天津市和平区（2021-2023）三年高考英语模拟试题分题型分层汇编-作文（含答案）
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天津市和平区（2021-2023）三年高考英语模拟试题分题型分层汇编-作文
一、建议信
1．（2022·天津和平·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》（English Monthly）向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 自我介绍：
2. 说明该报优点：（如：内容方面，对学生帮助方面等）；
3. 提出建议：（如：增加某些内容等）
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
参考词汇：励志的inspirational
Dear editors
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
二、感谢信/祝贺信
2．（2023·天津和平·统考一模）假设你是天津中学学生李津。你的加拿大朋友 Chris 得知你被滑铁卢大学(University of Waterloo) 录取，写信向你表示祝贺。请按以下提示写封回信：
1) 对 Chris 的关心和祝贺表示感谢；
2) 告知报考的专业及原因， 谈谈大学毕业后的打算；
3) 希望 Chris 针对加拿大的大学生活提一些建议。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于 100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
三、推荐信
3．（2021·天津和平·耀华中学校考一模）假设你是李华，得知你校外教Peter计划不久后回英国。他想给母亲选一份有中国文化特色的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
(1)推荐礼物；
(2)推荐原因；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意:
(1)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(2)字数不少于100。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
4．（2022·天津和平·统考三模）假如你是晨光中学的李津。你们英国的友好学校Westminster School派出的由15名学生组成的学访团来到你校。请你在欢迎会上代表学校致词，并简述接待安排，内容包括：
（1）表示欢迎；
（2）接待安排（参观冬奥会赛场，游览五大道和海河公园等）；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Wudadao Sightseeing Street
Dear friends from Westminster School,
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5．（2022·天津和平·统考一模）假如你是晨光中学的李津，你给已经是大学一年级学生的笔友Chris写信，请对方给你提一些建议。信的内容如下：
（1）询问Christ大学生活的状况；
（2）询问Christ当初根据什么选择的专业；
（3）自己希望选择的专业及原因（如兴趣、父母意愿、就业前景等）。
参考词汇：专业major
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
6．（2022·天津和平·耀华中学校考模拟预测）昨天上午，你校组织了一场“和榜样学习”的励志宣讲会。宣讲会，来自各个年级的学霸们都讲述了自己的学习心得并分享了具体的学习方法。作为一名高三学生，你听完宣讲会后感触颇深。请你根据以下内容写一篇参会感想。
写作要点：
1.简单总结并评价这次宣讲会；
2.你从宣讲会中学到了什么。
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.宣讲会：an inspirational meeting
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7．（2021·天津和平·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你的美国笔友Tom给你发电子邮件希望了解你的 高三生活。请你给Tom 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：
(1)高三生活(从学习、娱乐、社会活动中任选二点)；
(2)高三一年中自己最大的感受：
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Your e-mail reached me yesterday, and I
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8．（2021·天津和平·统考二模）假设你是九江一中的学生会主席李华，一批来自美国的高中生与你校学生开展了一次为期两周的交流活动。现在他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据一下提示写一篇发言稿。
(1)回顾双方的交流活动（比如学习、生活、体育、文艺方面）；
(2)谈谈收获与感想；
(3)表达祝愿和愿望。
注意：1.词数不少于100，可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
How time flies!
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（2021·天津和平·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。一个美国学生Dennis在抖音(Tik Tok)上录制了他在纽约和 多国留学生一起庆祝中国春节的视频。请你根据以下要点对视频留言评论。
(1)表达自己看到视频后的心情；
(2)赞扬他们的庆祝方式(如；包饺子)和富有中国元素的室内布置(如：中国结);
(3)询问他们如何庆祝别的国家的节日。
注意：
(1)字数不少于100字；
(2)庆祝方式和室内布置不仅限于所给提示；
(3)请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇：饺子dumpling 中国结Chinese knot
参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’m so glad to give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper English Monthly set up by the Student Union. I’m a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them. I think English Monthly has many advantages. For one thing, it’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization. For another, it’s a guide to English learning. Through it, I can have a good knowledge of what’s going on at home and abroad and I’ve improved my English reading skill. If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.
Here I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇建议信。文章要求高考给学校编辑写一封关于《英语月报》的看法，并且提出自己建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → pleased
个人的：personal → individual
观点：opinion → viewpoint
建立：set up → establish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization.
拓展句：It’s rich in content, which ranges from economy to civilization.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them.（运用了定语从句。）
【高分句型2】If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.（运用了if only的虚拟语气）
2．Dear Chris,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Waterloo. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I have decided to major in computer science. There are some reasons why I made such a decision. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I think I can study computer science well. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. I would appreciate it if you could share some suggestions on the university life with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Chris写封电子邮件，对他被滑铁卢大学录取一事表示祝贺，并就大学生活向他征求意见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
擅长：be good at→do well in
适应：adapt to→adjust to
建议：suggestion→recommendation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
拓展句：Firstly, as society is developing, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are some reasons why I made such a decision.（运用了why引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college. （运用了动名词作主语，不定式作宾语补足语，动名词作宾语）
【高分句型3】What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life.（运用了what引导的主语从句和whether引导的表语从句）
3．Dear Peter,
Knowing that you would like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning to England soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.
As is known to all, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication, making it famous at home and abroad. Besides, with strong Chinese cultural characteristics. Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age. What’s more, silk dresses can show her good taste as well as inner beauty. So, I’m sure your mother will definitely like one.
Best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Peter写一封邮件，向他推荐给他母亲的一份有中国文化特色的礼物。
【详解】词汇积累
挑选：choose→select
礼物：present→gift
著名：well-known→famous
喜欢：love→like
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age.
拓展句：Chinese silk dresses, which are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age, are comfortable and elegant to wear.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you would like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning to England soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift. (非谓语动词现在分词作状语以及that引导的宾语从句、动名词作介词宾语)
[高分句型2] As is known to all, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication, making it famous at home and abroad. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句以及非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
4．Dear friends from Westminster School,
With 15 students from Westminster School visiting our school, I feel honored to express our sincere welcome to your arrival on behalf of our school. Our school has arranged many activities for you. Below are our arrangements.
Firstly, we will arrange for you to have a visit to the Winter Olympics Stadium, where many competitions were held. Then visiting the Wudadao Sightseeing Street will be our second choice, which is said to be worth seeing. You can feast your eyes on various things here. HeHai Park, which has a long history, features many towering trees and ancient huildings. It is worthwhile visiting these places.
I hope you have a good time here. I also hope all our students and you can benefit a lot from the exchange program.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校写一篇欢迎致辞，对英国的友好学校Westminster School派出的由15名学生组成的来访团表示欢迎。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
代表：represent → on behalf of
比赛：competition→match
举办：hold→ throw
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With 15 students from Westminster School visiting our school, I feel honored to express our sincere welcome to your arrival on behalf of our school.
拓展句：Because 15 students from Westminster School visited our school, I feel honored to express our sincere welcome to your arrival on behalf of our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
With 15 students from Westminster School visiting our school, I feel honored to express our sincere welcome to your arrival on behalf of our school. （运用了with的复合结构）
【高分句型2】
Firstly, we will arrange for you to have a visit to the Winter Olympics Stadium, where many competitions were held. （运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear Chris,
Nice to know that you have already been a first year student in the university. I am writing to ask you for some suggestions on my major in the future.
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. Do you have a tight schedule on your studies I was wondering what it was that made you choose your present major. As for my major I am to take, I prefer to study English language because I have a great passion for it. In addition, my parents also strongly recommend me to take it as my major, which is playing a more and more significant role in spreading traditional Chinese culture around the world. Thirdly and most importantly, it has a most promising employment prospect.
Hope everything goes smoothly with you and looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给已经是大学一年级学生的笔友Chris写信，请对方给你提一些有关大学生活和专业选择的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
选择：select→choose
角色：part→role
希望：wish→hope
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Do you have a tight schedule on your studies
拓展句：Do you have a tight schedule that is on your studies
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. (运用了what引导的主语从句和whether引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2]
In addition, my parents also strongly recommend me to take it as my major, which is playing a more and more significant role in spreading traditional Chinese culture around the world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Yesterday morning, an inspirational meeting was held in our school. Many top students in our school shared their study experience and unique learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies. In my opinion, the meeting was a big success, and what it provided for us was quite valuable.
As for me, I have learnt a lot from the meeting. First, I have realized a positive attitude plays an important role in our studies. No matter what problems we may meet, we should always try our best to find solutions with strong determination. Then, I have known many useful learning methods and will apply them to my study. Lastly, I have become more confident about myself. I strongly believe I can prove my ability through hard work.
【详解】这篇作文要求写一篇会后感想，要点应包括宣讲会的大体内容以及自己从中学到了什么。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，能够将要点描写完整，完全符合作文的要求。作者在范文中使用了较多的复杂句式，例如Many top students in our school shared their study experience and uniqur learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies.这个句子包含了一个定语从句，No matter what problems we may meet, we should always try our best to find solutions with strong determination.这个句子包含了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。这些高级句式的使用显示出了作者深厚的英语功底。
7．Dear Tom,
Your e-mail reached me yesterday, and I felt greatly honored to share my senior life with you here. More details are as follows.
To begin with, as a senior student, life is busy and fulfilling due to the ultimate goal---College Entrance Examination. Apart from study, I would play football with my friends after school or at the weekend to get myself relaxed, which in turn refreshes my mind and gives me much energy to fulfill better results.
What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period. I think friends in high school are my best friends forever, because they know me a lot and witness all of my emotions.
As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university. Thus, I work so hard for it, so I must learn more as I can to fulfill myself.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tom回一封电子邮件，介绍自己的高三生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸：privilege→honor
最终的：culminating/final→ultimate
目标：target/aim→goal
使恢复：regain/renew→refresh
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university.
拓展句：As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university, where I will further explore my potential and achieve my dreams in the long run.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Aside of study, I would play football with my friends after school or at the weekend to get myself relaxed, which in turn refreshes my mind and gives me much energy to fulfill better results.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
8．Dear friends,
How time flies! Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all benefited from.
During these two weeks, we have studied and lived together, which gives us opportunities to promote friendship. Doing sports as a teen enables us to know each other better. Your art skills are excellent and admirable, leaving us a deep impression. I think all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and various activities.
Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，为一个为期两周的交流活动欢送会致辞。
【详解】1.词汇积累
来到：arrive→come
了解：understand→know
极好的：wonderful→admirable
各种各样的：a variety of= various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your art skills are excellent and admirable, leaving us a deep impression.
拓展句：Your art skills are excellent and admirable, which leaves us a deep impression.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all benefited from. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Your art skills are excellent and admirable, leaving us a deep impression. (运用了现在分词作状语)
9．Having watched the video, I felt so excited. It is amazing that you are interested in the Chinese Spring Festival.
Firstly, what left me a deep impression was that you celebrated the festival by making dumpling, because it is the Chinese traditional food which represents the reunion of the family and the beginning of a new year in this special moment. In addition, the decorations in your room in the video really caught my eyes, especially the Chinese knot, which is not only a symbol of getting together forever but also the best wishes for the good fortune in the coming year.
In the end, would you tell me something about how you celebrate the festival of other countries I think it will help us enhance the understanding the diverse cultures.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生写一篇留言评论，评论一个美国学生Dennis在抖音(Tik Tok)上录制的他在纽约和多国留学生一起庆祝中国春节的视频。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 表达自己看到视频后的心情；
2. 赞扬他们的庆祝方式(如；包饺子)和富有中国元素的室内布置(如：中国结)；
3. 询问他们如何庆祝别的国家的节日。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
watch the video; feel excited; a deep impression; celebrate the festival; by making dumpling; the decorations; catch my eyes; the Chinese knot; a symbol of getting together forever; the best wishes; something about how to celebrate the festival of other countries
第三步：连词成句
1.Having watched the video, I felt so excited.
2.It is amazing that you are interested in the Chinese Spring Festival.
3. Firstly, what left me a deep impression was that you celebrated the festival by making dumpling, because it is the Chinese traditional food which represents the reunion of the family and the beginning of a new year in this special moment.
4. In addition, the decorations in your room in the video really caught my eyes, especially the Chinese knot, which is not only a symbol of getting together forever but also the best wishes for the good fortune in the coming year.
5. In the end, would you tell me something about how you celebrate the festival of other countries
6. I think it will help us enhance the understanding the diverse cultures.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, In the end
2.表并列补充关系：In addition, not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, what left me a deep impression was that you celebrated the festival by making dumpling, because it is the Chinese traditional food which represents the reunion of the family and the beginning of a new year in this special moment. (what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句，because引导的原因状语从句，which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, the decorations in your room in the video really caught my eyes, especially the Chinese knot, which is not only a symbol of getting together forever but also the best wishes for the good fortune in the coming year.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
一、建议信
1．（2022·天津和平·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校学生会创办的你最喜爱的《英语月报》（English Monthly）向读者征集意见。请你给主编写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 自我介绍：
2. 说明该报优点：（如：内容方面，对学生帮助方面等）；
3. 提出建议：（如：增加某些内容等）
注意：1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
参考词汇：励志的inspirational
Dear editors
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Yours,
Li Jin
二、感谢信/祝贺信
2．（2023·天津和平·统考一模）假设你是天津中学学生李津。你的加拿大朋友 Chris 得知你被滑铁卢大学(University of Waterloo) 录取，写信向你表示祝贺。请按以下提示写封回信：
1) 对 Chris 的关心和祝贺表示感谢；
2) 告知报考的专业及原因， 谈谈大学毕业后的打算；
3) 希望 Chris 针对加拿大的大学生活提一些建议。
注意：
(1) 词数不少于 100；
(2) 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
三、推荐信
3．（2021·天津和平·耀华中学校考一模）假设你是李华，得知你校外教Peter计划不久后回英国。他想给母亲选一份有中国文化特色的礼物。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括:
(1)推荐礼物；
(2)推荐原因；
(3)表达祝愿。
注意:
(1)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(2)字数不少于100。
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、其他应用文
4．（2022·天津和平·统考三模）假如你是晨光中学的李津。你们英国的友好学校Westminster School派出的由15名学生组成的学访团来到你校。请你在欢迎会上代表学校致词，并简述接待安排，内容包括：
（1）表示欢迎；
（2）接待安排（参观冬奥会赛场，游览五大道和海河公园等）；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：Wudadao Sightseeing Street
Dear friends from Westminster School,
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5．（2022·天津和平·统考一模）假如你是晨光中学的李津，你给已经是大学一年级学生的笔友Chris写信，请对方给你提一些建议。信的内容如下：
（1）询问Christ大学生活的状况；
（2）询问Christ当初根据什么选择的专业；
（3）自己希望选择的专业及原因（如兴趣、父母意愿、就业前景等）。
参考词汇：专业major
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Jin
6．（2022·天津和平·耀华中学校考模拟预测）昨天上午，你校组织了一场“和榜样学习”的励志宣讲会。宣讲会，来自各个年级的学霸们都讲述了自己的学习心得并分享了具体的学习方法。作为一名高三学生，你听完宣讲会后感触颇深。请你根据以下内容写一篇参会感想。
写作要点：
1.简单总结并评价这次宣讲会；
2.你从宣讲会中学到了什么。
注意：
1.词数不少于100；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.宣讲会：an inspirational meeting
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7．（2021·天津和平·统考三模）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你的美国笔友Tom给你发电子邮件希望了解你的 高三生活。请你给Tom 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括：
(1)高三生活(从学习、娱乐、社会活动中任选二点)；
(2)高三一年中自己最大的感受：
(3)对自己未来的展望。
注意：
(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Your e-mail reached me yesterday, and I
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8．（2021·天津和平·统考二模）假设你是九江一中的学生会主席李华，一批来自美国的高中生与你校学生开展了一次为期两周的交流活动。现在他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据一下提示写一篇发言稿。
(1)回顾双方的交流活动（比如学习、生活、体育、文艺方面）；
(2)谈谈收获与感想；
(3)表达祝愿和愿望。
注意：1.词数不少于100，可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
How time flies!
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9．（2021·天津和平·统考一模）假设你是晨光中学的李津。一个美国学生Dennis在抖音(Tik Tok)上录制了他在纽约和 多国留学生一起庆祝中国春节的视频。请你根据以下要点对视频留言评论。
(1)表达自己看到视频后的心情；
(2)赞扬他们的庆祝方式(如；包饺子)和富有中国元素的室内布置(如：中国结);
(3)询问他们如何庆祝别的国家的节日。
注意：
(1)字数不少于100字；
(2)庆祝方式和室内布置不仅限于所给提示；
(3)请适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇：饺子dumpling 中国结Chinese knot
参考答案：
1．One possible version:
Dear editor,
I’m so glad to give my personal opinions on my favorite newspaper English Monthly set up by the Student Union. I’m a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them. I think English Monthly has many advantages. For one thing, it’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization. For another, it’s a guide to English learning. Through it, I can have a good knowledge of what’s going on at home and abroad and I’ve improved my English reading skill. If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.
Here I really hope English Monthly will attract more readers.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇建议信。文章要求高考给学校编辑写一封关于《英语月报》的看法，并且提出自己建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → pleased
个人的：personal → individual
观点：opinion → viewpoint
建立：set up → establish
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s rich in content, ranging from economy to civilization.
拓展句：It’s rich in content, which ranges from economy to civilization.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading newspapers and I want to learn something from them.（运用了定语从句。）
【高分句型2】If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column.（运用了if only的虚拟语气）
2．Dear Chris,
How is everything going I’m glad to receive your letter and know you’ve been admitted to the University of Waterloo. I’m writing to offer my warmest congratulations.
I have decided to major in computer science. There are some reasons why I made such a decision. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I think I can study computer science well. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. I would appreciate it if you could share some suggestions on the university life with me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Chris写封电子邮件，对他被滑铁卢大学录取一事表示祝贺，并就大学生活向他征求意见。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
擅长：be good at→do well in
适应：adapt to→adjust to
建议：suggestion→recommendation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
拓展句：Firstly, as society is developing, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】There are some reasons why I made such a decision.（运用了why引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college. （运用了动名词作主语，不定式作宾语补足语，动名词作宾语）
【高分句型3】What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life.（运用了what引导的主语从句和whether引导的表语从句）
3．Dear Peter,
Knowing that you would like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning to England soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift.
As is known to all, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication, making it famous at home and abroad. Besides, with strong Chinese cultural characteristics. Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age. What’s more, silk dresses can show her good taste as well as inner beauty. So, I’m sure your mother will definitely like one.
Best wishes to your family.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Peter写一封邮件，向他推荐给他母亲的一份有中国文化特色的礼物。
【详解】词汇积累
挑选：choose→select
礼物：present→gift
著名：well-known→famous
喜欢：love→like
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Chinese silk dresses are comfortable and elegant to wear. They are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age.
拓展句：Chinese silk dresses, which are a favorite choice for ladies of your mother’s age, are comfortable and elegant to wear.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you would like to select a Chinese gift for your mother before returning to England soon, I’m happy to recommend you a silk dress as a gift. (非谓语动词现在分词作状语以及that引导的宾语从句、动名词作介词宾语)
[高分句型2] As is known to all, Chinese silk industry has the longest history with the famous Silk Road as an indication, making it famous at home and abroad. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句以及非谓语动词现在分词作状语)
4．Dear friends from Westminster School,
With 15 students from Westminster School visiting our school, I feel honored to express our sincere welcome to your arrival on behalf of our school. Our school has arranged many activities for you. Below are our arrangements.
Firstly, we will arrange for you to have a visit to the Winter Olympics Stadium, where many competitions were held. Then visiting the Wudadao Sightseeing Street will be our second choice, which is said to be worth seeing. You can feast your eyes on various things here. HeHai Park, which has a long history, features many towering trees and ancient huildings. It is worthwhile visiting these places.
I hope you have a good time here. I also hope all our students and you can benefit a lot from the exchange program.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学校写一篇欢迎致辞，对英国的友好学校Westminster School派出的由15名学生组成的来访团表示欢迎。
【详解】1.词汇积累
诚挚的：sincere→genuine
代表：represent → on behalf of
比赛：competition→match
举办：hold→ throw
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With 15 students from Westminster School visiting our school, I feel honored to express our sincere welcome to your arrival on behalf of our school.
拓展句：Because 15 students from Westminster School visited our school, I feel honored to express our sincere welcome to your arrival on behalf of our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
With 15 students from Westminster School visiting our school, I feel honored to express our sincere welcome to your arrival on behalf of our school. （运用了with的复合结构）
【高分句型2】
Firstly, we will arrange for you to have a visit to the Winter Olympics Stadium, where many competitions were held. （运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear Chris,
Nice to know that you have already been a first year student in the university. I am writing to ask you for some suggestions on my major in the future.
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. Do you have a tight schedule on your studies I was wondering what it was that made you choose your present major. As for my major I am to take, I prefer to study English language because I have a great passion for it. In addition, my parents also strongly recommend me to take it as my major, which is playing a more and more significant role in spreading traditional Chinese culture around the world. Thirdly and most importantly, it has a most promising employment prospect.
Hope everything goes smoothly with you and looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给已经是大学一年级学生的笔友Chris写信，请对方给你提一些有关大学生活和专业选择的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestion
选择：select→choose
角色：part→role
希望：wish→hope
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Do you have a tight schedule on your studies
拓展句：Do you have a tight schedule that is on your studies
【点睛】[高分句型1]
What interests me is whether you have adapted to the university life. (运用了what引导的主语从句和whether引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2]
In addition, my parents also strongly recommend me to take it as my major, which is playing a more and more significant role in spreading traditional Chinese culture around the world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
6．Yesterday morning, an inspirational meeting was held in our school. Many top students in our school shared their study experience and unique learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies. In my opinion, the meeting was a big success, and what it provided for us was quite valuable.
As for me, I have learnt a lot from the meeting. First, I have realized a positive attitude plays an important role in our studies. No matter what problems we may meet, we should always try our best to find solutions with strong determination. Then, I have known many useful learning methods and will apply them to my study. Lastly, I have become more confident about myself. I strongly believe I can prove my ability through hard work.
【详解】这篇作文要求写一篇会后感想，要点应包括宣讲会的大体内容以及自己从中学到了什么。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
【亮点说明】本篇范文结构合理，能够将要点描写完整，完全符合作文的要求。作者在范文中使用了较多的复杂句式，例如Many top students in our school shared their study experience and uniqur learning methods, which are beneficial to those who are confused about their studies.这个句子包含了一个定语从句，No matter what problems we may meet, we should always try our best to find solutions with strong determination.这个句子包含了一个no matter引导的让步状语从句。这些高级句式的使用显示出了作者深厚的英语功底。
7．Dear Tom,
Your e-mail reached me yesterday, and I felt greatly honored to share my senior life with you here. More details are as follows.
To begin with, as a senior student, life is busy and fulfilling due to the ultimate goal---College Entrance Examination. Apart from study, I would play football with my friends after school or at the weekend to get myself relaxed, which in turn refreshes my mind and gives me much energy to fulfill better results.
What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period. I think friends in high school are my best friends forever, because they know me a lot and witness all of my emotions.
As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university. Thus, I work so hard for it, so I must learn more as I can to fulfill myself.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Jin
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tom回一封电子邮件，介绍自己的高三生活。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸：privilege→honor
最终的：culminating/final→ultimate
目标：target/aim→goal
使恢复：regain/renew→refresh
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university.
拓展句：As for my future, I’m eager to be admitted into a well-known university, where I will further explore my potential and achieve my dreams in the long run.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
Aside of study, I would play football with my friends after school or at the weekend to get myself relaxed, which in turn refreshes my mind and gives me much energy to fulfill better results.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]
What impresses me most is the friendship formed in the period.（运用了what引导的主语从句）
8．Dear friends,
How time flies! Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all benefited from.
During these two weeks, we have studied and lived together, which gives us opportunities to promote friendship. Doing sports as a teen enables us to know each other better. Your art skills are excellent and admirable, leaving us a deep impression. I think all our classmates have learned a lot from our communication and various activities.
Now, on behalf of my schoolmates, I wish you a safe return. I also hope that there will be more events of this kind in the future.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇发言稿，为一个为期两周的交流活动欢送会致辞。
【详解】1.词汇积累
来到：arrive→come
了解：understand→know
极好的：wonderful→admirable
各种各样的：a variety of= various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Your art skills are excellent and admirable, leaving us a deep impression.
拓展句：Your art skills are excellent and admirable, which leaves us a deep impression.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Two weeks have passed since you came to our school for the exchange program, which we all benefited from. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Your art skills are excellent and admirable, leaving us a deep impression. (运用了现在分词作状语)
9．Having watched the video, I felt so excited. It is amazing that you are interested in the Chinese Spring Festival.
Firstly, what left me a deep impression was that you celebrated the festival by making dumpling, because it is the Chinese traditional food which represents the reunion of the family and the beginning of a new year in this special moment. In addition, the decorations in your room in the video really caught my eyes, especially the Chinese knot, which is not only a symbol of getting together forever but also the best wishes for the good fortune in the coming year.
In the end, would you tell me something about how you celebrate the festival of other countries I think it will help us enhance the understanding the diverse cultures.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生写一篇留言评论，评论一个美国学生Dennis在抖音(Tik Tok)上录制的他在纽约和多国留学生一起庆祝中国春节的视频。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：议论文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和少量一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 表达自己看到视频后的心情；
2. 赞扬他们的庆祝方式(如；包饺子)和富有中国元素的室内布置(如：中国结)；
3. 询问他们如何庆祝别的国家的节日。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
watch the video; feel excited; a deep impression; celebrate the festival; by making dumpling; the decorations; catch my eyes; the Chinese knot; a symbol of getting together forever; the best wishes; something about how to celebrate the festival of other countries
第三步：连词成句
1.Having watched the video, I felt so excited.
2.It is amazing that you are interested in the Chinese Spring Festival.
3. Firstly, what left me a deep impression was that you celebrated the festival by making dumpling, because it is the Chinese traditional food which represents the reunion of the family and the beginning of a new year in this special moment.
4. In addition, the decorations in your room in the video really caught my eyes, especially the Chinese knot, which is not only a symbol of getting together forever but also the best wishes for the good fortune in the coming year.
5. In the end, would you tell me something about how you celebrate the festival of other countries
6. I think it will help us enhance the understanding the diverse cultures.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, In the end
2.表并列补充关系：In addition, not only…but (also)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
【点睛】[高分句型1] Firstly, what left me a deep impression was that you celebrated the festival by making dumpling, because it is the Chinese traditional food which represents the reunion of the family and the beginning of a new year in this special moment. (what引导的主语从句，that引导的表语从句，because引导的原因状语从句，which引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, the decorations in your room in the video really caught my eyes, especially the Chinese knot, which is not only a symbol of getting together forever but also the best wishes for the good fortune in the coming year.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)