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小升初英语总复习
书 面 表 达
【核心考点】
专题 10《书 面 表 达》
学习目标
1.掌握常见题型的写作方法;
2.掌握常见的句式结构;
3.能够根据题目要求,完成写作要求。
How was your weekend
What did you do
Where did you go
英语写作注意事项:
1.标题的写法;
2.标点的使用;
3.大小写:句首,专有名词,中文人名;
4.时态保持一致。
考点分析
根据下面所给的图画以"A happy Sunday”为题写一篇短文,讲述the Browns星期天的生活。要求:条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,书写规范,不少于40个单词。
考点一:看图写话
【解析】(1)这是一篇典型的描写场景的看图表达写作,要求同学们讲述the Browns星期天的生活。同学们可以先观察图中都有哪些事物,然后按照一定的顺序来表达。注意描写人物的表情、动作及神态等,也可以想象人物的语言。
(2)根据信件内容的不同,所运用的时态也应不同。
(3)常见句式及相关短语:
①in the park 在公园里 ②Guess!猜一猜!
③It's a fine/warm/cloudy day.天气晴朗/暖和/多云。
It is/was sunny/windy/rainy/snowy/cold/hot/cool.
④ There's cat in the tree. 树上有一只猫。
常用句式及相关短语
(4) 表达过程中容易出现的错误:
①外物在树上介词用in。
e.g. There's a bird in the tree. 树上有只鸟。
②树上本身就有的事物介词用on。
e.g. There are some apples on the tree. 树上有一些苹果。
常用句式及相关短语
A happy Sunday
It's Sunday today. It's a fine day. The Browns are in the park. Mr Browns is sitting next to Mary. He's reading a newspaper. Mary is sitting between Mr Brown and Mrs Brown, Mrs Brown is knitting. They're sitting on a bench. There is a dog near them. There's a cat in the tree. They are all very happy.
例文:
考点二:命题作文
写一篇介绍自己的老师的短文。要求:条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,书写清晰、规范。不少于40个单词。
【解析】
(1)这是一篇写人的习作,可以描述人物的外貌还可以简单介绍个人喜好,也可酌情添加你对人物的看法及评价并简单说明原因。
(2)一般情况下我们用一般现在时来表达。
1.年龄: ①l am+数词 +(years old).
②He /She /人名+is+数词+(years old).
常用句式及相关短语
2.外貌特征及品性:
①主语+is/am/are +形容词.
(tall, short, heavy, of medium height, handsome, beautiful/pretty, friendly).
②I +have/has +long/short/straight/curly /brown/blonde hair.
③ 主语+wear/wears+服装名词/glasses.
I wear /He(She) wears a T-shirt/glasses.
常用句式及相关短语
3. 表达喜好
①主语+like/likes...
②My/His/her favorite...is/are....
③His/ Her favourite food/ colour is ... 他/她最喜爱的食物/颜色是…
④like doing. 喜欢做…
⑤He/ She doesn' t waste food. 他/她不浪费食物。
⑥want to do sth. 想要做某事
常用句式及相关短语
4.表达特长和能力:
①I+ am / is /are good at..., I am /He (She) is good at math.
be good at. 擅长……
②主语+can +动词原形+其它。I/He/She can speak English.
③teach sb.sth. 教某人 (做)某事
④with one's help 在某人的帮助下
常用句式及相关短语
5.表达某人的籍贯:主语+is/am/are from +某地.
主语+come/comes from.
常用句式及相关短语
①一般现在时的句子中,动词第三人称单数的具体表达方法
e.g.He likes playing football.
He like playing football.
②人称代词宾格的使用
e.g. teach me English
teach we English
表达中易错的地方
参考范文
My Teacher
Miss Lin is my English teacher. In my eyes, she is not only my teacher but also my good friend. She is not tall.She is thin. She has long hair. Her face is round. Her eyes are small. She likes swimming. She likes singing English songs, too. She often teaches us English songs.
I love her very much. I also want to be a teacher in thefuture.
参考范文
My Teacher
Miss Lin is my English teacher. In my eyes, she is not only my teacher but also my good friend. She is not tall.She is thin. She has long hair. Her face is round. Her eyes are small. She likes swimming. She likes singing English songs, too. She often teaches us English songs.
I love her very much. I also want to be a teacher in thefuture.
in one's eyes 在某人的眼里
not only... but also 不但......而且
外貌描写
爱好 like doing sth 喜欢做某事
teach sb sth 教某人某物
结尾表达个人情感
记事类的题材非常广泛,小学阶段常常接触到的有关旅行、拜访亲友、过生日、节假日活动、亲情故事、校园时光、参观场所、购物经历、寓言故事、幽默笑话、社会事件等。
当我们审完题目,知道要写什么话题之后,我们应该从哪里入手呢
小学阶段作文常用时间:
today last weekend
yesterday last Sunday
tomorrow next weekend
时间 When
人物 who
I
my family
my friend
my dog
地点 Where
park library
zoo Beijing/Xinjiang
bookstore Huangshan
事件 What
have a picnic see animals
ride a bike fly kites
play football go shopping
climb mountains ...
感受 Feeling
good happy
sad boring
meaningful exciting
tired
记事作文五要素
范文解析
范文阅读
请以" My Weekend"为题,介绍自己上个周末的生活。要求书写工整、规范。
范文阅读
My Weekend
I had a happy weekend. On Saturday, I went to the library. I did my homework and read some magazines there. Then I went shopping with my sister after lunch. On Sunday, I went to the park with my friends. We had a picnic together. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my mother. It was a busy weekend and a happy weekend, too.
范文阅读
范文阅读
昨天是3月20日,也是你的生日,请描述你的生日派对。(注意用一般过去时)
范文阅读
My birthday
Yesterday was March 20th. It was a good day. It was my birthday. I had a birthday party with my family and friends. I ate a lot. Mike brought some ice creams. Jenny brought some candies. Mary brought a lot of cookies. My mom made a cake.My dad bought a toy car for me. We sang and danced. We all had a great time.
范文阅读
范文阅读
劳动节马上就要到了,你和你的家人计划去北京游玩,请写写你的假期计划。(注意用一般将来时)
范文阅读
My Holiday
I am going to go to Beijing this holiday. Beijing is in the north of China. I am going to go there by plane. On the first day, I am going to climb the Great Wall. I am going to take photos, too.On the second day, I am going to visit the Tian'anmen Square. On the third day, I am going to row a boat and fly a kite in a park.I will have a busy and happy holiday.
范文阅读
妙计指点
尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意变换句型,避免重复和单调。善用关联词、过渡词,使文章结构紧凑、连贯。
巩 固 练 习
书面表达
你通常和家人做些什么呢 想一想,写一写
always / usually / often / sometimes / never go shopping/ play chess/ go to the park..
范文
I have a happy family. I often play chess with my father on Sunday evening. Sometimes my parents and I go to the park on Friday. We play sports there. We never go shopping together. Because I am busy on weekends. But our parents like going shopping on weekends. They are busy on work days.
根据图片和参考词汇提示介绍一下David的新学期计划。(考点3)
参考词汇:study hard, get a part time job, eat healthy food, exercise, play football, play the piano
要求:语句通顺合乎逻辑,书写规范;40个单词左右。
Next term, David is going to study hard at school. He's going to get a part-time job in a restaurant. Health is very important, He is going to eat healthy food to keep healthy.and he's going to do more exercise. He likes playing football very much so he's going to play football. Finally, he is going to learn to play the piano.
书面表达
根据提示写一篇不少于5句话的短文,描述相关内容。
Self-introduction (自我介绍) 假如你是Lucy—一名即将毕业的小学生。你马上要升入到一所新的中学,希望能够尽快交到新朋友。请根据下面的图片和文字提示,写一篇短文,向新同学介绍你的年龄、爱好、梦想及为什么有这个梦想等相关信息。
Lucy, 13 years old read books want to be help sick people ......
范文
I have a happy family. I often play chess with my father on Sunday evening. Sometimes my parents and I go to the park on Friday. We play sports there. We never go shopping together. Because I am busy on weekends. But our parents like going shopping on weekends. They are busy on work days.
书面表达
"Which season do you like best What's the weather like in that season What can you do in that season What can you wear What can you eat ..."
你参考表格并结合生活实际,以"My Favourite Season"为题,写一篇英语小短文。
注意事项: (1)书写规范,注意大小写和标点符号。
(2)短文可参考表格内词汇,也可以自己适当拓展。
(3)表达正确,语句通顺,行文连贯。
(4)短文不少于40词。
范文
seasons
weather warm, sunny,... hot, sunny,... cool,windy,... cold, snowy,..
activities fly lites, plant trees, ... go swimming, eat ice cream,... have a picnic, take a trip,... make a snowman, play with snow, ...
clothes shirt, pants, jacket,... dress, shorts,T-shirt,... jacket,pants, sweater,... sweater, coat, gloves, scarf,...
范文
My Favourite Season
There are four seasons in a year. My favourite season is spring. It's warm and sunny.I usually wear shirts, pants and jackets. I can fly kites. It's interesting. And I can also plant trees. I like to go on a picnic with my family and friends. There are beautful flowers everywhere. I like spring!
范文
分析:写作思路:本题考查话题作文。围绕我最喜欢的季节展开,时态是一般现在时。人称是第一人称,根据所给提示,围绕天气,活动,穿的衣服等展开叙述。
重点词汇: warm温暖的, sunny晴朗的, shirts衬衣, pants裤子, plant trees植树, fly kites放风筝,go on a picnic 去野餐, flowers花。
重点句子: It's warm and sunny.描述春天的天气。
I usually wear shirts, pants and jackets.描述春天该穿的衣服。
I like to go on a picnic with my family and friends.描述春季的活动。
Thank you!