高中英语 2023高考复习强基固本专题练 人教2019版选择性必修四 短文改错 专项练习(含解析)

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高中英语 2023高考复习强基固本专题练
人教2019版选择性必修四 短文改错 专项练习
1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:把缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear David,
I am very happy to know that you are coming to visit my city the next Wednesday.
Have kept in touch with each other by writing for years, I can’t wait to see you. However, I am terrible sorry to tell you that I can’t meet you at the airport that day. My sister fall ill and was taken to hospital, so I have to take care of her there. But don’t worry. I’ve asked my best friend, Li Lei, to pick her up and take you to the booking hotel. What’s more, I have recommended some places of interests in the attachment, what I think you may be interested in. Of course you can also visit other tourist attractions by your own.
I’m expecting your arrival and hope you enjoy your stay here sincerely.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
After I graduated from junior high school, my parents and I go to Thailand for a trip. It was my the most unforgettable trip. I enjoyed so delicious fresh fruit and seafood that I was unwilling go home. While going for sightseeing, I saw the beautiful sunset on the beach and met much local people. They could speak fluently Chinese and English, which made me surprising. This trip not only taught me a lot of knowledge who I had never learned in books, but opened your eyes to a new world. As the saying goes, “It's nice to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.”
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good morning, everyone. It is my honor to stand here and share with something about traveling. Which I’d like to convey is that to travel is also to learn. Take my journey to Xi’an for example. Previously, I do learn something about the city from books and TV programs. Therefore, I didn’t know what wonderful it was until I was there in person. When traveling, we can feel the surrounding with our own eyes, noses and so on, thus broaden our horizons. The picture took on the Great Wall is good reminder of my happy days during my stay in Xi’an. So everyone, seize every chance or you will start an amazing journey to learn.
4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I’d like to sharing my volunteering experience at the Olympic Games. My main task was to help the athletes communicate reporters and medical staff. The languages in the great need were Russian, German, Chinese and Japanese. I could speak all the four language. During the competition I was free to watch the games, but I could talk with other volunteers, sharing with them their joy of volunteering. Before the competition, the players were interviewed where we worked. When the players entered the room, everything got crazily, especially when they win. Everyone wanted to ask them questions. And I will never forget the days when I spent with those kind people.
5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Recently we had a class meeting on the topic of My Chinese Dream. Some mentioned that the inspired Chinese Dream was put forward by President Xi was a great success. But others talked enthusiastically about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that Chinese dream will come true in the future. I also talk about my own dream. I have wanted to be a doctor for long time. Not only can doctors save people’s life but also they are doing a respectable job. Doctors can help people to live a better life without their knowledge. To realize my dream, I will even work harder from now on. I must learn as much as I can to get into a good medical college, where I can prepare myself adequate for the job of a doctor. I believe diligence is that it takes to accomplish my goal.
6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have taken part a voluntary organization recently. It is set up last year to provide left-behind children with birthday gifts. It is hardly for them to receive birthday gifts from their parents why their parents leave home to work in big cities. Besides, we volunteers will make a list of these children’s birthday wishes. After read the list, we try our best to get the gifts they really want. Some kids hope for the pair of new shoes or several books as his birthday gifts. I’d like to these kids to receive the very gifts they wish. I sincere hope each one will have a nice birthday.
7.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Online learning has become an important way to learn recently. However, online learning has all advantages and disadvantages. Its advantages are obvious. It allows us learn at any time wherever we are. Besides, it is much more easier for us to absorb resources who are available online. However, its disadvantages cannot be ignoring. Staring at the screen for a long time is harmful to us eyes. Worse still, we don’t have much opportunities to interact with teachers and classmates. Then how to be smart online learners First, we should discussing problems with others courageously. Second, it is wisely to take a short break after learning for half an hour. On conclusion, only by being smart online learners can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology.
8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack, I am written to tell you my plan for the coming Chinese lesson. I’ve decided to teach you Tang poetry in Room 101 Building 1 at 8 a.m. on Wednesday, that will last two hours. Tang poetry is a symbol of Chinese traditionally literature. It plays important part in Chinese culture, so it’s necessary for you to have a good knowledges of it. Beside, in order to learn Tang poetry well, you’d better got some information about Tang dynasty before class.
Would you to tell me if it’s convenient for you Furthermore, when I meet with some puzzled questions, don’t hesitate to turn to me.
9.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year we went on an European culture tour. I, together with my friends, were looking forward to visiting the University of Greenwich. So we reached the River Thames on the first day. To our joys, we met with a couple of old professors who had been traveling around Britain a few days. We felt so excited which we couldn’t help sharing our travel experiences with them. We visited France and Italy with them and we also had a wonderfully picnic together. As we were expected, they planned to leaving first. We offered to help carry their packs to the airport and saw him off. They were grateful to us. What meaningful and impressive the trip was!
10.假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the development of the Internet, it is easily for people to find information in just few minutes. The Internet is like a huge library that you can find whatever you want without walk around. It make our life convenient and colorful. And recently many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. There have been reports in China about people trying it to steal personal information for bad purposes. Also, some information does harm for society. For example, you can even find so information as how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future if not dealing with.
11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The school paper is badly in the need of a part-time English editor this term, who job includes selecting and editing contributions from the students. The applicants were expected to have a good knowledge of English and be skill at writing in English. Beside, they are willing to devote their spare time to work for the school paper. Those who are interested in working an editor should send their applications to the school office since January 20. We are looking forward to your participation.This is an absolute good chance to put my talent into good use. Take action now!
12.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are interesting in China's "four great new inventions", I'd like to brief introduce one of them to you—high-speed rail. China's high-speed trains ran at a speed of 250—350 km per hour. The country's advanced transportation network has surprised at the world.
Since it takes only a little hours to travel from north China to south China, high-speed rail has given the public a convenient transport alternative. It has also attracted globe attention. As the result, many countries have imported Chinese high-speed rail technology to upgrade them own rail transport systems. I hope that the above informations will be helpful to you. If you have any further questions, please do not hesitate contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
13.短文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The Xi’an Forest of Stone Tablets, initially set up in the 1087, was official named in the Qing Dynasty. It is an art treasure house where is composed of more than 3,000 stone tablets from the Han Dynasty through the Qing Dynasty. The museum is naming “Forest of Stone Tablets” because the numerous stone tablets housing in the museum look like a dense forest. The museum was a treasure house of ancient Chinese calligraphy as well as a good collection of historical documents and stone carvings in various styles. Moreover, the tablets bear evidences to the cultural exchanges in ancient China and show the great achievements of that period. However, for the visitors to Xi’an, the Forest of Stone Tablets is of great attraction in addition terracotta warriors. We will surely be impressed by its rich culture.
14.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was driving to a meeting while I suddenly found there was a delivery truck in the front of me. This delivery truck stopped in the middle of the street and allowed an elderly lady cross the street. I was used to delivery trucks drive straight ahead and not stopping for someone. I called the company in that the driver worked and tell them that he was a great driver because he let the elderly lady cross the street. I wanted this driver to be recognizing for his good manners and driving. The customer service lady was thank that I called and let her knew about the driver.
15.文中共有10处语言错误,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone! I would like to share my travel experience for you. Last summer, ours school had an exchange programme with an American school, but I took part in it with many classmates. We stay at host families, that gave us an opportunity to learn more about America. The main part of our programme was to experience the school life in the pare with Chinese students, American students were very open and active. Besides, they had less homeworks and fewer exams. During the visit, I made friends with some American students, who were very interesting in Chinese culture. I think the programme is of great benefit to us as well the American students.
16.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are times people come to my door for charities and to promote organizations trying to raise funds for their causes. I admit it became a little frustrating if I get interrupted by him.
But yesterday, at 40℃, a young lady came to my door, say it was her job and they had to do it. Though I was busy with my lessons, I offered to refill the bottles of water she had with her hand. She nodded grateful! I ran into the kitchen and took water from the fridge. Seating at my desk, though I was suffering the heat, at the least I was comfortable with a small fan. How could I complain when she as well as her colleagues were working in the sun in such hot weather!
17.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
I’m greatly honouring to share with you about my opinion of further my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) at that famous university.
With history of over 2000 years, TCM is wide known for it has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness. Generations of Chinese people as well as foreigners benefit from them. I feel really pride whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather to leave the clinics with satisfaction and hope. Just like me, many classmates of mine have made up their mind to succeed traditional Chinese doctors’ career and majored in TCM to become doctors. I believe it’ll turn up an excellent cause for me to pursue.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, during the vacation I am working as a volunteer in a home for the aged. After a conversation for a nurse and a social worker, I was told my job was to talk old people, take them out for walks and read them newspapers and books. All that might sound a bit bored, but jut after a few days it turned out to be quite difference. They accepted me as if that I were their friend. They have told him their life stories and given me some advices about life. I have learned so many from them. This was a amazing experience for me.
19.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember that cold day when Chris and I go skating on a lake. While enjoying ourselves, I suddenly noticed something unusual. The ice broke and at the moment. I warned Chris to take care, he slipped into the lake. I was too frightening to know what to do. I cried for help anxious. Hearing my cries, a young man rushed over, jump into the lake to save Chris. At last, he was out of the water and we immediately sent him to the near hospital. After short while, Chris’ parents arrived. They expressed their thank to the young man. How a respectable man!
20.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 只允许修改5处,多者(从第6处起)不计分。
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
Then I was a high school student from low-income family. So I had to support my family. My first job is to clean the table in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and feeling anxiously about the new world. I worked hard but I was afraid of losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired that I didn’t want to do our homework. I came to understand that it was difficulty to earn money, and that knowledge could change into my life. And what I learned from the job was much more important than the knowledge learning from school.
21.假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm less than pleased to learn that volunteers were wanted for the swimming championship, which is to be held in our city next month. I'm writing to apply the position.
I'm Li Hua, present studying in a high school and I'm convince that I'm qualified to be a volunteer. I can meet the requiring standards. First of all, I'm outgoing, which makes it is possible for me to get along well with others. Besides, I regularly go swimming with friends, equipping myself with enough knowledge to be a qualified volunteer. In addition, I normally participate in the variety of beneficial voluntary activities, as a result of what I am more experienced than others. I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into considerate.
22.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ )并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I experienced something exciting on my way school last Friday. I saw the 50-yuan note drop from an old lady’s pocket and I want to remind her. The old lady, therefore, didn’t seem to understand what I was talking about, which made me very embarrassing. My friend, Wang Qiang, just saw what had been happened. He picked up the notes, went towards the old lady, and asked if she had lost some money or not. The old lady checked her pocket. and realized it was his money. She praised both of us after learn about the whole process.
23.文中共有l0处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, a large exhibition was hold in the National Museum to celebrate the success of Reform and Opening-up. My classmates and I were extreme honored to have the opportunity serve as volunteers. We arrived at the National Museum earlier in the morning. Wear the uniform, we got down to our work with great enthusiastic. With friendly smiles, some of we volunteered to greet and welcome the visitors at the entrance. In the exhibition hall, some volunteers stood in the front of the visitors. They were giving vividly introduction of the great achievements over the past years, that attracted the visitors and brought us a sense of achievement.
24.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This summer, I went on trip with my best friend. We set out in the early morning. Two hours late, we got to the beautiful Mount Emei, why we talked to interesting monkeys and played with them. Though there were lots of stranger, they were not afraid. They were especially naughty, but very lovely. In noon, we tasted the delicious snacks though they were a little expensively. The next day, we fly to Beijing. We went to Tiananmen Square, the old Summer Palace ruins, the Imperial Palace or the Great Wall. Seen the beautiful scenery, we were astonished. How interesting the trip it was!
25.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the fast development of science and technology, our studies are sure to change great. As for us, lifelong learning is the must in the future.
First, we can study in anywhere in the future, not just at school. For example, we can have various online class from the best teachers without leaving our home, make our learning more convenient. Besides, there will have more tools like Ding-ding and Wechat help us study. We will have no exams at school as all of us students can study easily and do that we have a gift for. Learning will also be delighted for all of us.
Every time I look forward to the future, I can’t feel more excited because many kinds of possibilities were waiting for me.
26.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Liu Fang,
Today the weather was wonderful, so I went out to the local park with some friends to fly kites. It seemed that half the city joined in us, so we had trouble find a good place to stand. But I felt so relaxing when we were done.
Over lunch, I was told that kites were invented by a man naming Mozi, who was something of a philosopher and worked hardly to bring peace between warring countries. He also created many clever inventions from wood. I think it is so wonderful that Mozi could invent something would bring relaxation and happiness to such many people. I never thought to yourself that something like kites needed a inventor.
Anyway, I have to do my homeworks. Talk to you later!
Love,
Peter
27.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear John,
Thank you for your warmly reception during my stay in the USA.Although I have been come back, I will never forget your concern for me.
Now I hope you can take care for yourself. First and foremost, don’t always stay up late, what would be harmful to your health. Besides, whenever you have trouble learn Chinese, you can write to me but I will try my best to help you. What’s more, if you had free time, I’d like to invite you pay a visit to China. Then I’ll be your guide and accompany me to enjoy the wonderful trips.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
28.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其正下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词正下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词,请严格按照要求格式修改。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everyone needs help. Often there are some cases that we help ourselves indirect in helping others. Last month, Tom asked for me to help with his math. In order to help him, I go over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To his surprise, some difficult problems that I could not understand before worked out by myself. After a month, with my help, Tom made great progresses in math, too. Such a experience enabled me to realize that help others also does good to ourselves. So when others is in trouble, never hesitate to help them.
29.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My brother and I was driving home but took a wrong turn. Unfortunately, the wrong turn took us towards a bridge. As the result, we had no choice but to turn back, which was really annoyed. At that time, we noticed a black car which driver was a young guy. The guy was standing nearby trying to phone to someone. My brother pulled over immediate, asking if he needed assistances. He said he did because he had a flat tire. So my brother helps him change the tire. He pulled out a $20 bill and tried to give to us. But we refused. My brother said, “I now know how we took a wrong tum. It was to help you.” We all laughed.
30.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
While traveling in England, my friend and I met a nice and young man calling Alain. In the days before the Internet and social media, it was common to exchange address upon departing and say, “Come and visit if you’re in an area.” So, two days later, we actual accepted his offer. We knocked on his door, just thinking about we’d have a cup of tea and a nice chat. And to our surprise, his lovely mum cooked a delicious dinner for ourselves! Then, we invited to stay the night! We had fun trying to speak French with his wife, which couldn’t speak English. It was an interested evening.
31.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we know, shared bikes have been made our lives much more convenient. However, we can often see some shared bikes placed messy everywhere. When I talked about this with my classmates last week, we all felt upset but decided to make the change. On Sunday morning, we gather outside the railway station. First, we began dealing shared bikes and tried to put them in order. People who passed by praised that we did. Seeing the bikes in rows again, they felt proud. Then, to encourage people to behave themselves, we put up a larger sign saying “Please Be Civilized While Using A Shared Bike”. Of course, we drew much attention from many passer-by while that also meant our actions would surely make a difference.
32.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及-个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划- -横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限- -词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, I went to Hainan Island with my friends and stay there for two days. Hainan Island, a beautiful tourist attraction, located on the south of China, is well know for its beautiful blue sea and pleasant beaches with golden sands. On the first day, they went to the seaside and hiked here. It was so exciting for me to walking on the sands, leaving me some unforgettable memory. On the second day, we had some local food but sweet fresh juice. We spent that night in a tent, which was made us happy. In a word, we had good holiday on Hainan Island.
33.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换改作文,请为你的同桌修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处下加一个漏子符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误仅限1词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jackie,
The school holidays are drawing to near. I feel very exciting at the thought that I am going to visit America in the holidays. It’s the first time for me to travel abroad on my own, so I need your helping.
I’d like to visit some areas of scenic beauty, such for mountains, rivers or forests, which I could enjoy the beauty of nature. Could you suggest several place for me to visit Beside, I prefer to live in peace and I hoped the traffic isn’t too heavy. Perhaps you could help me book hotel.
I’m expecting to hear from you, and I’m looking forward to meet you in America.
Yours,
Lihua
34.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(N)画掉。
修改∶在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意∶1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With summer comes around the corner, it’s important to secure a summer job. It gives you the opportunity to earn and saved some money that you may need for personally use. Whatever job that you’re interested can teach basic skills such as communication and hard work. When you have a job, you were expected to show up to your shift on times and perform to your best ability. Even if you’re just working at a coffee shop, and the job will challenge you with unpredictable customers, that will allow you to use critical thinking to approach the issue. So taking time out to get the summer job will prepare you for our future career.
35.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下信件内容。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划—横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Recently, a famous basketball player has caused public angry by writing on the Great Wall. In the fact, this happens in many place of interest. I had some suggestions to solve this problem. First, make more posters to inform the public the damage of graffiti (涂鸦). Besides, punishments, such as a fine, is necessary to tourists with so bad behaviors. Also, I think it’s helpfully to put up some boards along the tourist attractions that tourists can leave messages. I’m sure with our efforts, more and more people will become concerning about protecting cultural relics.
36.假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Tom,
How is it going in the UK I was planning a trip to London with my parents next month.
As the matter of fact, I intend to travel to London so as experience different cultures, which might be helpful for me to broaden my horizons. Also, I am eager to improve my speaking English by communicating with foreigner. Most important, I will get a chance to meet you or enjoy a different lifestyle. Despite of good hopes, I have no idea that is worth visiting or how to behave properly. Could you introduce some places of interest and some customs to me
Looking forward to you early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
37.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How is it going This weekend our class are going to visit Yuntai Mountain, locating in Jiaozuo. I’m writing to invite you join us.
We’ll meet at our school gate at 7:00 and sets off at 7:20 by bus. Being active in Saturday morning, my classmates hope to climb Zhuyu Peak. Next some students may feel tiring, so we’d like to travel through the Red Rock Valley that afternoon, and play game at night. After seeing the waterfall on Sunday morning, we’ll retum back. While traveling, everyone shouldn’t go to danger places, and it’s our duty to protect the environment.
Because we need to book hotel accommodations in advance, I want to make sure of the number of the students which will go to visit. Please tell me whether you’d like to go or not.
I’m expecting to receiving your early reply.
38.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或 修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, there was news about two pandas that sent to Holland and would live there for ten years. People there held the big celebration, and feel so happy to see these two lovely creatures. Indeed, the whole world is crazy about the panda, as it has a lovely image and no one can resist their charm. If a country wants to rent a panda, the government needs to make efforts to creating the environment where suits the panda. It will be a lucky thing for them to have pandas. Pandas are usually looked on for the loveliest diplomatic officers. Everybody loves them so deep no matter that what happens. This love can help us overcome many problems between different culture.
39.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My family were travelling back to Yibin from Chengdu then it started to snow. At first, I thought it is fun and everything looked beautifully. I was looking forward to make a snowman on the playground at my school the next day, and suddenly the car drove off road and into a channel. My father called the rescue team, but they said it would be a long time after they could reach us. But we sang songs and told stories to pass the time. Several hour later, the rescue team pulled their car out of the channel. At last, we managed to drive very slowly to home. I would never forget this experience.
40.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, more and more people have taken part in voluntary work, that is a sign of social progress. There are many different kind of voluntary activities students can participate. For instance, they can work as volunteers in a library or a book store if they were fond of reading or they can go to the nursing home to help the elderly. As the saying goes, the fragrance always stay in the hand that gives the rose. Being volunteers is of great benefit to students, give them a sense of an achievement when they are helping others. By doing voluntary work, students realize the importance of social work and enhance their social responsibility. Therefore, not all the voluntary activities are suitable for students. It is to say, the activities should be safe and easily to conduct.
41.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of the best example of Internet success in Malaysia is Harris. Over the course of his life, he has spent most of his spare time in school translated documents online, that has brought him a lot of money. I never thought that such thing was possible. When he was just 17 years old, he decided to start translating documents for American companies on the Internet. In the beginning, he did things on a relative small size and focused in his studies. But as his time went by, he got more and more jobs. By being patience and hard-working, Harris had managed to find more websites that provide listings of hundreds of available jobs so far.
42.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误。要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
Do you like traveling It is thrilled to visit different spots. As you travel, you will see beautiful scenery and you can encounter and make friends with people of different races and colors. Besides, you can be familiar with the living habits and customs of the local people. Nowadays people are very keen on traveling that tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in most countries. The main reason that people travel is, perhaps, for pleasure. For instance, having worked hardly throughout the weekdays, people will choose to go on a trip to the nearby mountains or beaches to have a good rest.
For another example, spending a holiday travel abroad is especially satisfying experience for those who do not have opportunities to be away from their hometowns. When people return back from their journeys, they will certainly feel refreshed and energetic, ready to work harder. Travelling is also the best mean of learning. You may have read or hear about something, and you can never obtain an accurate picture of it until you witness it by yourself.
43.假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处错误。要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线( ), 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2 .只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To support the activity named “Green Travel, Start with me”, I talk to my parents about it. They were very supportive, say they would be devoted environment protection. In the following weeks, as they promised, I went to school by bike every day, while my parents went to work on bus. Though we were tired, but we all felt happy. Last Friday, a class meeting was hold. Some parents were invited, including my father and mother. We shared various idea during the meeting. All of us held a same view that environment protection is importance for us.
44.短文改错
I spent the National Day Golden Week holiday traveled around Guilin,Guangxi with Mike and Tom,exchange students from Germany.We visited many popular tourist spot.The last destination of our vocation was Longji Rice Terraces in Longsheng county.The rice terrace is a well-known tourist place,where attracts visitors from home and in abroad.We admired a way people have worked in harmony to nature to make these traces and grow rice.Mike showed great interest Zhuang people's traditions.Amusingly,Tom's favorite seemed to be Guilin rice noodles serving at the guesthouse.We had so much fun and we' re already talking about their next holiday!
45.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir,
Choose a career is a very important stage in people’s life. Almost everything depend on your choice. I’d like to be a interpreter. It’s a very interesting profession where requires advancing knowledge of the foreign language as well as excellent social skills. In my opinion, English and literature is the most important subjects for my future profession, because of my knowledge of English will help me communicate with foreigners fluently and accurately. Literature will not only help me broaden my horizons, but also give me some background knowledges of different cultures. To sum, I’d like to say that the choice of our future career path is extremely important, so we must think twice after making our choice.
46.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My cousin Tom was attended a pool party when one of the boys was found at bottom of the pool. The another kids pulled the boy out and Tom found so that he wasn’t breathing. A passer-by noticed the situation but quickly called 120. However, he was too nervous to knowing what to do. Tom was calmly and he quickly began to perform CPR, an emergency lifesaving procedure, on the boy. It was his quick thinking and positive attitude which saved the boy’s life. Since the incident, Tom has been responsible with ensuring that all the student in his school are trained in first aid.
47.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When George arrived in San Francisco, he went straightly to the hotel and drop his luggage. Then, he went explore in the city. The first thing was the ride on a cable car. He reached the top of the hill, from which he got a spectacular view of San Francisco Bay and the city. Built in 1873, the cable car system was invented by Andrew Hallidie, who wanted to find a better mean of transport than horse-draw trams. Apparent, he was shocked when he saw a terrible accident, which a tram slipped down the hill dragging the horses with it. With so much exploring, he returned back to the hotel, exhausted but happy.
48.下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方在增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每句不超过两个错误;
2. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
3. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Sunday May 4 Sunny
It was the first time I had been to countryside. At 9 o'clock in the morning I started out with several classmates. In the way we saw rice fields and trees on all sides of the road. Factories, shops, and schools had been built in many village. From ten to twelve we visited ten families. We told that many farmers had planted vegetables and raise silkworms (蚕) and they had become rich. Some even bought color TV sets. The life of the farmers had been great improved. It was said that some America friends would come to visit their village. We are greatly inspired by the achievements they had made them in recent years.
49.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was spring on March. With the comfortable weather and warmth sunshine, our class had a spring outing on Saturday. We gathered at the school gate, there the bus was waiting for us. We went to Renmin Park hold some activities and all of my classmate were so excited that they looked like the birds just coming out from birdcages. We playing games there and fished in the river. At the same time, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring, but all of us were satisfied. Some people in the park also joined us and had a fun. We had a happier day and the relationship of classmates were getting closer.
50.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday's morning, I, as well some of my classmates, rode shared bikes to the Xinhua Bookstore to buy some books. Enjoying the convenience brought by the shared bikes, everyone was happily all the way. Therefore, when we arrived at the bookstore, a scene of disorder at the gate of the bookstore attracted our attentions. The shared bikes were parking here and there, block the way of passers-by. One of my classmates suggested placing them in an order, so we start to work immediately. We worked for ten minutes and it was finally done. Seeing the tidily arranged bikes, we both felt delighted and proud.
51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in the nine grade, our class joined in a volunteer project. Our first task is to work with kids with cancer. We helped them form a dance team and participate some competitions. What amazed us was that they won several award. But for me, the greatest award was to see them smiled and playing. Then we visited some homes of an elderly and some of them were moved to tears. Those old people were so happy to see them and they knew that the young were still caring. In a world in that everyone expects to receive, my advice is to be the one who is willingly to give. Stop for a minute, volunteer and make someone to smile.
52.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10%语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Lucy,
I’m Li Hua,How are you going these days As you know, there are various destination of cultural heritage in China. Yet the one I like better for visiting is Mogao Caves. The reasons for my choice is as follows.
Mogao Caves are located at a key point along the Silk Route, that is the crossroads of trade as well religious, cultural and intellectual influences. Mogao are distinguishing for their statues and wall paintings, spanned 1,000 years of Buddhist art with an unmatched historical value. It’s a appealing place that you won’t miss it. It’s really worth visiting and I’m extreme looking forward to visiting it soon.
Yours.
Li Hua
53.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the popularity of cellphones and Internet, some of we students spend too much playing with cellphones or computer games, which is bad for our studies. Worse is still, we have little time to communicating with our parents and friends. So do we have time for physical exercises.
How shall we do to improve the situation All of us should realize the negative effects of modern media. Let's limit our time to playing with cellphones or computer games. Instead we should spend more time playing sports or talking straightly with our parents and friends, which helped us relax and communicate.
54.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I came to China, I start to travel around and I was amazed at various wildlives compared to my hometown in the UK. I went to Northeast forests in Dongbei and it was full of birds singing -numbers that I’d never experienced it in the UK. These forests are bird watching paradise. I was impressing by the number of birds in Inner Mongolia, lots of different species singing like an orchestra on the morning. In Sichuan I saw the fire throat, the black throat and pandas. These is birds that are found nowhere else. With a relative rare human population, there are big wild spaces and quite different wildlife comparing with the rest of China. I’ve been here 11 years now and I've still just scratched the surface . There’s still so much many to see.
55.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My parents and I spent five days in Beijing last year. We went to there in autumn. We think it is best season to visit Beijing. The weather is usually cool or there aren't too many tourist in October. We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city. It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot. We couldn't understand the bus routes, and my parents didn't enjoy travelled by underground. We both went shopping in Wangfujing Street and spend too much money. What we liked most were going to the theater. We don't have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home.
56.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Sichuan in August. You've made a wise choose to travel there. As we all know it, Sichuan Province is rich in tourist attractions, enjoy many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
Jiuzhaigou is well-known as its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clearly and looks colorful. It can excite visitors' imagination. Another attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It is built twenty century ago. And it is still playing so important part in irrigation today. Beside, the nice weather and convenience transportation there can make your trip more enjoyable.
57.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起不计分)
Recently we were attracted by the activities of our school. Our class visited to the City Folk Museum last week. To begin with, we searched for as many information as possible on the Internet. Feel excited, we gathered at the entrance on Friday morning. Then the guide showed us the exhibition of paper cuts designing for different uses. After that, we watched a digital film, that made us know our folk culture better. Finally, we go to the do-it-yourself area. We learned to make some paper cut and painted a couple of fantastic masks there. We all felt it was an unforgettable experience, the museum was certain worth a visit.
58.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is known to us, a large number of wild animals has been killed for their meat. As result, thousands of animals have either died out and become endangered.
Actually, protect wild animals benefits the animals as well as humans. For example, if farmers killed too many eagles, their corn and grain would be destroyed for rats. The reason is because with no eagles to hunt rats, their number would increase rapid.
Therefore, all of us must do what they can to protect wild animals. As for me, I have joined an organization in our town which aim is to call on people to protect wild animals and I have taken part in several activities.
59.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I went to Xiangshan Park in last week. At the gate I happened to meet some America tourists. I greeted him in English and then we begin to chat. I got to know that they were college students travel in China. They were busy with taking pictures and were much impressed by the changes had taken place in the past few years. After that, we visited Bei Jing hutong and had a good time. We exchanged our e-mail address so that we could write to each other on the future. I was very glad to have a chance to practice my speak English.
60.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend has witnessed my active participation in the community service with my classmates, the theme of it was “Caring for the Elderly”. As scheduled, we arrived at the nursing home on the morning, where we helped mop the floor, dust the furniture and clean all the window there. After that, we made dumplings with them, chat together happily.
Tired although I was, it was rewarding and meaning to see smiles on their faces. Not only did I bring joy to them, but I also found confidence in keeping themselves company. It is the voluntary labour which enables me to understand what Chinese traditional virtues are. To be frank, I have benefited it greatly.
61.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a Sunday afternoon. My parents and I were watching TV excited when suddenly I noticed the pigeon on the balcony. It was a white pigeon with a ring around one of its foot. It rested there quietly, refuse to fly away. Realizing it must have been lost its way back home, I managed call the Pigeon Association up for help. In the same time, my parents brought the pigeon inside and gave it some bird food, what helped refresh it. Before long, the owner got the message but came to take the pigeon back. He thanked us a lot. My parents and I both felt happy for what we had done.
62.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the develop of science and technology, intelligent robots will be widely used in the future. In families, robots will help people do some houseworks and take care of the elderly, babies and patients. In addition on these tasks, robots will even be able to play the chess and do exercise with people. In factories, robots were going to be used to perform some dangerous jobs to avoid accidents. Robots will change our future life in much ways, which will make more colorful and comfortable. And we shouldn’t depend on intelligent robots too much, for they are made to help humans rather than replacing us. As helpers of humans, robots should be used proper.
63.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, I was witnessed a touching scene. At a pedestrian crossing, an old man hold a walking stick was struggling to cross. He had to take roughly ten small step to equal one normal step. The drivers were waiting patient for him to cross. Then a young gentleman going the opposite way pulled over but went out of his car assist the old man. People in the cars waved their appreciation as a pair gently made it to the middle where the young man knelt on one knee to provide the old man for a rest stop. He was in tears as I walked past because I saw the more touching moment in a year.
64.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, Tom and I paid the visit to Neijiang. We began by touring Daqian Museum, where is located by the beautiful Tuojiang River. Since I was born and brought up in Neijiang, so I acted as his tour guides. For lunch, we tried some special Neijiang noodles. Tom spoke high of Neijiang beef noodles. After lunch, I suggested Tom boats in the Tuojiang River. When we decided leave, the traditional paper cutting catch our eyes. Tom bought some paper cuts as souvenirs. Tiredly, we got back to the hotel. What a wonderful day!
This experience with him undoubtedly improved our friendship. On fact, I began to realize that as Chinese, we should appreciate our own culture so as to make these treasures last forever.
65.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)