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读后续写：主旨升华句（助人型）（解析版）
Part 1：助人类故事构造三部曲
第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：感觉（这种感觉可以用多种方法来表示，而且在每个步骤中都可以包含，可以用非谓语的动词和介词来表示）
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred one's eyes. 泪眼模糊
2. One's eyes got misty. 眼睛模糊了
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
困难处境
随着经济的衰退, 镇上有些人失业了。他们的许多家庭都在努力维持生计。
As the economy was in decline(经济衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷）
有个男人卧病在床, 他的妻子和儿子因为要照顾他而不能出去工作。
There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. （2020.7高考山东卷）
但是有一天，一场飓风袭击了当地，他的家被彻底摧毁了。
But one day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毁他的家) .
第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）
（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
(idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race
（2）动作链
然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子，从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的千斤顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。 Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）
（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...
2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
（2）有了结果
1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
（3）感谢
现在，我非常感谢她伸出援助之手。Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）
Molly和Shawn星期二见面了，她太感谢他了，所有人都为她付出了一切。Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her.
（4）感动
1. 不必说，他们被深深地感动了，尤其是Bernard ，他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷）
2.我这样一个完全陌生的人，如此关心他，这让他很感动，他说他愿意工作。
He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.
刹那间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动得说不出话来，我感到如此温暖，仿佛胸中有九个太阳。In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.
我点点头表示感谢，眼睛里闪烁着抑制不住的泪水。I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀).
惊讶又感动，我盯着那张纸条，对我之前认为所有人都漠不关心的想法感到内疚。Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.
（5）升华
是爱让世界运转，Bernard 深深地感受到了这一点。It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷）
每个人都很开心，很甜蜜，露出了一副洁白的牙齿。Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）
我决定把“爱”传递给别人，俗话说：“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”
从那天起，每次我遇到需要帮助的人时，我都会向他们伸出援手，希望把墨西哥家庭提供给我的这种善意传递给他们。From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.
有时，一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.
自己帮助别人或者自己受到他人帮助，一直以来是我们读后续写的一个重要主题，我们今天分享的就是“助人型”的主旨升华句。一共有两个。
我们先来看第一种句型，句式结构比较简单，也很容易仿写。算是一个入门级的升华句子。这个句型就是：from then on +行动。
我们先看例句：
From then on, I would try my best to help sb like sb.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力帮助某些人，就像某人一样。 只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
从这个句型的内涵上看：自己被别人帮助后，主动把这种助人的行为进行“传递”，即：去积极帮助他人。这种精神的升华具有正能量，是值得鼓励的。从句式结构来看，该句用到了倒装，属于高分亮点句。
下面我们举一反三：
【示例1】
2020年山东卷中，讲述了主人公和孩子们想出在社区卖爆米花的主意，来帮助穷人的故事。我们可以借鉴这个写作公式，可以这么写。
From then on, Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help . Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起，伯纳德决定帮助需要帮助的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
【示例2】
我们再来看八省联考的作文，作者讲述一次吉普车爆胎和维修经历。先是路边标语求助无果，失望之际墨西哥人伸出援手。续写的第一段，主要要写帮助的细节。第二段就可以升华主题：
From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
从那时起，我在我的车里放了一个千斤顶和一些常见的工具。当我在路上遇到需要帮助的人时，我会尽力像家人一样帮助他们。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
我们再来看第二种句型：动作+感动+感悟
这个“动作”可以是：看到了某情景，或者拿着一样东西。“感动”很好理解，别人帮助了自己，产生的情绪就是“感动”，最常见的就是“眼泪往下流”。“感悟”这一句，往往是“爱”“善行”“付出”等关键字的励志句。
比如我们来看这一句：
sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which sb felt deep in one’s heart.
某人看到了某物或者拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，在某人的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
这个句子从句式结构上：用到了一个独立主格tears rolling down without control，眼泪毫无控制地流下来；以及一个强调句It is love that makes the world go around（正是“爱”让世界转动），还有一个定语从句：which sb felt deep in one’s heart.这三个语法现象都是我们作文中的高分亮点。
我们来实战演练一下，
【示例1】
首先看一下八省联考的试题。在续写第二段开头，文章提到那一家墨西哥人递给作者一个纸袋，里面有食物。我们可以这么来写主旨升华句。
I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which I felt deep in my heart.
我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，在我心里里深深地感受到了这一点。
【示例2】
我们再来看山东卷“卖爆米花帮助穷人”的故事，我们借鉴这个写作公式，可以这么写。
He held the coins tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which Bernard felt deep in his little heart.
他紧紧地握着硬币，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德在他的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
同学们刚开始，可以比较生硬的模仿，毕竟能先写出来才是最重要的。随着同学们积累的素材越来越多，我们就可以在“感悟”部分，加上更灵活的一些表达，下面我就提供三句比较不错的句子给大家。
第一句：It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
第二句：Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. Thus we can learn that giving is the source of happiness.无论贫富，我们都应该为社会做点什么。 因此，我们可以学会给予是幸福的源泉。
第三句：Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时候小小的善行，可能足以带来巨大的改变。
Part 2：助人场景描写
一、帮助他人之后
I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met.Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home. Meanwhile,I found he looked hard at me and gave me a little smile."Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable,I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. When his eyes caught mine,I was able to see tears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友，他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。 凯尔计划周末消遣。 他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他的妈妈就不用再做了，然后把他的东西带回家了。 同时，我发现他狠狠地看着我，给了我一个小小的微笑。 “谢天谢地，我得救了。 我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事，我听到人群中的喘息声，就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。 当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。
I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what big difference one small gesture had made to him. I even saw his Mom and Dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. With one small gesture we can change a person's life. For better or for worse.
我泪流满面地微笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的举动对他的影响有多大。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，同样感激地微笑着。我突然意识到，我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。一个小小的举动就能改变一个人的一生。无论是好是坏。
二、发生水灾之后
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn't dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while,one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walkupright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance."Lights! I see lights!" Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason's emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
慢慢地但是，小组稳步前进。尽管如此，每次杰森移动一条腿，他就大叫。在接下来的90分钟里，他们向入口处走去，有时在齐胸高的水里。现在，在一个足够高的通道里，杰生看到远处有什么东西在闪烁。“灯光我看到灯光了！” 杰生大声喊道。自从20个小时前进入洞穴以来，杰森第一次情绪失控，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。
三、发生误解之后
As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had beenjust bought by her, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of finding the very man to make an apology.
当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来道歉。
Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes,also with a smile on his face.The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. Witha quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring "Sorry, sorry..It was I myself who was the real cookie thief." After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her.
令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。 他只是抬头看了看她的眼睛，脸上也带着微笑。 女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。 她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。 “对不起，对不起。。 真正偷饼的是我自己。” 过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。 第二天，当她来到她的新公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。
四、发生火灾之后
Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane′s hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.
汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。 他吓得僵住了，站在原地。 他明白形势的严重性，紧紧地握住简的手。 到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。 时间似乎静止不动，虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。 汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。 简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。 她不停地敲门。 汤姆突然哭了起来。
Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom's joy was immense.
幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆非常高兴。
五、感受善良之后
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said,"Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket." The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on,he looked straight into my dad's eyes, took my dad's hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied,"Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.
看到发生了什么事，我爸爸把手伸进口袋，掏出一张20美元的钞票，扔在了地上。然后他把它捡起来，拍了拍那人的肩膀说：“对不起，先生，这是从你口袋里掉出来的。” 那人转过身，看到了钱。他知道发生了什么，他直视着我爸爸的眼睛，用双手握住我爸爸的手，紧紧地握着那张20美元的钞票。他的嘴唇颤抖着，泪水顺着脸颊流了下来，回答道：“谢谢，谢谢，先生。这对我和我的家人来说真的很重要
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didn't go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said,"My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn't begging fora handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young." He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory."We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.We didn't go to the circus tonight, but we didn't go without. Now, who wants an ice cream 。
那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。 那天晚上我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。 他当然不是乞求施舍，但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。” 他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。 我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。 我们今晚没有去马戏团，但我们没有去。 谁要冰淇淋？。
六、感受幸福之后
The driver responded,"It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day."Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked, "What do you mean " The driver answered, "Every morning in the past week,a fine looking gentleman ina military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss,gives you a lite salute and walks away. You are one lucky lady.'
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”
Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. She stood motionlessly facing the opposite side of the street as if gazing at someone. Although she couldn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thought she was actually lucky, for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight,a gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little worried, he saw his wife break into a radiant smile and blow a kiss to his direction. Finally she found back herself blind but attractive and confident as she used to be.
幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。她一动不动地面对着街道的对面站着，好像在凝视着什么人。虽然她不能亲眼看见他，但她确实感觉到马克的存在。苏珊认为她其实是幸运的，因为他给了她一个比视力更强大的礼物，一个爱的礼物，可以给黑暗带来光明。就在马克有点担心的时候，他看到他的妻子绽放出灿烂的笑容，朝他的方向飞吻了一下。最后，她发现自己失明了，但还是像以前一样有魅力和自信。
七、发生误解之后
A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it.He felt a wave of anger swept over him. "Where is my wallet " he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confused look on her face. Dannis stood up,glared at her and shouted,"You stole my wallet!" The crowds began to gossip.The girl turned deadly pale,looking so restless that words failed her.A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the seat.
她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐着。 他感到一阵愤怒席卷了他。 “我的钱包呢？” 他大叫。 黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，脸上露出困惑的神色。 丹尼斯站起来，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的钱包！” 人群开始闲聊起来。 那女孩脸色惨白，神情不安，言语使她失望。 一种奇怪的沉默挂在空中。 她突然从座位上跳了起来。
The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that moment,a policeman approached them and asked about what happened.Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further inquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl.
女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。 过了一会儿，丹尼斯终于抓住了她的手臂。 就在这时，一个警察走近他们，问他们发生了什么事。 丹尼斯急忙解释，而女孩皱着眉头摇了摇头。 经过进一步的询问，警察拿出一个钱包递给丹尼斯，并补充说有人在厕所里发现了它。 他犯了什么错误！ 由于内疚，丹尼斯向女孩道歉。
八、获得勇气
The boy started running again to give the kite lift.The wind on the kite was at once strong and swift, carrying him up high into the air.Closing his eyes tight, he trembled all over in panic,not daring to look down.But with the boy's inspiring words in mind, he got up his nerve and managed to keep the balance and let his fear go.As the wind carried him upward, he slowly opened his eyes, only to see the whole town from a brand-new dimension!"Give more string, please. More! he yelled to the boy excitedly. With courage,he made a great dance in the air, making other kids cheering wildly
那男孩又开始跑去放风筝了。风筝上的风立刻强烈而迅速，把他从高空吹到空中。他紧紧地闭上眼睛，惊恐得浑身发抖，不敢低头看。但考虑到男孩鼓舞人心的话，他鼓起了勇气，设法保持平衡，释放了他的恐惧。当风带着他向上走时，他慢慢地睁开眼睛，却从一个全新的维度看到了整个城镇！“请再多写信吧。请了解更多信息！他兴奋地对那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓着勇气在空中跳了一场舞，让其他孩子疯狂地欢呼
The kite felt peaceful and delighted and new. With other kites flying around, he floated, twirled,stretched his wings and waved his rag tail, a broad smile spreading on his face. The higher he went, the greater the view. Seeing the scared, timid kite now dancing confidently, the boy was touched, believing that the kite had learned a new lesson--the best way to defeat fear is to face it bravely and optimistically.
风筝感到平静、快乐和新鲜事物。其他风筝四处飞着，他漂浮着，旋转着，展开翅膀，摇着破尾巴，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。他走得越高，视野就越大。看到害怕的、胆小的风筝现在自信地跳舞，男孩被感动了，相信风筝已经吸取了新的教训——战胜恐惧的最好方法是勇敢而乐观地面对它。
九、获得自信
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic No one could understand. No one could believe. "But I saw you wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming…." Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深吸了一口气。 “我要谈谈游泳的事...。” 十分钟后全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。
十、接收礼物之后
I was stopped by my mother's eager,joyful look."Let's see what it is, honey. Hurry and open it."It was a blow dryer. Though this may seem but a simple gift, to me it was so much more. Being an eleven-year-old girl, I was stunned.In my world, where receiving lately outweighed giving, my mom's act of selflessness was incomprehensible. It was a huge act Tears filled my eyes and I thought in disbelief about how much my mom must love me to give up her Christmas so-could have a few more presents.
我被我母亲急切而快乐的目光拦住了。“让我们看看那是什么事吧，亲爱的。赶快打开它。“那是一个吹风机。虽然这似乎只是一份简单的礼物，但对我来说，它更多了。作为一个11岁的女孩，我惊呆了。在我的世界里，最近接受的东西超过了付出，我妈妈的无私行为是不可理解的。这是一个巨大的表演，眼泪充满了我的眼睛，我不相信我妈妈一定是多么爱我才能放弃她的圣诞节，所以可以再有几份礼物。
I have always remembered that Christmas fondly: It had such an impact on me. As an adult with children in my life whom I adore, I can now understand my mom's actions.I see actually, she was not ""giving up her Christmas" as I had thought, but was finding an even greater joy in her Christmas because giving truly is better than receiving. My mom's simple act meant the world to me. Whenever I look back on my mom's giving, I will choose to give in my life.
我一直深情地记得那个圣诞节：它对我有如此的影响。 作为一个在我的生活中有孩子的成年人，我现在可以理解我妈妈的行为。 实际上，我知道，她并没有像我想的那样“放弃她的圣诞节”，而是在她的圣诞节中找到了更大的乐趣，因为真正的给予比接受更好。 我妈妈的简单行为对我来说意味着世界。 每当我回首妈妈的付出，我都会选择在我的生命中付出。
十一、陌生人的帮助
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.We both looked up. It was exactly the young man in the photo but looked much stronger. The woman said something to him, looking at us smiling."Need some Mg "he asked.It's amazing he was speaking very good English! George and I looked at each other, eyes lit up."Yes, and we were wondering if you could have one of our tyres changed." "Follow me!" he said, sounding like sort of an order.
当我听到帐篷外的脚步声时，我想说什么。 我们都抬起头来。 照片上的正是那个年轻人，但看上去更强壮。 女人对他说了些什么，看着我们微笑。 ”“需要镁吗？ ”他问道。 他说的英语很好真是太棒了！ 乔治和我互相看了一眼，眼睛亮了起来。 “是的，我们想知道你们是否可以换一个轮胎。” “跟我来！” 他说，听起来像是命令。
We got up and together walked back to the car. The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other. With an outburst of shout, the tyre was oosened up."You just need a bit of effort. Haha!" George and I stood there dumbfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. The knot that had been tired up by the pain in my foot, the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too,in the warm tea from the woman, the heroic shout of the man, the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being alel to set off again.
我们站起来，一起走回到车里。那个人用一只手抓住轮子，另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一声，轮胎亮了。“你只需要付出一点努力。哈哈哈！”我和乔治呆地站在那里看着他完成整个工作，感激和钦佩在我心中涌动。我脚的疼痛、冰冷的雨和顽固的平轮胎也松开了，在女人温暖的茶里，男人的英雄呐喊，远处的山景，还有比加莱尔再次出发的喜悦。
Part 3素材积累：情绪描写句
表示“感到……情绪与情感”
1. a flush of（表情绪的名词）= a wave of = a feeling/sense of 一阵……
joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/ disappointment/guilt/shame
3.（表情绪的名词）flooded over sb. =swept over sb.
【例句】
1) 当他看着自己孩子的时候, 一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头（十分自豪）。A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children./He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children.
2) 我感到高兴极了。A wave of happiness flooded over me.
3) 他感到非常恐慌。A flush of panic spread across his face/cheeks./A flush of fear flooded/swept over him.
表示“（因为紧张、害怕）心跳”
sb. could feel one’s heart pounding wildly in one’s chest (pounding/beating/racing) (wildly/loudly/hard) 感到心在胸中砰砰直跳
【例句】
1) 上台领奖时我感到心砰砰直跳。I could feel my heart pounding as I went on stage to collect the prize.
2) 我的心开始咚咚跳，嘴里发干。My heart started to beat, and my mouth was dry.
3) 他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。He unfolded the letter, his heart racing
表示“感到欣慰，放下心来”
1. …breathed a sigh of relief/…sighed with relief 松了一口气
2.(A wave of) relief flooded through/washed over sb.
3. to one’s relief, … 使人欣慰的/放心的是
【例句】
1) 飞机安全着陆，我顿时放下心来。I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely.A wave of relief flooded through me as the plane landed safely.To my relief, the plane landed safely.
2) 没有人受伤，我们都松了一口气。 No one was injured, and we all breathed a sigh of relief.
4.其他
Never get conceited(骄傲自满的) because of victory or lose heart in case of failure. 胜不骄、败不馁
A unique sense of accomplishment arises. 产生了一种独特的成就感
The police wrote a ticket with a tricky smile(狡黠的微笑).
I feel soft and gentle and caring and my heart feels really warm.
I feel like there are hundreds of butterflies dancing in my heart. (感觉到爱)
The actor playing the father was too wooden.饰演父亲的演员太呆板。
I’ve just been to the dentist and my face is still numb.我刚刚去看了牙医，脸上现在还没知觉呢。
Steve looked blank and said he had no idea what I was talking about.
史蒂夫显得很迷惑，说他不知道我在说什么。
She passed by with only a distant nod. 她冷漠的点了一下头就过去了。
Holly smiled distantly.霍利恍惚地笑了笑。
Part 4：高考真题再现
好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意：
续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
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【参考答案】
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.Hearing what she said, I realized that I didn’t have lunch.To be honest, after working hard for several hours, I was so hungry. Feeling a bit embarrassed, I replied: “no!”The girl said with a smile, “Come on! Join us.The Mexicon sandwich is delicious!” With moved tears rolling around my eyes, I took the sandwich.After eating it like wolf, I felt that it was the tasty sandwich that I had ever had.While dining, I talked about my trouble and feelings and they shared their interesting stories in the life.Then, the girl’s mother had another sandwich and some fruit place din a paper bag and handed it to me,saying gently: “Keep it and have it later! We had to go now.” I showed my heartfelt gratitude to them and saw them disappear in my sight.
After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. What surprised me a lot was that there was a sandwich,fruit and the bill given by me.Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.How grateful was I to the family helping me. Although most of people I met on the road were indifferent, there were still some people like this family who was so helpful and thoughtful.From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .”
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
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【参考答案】
When Mrs. Meredith heard of the idea, she thought it was a good one, too. Then Mrs. Meredith searched the internet and ordered a household popcorn machine. After that, Mrs. Meredith, together with her three children, paid another visit to the family and told them about the popcorn plan. Needless to say, they were deeply moved, especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. A few days later, the machine was delivered to Mrs. Meredith’s doorstep. And it wasn’t long before they got the hang of using the machine to make popcorn.
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. Although it was a hard time and things were tight for everybody, Bernard’s business worked out quite well. He carried the popcorn on his small bike, going from door to door to sell it. People were surprised to see such a little, poorly-dressed boy selling popcorn at their doors, but eventually almost all of them would buy a bag or two. It is love that makes the world go round and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart. (续写词数：164)
Part 5 综合演练【模拟题（新高考专用）】
（2022·海南·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短义。
My knees started shaking, yet my body froze. It felt as though my soul departed my body and I had no control over it. Anxiously, I looked through the roster (名单) posted on the wall of the locker room. My heart was beating harder and harder as I slowly saw all my friends’ names on that list but could not find mine. At that moment, I froze. I just could not accept that all my friends were on the basketball team while I was not.
I was so convinced there was a mistake that I went and found the coach. “Hey coach, are you sure that the roster you posted is correct ” I asked anxiously, dreading (担心) his answer.
“Yes, the names on the list are finalized. Sorry if you did not make it this year, there is always next year,” the coach replied.
I could feel the hot, bitter tears filling my eyes, and I ran out of the room as fast as I could. Trying to forget about the situation, I headed over to the cafeteria to buy some food. I felt dead inside, like nothing mattered. Walking was such a burden that it felt as if I had a 100-pound weight tied to my backpack. My mind was also blank for the rest of the school day. Everything my teachers said went in one ear and out the other.
After school, as I walked to the parking lot to get picked up, I saw all my friends gathered near the rear of the lot, celebrating and joking around. I detoured (绕道) around the side of the school to avoid them, trying not to think about being the only one in our friend group failing to make the team.
I saw my father’s car pull up near the school lot, and I walked up to the car and got in. He smiled at me, played the radio, and started driving home.
注意∶1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Noticing my bad mood, he asked me what was wrong.
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Inspired by what my father said, I decided to work toward my goal.
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参考答案：
Noticing my bad mood, he asked me what was wrong. Full of sorrow, I told him tearfully, “I wanted to join our school basketball team so much and I practiced hard. But I didn’t make it.” Hearing what I said, my father comforted me, “I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down. Success is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. I believe you can make it.”
Inspired by what my father said, I decided to work toward my goal. I made a much tighter schedule from then on. I practiced hard for an hour every day to improve the basic skills and strength. To my delight, I was finally recognized by the coach, who said that I showed great talent in sports.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者满怀信心却没能进入校篮球队，作者感觉非常难过，心不在焉地熬到放学后爸爸开车来接作者的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“注意到我情绪不好，他问我怎么了。”可知，第一段可描写作者向爸爸讲述事情的经过及爸爸鼓励作者。
②由第二段首句内容“我被爸爸说的话所鼓舞，决定朝着我的目标努力。”可知，第二段可描写作者努力训练最终入选球队。
2.续写线索：
告诉爸爸为什么难过——爸爸安慰鼓励——努力训练——被教练认可
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告诉：tell/inform sb. of sth.
②训练：practice/train
③认可：recognize/accept
情绪类
①悲伤：sorrow/grief
②高兴：delight/happiness
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Hearing what I said, my father comforted me, “I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down. （由连接词what和that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. To my delight, I was finally recognized by the coach, who said that I showed great talent in sports.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）
（2022·福建泉州·三模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
What It Means to Serve
I didn’t continue college after graduation. I moved out of my family. With little work experience, I served as a waitress. But during the five years’ labor, I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip.
I had had enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree. I promised I would never serve people again - at least not in such way. It was time to serve myself. Luckily, I received a position as an afterschool program tutor at a local middle school, with the added benefit of completing English education degree. I had the opportunity to go big! The kid would need me - a role model and a trustworthy friend, I believed.
But my first day was welcomed by the students’ indifference (冷漠). The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks. My excitement began to die down. I doubted whether the new job was a mistake. The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better. After my repeated persistence, they finally turned off the playground mode. But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the corner.
I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me. He shouted at me for coming at him. And when I asked them to return to their seats, he slammed (用力摔) his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude. “I don’t like you, homework and this afterschool program! All you guys do is yell at me. I’m never coming back.” he walked out of the classroom, slamming the door.
Naturally, I was so frustrated (挫败的). I wondered why I am here. Most kids disrespected me! I paused to take a deep breath. Then suddenly I thought to myself, “You said you would never serve people again, but you don’t understand what these kids really need.” At that moment, I remembered my middle-school life. I always had a poor attitude, never did my schoolwork, repeatedly got into fights, and disrespected my elders.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life.
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参考答案：
Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. “I’m sorry, Jeremy. Could I have a talk with you ” I said, trying to be calm and sincere. He turned around, looked at me for a moment and nodded, “OK”. “Jeremy, could you tell me what have happened to you ” I asked. Hesitantly, Jeremy began to share with me about his story. From what he said, I knew his mother was killed in a car accident three months before. Worse still, his father, who was in deep sorrow, lost his job at the same time. After that, his father became bad-tempered and often shouted at him, ignoring all his requests. As he told me what was happening, he began to cry.
At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life. I gently hugged him and patted him on the back. Then I walked him home and encouraged him to face life in a positive way. After that, I often chatted with Jeremy and helped him deal with his troubles. I even paid a visit to his father several times. As time went by, Jeremy behaved better and better and smiles often appeared on his face. At the end of the program, Jeremy hugged me tightly and thanked me again and again. At that moment, I suddenly realized what it meant to serve --- Get to know a person from the bottom of your heart and give what he needs.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以作者的经历为线索展开。作者高中毕业后，去做了一名服务员。五年之后，作者去一所中学担当了一个课外活动的老师。在第一堂课上，作者遇见了一个非常暴躁的学生—Jeremy。作者和Jeremy了解他的情况，了解了他悲惨的家庭生活。之后作者一直帮助Jeremy，并取得了成功。通过自己的经历，作者明白了为他人服务的真谛。
【详解】
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“意识到我没有什么不一样，我走出去进入大厅，赶上了Jeremy。”可知，第一段可描写作者和Jeremy聊天，了解他的情况的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“在那一刻，我为这个男孩和他的家庭生活心碎了。”可知，第二段可描写作者帮助Jeremy，鼓励他，并且最终获得成功的故事。
2. 续写线索：询问情况——Jeremy讲述家庭情况——了解情况——鼓励帮助——Jeremy转变——感悟
3.词汇激活：
行为类①一谈话：talk with sb. / chat with sb. / have a conversation ②同意：nod/agree
情绪类① 感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful ② 积极：positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I said, trying to be calm and sincere.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] Worse still, his father, who was in deep sorrow, lost his job at the same time.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I suddenly realized what it meant to serve.（what引导的宾语从句）
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读后续写：主旨升华句（助人型）（解析版）
Part 1：助人类故事构造三部曲
第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：感觉（这种感觉可以用多种方法来表示，而且在每个步骤中都可以包含，可以用非谓语的动词和介词来表示）
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred one's eyes. 泪眼模糊
2. One's eyes got misty. 眼睛模糊了
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
困难处境
随着经济的衰退, 镇上有些人失业了。他们的许多家庭都在努力维持生计。
As the economy was in decline(经济衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷）
有个男人卧病在床, 他的妻子和儿子因为要照顾他而不能出去工作。
There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. （2020.7高考山东卷）
但是有一天，一场飓风袭击了当地，他的家被彻底摧毁了。
But one day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毁他的家) .
第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）
（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
(idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race
（2）动作链
然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子，从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的千斤顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。 Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）
（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...
2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
（2）有了结果
1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙
（3）感谢
现在，我非常感谢她伸出援助之手。Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）
Molly和Shawn星期二见面了，她太感谢他了，所有人都为她付出了一切。Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her.
（4）感动
1. 不必说，他们被深深地感动了，尤其是Bernard ，他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷）
2.我这样一个完全陌生的人，如此关心他，这让他很感动，他说他愿意工作。
He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.
刹那间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动得说不出话来，我感到如此温暖，仿佛胸中有九个太阳。In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.
我点点头表示感谢，眼睛里闪烁着抑制不住的泪水。I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀).
惊讶又感动，我盯着那张纸条，对我之前认为所有人都漠不关心的想法感到内疚。Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.
（5）升华
是爱让世界运转，Bernard 深深地感受到了这一点。It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷）
每个人都很开心，很甜蜜，露出了一副洁白的牙齿。Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）
我决定把“爱”传递给别人，俗话说：“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”
从那天起，每次我遇到需要帮助的人时，我都会向他们伸出援手，希望把墨西哥家庭提供给我的这种善意传递给他们。From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.
有时，一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.
自己帮助别人或者自己受到他人帮助，一直以来是我们读后续写的一个重要主题，我们今天分享的就是“助人型”的主旨升华句。一共有两个。
我们先来看第一种句型，句式结构比较简单，也很容易仿写。算是一个入门级的升华句子。这个句型就是：from then on +行动。
我们先看例句：
From then on, I would try my best to help sb like sb.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力帮助某些人，就像某人一样。 只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
从这个句型的内涵上看：自己被别人帮助后，主动把这种助人的行为进行“传递”，即：去积极帮助他人。这种精神的升华具有正能量，是值得鼓励的。从句式结构来看，该句用到了倒装，属于高分亮点句。
下面我们举一反三：
【示例1】
2020年山东卷中，讲述了主人公和孩子们想出在社区卖爆米花的主意，来帮助穷人的故事。我们可以借鉴这个写作公式，可以这么写。
From then on, Bernard made up his mind to help someone who needs help . Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.从那时起，伯纳德决定帮助需要帮助的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
【示例2】
我们再来看八省联考的作文，作者讲述一次吉普车爆胎和维修经历。先是路边标语求助无果，失望之际墨西哥人伸出援手。续写的第一段，主要要写帮助的细节。第二段就可以升华主题：
From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.
从那时起，我在我的车里放了一个千斤顶和一些常见的工具。当我在路上遇到需要帮助的人时，我会尽力像家人一样帮助他们。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
我们再来看第二种句型：动作+感动+感悟
这个“动作”可以是：看到了某情景，或者拿着一样东西。“感动”很好理解，别人帮助了自己，产生的情绪就是“感动”，最常见的就是“眼泪往下流”。“感悟”这一句，往往是“爱”“善行”“付出”等关键字的励志句。
比如我们来看这一句：
sb looked at sth / held sth, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which sb felt deep in one’s heart.
某人看到了某物或者拿着某物，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，在某人的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
这个句子从句式结构上：用到了一个独立主格tears rolling down without control，眼泪毫无控制地流下来；以及一个强调句It is love that makes the world go around（正是“爱”让世界转动），还有一个定语从句：which sb felt deep in one’s heart.这三个语法现象都是我们作文中的高分亮点。
我们来实战演练一下，
【示例1】
首先看一下八省联考的试题。在续写第二段开头，文章提到那一家墨西哥人递给作者一个纸袋，里面有食物。我们可以这么来写主旨升华句。
I held the paper bag tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which I felt deep in my heart.
我紧紧地握着纸袋，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，在我心里里深深地感受到了这一点。
【示例2】
我们再来看山东卷“卖爆米花帮助穷人”的故事，我们借鉴这个写作公式，可以这么写。
He held the coins tightly, tears rolling down without control. It is love that makes the world go around,which Bernard felt deep in his little heart.
他紧紧地握着硬币，眼泪毫无控制地流了下来。 正是爱让世界转动，伯纳德在他的心里深深地感受到了这一点。
同学们刚开始，可以比较生硬的模仿，毕竟能先写出来才是最重要的。随着同学们积累的素材越来越多，我们就可以在“感悟”部分，加上更灵活的一些表达，下面我就提供三句比较不错的句子给大家。
第一句：It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
第二句：Whether rich or poor, we should be happy to do something for society. Thus we can learn that giving is the source of happiness.无论贫富，我们都应该为社会做点什么。 因此，我们可以学会给予是幸福的源泉。
第三句：Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时候小小的善行，可能足以带来巨大的改变。
Part 2：助人场景描写
一、帮助他人之后
I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day we met.Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend. He talked of how he had cleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldn’t have to do it later and was carrying his stuff home. Meanwhile,I found he looked hard at me and gave me a little smile."Thankfully, I was saved. My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable,I heard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome, popular boy told us all about his weakest moment. When his eyes caught mine,I was able to see tears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友，他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。 凯尔计划周末消遣。 他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他的妈妈就不用再做了，然后把他的东西带回家了。 同时，我发现他狠狠地看着我，给了我一个小小的微笑。 “谢天谢地，我得救了。 我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事，我听到人群中的喘息声，就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。 当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。
I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what big difference one small gesture had made to him. I even saw his Mom and Dad looking at me and smiling that same grateful smile. It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions. With one small gesture we can change a person's life. For better or for worse.
我泪流满面地微笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的举动对他的影响有多大。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，同样感激地微笑着。我突然意识到，我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。一个小小的举动就能改变一个人的一生。无论是好是坏。
二、发生水灾之后
The water kept rising, and there was no hope of rescue. The hours passed. Jason and Andrew didn't dare to move for fear of slipping. They dozed off and then jerked themselves awake. Every once in a while,one of them turned on his headlamp to check the water level. An hour later, the water level went down enough that they could try an escape. Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies. Jason screamed in pain, but he was determined not to let it stop him.
水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。 几个小时过去了。 杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。 他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。 每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。 一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。 他们僵硬地保持在一个位置12小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。 杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。
Slowly but steadily, the group made their way forward. Still, each time Jason moved a leg, he cried out. Over the next 90 minutes, they made their way toward the entrance, at times in chest-high water. Now, in a passage that was high enough for them to walkupright, Jason saw something flicker in the distance."Lights! I see lights!" Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave, over 20 hours earlier, Jason's emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
慢慢地但是，小组稳步前进。尽管如此，每次杰森移动一条腿，他就大叫。在接下来的90分钟里，他们向入口处走去，有时在齐胸高的水里。现在，在一个足够高的通道里，杰生看到远处有什么东西在闪烁。“灯光我看到灯光了！” 杰生大声喊道。自从20个小时前进入洞穴以来，杰森第一次情绪失控，眼泪顺着脸颊流了下来。
三、发生误解之后
As she reached in her baggage, she gasped with surprise. At that moment, in her sight came the packet of cookies, which had beenjust bought by her, unopened at all. Ashamed and feeling like a thief, she finally got that the cookies were not hers but belonged to the man sitting next to her, who had calmly offered to share his last cookie with her.A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively look around with the hope of finding the very man to make an apology.
当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来道歉。
Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. He was just looking up and met her eyes,also with a smile on his face.The woman was at an absolute loss but gave the man a nervous laugh in return. Witha quite open mouth, she was unable to say any apology to him. Murmuring "Sorry, sorry..It was I myself who was the real cookie thief." After a while, she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily. The next day, when she arrived at her new company, the biggest surprise was waiting for her.
令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。 他只是抬头看了看她的眼睛，脸上也带着微笑。 女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。 她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。 “对不起，对不起。。 真正偷饼的是我自己。” 过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。 第二天，当她来到她的新公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。
四、发生火灾之后
Tom noticed the flame was reaching up. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot. He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Jane′s hand tightly. By then, both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes. Tom begged Jane to run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the choking smoke and shook her head. She kept pounding against the door. Tom burst out crying.
汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。 他吓得僵住了，站在原地。 他明白形势的严重性，紧紧地握住简的手。 到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。 时间似乎静止不动，虽然他们可能只在那里两三分钟。 汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。 简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。 她不停地敲门。 汤姆突然哭了起来。
Luckily, some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane's mind. She told them Ms. Makcik must be still in the room. They forced the door open with all their might. Sure enough, Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious. She was carried downstairs and then rushed to the hospital, where she finally came to herself. People in the neighborhood felt relieved and Jane and Tom's joy was immense.
幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆非常高兴。
五、感受善良之后
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said,"Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket." The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on,he looked straight into my dad's eyes, took my dad's hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied,"Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.
看到发生了什么事，我爸爸把手伸进口袋，掏出一张20美元的钞票，扔在了地上。然后他把它捡起来，拍了拍那人的肩膀说：“对不起，先生，这是从你口袋里掉出来的。” 那人转过身，看到了钱。他知道发生了什么，他直视着我爸爸的眼睛，用双手握住我爸爸的手，紧紧地握着那张20美元的钞票。他的嘴唇颤抖着，泪水顺着脸颊流了下来，回答道：“谢谢，谢谢，先生。这对我和我的家人来说真的很重要
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.We didn't go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said,"My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn't begging fora handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young." He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory."We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others.We didn't go to the circus tonight, but we didn't go without. Now, who wants an ice cream 。
那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。 那天晚上我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。 他当然不是乞求施舍，但他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。” 他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。 我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人。 我们今晚没有去马戏团，但我们没有去。 谁要冰淇淋？。
六、感受幸福之后
The driver responded,"It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like you are every day."Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked, "What do you mean " The driver answered, "Every morning in the past week,a fine looking gentleman ina military uniform has been standing across the street watching you getting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until you enter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss,gives you a lite salute and walks away. You are one lucky lady.'
司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”
Tears of happiness poured down Susan's cheeks. She stood motionlessly facing the opposite side of the street as if gazing at someone. Although she couldn't physically see him, she definitely felt Mark's presence. Susan thought she was actually lucky, for he had given her a gift more powerful than sight,a gift of love that can bring light where there is darkness.Just as Mark grew a little worried, he saw his wife break into a radiant smile and blow a kiss to his direction. Finally she found back herself blind but attractive and confident as she used to be.
幸福的泪水顺着苏珊的脸颊流下来。她一动不动地面对着街道的对面站着，好像在凝视着什么人。虽然她不能亲眼看见他，但她确实感觉到马克的存在。苏珊认为她其实是幸运的，因为他给了她一个比视力更强大的礼物，一个爱的礼物，可以给黑暗带来光明。就在马克有点担心的时候，他看到他的妻子绽放出灿烂的笑容，朝他的方向飞吻了一下。最后，她发现自己失明了，但还是像以前一样有魅力和自信。
七、发生误解之后
A seat beside her was empty, and Dannis occupied it.He felt a wave of anger swept over him. "Where is my wallet " he yelled. The black-haired girl glanced up from her reading, with a confused look on her face. Dannis stood up,glared at her and shouted,"You stole my wallet!" The crowds began to gossip.The girl turned deadly pale,looking so restless that words failed her.A strange silence hung in the air. Abruptly, she leaped from the seat.
她旁边的一个座位空着，丹尼斯坐着。 他感到一阵愤怒席卷了他。 “我的钱包呢？” 他大叫。 黑发女孩从阅读中抬起头来，脸上露出困惑的神色。 丹尼斯站起来，瞪了她一眼，喊道：“你偷了我的钱包！” 人群开始闲聊起来。 那女孩脸色惨白，神情不安，言语使她失望。 一种奇怪的沉默挂在空中。 她突然从座位上跳了起来。
The girl ran and Dannis ran after her. After a while, Dannis finally grabbed her by the arm.At exactly that moment,a policeman approached them and asked about what happened.Dannis hastened to explain it while the girl frowned with a shake of her head. After further inquiries, the policeman took out a wallet and handed it to Dannis, adding that someone had found it in the toilet. What a mistake he had made! Overwhelmed by guilt, Dannis made an apology to the girl.
女孩跑了，丹尼斯追了她。 过了一会儿，丹尼斯终于抓住了她的手臂。 就在这时，一个警察走近他们，问他们发生了什么事。 丹尼斯急忙解释，而女孩皱着眉头摇了摇头。 经过进一步的询问，警察拿出一个钱包递给丹尼斯，并补充说有人在厕所里发现了它。 他犯了什么错误！ 由于内疚，丹尼斯向女孩道歉。
八、获得勇气
The boy started running again to give the kite lift.The wind on the kite was at once strong and swift, carrying him up high into the air.Closing his eyes tight, he trembled all over in panic,not daring to look down.But with the boy's inspiring words in mind, he got up his nerve and managed to keep the balance and let his fear go.As the wind carried him upward, he slowly opened his eyes, only to see the whole town from a brand-new dimension!"Give more string, please. More! he yelled to the boy excitedly. With courage,he made a great dance in the air, making other kids cheering wildly
那男孩又开始跑去放风筝了。风筝上的风立刻强烈而迅速，把他从高空吹到空中。他紧紧地闭上眼睛，惊恐得浑身发抖，不敢低头看。但考虑到男孩鼓舞人心的话，他鼓起了勇气，设法保持平衡，释放了他的恐惧。当风带着他向上走时，他慢慢地睁开眼睛，却从一个全新的维度看到了整个城镇！“请再多写信吧。请了解更多信息！他兴奋地对那男孩大喊大叫。他鼓着勇气在空中跳了一场舞，让其他孩子疯狂地欢呼
The kite felt peaceful and delighted and new. With other kites flying around, he floated, twirled,stretched his wings and waved his rag tail, a broad smile spreading on his face. The higher he went, the greater the view. Seeing the scared, timid kite now dancing confidently, the boy was touched, believing that the kite had learned a new lesson--the best way to defeat fear is to face it bravely and optimistically.
风筝感到平静、快乐和新鲜事物。其他风筝四处飞着，他漂浮着，旋转着，展开翅膀，摇着破尾巴，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。他走得越高，视野就越大。看到害怕的、胆小的风筝现在自信地跳舞，男孩被感动了，相信风筝已经吸取了新的教训——战胜恐惧的最好方法是勇敢而乐观地面对它。
九、获得自信
Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Jenny didn't answer. How could she explain about the watch and its magic No one could understand. No one could believe. "But I saw you wearing it yesterday," Miss Walker gently reminded him. For a moment Lee remained silent and then he apologized he had just remembered that.Jenny was relieved saying she had found it on the way home and decided to return it after the speech. Everybody was puzzled and asked why. Jenny again was speechless.
每个人都把眼睛盯着珍妮，等待着解释。珍妮没有回答。她怎么能解释一下这只手表和它的魔力呢？没人能理解。没有人能相信。“可是我昨天看到你戴着它，”沃克小姐温柔地提醒他。李沉默了一会儿，然后他道歉了，他只记得这一点。珍妮在回家的路上找到了它，并决定在演讲后归还。每个人都很困惑，并被问及为什么。珍妮又说不出话来了。
Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny's speech first.Jenny walked slowly to the front. She couldn't think properly. All round her, a sea of faces was watching.She felt so frightened and the watch didn't seem magical at all. Suddenly she saw Miss Walker's encouraging eyes.Jenny took a deep breath."I'm going to talk about swimming…." Ten minutes later the whole class stood up applauding Jenny's wonderful speech. Jenny smiled as she eventually realized the real source of confidence.
沃克老师笑了笑，让全班同学先听珍妮的演讲。 珍妮慢慢地走到前面。 她无法正常思考。 她的四周，一片面海在看着。 她感到很害怕，手表看起来一点也不神奇。 突然，她看到沃克小姐鼓励的眼睛。 珍妮深吸了一口气。 “我要谈谈游泳的事...。” 十分钟后全班同学起立为珍妮的精彩演讲鼓掌。 珍妮笑了，因为她最终意识到了自信的真正来源。
十、接收礼物之后
I was stopped by my mother's eager,joyful look."Let's see what it is, honey. Hurry and open it."It was a blow dryer. Though this may seem but a simple gift, to me it was so much more. Being an eleven-year-old girl, I was stunned.In my world, where receiving lately outweighed giving, my mom's act of selflessness was incomprehensible. It was a huge act Tears filled my eyes and I thought in disbelief about how much my mom must love me to give up her Christmas so-could have a few more presents.
我被我母亲急切而快乐的目光拦住了。“让我们看看那是什么事吧，亲爱的。赶快打开它。“那是一个吹风机。虽然这似乎只是一份简单的礼物，但对我来说，它更多了。作为一个11岁的女孩，我惊呆了。在我的世界里，最近接受的东西超过了付出，我妈妈的无私行为是不可理解的。这是一个巨大的表演，眼泪充满了我的眼睛，我不相信我妈妈一定是多么爱我才能放弃她的圣诞节，所以可以再有几份礼物。
I have always remembered that Christmas fondly: It had such an impact on me. As an adult with children in my life whom I adore, I can now understand my mom's actions.I see actually, she was not ""giving up her Christmas" as I had thought, but was finding an even greater joy in her Christmas because giving truly is better than receiving. My mom's simple act meant the world to me. Whenever I look back on my mom's giving, I will choose to give in my life.
我一直深情地记得那个圣诞节：它对我有如此的影响。 作为一个在我的生活中有孩子的成年人，我现在可以理解我妈妈的行为。 实际上，我知道，她并没有像我想的那样“放弃她的圣诞节”，而是在她的圣诞节中找到了更大的乐趣，因为真正的给予比接受更好。 我妈妈的简单行为对我来说意味着世界。 每当我回首妈妈的付出，我都会选择在我的生命中付出。
十一、陌生人的帮助
I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.We both looked up. It was exactly the young man in the photo but looked much stronger. The woman said something to him, looking at us smiling."Need some Mg "he asked.It's amazing he was speaking very good English! George and I looked at each other, eyes lit up."Yes, and we were wondering if you could have one of our tyres changed." "Follow me!" he said, sounding like sort of an order.
当我听到帐篷外的脚步声时，我想说什么。 我们都抬起头来。 照片上的正是那个年轻人，但看上去更强壮。 女人对他说了些什么，看着我们微笑。 ”“需要镁吗？ ”他问道。 他说的英语很好真是太棒了！ 乔治和我互相看了一眼，眼睛亮了起来。 “是的，我们想知道你们是否可以换一个轮胎。” “跟我来！” 他说，听起来像是命令。
We got up and together walked back to the car. The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other. With an outburst of shout, the tyre was oosened up."You just need a bit of effort. Haha!" George and I stood there dumbfounded watching him finishing the whole job, gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart. The knot that had been tired up by the pain in my foot, the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too,in the warm tea from the woman, the heroic shout of the man, the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being alel to set off again.
我们站起来，一起走回到车里。那个人用一只手抓住轮子，另一只手抓住扳手。大叫一声，轮胎亮了。“你只需要付出一点努力。哈哈哈！”我和乔治呆地站在那里看着他完成整个工作，感激和钦佩在我心中涌动。我脚的疼痛、冰冷的雨和顽固的平轮胎也松开了，在女人温暖的茶里，男人的英雄呐喊，远处的山景，还有比加莱尔再次出发的喜悦。
Part 3素材积累：情绪描写句
表示“感到……情绪与情感”
1. a flush of（表情绪的名词）= a wave of = a feeling/sense of 一阵……
joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/ disappointment/guilt/shame
3.（表情绪的名词）flooded over sb. =swept over sb.
【例句】
1) 当他看着自己孩子的时候, 一种强烈的自豪感涌上心头（十分自豪）。A flush of pride swept over him as he watched his children./He felt a flush of pride as he watched his children.
2) 我感到高兴极了。A wave of happiness flooded over me.
3) 他感到非常恐慌。A flush of panic spread across his face/cheeks./A flush of fear flooded/swept over him.
表示“（因为紧张、害怕）心跳”
sb. could feel one’s heart pounding wildly in one’s chest (pounding/beating/racing) (wildly/loudly/hard) 感到心在胸中砰砰直跳
【例句】
1) 上台领奖时我感到心砰砰直跳。I could feel my heart pounding as I went on stage to collect the prize.
2) 我的心开始咚咚跳，嘴里发干。My heart started to beat, and my mouth was dry.
3) 他打开信，心在咚咚跳着。He unfolded the letter, his heart racing
表示“感到欣慰，放下心来”
1. …breathed a sigh of relief/…sighed with relief 松了一口气
2.(A wave of) relief flooded through/washed over sb.
3. to one’s relief, … 使人欣慰的/放心的是
【例句】
1) 飞机安全着陆，我顿时放下心来。I breathed a sigh of relief as the plane landed safely.A wave of relief flooded through me as the plane landed safely.To my relief, the plane landed safely.
2) 没有人受伤，我们都松了一口气。 No one was injured, and we all breathed a sigh of relief.
4.其他
Never get conceited(骄傲自满的) because of victory or lose heart in case of failure. 胜不骄、败不馁
A unique sense of accomplishment arises. 产生了一种独特的成就感
The police wrote a ticket with a tricky smile(狡黠的微笑).
I feel soft and gentle and caring and my heart feels really warm.
I feel like there are hundreds of butterflies dancing in my heart. (感觉到爱)
The actor playing the father was too wooden.饰演父亲的演员太呆板。
I’ve just been to the dentist and my face is still numb.我刚刚去看了牙医，脸上现在还没知觉呢。
Steve looked blank and said he had no idea what I was talking about.
史蒂夫显得很迷惑，说他不知道我在说什么。
She passed by with only a distant nod. 她冷漠的点了一下头就过去了。
Holly smiled distantly.霍利恍惚地笑了笑。
Part 4：高考真题再现
好心的墨西哥家庭【2021年八省联考】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意：
续写词数应为150左右；
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
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买爆米花助穷人【2020年7月山东卷】
第二节 （满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.
Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.
One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy — his name was Bernard — had interested her very much.
“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.”
After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”
“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”
For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .”
The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too.
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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
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Part 5 综合演练【模拟题（新高考专用）】
（2022·海南·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短义。
My knees started shaking, yet my body froze. It felt as though my soul departed my body and I had no control over it. Anxiously, I looked through the roster (名单) posted on the wall of the locker room. My heart was beating harder and harder as I slowly saw all my friends’ names on that list but could not find mine. At that moment, I froze. I just could not accept that all my friends were on the basketball team while I was not.
I was so convinced there was a mistake that I went and found the coach. “Hey coach, are you sure that the roster you posted is correct ” I asked anxiously, dreading (担心) his answer.
“Yes, the names on the list are finalized. Sorry if you did not make it this year, there is always next year,” the coach replied.
I could feel the hot, bitter tears filling my eyes, and I ran out of the room as fast as I could. Trying to forget about the situation, I headed over to the cafeteria to buy some food. I felt dead inside, like nothing mattered. Walking was such a burden that it felt as if I had a 100-pound weight tied to my backpack. My mind was also blank for the rest of the school day. Everything my teachers said went in one ear and out the other.
After school, as I walked to the parking lot to get picked up, I saw all my friends gathered near the rear of the lot, celebrating and joking around. I detoured (绕道) around the side of the school to avoid them, trying not to think about being the only one in our friend group failing to make the team.
I saw my father’s car pull up near the school lot, and I walked up to the car and got in. He smiled at me, played the radio, and started driving home.
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Noticing my bad mood, he asked me what was wrong.
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Inspired by what my father said, I decided to work toward my goal.
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（2022·福建泉州·三模）
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What It Means to Serve
I didn’t continue college after graduation. I moved out of my family. With little work experience, I served as a waitress. But during the five years’ labor, I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip.
I had had enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree. I promised I would never serve people again - at least not in such way. It was time to serve myself. Luckily, I received a position as an afterschool program tutor at a local middle school, with the added benefit of completing English education degree. I had the opportunity to go big! The kid would need me - a role model and a trustworthy friend, I believed.
But my first day was welcomed by the students’ indifference (冷漠). The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks. My excitement began to die down. I doubted whether the new job was a mistake. The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better. After my repeated persistence, they finally turned off the playground mode. But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the corner.
I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me. He shouted at me for coming at him. And when I asked them to return to their seats, he slammed (用力摔) his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude. “I don’t like you, homework and this afterschool program! All you guys do is yell at me. I’m never coming back.” he walked out of the classroom, slamming the door.
Naturally, I was so frustrated (挫败的). I wondered why I am here. Most kids disrespected me! I paused to take a deep breath. Then suddenly I thought to myself, “You said you would never serve people again, but you don’t understand what these kids really need.” At that moment, I remembered my middle-school life. I always had a poor attitude, never did my schoolwork, repeatedly got into fights, and disrespected my elders.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy.
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