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读后续写：主旨升华句3（脱险型）
（解析版）
Part 1困境类场景描写
一、环境描写（恶劣）
——波涛汹涌：
当我继续往前漂的时候，一个巨浪呼啸着向我们逼近。
As I floated on, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而来)and approached us.
大风从耳边呼啸而过，我们被推离海岸越来越远。
The big wind roared through our ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.
我所有的感觉都告诉我一个大浪就要来了。All my senses told me that a big wave was about to come.(即将来临)
一个看似猛烈的海浪正向我们袭来。
A powerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wave was coming towards us. (靠近我们)
——鲨鱼的可怕：
那是一条鲨鱼，一条巨大的鲨鱼，在离她不远的地方游来游去。
It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her.
鲨鱼的下颚张开，露出一排排锋利的牙齿。
The shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth.
——陆地上的水：
雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。Splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey,.
水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me alive.
3.不幸的是，水涌了进来，水涨到了我的腰上。【在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）】Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon my waist.
——推荐句型：
The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……
They were getting drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。
The heavy rain was violently beating against the window.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。
The rain drummed on the roof of the building.雨不停地击打着房预。
The furious storm is grumbling outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。
The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
A flash of lightning lit up the whole sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。
8. The sharp claps of thunder pierced the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。
The bolt of lightning stabs the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。
10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the ocean melt into each other
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）
——疲倦/寒冷
盐刺痛我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我还能坚持多久。Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.
随着时间的流逝，疲惫感席卷着我们，我们的脚僵硬/麻木和颤抖着。Time passing us, tiredness engulfed (包围了) us with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.
尽管我们筋疲力尽，我们没有停止。咬紧牙关，我们继续游泳。Exhausted as we were (尽管很累), we didn’t stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming.
似乎过了一个世纪，我感到极度疲劳地努力游泳以保持漂浮。After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued (非常累) while swimming hard to keep myself afloat(漂浮着的).
5. 他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。He was huddled into his coat, his face blue with cold.
6 手指被冰冷的海水弄得麻木，喉咙被寒风吹得哽咽，我感到快要崩溃了。Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.
7. 在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。She clasped the baby to her bosom in the biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles.
9. 她冷得牙齿直打颤。Her teeth were chattering with cold.
——害怕
我深吸一口气，使劲咽了下去。I took a deep breath and swallowed hard (害怕地咽了口吐沫).
2. 她顿感毛骨悚然。A chill feeling crept up her spine.
3随着时间的流逝，恐惧爬上了我的心，我几乎不知道我还能坚持多久。As time ticked by, fear crept upon my heart(爬上我心头) and I could hardly tell how long I could plough on (前行).
4 一想到绝望，我就直打哆嗦。The thought of hopelessness sent shivers down my spine(让我后脊背发凉).
我被一种恐怖感淹没了。I was flooded with a sense of horror(被恐惧感淹没).
6. 看到这里，我内心的恐惧感越来越强。Seeing this, I felt my fear growing/increasing(剧增) inside.
7我感到一股焦虑席卷了我的身体。I felt a wave of anxiety(一阵焦虑) swept over my body (袭来).
8沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的眼中涌出，我觉得自己陷入了绝望之中。Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness.
恐惧感席卷全身，我惊慌失措地喊道：“救命！救命！”A sense of terror sweeping through my body, I shouted in panic, “Help! Help!”
我后颈上的汗毛因恐惧而刺痛，我浑身被汗湿透了。The hairs on the back of my neck prickled with dread and I was drenched in sweat. （汗毛倒竖；湿透）
绝望的浪潮吞没了我，我交叉手指，闭上眼睛，用颤抖的声音祈祷。 Swallowed by a wave of despair, I crossed my fingers, closed my eyes and prayed in a shivering voice.
车颤抖得像一片树叶，随时都可能被洪水冲走，这让我一步也不敢动。
Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready to be flooded away at any time, which refrained me from moving a single inch.
——描写挣扎努力
我们不遗余力地游向岸边。spared no effort to(不遗余力地) swim towards the shore.
我们交换了坚定的眼神，然后以令人难以置信的速度继续前进。We exchanged a determined look(互换了坚定的神情) , then ploughed on (继续前行) at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度).
三、转机描写-描写声音传来或看见了什么
1. 我们听到远处传来的声音。A distant sound reached our ears.(传入耳朵)
2. 就在那时，我的脑子飞速运转——为什么不打给911和Joe呢？Just then, my mind raced – why not call 911 and Joe
3船的声音在我们耳边回响。The sound of the boat echoed in our ears.(在我们耳内回响)
4就在这时，一声尖锐的哨声划破了宁静。At that moment, a shrill whistle(汽笛声)ripped the air (划破天空).
5. 当我们不知所措时，远处传来刺耳的喊叫声。When we were at a loss of what to do, there were rasping (刺耳的) shouts(喊叫声)rising from the distance (从远处升起).
Jason看到远处有东西在闪烁。“灯！我看到灯了！”杰森大声喊道。Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out.
我在绝望中我终于看到远处有几艘救生艇朝我们驶来。In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance.
过了很长时间，远处出现了一个亮点！我们挥挥手，大声呼救。After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help.
四、情绪描写（希望+努力）
——描写如释重负
就像抓着救命稻草一样，我一遍又一遍地拨号码。As if clutching at straws, I dialed the number again and again.
听到这个令人欣慰的消息，我忍不住激动起来。Hearing the comforting news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
3. 他的话重新点燃了我心中的希望之火。His words reignited the flame of hope in my heart.
4. 我感到一阵自豪，欣慰地微笑着。Smiling in relief (如释重负地微笑), I felt a rush of pride(感到一阵自豪).
看到有船来救我们，我和汤姆高兴极了，都松了一口气。Overjoyed(狂喜) to see a boat coming to our rescue, Tom and I breathed a sigh of relief(如释重负地松了口气)
由于在一个姿势上保持了几个小时而僵硬了，他们慢慢地展开了身体。Stiff from keeping in one position for hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies.
五、脱险描写
1.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。The boat finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore.
2.Joe大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。Yelling at the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger.
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）
1.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。When we pictured what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written on my face.
2.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。Sighing in relief, I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer.
七、主旨描写
1. 我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.
这是...，的情绪第一次充分利用他，眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。For the first time since…, one’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
直到那时，我才意识到是Joe一直在照顾我。Only then did I realize that it was Joe who had been caring for me through thick and thin.
我如释重负，被内疚和悔恨所淹没。我喃喃地说，想着我应该认真对待他的警告。Sobbing in relief, I was overwhelmed by waves of guilt and remorse. I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously.
这一切只花了几分钟，但贝蒂永远不会忘记那段可怕的经历。All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
Part 2“脱险”型
第三个类型是“脱险”型。读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。
好，我们开始吧，今天我们学习四个句子。
主旨句一：入门句
That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。
遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式结构：如此......以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。
主旨句二：中级句
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。
主旨句三：高级句
It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.
“正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。”
这个句子也是把强调句，定语从句，宾语从句结合在一起，句式结构比较高级。同学们不妨挑战一下？
主旨句四：综合型
即把前几种方式进行组合，我们可以记住这个组合公式：结果+难忘的经历+体悟
我们再说具体点儿，“结果”指的是获救的结果，如走出森林，获救后见到家人等。“难忘的经历”就是我们刚刚学到的第一个主旨句。“体悟”在这种“脱险型”里，无非就是突出冷静，勇敢，不放弃希望等信念的重要性。
我们来一个例句：
Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们做某事。（这里写结果） 多么难忘的经历啊！ （这是一个万能句）事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。（作者的体悟，可以把“保持冷静”，换成“不放弃希望”等。）
我们看2018年高考英语浙江卷的读后续写，爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。文章的最后，我们可以用这句：
Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
我们也可以把第一句改成：Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper（我们安全回家，正好赶上吃晚饭）,也就是说，不管怎么写，第一句是脱险后的结果。
我们再看2016年10月高考英语浙江卷的读后续写，夫妻俩野外露营，因小事发生争执，女主人独自走进森林迷路的故事。文章最后，我们也可以用上这句：
Finally, she saw her husband. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything.What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we never give up our hope. 最后，她看到了她的丈夫。 她尽可能地紧紧地抱着他，激动得说不出话来。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们不放弃我们的希望，任何困境都有出路。
2017年高考英语的读后续写，和朋友一起骑车游玩，途中遇狼的故事。我们可以这样写：
Finally, the wolf ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance .“We are safe!”Mac said in a pleasant tone. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后，狼从路上跑开，消失在远处。“我们很安全！”麦克以一种愉快的语气说。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
Part 3素材积累
练习：根据提示填空：
1.She tried___________________(夺枪) from him.
2.He was ____________________________ (笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂)and dig my nails into his flesh.
3.In sport, it’s usually men ________________________(新闻人物通常是男性) .
4.If you were you, I_________________________(要抓住我的免费索取的权利，现在)!
5.Success is now ___________________(在望).
6.She allowed __________________________(胜利从手中溜走了).
7.He___________________(马上就明白)Tephen was talking about his wife.
8.He ______________________________(设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物), get a firm grip of it and heave his body upwards.
9.Attlee was extremely intelligent and____________________________________(对局势的把握颇为高明).
10.Use your mouse __________________________________(拖动图片将其调整为新的尺寸).
11.He was barely able______________________________________(拖着那条中毒的腿走路 )
12.The minutes ___________________(熬过去)
时间一分钟一分钟地。
13.As far as shopping for clothes goes, ___________________(是件挺没意思的事)
14.___________________(他拖着腿), and he can hardly lift his arm.
15.I tried to ___________________(走出来)morass of despair.
16.Please concentrate on the business at hand and ______________________(不要牵扯其他问题).
17.I don’t want to go back there and________________________(重提那件气人的事)
18.You’ll never get home______________________________________(你走这么慢).
19.He felt hot tears_______________________(掉到他的手指上)
他感觉到热泪。
20.Nancy ___________________(疲惫地瘫坐到)a nearby chair
21.Britain _________________________ (从第二位降到了)third place in the league.
22.There was ___________________(垂直深渊)just outside my window
23.If I___________________(给点暗示)he might give me a big present.
24.Burning embers started ______________________________________(从天花板上往下掉)
25.He ___________________(放低了声音) and glanced round at the door.
参考答案：
1. She tried to seize the gun from him.
她试图夺他的枪。
2. He was clumsily trying to grab at Alfred’s arms and dig my nails into his flesh.
他笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂，指甲抠进了他的肉里。
3. In sport, it’s usually men who grab the headlines.
在体育方面，新闻人物通常是男性。
4. If you were you, I’d grab my FREE copy right now!
如果你是你，我要抓住我的免费索取的权利，现在！
5. Success is now within our grasp.
现在胜利在望。
6. She allowed victory to slip from her grasp.
她让胜利从手中溜走了。
7. He instantly grasped that Stephen was talking about his wife.
他马上就明白斯蒂芬在说他的妻子。
8. He managed to grasp the metal, get a firm grip of it and heave his body upwards.
他设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物，把整个身子往上提。
9. Attlee was extremely intelligent and his grasp of the situation was masterly.
阿特利聪明过人，对局势的把握颇为高明。
10. Use your mouse to drag the pictures to their new size.
用鼠标拖动图片，将其调整为新的尺寸。
11. He was barely able to drag his poisoned leg behind him
他极费力地拖着那条中毒的腿走路。
12. The minutes dragged past
时间一分钟一分钟地熬过去。
13. As far as shopping for clothes goes, it’s a drag
逛街买衣服是件挺没意思的事。
14. He drags his leg, and he can hardly lift his arm.
他拖着腿，几乎举不起他的胳膊。
15. I tried to drag myself out of the morass of despair.
我试图从绝望的困境中走出来。
16. Please concentrate on the business at hand and don’t drag in irrelevant issues.
请你集中谈这件事，不要牵扯其他问题。
17. I don’t want to go back there and drag up that anger again
我不想再回到那儿，重提那件气人的事。
18. You’ll never get home if you drag along like this.
你走这么慢，哪辈子能蹭到家呀？
19. He felt hot tears dropping onto his fingers
他感觉到热泪掉到他的手指上。
20. Nancy dropped into a nearby chair
南希疲惫地瘫坐到近处的椅子上。
21. Britain has dropped from second to third place in the league.
英国在联赛中的排名从第二位降到了第三位。
22. There was a sheer drop just outside my window
我的窗外就是垂直深渊。
23. If I drop a few hints he might give me a big present.
如果我给点暗示，他没准会送我一个大礼。
24. Burning embers started dropping from the ceiling
余火未尽的木块开始从天花板上往下掉。
25. He dropped his voice and glanced round at the door.
他放低了声音，在门口环视了一下。
Part 4 综合演练【模拟题（新高考专用）】
（2022·广东·汕头市聿怀中学模拟预测）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.
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参考答案：
The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Seeing Paul wave at him kindly and open the car door for him, Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed into the car without any hesitation. No sooner had the poor man got in than Paul closed the door instantly. The wolf walked around the car and howled furiously at them, but just in vain. Realizing it couldn’t catch Mac any more, the wolf ultimately gave up and walked away gloomily. On spotting the wolf swallowed by the road, Mac, bathed in perspiration, sighed with relief and sank down to the back seat. Paul handed a bottle of water to Mac, who managed a weak smile, murmuring something like “Thank you”.
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Knowing that Mac had been chased by a wolf, they were stumped for words and paralyzed with fear. The two friends extended their earnest gratitude to Paul for rescuing Mac and then took Mac back home. After such a terrible experience, the splendid landscape of Alaska seemed no longer to be a temptation to them. On the way back home, feeling the light breeze through his hair, Mac felt what happened just now was just a nightmare, but a warm glow flooded into his inner heart as he thought of Paul’s unselfish assistance. The most precious part of humans is their care for each other.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小学教师麦克·霍兰和朋友们从家里骑车去阿拉斯加。途中他的一个朋友停下来修理自行车，麦克继续骑行，结果突遇一只狼，在最后，被正开车去阿拉斯加保罗和贝基救下的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“汽车突然停在他面前。”可知，第一段可描写保罗救了麦克。
②由第二段首句内容“几分钟后，另外两个骑自行车的人来了。”可知，第二段可描写朋友感谢保罗。
2.续写线索：骑行——遇狼——恰逢——援救——感谢
3.词汇激活
行为类
①说不出话：stump for words/words fail sb/be speechless
②回家：go back home/return home
情绪类
①感谢：thank sb for/show one’s appreciation/gratitude/be grateful
②吓呆了：paralyze with fear/be overcome with fright
【点睛】
[高分句型1]：No sooner had the poor man got in than Paul closed the door instantly.这句话运用了no sooner…than的部分倒装结构。
[高分句型2]：Realizing it couldn’t catch Mac any more, the wolf ultimately gave up and walked away gloomily.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。
[高分句型3]：Paul handed a bottle of water to Mac, who managed a weak smile, murmuring something like “Thank you”.这句话运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句。
（2022·湖南·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When a tornado hit a small town nearby, many families were left homeless. Afterward, all the local newspapers carried stories of the families who suffered the hardest to appeal to people’s attention and assistance.
One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of a mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old. stood at her side, eyes downcast. Hiding behind her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, wide eyes with confusion and fear. The article below gave clothing sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my seven-year-old twins. Brad and Brett, and three-year-old Meghan to help those less fortunate than themselves.
“We have so much. And these poor people now have nothing” I said. “We’ll share what we have with them,” I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them in the living room. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods. While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. The boys were pleased to join. Brad rose and went to his room fast. He came back bringing his action figures that he played with not so frequently. Brett also jumped up and ran to fetch some of his Matchbox cars and airplane models. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up abandoned toys.
The boys placed the objects they had chosen to donate into one of the boxes while I filled the third box with clothes. Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, faded, best-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. “I’ll help you find something for the little girl, too.” I said to the little Meghan.
Para. 1:
“Mommy, I will give Lucy to them,” Meghan turned to me.
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Para. 2:
Recognizing what little Meghan’s gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes.
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参考答案：
“Mommy, I will give Lucy to them,” Meghan turned to me. “Oh, honey,” I said. “You don't have to give Lucy. You love her so much.” Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with tears. “Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe she'll make that little girl happy, too.” She paused in front of the box that held the toys, pressed her round little face into Lucy's flat face, gave her a final kiss, and then laid her gently on top of the other toys. The boys watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.
Recognizing what little Meghan's gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had bought on sale last week. I believed the young woman in the picture would like it and fit it as much as I did. The boys had also been inspired by our behavior and carried their beloved things. We all wished the family could pass the difficult period as soon as possible and that they would love the things we gave them with all our heart.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以为受难者捐赠衣物和食物为线索展开，文章主要讲述龙卷风发生后，作者看到一张无家可归的一家人的照片，作者想让她的孩子们为受难者捐赠衣服、食物和玩具。女儿Meghan决定捐赠她最喜欢的娃娃，这个行动影响了作者，于是作者也将旧衣服换成新衣服捐给受难者。希望通过捐赠的物品使受难者感受到他们的一片心意。
【详解】
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“Meghan转向我，对我说：妈妈，我要把Lucy捐给他们。”可知，第一段可描写Meghan捐赠娃娃Lucy的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“意识到小Meghan行为的意义，我把旧夹克衫从衣服箱子里拿了出来。”可知，第二段可描写作者行为的变化和感受。
2.续写线索：Meghan捐Lucy——Meghan的想法——作者拿出旧夹克衫——捐新衣服——感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①看：watch/stare
②放：place/pile up
③捐：donate/give
情绪类
喜爱的：favorite/beloved/best-loved
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had bought on sale last week.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2] The boys had also been inspired by our behavior and carried their beloved things.（运用了被动语态）
（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Henry got on his bike and began to deliver copies of the March 8,1970,issue of The Gazette. Half an hour later,he threw the last newspaper onto the porch（门廊）at 35 Oak Street and cycled to The Gazette offices. There must be something important for the editor in chief to meet with an 11-year-old paperboy.
"No good way to deliver bad news,"Mr. Trotta greeted him when Henry stepped in.Henry's smile faded.
"We're closing shop,Henry. Advertising is down.Television is how people get their news today. Local papers are the first to close."Mr.Trotta shrugged.
Henry couldn’t believe his ears, frozen to the spot.He thought of all hose people he had met on his route. They wouldn't get their neighborhood news anymore!
You were great,Henry—always dependable"Mr. Trotta said.Henry forced his head up to say good-bye.
As he rode past the houses he knew so well he saw Mr.Grady on his porch,holding a broom（扫帚）. Henry led him to a chair and cleaned the porch.They sat for a while as Mr.Grady recalled how happy he'd been moving his family to 10 Oak. He sounded lonely.
A week after his last deliveries, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did. He thought of a way to find out. He started out on his old route with a notebook
Henry stopped at Mrs.Burke's. She opened the door, holding the two babies.She asked him if he knew any neighbors with experience of looking after children.
Mr. Simon was next door, carrying his violin out."Hey, Henry. My band is having à concert in the park this Friday. Tell all your friends."
As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head. Maybe he could create a newsy page（小报）for the neighbors.
注意∶
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Neighbors cheered Henry's idea,ready to offer information.
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Henry's first Oak Street News then produced desired effects.
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参考答案：
Neighbors cheered Henry's idea, ready to offer information. Besides Mrs. Burke who longed for a baby sitter and Mr. Simon who desired a large audience for his concert. Henry also collected six other neighbors' appealing and needs, including Mr. Grady who yearned for his children's coming back for a short reunion. Information in hand, Henry knocked at Mr. Trotta's door and pleaded for his support in publishing his first Oak Street News, who approved almost immediately. Soon, Henry's tabloid was in circulation, which he cheerfully delivered from door to door as before.
Henry's first Oak Street News then produced desired effects. Neighbors applauded the idea of sharing their needs in a communal newspaper, which really addressed their immediate concern in a practical and efficient way. As Mrs. Burke successfully found an ideal baby sitter, Mr. Simon secured a large following for his concert and Mr. Grady who happily reunited with his kids, Henry realized, from his deep heart, that The Gazette was far from gone in this TV era, but transformed into Oak Street News that connected, bonded and tied the Oak neighbors in a cozy fabric.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了因为科技的发展，Henry送的报纸《公报》不再营业，想到了那些等待着报纸看新闻的人，Henry决定自己办一份小报给邻居的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“邻居们为亨利的想法欢呼起来，准备提供信息。”可知，第一段可描写邻居们都给小报提供信息，小报出版了。
由第二段首句内容“亨利的第一个橡树街新闻随后产生了预期的效果。”可知，第二段可描写小报给邻居们带来了益处，将邻居们联系在一起。
2.续写线索：邻居提供信息——出版报纸——报纸达到了预期后果——报纸给邻居们带来好处——邻居更团结
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
①收集：collect/ gather/accumulate
②.支持：approve/accept
③.改变：transform/change
情绪类
①.舒适的：cozy/comfortable.
高兴：happily/ gladly/merrily
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Besides Mrs. Burke who longed for a baby sitter and Mr. Simon who desired a large audience for his concert.（使用了who引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]. Soon, Henry's tabloid was in circulation, which he cheerfully delivered from door to door as before.（使用了which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3]. . Neighbors applauded the idea of sharing their needs in a communal newspaper, which really addressed their immediate concern in a practical and efficient way.（使用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
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读后续写：主旨升华句3（脱险型）
（解析版）
Part 1困境类场景描写
一、环境描写（恶劣）
——波涛汹涌：
当我继续往前漂的时候，一个巨浪呼啸着向我们逼近。
As I floated on, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而来)and approached us.
大风从耳边呼啸而过，我们被推离海岸越来越远。
The big wind roared through our ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.
我所有的感觉都告诉我一个大浪就要来了。All my senses told me that a big wave was about to come.(即将来临)
一个看似猛烈的海浪正向我们袭来。
A powerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wave was coming towards us. (靠近我们)
——鲨鱼的可怕：
那是一条鲨鱼，一条巨大的鲨鱼，在离她不远的地方游来游去。
It was a shark, a massive shark that was swimming around, not far away from her.
鲨鱼的下颚张开，露出一排排锋利的牙齿。
The shark’s jaws opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth.
——陆地上的水：
雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。Splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey,.
水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。The water kept rising, as if it would engulf me alive.
3.不幸的是，水涌了进来，水涨到了我的腰上。【在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）】Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon my waist.
——推荐句型：
The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……
They were getting drenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。
The heavy rain was violently beating against the window.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。
The rain drummed on the roof of the building.雨不停地击打着房预。
The furious storm is grumbling outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。
The icy wind started howling, stinging my face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
A flash of lightning lit up the whole sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。
8. The sharp claps of thunder pierced the quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。
The bolt of lightning stabs the earth. 一道闪电划过天空。
10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the ocean melt into each other
二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）
——疲倦/寒冷
盐刺痛我的眼睛，我几乎不知道我还能坚持多久。Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.
随着时间的流逝，疲惫感席卷着我们，我们的脚僵硬/麻木和颤抖着。Time passing us, tiredness engulfed (包围了) us with my feet stiff/numb (僵硬/麻木)and shivering.
尽管我们筋疲力尽，我们没有停止。咬紧牙关，我们继续游泳。Exhausted as we were (尽管很累), we didn’t stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming.
似乎过了一个世纪，我感到极度疲劳地努力游泳以保持漂浮。After what seemed a century, I felt extremely fatigued (非常累) while swimming hard to keep myself afloat(漂浮着的).
5. 他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。He was huddled into his coat, his face blue with cold.
6 手指被冰冷的海水弄得麻木，喉咙被寒风吹得哽咽，我感到快要崩溃了。Fingers numbed by the chilly water, throat choked by icy wind, I felt on the verge of collapsing.
7. 在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。She clasped the baby to her bosom in the biting/cutting/piercing/sharp wind.
寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。The icy wind started howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles.
9. 她冷得牙齿直打颤。Her teeth were chattering with cold.
——害怕
我深吸一口气，使劲咽了下去。I took a deep breath and swallowed hard (害怕地咽了口吐沫).
2. 她顿感毛骨悚然。A chill feeling crept up her spine.
3随着时间的流逝，恐惧爬上了我的心，我几乎不知道我还能坚持多久。As time ticked by, fear crept upon my heart(爬上我心头) and I could hardly tell how long I could plough on (前行).
4 一想到绝望，我就直打哆嗦。The thought of hopelessness sent shivers down my spine(让我后脊背发凉).
我被一种恐怖感淹没了。I was flooded with a sense of horror(被恐惧感淹没).
6. 看到这里，我内心的恐惧感越来越强。Seeing this, I felt my fear growing/increasing(剧增) inside.
7我感到一股焦虑席卷了我的身体。I felt a wave of anxiety(一阵焦虑) swept over my body (袭来).
8沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的眼中涌出，我觉得自己陷入了绝望之中。Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness.
恐惧感席卷全身，我惊慌失措地喊道：“救命！救命！”A sense of terror sweeping through my body, I shouted in panic, “Help! Help!”
我后颈上的汗毛因恐惧而刺痛，我浑身被汗湿透了。The hairs on the back of my neck prickled with dread and I was drenched in sweat. （汗毛倒竖；湿透）
绝望的浪潮吞没了我，我交叉手指，闭上眼睛，用颤抖的声音祈祷。 Swallowed by a wave of despair, I crossed my fingers, closed my eyes and prayed in a shivering voice.
车颤抖得像一片树叶，随时都可能被洪水冲走，这让我一步也不敢动。
Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready to be flooded away at any time, which refrained me from moving a single inch.
——描写挣扎努力
我们不遗余力地游向岸边。spared no effort to(不遗余力地) swim towards the shore.
我们交换了坚定的眼神，然后以令人难以置信的速度继续前进。We exchanged a determined look(互换了坚定的神情) , then ploughed on (继续前行) at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度).
三、转机描写-描写声音传来或看见了什么
1. 我们听到远处传来的声音。A distant sound reached our ears.(传入耳朵)
2. 就在那时，我的脑子飞速运转——为什么不打给911和Joe呢？Just then, my mind raced – why not call 911 and Joe
3船的声音在我们耳边回响。The sound of the boat echoed in our ears.(在我们耳内回响)
4就在这时，一声尖锐的哨声划破了宁静。At that moment, a shrill whistle(汽笛声)ripped the air (划破天空).
5. 当我们不知所措时，远处传来刺耳的喊叫声。When we were at a loss of what to do, there were rasping (刺耳的) shouts(喊叫声)rising from the distance (从远处升起).
Jason看到远处有东西在闪烁。“灯！我看到灯了！”杰森大声喊道。Jason saw something flicker in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out.
我在绝望中我终于看到远处有几艘救生艇朝我们驶来。In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us in the distance.
过了很长时间，远处出现了一个亮点！我们挥挥手，大声呼救。After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help.
四、情绪描写（希望+努力）
——描写如释重负
就像抓着救命稻草一样，我一遍又一遍地拨号码。As if clutching at straws, I dialed the number again and again.
听到这个令人欣慰的消息，我忍不住激动起来。Hearing the comforting news, I couldn't help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)
3. 他的话重新点燃了我心中的希望之火。His words reignited the flame of hope in my heart.
4. 我感到一阵自豪，欣慰地微笑着。Smiling in relief (如释重负地微笑), I felt a rush of pride(感到一阵自豪).
看到有船来救我们，我和汤姆高兴极了，都松了一口气。Overjoyed(狂喜) to see a boat coming to our rescue, Tom and I breathed a sigh of relief(如释重负地松了口气)
由于在一个姿势上保持了几个小时而僵硬了，他们慢慢地展开了身体。Stiff from keeping in one position for hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies.
五、脱险描写
1.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。The boat finally reached us and took all of us back to the shore.
2.Joe大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。Yelling at the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger.
六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）
1.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。When we pictured what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written on my face.
2.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。Sighing in relief, I couldn’t stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer.
七、主旨描写
1. 我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.
这是...，的情绪第一次充分利用他，眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。For the first time since…, one’s emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.
直到那时，我才意识到是Joe一直在照顾我。Only then did I realize that it was Joe who had been caring for me through thick and thin.
我如释重负，被内疚和悔恨所淹没。我喃喃地说，想着我应该认真对待他的警告。Sobbing in relief, I was overwhelmed by waves of guilt and remorse. I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously.
这一切只花了几分钟，但贝蒂永远不会忘记那段可怕的经历。All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.
Part 2“脱险”型
第三个类型是“脱险”型。读后续写中会遇到火灾，水灾，森林迷路等内容的故事，如果涉及到对生命造成了一定的威胁的情节，我们就把这种类型的文章归为“脱险”型。在往年高考真题中，曾经就考过三次：拍摄北极熊遇险；父子骑马迷路；骑车游玩遇狼脱险。
好，我们开始吧，今天我们学习四个句子。
主旨句一：入门句
That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。
遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式结构：如此......以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。
主旨句二：中级句
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。
主旨句三：高级句
It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with (= we may face), we mustn’t give up our hope.
“正是这种独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。”
这个句子也是把强调句，定语从句，宾语从句结合在一起，句式结构比较高级。同学们不妨挑战一下？
主旨句四：综合型
即把前几种方式进行组合，我们可以记住这个组合公式：结果+难忘的经历+体悟
我们再说具体点儿，“结果”指的是获救的结果，如走出森林，获救后见到家人等。“难忘的经历”就是我们刚刚学到的第一个主旨句。“体悟”在这种“脱险型”里，无非就是突出冷静，勇敢，不放弃希望等信念的重要性。
我们来一个例句：
Finally, we did sth. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们做某事。（这里写结果） 多么难忘的经历啊！ （这是一个万能句）事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。（作者的体悟，可以把“保持冷静”，换成“不放弃希望”等。）
我们看2018年高考英语浙江卷的读后续写，爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩迷路的故事。文章的最后，我们可以用这句：
Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
我们也可以把第一句改成：Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper（我们安全回家，正好赶上吃晚饭）,也就是说，不管怎么写，第一句是脱险后的结果。
我们再看2016年10月高考英语浙江卷的读后续写，夫妻俩野外露营，因小事发生争执，女主人独自走进森林迷路的故事。文章最后，我们也可以用上这句：
Finally, she saw her husband. As tightly as possible, she hugged him and was too thrilled to say anything.What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we never give up our hope. 最后，她看到了她的丈夫。 她尽可能地紧紧地抱着他，激动得说不出话来。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们不放弃我们的希望，任何困境都有出路。
2017年高考英语的读后续写，和朋友一起骑车游玩，途中遇狼的故事。我们可以这样写：
Finally, the wolf ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance .“We are safe!”Mac said in a pleasant tone. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后，狼从路上跑开，消失在远处。“我们很安全！”麦克以一种愉快的语气说。 多么难忘的经历啊！ 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。
Part 3素材积累
练习：根据提示填空：
1.She tried___________________(夺枪) from him.
2.He was ____________________________ (笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂)and dig my nails into his flesh.
3.In sport, it’s usually men ________________________(新闻人物通常是男性) .
4.If you were you, I_________________________(要抓住我的免费索取的权利，现在)!
5.Success is now ___________________(在望).
6.She allowed __________________________(胜利从手中溜走了).
7.He___________________(马上就明白)Tephen was talking about his wife.
8.He ______________________________(设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物), get a firm grip of it and heave his body upwards.
9.Attlee was extremely intelligent and____________________________________(对局势的把握颇为高明).
10.Use your mouse __________________________________(拖动图片将其调整为新的尺寸).
11.He was barely able______________________________________(拖着那条中毒的腿走路 )
12.The minutes ___________________(熬过去)
时间一分钟一分钟地。
13.As far as shopping for clothes goes, ___________________(是件挺没意思的事)
14.___________________(他拖着腿), and he can hardly lift his arm.
15.I tried to ___________________(走出来)morass of despair.
16.Please concentrate on the business at hand and ______________________(不要牵扯其他问题).
17.I don’t want to go back there and________________________(重提那件气人的事)
18.You’ll never get home______________________________________(你走这么慢).
19.He felt hot tears_______________________(掉到他的手指上)
他感觉到热泪。
20.Nancy ___________________(疲惫地瘫坐到)a nearby chair
21.Britain _________________________ (从第二位降到了)third place in the league.
22.There was ___________________(垂直深渊)just outside my window
23.If I___________________(给点暗示)he might give me a big present.
24.Burning embers started ______________________________________(从天花板上往下掉)
25.He ___________________(放低了声音) and glanced round at the door.
参考答案：
1. She tried to seize the gun from him.
她试图夺他的枪。
2. He was clumsily trying to grab at Alfred’s arms and dig my nails into his flesh.
他笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂，指甲抠进了他的肉里。
3. In sport, it’s usually men who grab the headlines.
在体育方面，新闻人物通常是男性。
4. If you were you, I’d grab my FREE copy right now!
如果你是你，我要抓住我的免费索取的权利，现在！
5. Success is now within our grasp.
现在胜利在望。
6. She allowed victory to slip from her grasp.
她让胜利从手中溜走了。
7. He instantly grasped that Stephen was talking about his wife.
他马上就明白斯蒂芬在说他的妻子。
8. He managed to grasp the metal, get a firm grip of it and heave his body upwards.
他设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物，把整个身子往上提。
9. Attlee was extremely intelligent and his grasp of the situation was masterly.
阿特利聪明过人，对局势的把握颇为高明。
10. Use your mouse to drag the pictures to their new size.
用鼠标拖动图片，将其调整为新的尺寸。
11. He was barely able to drag his poisoned leg behind him
他极费力地拖着那条中毒的腿走路。
12. The minutes dragged past
时间一分钟一分钟地熬过去。
13. As far as shopping for clothes goes, it’s a drag
逛街买衣服是件挺没意思的事。
14. He drags his leg, and he can hardly lift his arm.
他拖着腿，几乎举不起他的胳膊。
15. I tried to drag myself out of the morass of despair.
我试图从绝望的困境中走出来。
16. Please concentrate on the business at hand and don’t drag in irrelevant issues.
请你集中谈这件事，不要牵扯其他问题。
17. I don’t want to go back there and drag up that anger again
我不想再回到那儿，重提那件气人的事。
18. You’ll never get home if you drag along like this.
你走这么慢，哪辈子能蹭到家呀？
19. He felt hot tears dropping onto his fingers
他感觉到热泪掉到他的手指上。
20. Nancy dropped into a nearby chair
南希疲惫地瘫坐到近处的椅子上。
21. Britain has dropped from second to third place in the league.
英国在联赛中的排名从第二位降到了第三位。
22. There was a sheer drop just outside my window
我的窗外就是垂直深渊。
23. If I drop a few hints he might give me a big present.
如果我给点暗示，他没准会送我一个大礼。
24. Burning embers started dropping from the ceiling
余火未尽的木块开始从天花板上往下掉。
25. He dropped his voice and glanced round at the door.
他放低了声音，在门口环视了一下。
Part 4 综合演练【模拟题（新高考专用）】
（2022·广东·汕头市聿怀中学模拟预测）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase (追赶).
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；
Paragraph 1:
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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Paragraph 2:
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.
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（2022·湖南·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
When a tornado hit a small town nearby, many families were left homeless. Afterward, all the local newspapers carried stories of the families who suffered the hardest to appeal to people’s attention and assistance.
One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of a mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old. stood at her side, eyes downcast. Hiding behind her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, wide eyes with confusion and fear. The article below gave clothing sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my seven-year-old twins. Brad and Brett, and three-year-old Meghan to help those less fortunate than themselves.
“We have so much. And these poor people now have nothing” I said. “We’ll share what we have with them,” I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them in the living room. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods. While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their less favorite things. The boys were pleased to join. Brad rose and went to his room fast. He came back bringing his action figures that he played with not so frequently. Brett also jumped up and ran to fetch some of his Matchbox cars and airplane models. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up abandoned toys.
The boys placed the objects they had chosen to donate into one of the boxes while I filled the third box with clothes. Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, faded, best-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. “I’ll help you find something for the little girl, too.” I said to the little Meghan.
Para. 1:
“Mommy, I will give Lucy to them,” Meghan turned to me.
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Para. 2:
Recognizing what little Meghan’s gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes.
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（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Henry got on his bike and began to deliver copies of the March 8,1970,issue of The Gazette. Half an hour later,he threw the last newspaper onto the porch（门廊）at 35 Oak Street and cycled to The Gazette offices. There must be something important for the editor in chief to meet with an 11-year-old paperboy.
"No good way to deliver bad news,"Mr. Trotta greeted him when Henry stepped in.Henry's smile faded.
"We're closing shop,Henry. Advertising is down.Television is how people get their news today. Local papers are the first to close."Mr.Trotta shrugged.
Henry couldn’t believe his ears, frozen to the spot.He thought of all hose people he had met on his route. They wouldn't get their neighborhood news anymore!
You were great,Henry—always dependable"Mr. Trotta said.Henry forced his head up to say good-bye.
As he rode past the houses he knew so well he saw Mr.Grady on his porch,holding a broom（扫帚）. Henry led him to a chair and cleaned the porch.They sat for a while as Mr.Grady recalled how happy he'd been moving his family to 10 Oak. He sounded lonely.
A week after his last deliveries, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did. He thought of a way to find out. He started out on his old route with a notebook
Henry stopped at Mrs.Burke's. She opened the door, holding the two babies.She asked him if he knew any neighbors with experience of looking after children.
Mr. Simon was next door, carrying his violin out."Hey, Henry. My band is having à concert in the park this Friday. Tell all your friends."
As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head. Maybe he could create a newsy page（小报）for the neighbors.
注意∶
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Neighbors cheered Henry's idea,ready to offer information.
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Henry's first Oak Street News then produced desired effects.
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