北师大版（2019）选择性必修第四册Unit 11 Conflict and Compromise Writing Workshop 课件（13张PPT）

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Writing Workshop P 40-41
新北师大选择性必修Book 4
Unit 11
Conflicts and compromise
Pair work
Do you like them What do you think of these
foods
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Warming up
Read for opinions
2. Why does the author think so
4. What is the author’s conclusion
3. What facts or examples does
the author use to support his
reasons
Answer the questions.
1. What is the author’s opinion
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2. Why does the author think so
1. What is the author’s opinion
3.What is the author’s conclusion
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P1: To ban advertisements for
any unhealthy products.
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P2: Unhealthy products harm
our health.
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P3: ...the idea that making the
products creates jobs and
brings in large amount of
tax is a false argument.
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P4: ...laws to ban TV
advertisements
of unhealthy products are
beneficial to society.
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Read for opinions
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Read for opinions
3. What facts or examples does the
author use to support his reasons
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P2: Unhealthy products harm our
health.
P3: ...the idea that making the
products creates jobs and brings
in large amount of tax is a false
argument.
The rate of obesity has increased greatly.
It is second only to smoking as a cause of death.
Drinking alcohol results in a wide range of diseases.
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The money invested in …more worthwhile businesses.
It is not right to make money…harm human health.
P1: To ban advertisements for any
unhealthy products.
P2: Unhealthy products harm our
health.
P3:… the idea that making the
products creates jobs and brings
in large amount of tax is a false
argument.
The money invested ...
... It is not right ...
P4: ... laws to ban TV
advertisements of unhealthy
products are beneficial to
society.
The rate of obesity ...
In some countries ...
... drinking alcohol results in ...
Should TV Advertisements for Unhealthy Products Be Banned
How the essay develops
Read for structure
P1: To ban advertisements for any
unhealthy products.
P2: Unhealthy products harm our
health.
P3:… the idea that making the
products creates jobs and brings
in large amount of tax is a false
argument.
P4: ... laws to ban TV advertisements
of unhealthy products are
beneficial to society.
a Supporting
reasons for the
opinion
Match the function with the key information of each paragraph.
b Disapproving the
opposite opinion
c Restating the
opinion
d Presenting the
opinion
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P1: To ban advertisements for any
unhealthy products.
P2: Unhealthy products harm our
health.
P3:… the idea that making the
products creates jobs and brings
in large amount of tax is a false
argument.
The money invested ...
... It is not right ...
P4: ... laws to ban TV
advertisements of unhealthy
products are beneficial to
society.
The rate of obesity ...
In some countries ...
... drinking alcohol results in ...
Should TV Advertisements for Unhealthy Products Be Banned
The structure of the essay
Topic
Presenting the opinion
Supporting reasons
for the opinion
Restating the opinion
Disapproving of the opposite opinion
examples
/
facts
examples
/
facts
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Underline the expressions that makes the author’s
ideas persuasive.
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Write 2-3 sentences for your opinion essay.
Read for language
Persuasive language:
1. Undoubtedly, unhealthy
products harm our health. (P2)
2. It is clearly desirable to limit
TV advertisements for fast food.
(P2)
3. However, surely this is a false
argument. (P3)
4. Furthermore, it is not right to
make money from activities
which harm human health. (P3)
Sentence Builder
Outlining
Complete the outline of your essay.
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My outline
Topic: ____________
The opinion: _______________________
Supporting reasons:
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Outlining
Drafting
Editing
Compose your writing
Writing Help
Writing Help
Writing an Opinion of Essay
It’s important to:
state a clear opinion;
support your opinion with facts. Make your reasons and details stronger with facts and data;
make your essay reasonable, and include relevant details;
use persuasive languge.
Drafting
Use your outline and the Writing Help to write your
first draft.
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Editing
Edit your essay in pairs. Then share what
you have written to the class.
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Thank you!