Unit 12 What did you do last weekend? Section B 3a-3c作文课件（共22张PPT）

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Unit 12 What did you do last weekend
Section B 3a-3c
Writing
What’s the video about
It's about what the bear did last weekend .
Pre-writing
Look at the pictures and complete the passage.
3a
Pre-writing
cleaned the room
did the homework
helped mom cook dinner
went to the library
played soccer
watched TV
Bill
I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I . In the afternoon, I . It was a little difficult. On Saturday night, I stayed at home and _______________ cook dinner. On Sunday morning, I . _ I read a book about history. Then in the afternoon, I ___________ with my friends. On Sunday night, I . I saw an interesting talk show.
cleaned my room
did my homework
helped my mom
went to the library
played soccer
watched TV
Pre-writing
feelings
activity
time
time
time
time
time
time
activity
activity
activity
activity
activity
Analyze the passage
feelings
What did you do last weekend
Free Talk
Pre-writing
On Saturday morning, I…
On Saturday afternoon, I …
On Saturday evening, I …
On Sunday morning, I …
On Sunday afternoon, I …
On Sunday evening, I …
实战演练
请你写一篇英语短文，在英语口语课上向同学们介绍你上个周末的活动。
写作要求：
1.语法正确，语义连贯。
2.可适当发挥。
3.70词左右。
How to introduce what you did last weekend
Beginning:
Body:
time
activities
time order
meaningful(有意义的）
Ending:
Lead to the topic
feelings
Person(人称）
I
Tense(时态）
The simple past tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
Introduce the activities that
you did last weekend in different time
70 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Beginning: Lead to the topic
Body:
Ending: Show the feelings
Introduce the activities that
you did last weekend in different time
What should we think about
Pre-writing
While-writing
Pay attention to handwriting.
Use some conjunction words such as and, because etc. to make your composition
more fluent.
3. Write down all information.
4. Use the simple past tense correctly.
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Write a passage in 8 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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Marking ladders
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs.(1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic (1 point)
Para : I have introduced the activities that I did last weekend in different time
Para : I have showed the feelings.
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
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Grammar and language I have used the simple past tense correctly. For example, I went to…. I did my homework. I felt…. I was... (3 points)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher.(1 point.)
I have checked my punctuation. For example, I used full stops at the end of each complete sentence. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score
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Sharing Time
Work in groups, appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation（标点）
6.language(语言)
7.fluency( 流畅）
Show Time
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. punctuation
6.language
7.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Sample
Post-writing
Hello,everyone. Let me tell you what I did last weekend.
I washed my clothes and cleaned my room on Saturday morning. On Saturday afternoon, I went to the library and I read books there. I like reading because when I read books, time goes quickly. I cooked dinner in the evening. On Sunday morning, I did my homework and practiced speaking English. On Sunday afternoon, I played ping-pong with my father. On Sunday evening, I watched TV with my parents.
All in all, it was busy but happy.
Thank You!