Overwhelmed by guilt（充满内疚）, Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours. ”
他低声嘟囔着，躲闪着Asad那双闪闪发光的眼睛，不知怎的，甚至不敢看他们。Murmuring in a low voice（小声地低语）, he dodged Asad’s shining eyes, somehow even not daring to look into them.
她现在什么也做不了，只能感到后悔在心里燃烧。She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）.
Ariana点点头，开始感到内疚。Ariana nodded, beginning to feel guilty（开始感到内疚）.
2、困难与帮助
1. 不知道该怎么办，他走出教室，坐在食堂前的长凳上。Not knowing what to do（不知道该做什么) , he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench in front of the canteen.
“你能为艾希礼做的最好的事就是对她仁慈和同情。”“The best thing you can do for Ashley is to treat her with kindness and sympathy（用善意和同情对待她).”
当Ariana 给Ashley吃午饭时，她看到Ashley眼里噙满了泪水。When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashley’s eyes（眼泪都流出来了).
3、破裂
1. 因为这些人是我的朋友，我在她面前崩溃了，她道歉了，但我感到受骗了。我告诉她我决定不再继续这种友谊。我们都很想念对方，但我们都不想做最后一次尝试。Because these were the people I considered my friends. I broke down in front of her. She apologized. But I felt cheated on. I told her about my decision of not wanting to continue this friendship further（我不再继续这份友谊的决定). We both missed each other. But neither of us wanted to give the last try.
在旅途中我们故意避开对方。然而，当她回头的时候，我还是忍不住看了她一眼，我也感觉到她也是一样的。 During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other（有意避开彼此). However, I couldn’t help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same.
第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）
1、原谅/和好
1. 她脸红了。我打破了沉默，再次道歉，“我不是故意伤害你的。”眼泪流了下来，她接着说道，“我应该早点跟你说。”我站起来，伸出手来拥抱她，“我也很抱歉。我应该更慷慨一些。”Blushed, she broke the silence（打破沉默), “I am sorry again. I didn’t mean to hurt you.” Tears streaming down, she continued, “I should have talked to you earlier.” I stood up and reached out to hug her（伸出手拥抱她), “I am sorry, too. I should have been more generous.”
2.但在内心深处我们都知道所有的争论都是为了帮助我们成长为一个更好的人，而不是敌人。But deep down, we both know all the argument is just about helping us to grow into a better individual（帮助我们成长为更好的个体)instead of enemies.
3. 因此，我们都学会了足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅他人。Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive（足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅).
2、开心描写
我很高兴知道我们将一起吃晚饭。I’m thrilled to know that we’ll have dinner together.
他非常激动，露齿而笑。Excitement crept over his heart and made him grin from ear to ear.
这顿饭使我激动不已。想象一下我们将在机场畅饮。 I’m buzzing for the dinner. Imagine, we’re going to drink freely at the airport.
第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）
就在那一天，Asad在新学校结识了他的第一个朋友，他真正意识到了在一段关系中真诚和诚实的价值。It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school, and he truly reckoned the value of sincerity and honesty（明白真诚和诚实的价值) in a relationship.
“所以，飞机一降落我就打电话给他说，“Luke，你为我做的事太棒了。谢谢你！”So as soon as the plane landed I called him and said, “Luke, that was such a wonderful thing you did for me（那是你为我做的最美妙的事情) . Thank you.”
我突然意识到，忠实的朋友一万个亲戚。一个忠诚的朋友胜过成千上万的亲戚。It dawned on me that one loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.
如果我们真的珍惜我们的朋友和友谊，请一直珍惜他们的存在，并表示愿意维护和培养这段关系。If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relationship（愿意保持和培养这段关系).
Part 2如何速记情感描写
七个重要的秘诀，分为两次课讲解，第一次讲解4个秘诀，第二次讲解3个。
秘诀（一）：情感是人“手”
人往往为情绪所控制，为情绪所束缚。“掌控”这个词在中文里就是从“手掌”衍生出来的。所以，把情绪比作一只看不见的手，这是很恰当的。
我们发现：某些手部运动可以被用来表达某些情绪。这些行动包括：
表示“抓住”类的动词：seize, grasp, grip , take hold of
表示“覆盖”：cover
表示“撕成碎片”：tear into pieces
我们来看下面几个例句：
（1）Fear gripped her heart．她心中充满恐惧 。（grip抓住）
（2）Jealousy seized her. 她妒火中烧。（seize抓住）
（3）A wild joy took hold of her. 她十分快乐。
（4）A feeling of panic seized her．她突然惊慌失措。
（5）Anxiety tore her into pieces．她焦虑不安身心憔悴。（tore是tear的过去式，表“撕扯”）
（6）Anger and bitterness covered upon me for weeks．我好几周都沉浸在愤怒和痛苦中。（bitterness是bitter“痛苦的”名词形式）
秘诀（二) ：情感是对手
汉语里也有类似的说法：“我被什么情绪打败了”。将情感比喻为人的对手，那么人与情感之间的关系仿佛在比赛或斗争。但是汉语中，这种表达中情绪更多是负面情绪，而英文中，则没有这个限制。
我们来看常见的动词有哪些？
被情感对手“击败”。于是，动词通常是get the better of或者get the best of（都表示“胜过”）。
例如浙江2020年1月高考续写文本中就写到：
He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him. (他站起来，抱住爸爸妈妈，并露出笑容，努力不让情感控制他。)在这句里，就用到了get the better of 的结构，表示“胜过”。
我们再看几个例子：
（1）Enthusiasm gets the better of me．我太激动了。（enthusiasm热情）
（2）Boredom often gets the best of them．他们常感到非常无聊．（boredom无聊）
（3）His curiosity got the better of him ．他异常好奇，（curiosity好奇心）
秘诀（三）：情感是压迫者
我们可以控制情感，反过来，情感也可以变得强大，反客为主，成了统治者，压迫者，我们被情感控制。
这是动词可以是：oppress压迫 ，甚至是 deprive (表示剥夺，deprive 通常与of 搭配 )，还可以是 prey（捕猎，折磨）
我们来看下面几个例句：
（1）Worrying deprived him of sleep．他焦虑万分，难以入睡。
（2）Excitement deprived me of all power of speech．我激动得什么话都说不出来。
（3）Astonishment and horror oppressed her．她惊恐不安。（ oppress 压迫）
（4）Anger and bitterness had preyed upon me continually．我感到愤怒和痛苦。（prey本意是“捕猎”，在这里引申为“折磨”。非常形象的表达，“愤怒”和“痛苦”像猎人一样，而“我”成了猎物，不就是我被这两种情绪折磨着吗？）
秘诀（四）：情感是动物
情感也会有动物的一些特点，会悄无声息地“爬”到你身边，即用动词crawl／creep（爬），有时还会咬(gnaw)、吞噬(swallow/swallow)你。
例如 ：
（1）Happiness crawls up to the tips of his brows．他喜上眉梢。（字面意思是“幸福爬到他的眉毛尖”）
（2）A slight feeling of fear slowly crept on him．他慢慢感到一丝恐惧。（crept是creep过去式，意思是“爬”）
（3）Self-doubt began to gnaw away at her confidence. 自我怀疑正在蚕食她的自信心。
（4）Fear swallowed her. 她非常惊恐。（字面意思是“恐惧吞掉了我”，是不是很形象？）
Part 3素材积累：翻译练习
1. 这个运动员失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了。
2. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户。
3. 小黄人向门冲去，逃离了现场。
4. The Indian government is eager for their economy to sprint like a tiger rather than amble along like an elephant.
5. He lost his balance, staggered (蹒跚地走) back against the rail and toppled over.
6. It only takes five minutes to run to the old quarry.
7. When I get there and I'm gasping for breath.
8. I dragged(拖) my heavy legs and moved tiredly forward.
9. She had pulled this pigtail around her neck, and was biting the end of the ribbon, resting her elbows on the desk, as she stared wonderingly at the new pupil.
I put the Christmas present down, pounded(重击) his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car, waiting breathlessly(屏息等待).
Why have you been banging on(大声敲) my door
Ideas poured in.
His eyes spring open.
She was dressed in a blue and white silk that flowed to(垂到) the wooden floor.
Megan watched as men and women of different ages, all apparently hungry, gobbling down\wolf down(狼吞虎咽) a fine meal.
With a leap, she threw her arms around the man’s neck. 搂住She buried her face in his shoulder埋在他的肩膀 and sobbed for a few moments, then she said in a low but determined voice.
“For the sake of God!” With a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel, the car window was wound down(摇下来). The man thrust(挤出) his head out again, staring at the man breaking his sweet dream, his eyes red from lack of sleep.
Part 4：高考真题再现
2021.6月新高考全国1卷：母亲节的惊喜
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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Part 5综合演练【模拟题 新高考专用】
（2022·山东淄博·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
The Christmas Spirit Strikes Again
I always dreamed of making a big surprise of a lifetime. Thanks to a little determination, some luck, and a generous helping of Christmas Spirit, my dream became a reality.
My family is Canadian, although my sister moved down to Australia a few years ago to study. She was graduating just before Christmas, but due to my own scholarly schedule back home, I would be unable to make it down in time for her graduation. She was understandably disappointed, and I felt guilty that I wasn’t able to be there for her on this special occasions.
While I was talking to my professor the week before my sister’s graduation, she commented, “Well, if you want to go, just go ahead!" I couldn’t believe my luck! I nearly jumped for joy. “Just make sure you get permission from administrator (行政主管)，” she added. My heart sank. The administration at my school was infamous for denying any sort of time-off requests. I almost didn’t bother asking, because I knew it would be a waste of time. But something in me decided to try, just in case. Maybe it was the hope that the Christmas Spirit would somehow affects the administrator at this time of year. When I returned home to check the reply in my inbox, I steeled myself for disappointment. I held my breath, opened the e-mail, and started to read. And re-read, just to make sure I’d understood. Approval I couldn’t believe my luck!
Immediately, I called the airline. Unexpectedly, even during the busy Christmas season, I was able to change my ticket to arrive the day before my sister’s graduation. With news this fantastic, I was bursting to tell my sister. But, fingers on the dial((拨号盘), I paused. Wouldn’t it be much more fantastic if I could surprise her What a state of shock she would be in! Slowly a great idea came to my mind. I decided a much more dramatic arrival than just a ring of the doorbell. What if I couldn’t arrive in a box
I started to plot.
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I, hidden in the big box, heard the mailmen ringing my sister’s doorbell.
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（2022·福建福州·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was my twelfth birthday, and what I really wanted most was a new bicycle. But I knew that my family couldn’t afford one, so I settled for a bedside table with lockable drawers, a safe place to keep my private stuff.
We went to the charity shop where we found an old dark one. It didn’t look too cool, but I thought that I would paint it to make it look better.
After we took it home, I was getting ready to paint it. When I pulled the drawers out. I felt something stuck to the back. I reached in all the way, and guess what A sealed bag with some papers in it.
When I opened the bag, I realized that the papers were official documents. And, wrapped in them were a bunch of ten and twenty dollar bills! Talk about finding a treasure! And on my birthday!
“Is this some kind of joke ” I said aloud. I went ahead and read the papers, and it turned out to be a will. Some old lady was leaving her savings for her son and grandchildren.
My mind was going crazy. Was I the luckiest twelve-year-old ever With this money I could buy the coolest bicycle. Who knows
I began counting. When I reached a thousand dollars, my mother was knocking on my bedroom door. I quickly closed the drawer with the money in it.
“Do you want some help Is everything all right ” she asked.
No, everything was not right. Actually, my stomach was growling (低吼).
“I’m okay,” I lied.
When my mother left my room, I lay on my bed, starting thinking. What a dilemma (窘境)! I wished there were some one I could talk with. Could I keep it and get all kinds of stuff for me and my family It wouldn’t be too bad for me to keep it, if I shared it...right Thoughts ran through my mind. But I really didn’t need someone else to give me the answer.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I finally made a decision and called my parents into my bedroom.
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Though surprised, the shop owner helped find the family’s telephone number.
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读后续写：情感描写速记法（上）（解析版）
Part 1：友情类故事构造“三步法”
第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）
1、内疚
1. 被愧疚感压得喘不过气来的Asad迅速捡起钱包，大步走向Fahad，“我在那边捡到的，我想这是你的。”Overwhelmed by guilt（充满内疚）, Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours. ”
他低声嘟囔着，躲闪着Asad那双闪闪发光的眼睛，不知怎的，甚至不敢看他们。Murmuring in a low voice（小声地低语）, he dodged Asad’s shining eyes, somehow even not daring to look into them.
她现在什么也做不了，只能感到后悔在心里燃烧。She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）.
Ariana点点头，开始感到内疚。Ariana nodded, beginning to feel guilty（开始感到内疚）.
2、困难与帮助
1. 不知道该怎么办，他走出教室，坐在食堂前的长凳上。Not knowing what to do（不知道该做什么) , he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench in front of the canteen.
“你能为艾希礼做的最好的事就是对她仁慈和同情。”“The best thing you can do for Ashley is to treat her with kindness and sympathy（用善意和同情对待她).”
当Ariana 给Ashley吃午饭时，她看到Ashley眼里噙满了泪水。When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashley’s eyes（眼泪都流出来了).
3、破裂
1. 因为这些人是我的朋友，我在她面前崩溃了，她道歉了，但我感到受骗了。我告诉她我决定不再继续这种友谊。我们都很想念对方，但我们都不想做最后一次尝试。Because these were the people I considered my friends. I broke down in front of her. She apologized. But I felt cheated on. I told her about my decision of not wanting to continue this friendship further（我不再继续这份友谊的决定). We both missed each other. But neither of us wanted to give the last try.
在旅途中我们故意避开对方。然而，当她回头的时候，我还是忍不住看了她一眼，我也感觉到她也是一样的。 During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other（有意避开彼此). However, I couldn’t help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same.
第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）
1、原谅/和好
1. 她脸红了。我打破了沉默，再次道歉，“我不是故意伤害你的。”眼泪流了下来，她接着说道，“我应该早点跟你说。”我站起来，伸出手来拥抱她，“我也很抱歉。我应该更慷慨一些。”Blushed, she broke the silence（打破沉默), “I am sorry again. I didn’t mean to hurt you.” Tears streaming down, she continued, “I should have talked to you earlier.” I stood up and reached out to hug her（伸出手拥抱她), “I am sorry, too. I should have been more generous.”
2.但在内心深处我们都知道所有的争论都是为了帮助我们成长为一个更好的人，而不是敌人。But deep down, we both know all the argument is just about helping us to grow into a better individual（帮助我们成长为更好的个体)instead of enemies.
3. 因此，我们都学会了足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅他人。Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive（足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅).
2、开心描写
我很高兴知道我们将一起吃晚饭。I’m thrilled to know that we’ll have dinner together.
他非常激动，露齿而笑。Excitement crept over his heart and made him grin from ear to ear.
这顿饭使我激动不已。想象一下我们将在机场畅饮。 I’m buzzing for the dinner. Imagine, we’re going to drink freely at the airport.
第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）
就在那一天，Asad在新学校结识了他的第一个朋友，他真正意识到了在一段关系中真诚和诚实的价值。It was on that very day that Asad made his first friend in the new school, and he truly reckoned the value of sincerity and honesty（明白真诚和诚实的价值) in a relationship.
“所以，飞机一降落我就打电话给他说，“Luke，你为我做的事太棒了。谢谢你！”So as soon as the plane landed I called him and said, “Luke, that was such a wonderful thing you did for me（那是你为我做的最美妙的事情) . Thank you.”
我突然意识到，忠实的朋友一万个亲戚。一个忠诚的朋友胜过成千上万的亲戚。It dawned on me that one loyal friend is worth ten thousand relatives.
如果我们真的珍惜我们的朋友和友谊，请一直珍惜他们的存在，并表示愿意维护和培养这段关系。If we really value our friends and friendship, always cherish their presence and show willingness to maintain and nurture the relationship（愿意保持和培养这段关系).
Part 2如何速记情感描写
七个重要的秘诀，分为两次课讲解，第一次讲解4个秘诀，第二次讲解3个。
秘诀（一）：情感是人“手”
人往往为情绪所控制，为情绪所束缚。“掌控”这个词在中文里就是从“手掌”衍生出来的。所以，把情绪比作一只看不见的手，这是很恰当的。
我们发现：某些手部运动可以被用来表达某些情绪。这些行动包括：
表示“抓住”类的动词：seize, grasp, grip , take hold of
表示“覆盖”：cover
表示“撕成碎片”：tear into pieces
我们来看下面几个例句：
（1）Fear gripped her heart．她心中充满恐惧 。（grip抓住）
（2）Jealousy seized her. 她妒火中烧。（seize抓住）
（3）A wild joy took hold of her. 她十分快乐。
（4）A feeling of panic seized her．她突然惊慌失措。
（5）Anxiety tore her into pieces．她焦虑不安身心憔悴。（tore是tear的过去式，表“撕扯”）
（6）Anger and bitterness covered upon me for weeks．我好几周都沉浸在愤怒和痛苦中。（bitterness是bitter“痛苦的”名词形式）
秘诀（二) ：情感是对手
汉语里也有类似的说法：“我被什么情绪打败了”。将情感比喻为人的对手，那么人与情感之间的关系仿佛在比赛或斗争。但是汉语中，这种表达中情绪更多是负面情绪，而英文中，则没有这个限制。
我们来看常见的动词有哪些？
被情感对手“击败”。于是，动词通常是get the better of或者get the best of（都表示“胜过”）。
例如浙江2020年1月高考续写文本中就写到：
He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions get the better of him. (他站起来，抱住爸爸妈妈，并露出笑容，努力不让情感控制他。)在这句里，就用到了get the better of 的结构，表示“胜过”。
我们再看几个例子：
（1）Enthusiasm gets the better of me．我太激动了。（enthusiasm热情）
（2）Boredom often gets the best of them．他们常感到非常无聊．（boredom无聊）
（3）His curiosity got the better of him ．他异常好奇，（curiosity好奇心）
秘诀（三）：情感是压迫者
我们可以控制情感，反过来，情感也可以变得强大，反客为主，成了统治者，压迫者，我们被情感控制。
这是动词可以是：oppress压迫 ，甚至是 deprive (表示剥夺，deprive 通常与of 搭配 )，还可以是 prey（捕猎，折磨）
我们来看下面几个例句：
（1）Worrying deprived him of sleep．他焦虑万分，难以入睡。
（2）Excitement deprived me of all power of speech．我激动得什么话都说不出来。
（3）Astonishment and horror oppressed her．她惊恐不安。（ oppress 压迫）
（4）Anger and bitterness had preyed upon me continually．我感到愤怒和痛苦。（prey本意是“捕猎”，在这里引申为“折磨”。非常形象的表达，“愤怒”和“痛苦”像猎人一样，而“我”成了猎物，不就是我被这两种情绪折磨着吗？）
秘诀（四）：情感是动物
情感也会有动物的一些特点，会悄无声息地“爬”到你身边，即用动词crawl／creep（爬），有时还会咬(gnaw)、吞噬(swallow/swallow)你。
例如 ：
（1）Happiness crawls up to the tips of his brows．他喜上眉梢。（字面意思是“幸福爬到他的眉毛尖”）
（2）A slight feeling of fear slowly crept on him．他慢慢感到一丝恐惧。（crept是creep过去式，意思是“爬”）
（3）Self-doubt began to gnaw away at her confidence. 自我怀疑正在蚕食她的自信心。
（4）Fear swallowed her. 她非常惊恐。（字面意思是“恐惧吞掉了我”，是不是很形象？）
Part 3素材积累：翻译练习
1. 这个运动员失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了。
2. 她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户。
3. 小黄人向门冲去，逃离了现场。
4. The Indian government is eager for their economy to sprint like a tiger rather than amble along like an elephant.
5. He lost his balance, staggered (蹒跚地走) back against the rail and toppled over.
6. It only takes five minutes to run to the old quarry.
7. When I get there and I'm gasping for breath.
8. I dragged(拖) my heavy legs and moved tiredly forward.
9. She had pulled this pigtail around her neck, and was biting the end of the ribbon, resting her elbows on the desk, as she stared wonderingly at the new pupil.
I put the Christmas present down, pounded(重击) his doorbell and then Grandma and I hid in the car, waiting breathlessly(屏息等待).
Why have you been banging on(大声敲) my door
Ideas poured in.
His eyes spring open.
She was dressed in a blue and white silk that flowed to(垂到) the wooden floor.
Megan watched as men and women of different ages, all apparently hungry, gobbling down\wolf down(狼吞虎咽) a fine meal.
With a leap, she threw her arms around the man’s neck. 搂住She buried her face in his shoulder埋在他的肩膀 and sobbed for a few moments, then she said in a low but determined voice.
“For the sake of God!” With a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel, the car window was wound down(摇下来). The man thrust(挤出) his head out again, staring at the man breaking his sweet dream, his eyes red from lack of sleep.
参考答案：
1. The player lost his balance, staggered back and toppled over.
2. She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.
3. The minion made a rush for the door and escaped from the scene.
4. 印度政府急切希望其经济能像老虎一样快速奔跑而不是像大象一样慢慢踱步。
5. 他失去了平衡，向后趔趄撞在栏杆上摔倒了。
6. 到采石场仅需6分钟。
7. 当我达到时，气喘吁吁。
8. 我拖着沉重的双脚，疲惫前行。
9. 她把这条辫子绕在脖子上，咬着丝带的末端，胳膊肘搁在桌子上，惊奇地盯着新来的学生。
10. 我放下圣诞礼物，敲了敲他的门铃，然后我和奶奶躲在车里，屏息等待。
11. 你为什么一直敲我的门？
12. 想法纷至沓来。想法蜂拥而至
13. 他的眼睛刷地一下睁开了。
14. 她穿了一件蓝白相间的丝绸衣服，丝绸飘逸到木地板上。
15. 梅根看着不同年龄的男女，显然都饿了，狼吞虎咽地吃了一顿美餐。
16. 她猛地一跳，双臂搂住那人的脖子。她把脸埋在他的肩膀里，抽泣了一会儿，然后用低沉但坚定的声音说。
17. “看在上帝的份上！”随着拳头打方向盘的响声，车窗被拉下了。那人又把头探出去，盯着那人打破了他的美梦，他的眼睛因缺乏睡眠而发红。
Part 4：高考真题再现
2021.6月新高考全国1卷：母亲节的惊喜
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother's Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jema found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jef turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jef to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear！The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
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参考答案：
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their discouraged faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had successfully made some French toast and chicken porridge as the children wished. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, added a card they had made, and then headed for their parents' bedroom.
当这对双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他看了一眼，他就知道他们在做什么。看到他们沮丧的脸，他让他们打扫厨房，同时帮他们为母亲做早餐。这对双胞胎高兴起来，照做了。不到一个小时，厨房就打扫干净了，父亲按照孩子们的意愿，成功地做了一些法式吐司和鸡肉粥。然后他偷偷溜回床上。双胞胎准备了早餐托盘，加了一张他们做的卡片，然后前往他们父母的卧室。
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. "Happy Mother's Day, darling Mummy!" thrilled voice yelling from their throat, the twins hugged their mom tightly. Moved and excited, mother held the twins with her warm arms as well. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to snore. He whistled in astonishment when seeing the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said she had never tasted a better one. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father's eye and they winked at each other secretly.
这对双胞胎把早餐带到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。“母亲节快乐，亲爱的妈妈！”激动的声音从他们的喉咙里叫喊着，双胞胎紧紧地拥抱着他们的妈妈。母亲感动而激动，也用她温暖的胳膊抱着这对双胞胎。一看到早餐托盘，她就睁大了眼睛。她摇着假装打鼾的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他惊讶地吹着口哨。妈妈咬了咬三明治，说她从来没有尝过比这更好的三明治过。杰夫立刻想咬他一口。詹娜抓住了她父亲的目光，他们偷偷地互相眨了眨眼。
Part 5综合演练【模拟题 新高考专用】
（2022·山东淄博·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
The Christmas Spirit Strikes Again
I always dreamed of making a big surprise of a lifetime. Thanks to a little determination, some luck, and a generous helping of Christmas Spirit, my dream became a reality.
My family is Canadian, although my sister moved down to Australia a few years ago to study. She was graduating just before Christmas, but due to my own scholarly schedule back home, I would be unable to make it down in time for her graduation. She was understandably disappointed, and I felt guilty that I wasn’t able to be there for her on this special occasions.
While I was talking to my professor the week before my sister’s graduation, she commented, “Well, if you want to go, just go ahead!" I couldn’t believe my luck! I nearly jumped for joy. “Just make sure you get permission from administrator (行政主管)，” she added. My heart sank. The administration at my school was infamous for denying any sort of time-off requests. I almost didn’t bother asking, because I knew it would be a waste of time. But something in me decided to try, just in case. Maybe it was the hope that the Christmas Spirit would somehow affects the administrator at this time of year. When I returned home to check the reply in my inbox, I steeled myself for disappointment. I held my breath, opened the e-mail, and started to read. And re-read, just to make sure I’d understood. Approval I couldn’t believe my luck!
Immediately, I called the airline. Unexpectedly, even during the busy Christmas season, I was able to change my ticket to arrive the day before my sister’s graduation. With news this fantastic, I was bursting to tell my sister. But, fingers on the dial((拨号盘), I paused. Wouldn’t it be much more fantastic if I could surprise her What a state of shock she would be in! Slowly a great idea came to my mind. I decided a much more dramatic arrival than just a ring of the doorbell. What if I couldn’t arrive in a box
I started to plot.
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I, hidden in the big box, heard the mailmen ringing my sister’s doorbell.
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参考答案：
Paragraph 1:
I started to plot. Then, a great idea occurred to me: getting delivered in a box to my sister’s house! I knew if I pulled this off, my grand arrival would be the best Christmas present I could ever give my sister. I frantically started Googling mail companies. Fortunately, I came across a mail company named Couriers Please and to my great amazement their manager agreed to help me to fulfill my dream! The next day, they found a box big enough for me to hide in. The Christmas Spirit strikes again! (86词)
Paragraph 2:
I, hidden in the big box, heard the mailmen ringing my sister’s doorbell. They announced they had a delivery for her. When the box was opened and she saw me sitting inside smiling up at her, my sister was at a complete loss for words and burst into tears. I would never forget the look on her face. It was such a gift to be able to attend my sister’s graduation to show her my love, and it was a memory that both of us would cherish forever. So never underestimate the power of the Christmas Spirit (85词）
【解析】
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的姐姐在加拿大，即将毕业，作者想请假去参加她的毕业典礼，作者忐忑地向自己的学校请假，令作者出乎意料的是居然被批准了，作者订好了机票，想要给姐姐一个惊喜。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我开始策划。”可知，第一段可描写作者的计划。
②由第二段首句内容“我躲在大箱子里，听见邮递员按我姐姐的门铃。”可知，第二段可描写作者的姐姐看到作者时的反应。
2.续写线索：想到好主意——联系邮件公司——打开箱子——感想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①想到：occur to sb./strike sb.
②偶然遇见：come across/run into
③打开：open/unfold
④突然哭起来：burst into tears/burst out crying
情绪类
①疯狂地：frantically/insanely
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I knew if I pulled this off, my grand arrival would be the best Christmas present I could ever give my sister.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了that)
[高分句型2]It was such a gift to be able to attend my sister’s graduation to show her my love, and it was a memory that both of us would cherish forever.(由关系代词that引导的定语从句)
（2022·福建福州·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was my twelfth birthday, and what I really wanted most was a new bicycle. But I knew that my family couldn’t afford one, so I settled for a bedside table with lockable drawers, a safe place to keep my private stuff.
We went to the charity shop where we found an old dark one. It didn’t look too cool, but I thought that I would paint it to make it look better.
After we took it home, I was getting ready to paint it. When I pulled the drawers out. I felt something stuck to the back. I reached in all the way, and guess what A sealed bag with some papers in it.
When I opened the bag, I realized that the papers were official documents. And, wrapped in them were a bunch of ten and twenty dollar bills! Talk about finding a treasure! And on my birthday!
“Is this some kind of joke ” I said aloud. I went ahead and read the papers, and it turned out to be a will. Some old lady was leaving her savings for her son and grandchildren.
My mind was going crazy. Was I the luckiest twelve-year-old ever With this money I could buy the coolest bicycle. Who knows
I began counting. When I reached a thousand dollars, my mother was knocking on my bedroom door. I quickly closed the drawer with the money in it.
“Do you want some help Is everything all right ” she asked.
No, everything was not right. Actually, my stomach was growling (低吼).
“I’m okay,” I lied.
When my mother left my room, I lay on my bed, starting thinking. What a dilemma (窘境)! I wished there were some one I could talk with. Could I keep it and get all kinds of stuff for me and my family It wouldn’t be too bad for me to keep it, if I shared it...right Thoughts ran through my mind. But I really didn’t need someone else to give me the answer.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I finally made a decision and called my parents into my bedroom.
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Though surprised, the shop owner helped find the family’s telephone number.
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参考答案：
I finally made a decision and called my parents into my bedroom. When my parents saw what I had found in the drawer they were wide-eyed and speechless! Then, they read the papers carefully and were moved to tears. When they asked, “What should we do ” I said, “Let’s take it back to the store and find her family.” My father nodded with a smile on his face and my mother hugged me warmly, saying “You are my pride, dear.” I felt very happy because I already knew right from wrong. We collected all the money and papers at once, putting them in the drawer. We rushed to the charity shop with the drawer in the hope to find the owner as soon as possible.
Though surprised, the shop owner helped find the family’s telephone number. Within a few minutes, the family all came over. When I showed them what I had found in the drawer, they couldn’t believe their eyes. The parents had tears in their eyes. They were still sad about the lady’s death and the father had just lost his job. It was easy to see that my act of honesty gave them hope. They showed me sincere gratitude from the bottom of their hearts. In fact, I had never felt better before. No new bicycle could have made me felt as good about myself as I felt that day because I passed a very important test—a lost and found test of my own character.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在12岁生日时，父母给他买了一个二手的床头柜作为生日礼物，作者发现在床头柜里有以前主人的遗书和很多现金，经过一番思想斗争之后，作者和家人一起把钱还给了去世老人的家人们。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我终于做了决定，把父母叫到我的卧室。”可知，第一段可描写作者与父母分享这件事后，他们做出归还东西的经过。
②由第二段首句内容“店主虽然很惊讶，但还是帮他找到了这家人的电话号码。”可知，第二段可描写作者与那一家人见面的经过以及个人的深切感受。
2.续写线索：做出决定——父母的表扬——寻找失主——失主的感激——个人感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①着急去：rush to/ hurry to
②归还：take sth. back/ return sth.
③拥抱：embrace/hold in one's arms
情绪类
①感动落泪：be moved to tears/ be touched to tears
②感谢：show sincere gratitude/ /be grateful
【点睛】
[高分句型1] When my parents saw what I had found in the drawer they were wide-eyed and speechless!（由when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] We collected all the money and papers at once, putting them in the drawer.（使用现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型3] It was easy to see that my act of honesty gave them hope.（由that引导的主语从句）
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