07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（湖北襄阳市）（含解析）

07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（湖北襄阳市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书信作文
1．中考在即，你的好友Linling 沉迷于刷抖音（Browse TikTok），每天除了刷抖音对任何事都提不起兴趣，上课无心听讲也不能完成家庭作业，学习直线下降，你看在眼里，急在心里，作为好朋友，请你给Linling写一封信，动之以情，晓之以理，劝她正确处理学习和娱乐的关系。
要点提示：
1. 简要表达你对Linling现状的担忧。
2. 结合Linling的情况详细阐述刷抖音的利弊。
3. 简要给出合理化建议和帮助。
要求：
1. 行文连贯，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 词数：90词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。
Dear Linling,
As your good friend, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope everything will be better with you.
Yours,
Xiaoxiao
2．“双减政策”下，你发生了哪些变化？请根据以下提示，给你的外国友人Tom写封信，介绍“双减”以来你的变化，并谈谈你对这些变化的看法。
要点提示：
1、你的学习生活都发生了变化。
2、作业量变少了，课外补习变少了，学校文体活动增多了……
3、你的感受。
要求：
1、主旨明确，用词准确，逻辑清晰，行文连贯。
2、词数：90词左右。
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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二、话题作文
3．在你初中三年的生活中，一定有那么一个人，让你崇拜，受你敬仰，他可能是你的老师，你的同学，亦或是你的朋友。在你的学校，谁是你的爱豆（idol：偶像）呢？请根据以下写作要点，以My Idol at School为题，写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1. 简要介绍TA的外貌。
2. 用事例来详细描述你崇拜或敬仰TA的原因。
3. 简要写出TA对你的影响或你准备如何向TA学习。
写作要求：
1. 结构完整，层次分明，语句通顺。
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3. 90词左右。
My Idol at School
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4．重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）又称老人节，是我国一个传统节日。在那天人们会出游、登高。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，以“重阳敬老”为主题为学校英语报投稿，介绍人们怎样庆祝这个节日，你通常做些什么来敬老助老，以及你的想法。
要求∶
1.意思连贯、符合逻辑。
2.提示词语仅供选用。
3.不要写出你的校名和姓名。
4.不少于70词，文章的开头不计人总词数。
提示词语∶go outing，climb，help，look after
1. How do Chinese people celebrate the Double Ninth Festival 2. What do you usually do to show respect(尊重)to the old 3. Do you think it is important to respect the old Why
The Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、材料作文
5．一个善良的人，就像一盏明灯，既照亮了周围的人，也温暖了自己。请你以中学生李强的身份叙述一件发生在身边的善意的小事。
内容提示：
1．事情的起因、经过和结果；
2．谈谈这件事情对你的影响；
3．呼吁大家传递善意。
注意事项：
1．短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
2．词数：90—100词；作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3．文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
It’s good to help others in need._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．随着科技发展和人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的孩子们拥有了自己的智能手机，从而也诞生了越来越多的低头族，他们痴迷于打电子游戏、听音乐、看视频等自我世界，疏于锻炼，淡薄亲情交流。请你根据写作提示写一篇短文，来谈谈你对这种现象的看法。
写作要求：1.作为中学生，你怎么看待这种现象？请发表你的观点；
2.给出三个理由来支持你的观点；
3.你想对同龄人说些什么呢？
写作要求：1、短文应该包含所有提示信息，要求层次清楚，语法正确，可适当增加情节使短文意思连贯、通顺、完整；
2、文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名；
3、词数90个左右。
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7．每一个人，每一个国家，都拥有梦想。实现中华民族伟大复兴的“中国梦”，是每一个中国人的使命与责任。假如你是初中生李红，请根据写作要点提示，以“My Dream”为题用英语写一篇短文。
1. 写作提示：
(1)简述你的梦想；
(2)谈谈你将如何实现你的梦想；
(3)对其他人的建议。
2. 注意事项：
1）短文内容应包含提示的要点，可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；
2）词数：90—100词；
3）文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
My Dream
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8．4月16日上午，神舟十三号载人飞船返回舱在东风着陆场成功着陆，这是我国迄今为止时间最长的载人飞行。大家都在为三位开创历史的航天员点赞！你的学校发出倡议向他们学习，组织举办一场以 “每个人都了不起！”为题的英语征文比赛。请你根据这一话题发现身边 “了不起”的老师、同学或者自己。
要点提示：
① 简单介绍身边“了不起”的他/她；
② 详细叙述他/她做了什么“了不起”的事；
③ 简述作为中学生，你有怎样的打算。
注意事项：
① 90词左右；
② 行文应连贯流畅；
③文 中不得出现真实姓名和学校名
Everyone is excellent!
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9．“双减” 政策实施以来，同学们有了更多的课余时间参与自己感兴趣的活动，你一定也和同学们共同参与、合作完成过一些活动吧。尤其在冬奥会成功举办之后，“一起向未来” (Together for a shared future!) 的理念更是深入人心。请结合你的特长或爱好，根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你与同伴共同参与、合作完成的一次活动。
1.要点提示：
(1)简要介绍你的特长或爱好；
(2)详述你发挥特长或展示爱好，与同伴共同完成本次活动的过程；
(3)简述你参加活动的感受。
2.注意事项：
(1)词数90左右；
(2) 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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10．2021年九月，中国正式开始实施（carry out）了“双减政策”（the double reduction policy）来减少学生的学习负担（burden），请根据以下要求写一篇文章。
1. 要点提示：
（1）简述你对“双减政策”的看法；
（2）结合实际详细讲述下双减后我们的学习和生活各发生了哪些变化；
（3）简要谈谈在减负的大环境下，我们如何成为一个优秀的学习者？
2. 注意事项：
（1）90词左右。（开头已给出，不计入词数）
（2）行文应连贯流畅。
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
The Chinese government has carried out the so-called double reduction policy since September, 2021.
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参考答案：
1．例文
Dear Linling,
As your good friend, I’m very worried about you. Although short videos have brought us great benefits. We can get a lot of the latest news and bring us a lot of fun. But if we are crazy about short videos, we don’t have enough time to study, and our academic performance is bound to decline. It’s bad for our eyes and it’s easy for us to get fat. I suggest that we should put study first. If we have time, we can watch some short videos to relax. I hope these suggestions can help you.
Hope everything will be better with you.
Yours,
Xiaoxiao
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一篇书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生不要遗漏“要点提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头以“Dear Lingling”开头，符合书信特点；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“对Lingling的担忧、分析刷抖音的利弊、提出合理的建议等”几个方面进行写作；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望Lingling一切会更好”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about sb. 担心某人
②a lot of 许多
③be crazy about sth. 对……着迷
④be bound to一定；注定
[高分句型]
①I suggest that we should put study first. （that引导的宾语从句）
②If we have time, we can watch some short videos to relax ourselves.（if引导的条件状语从句）
2．例文
Dear Tom,
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my school life has been changed a lot.
First of all, I have less homework than before and I’m required to finish my homework all at school, which means there are no more school assignments at home. Secondly, the most exciting thing for me is that I don’t need to take off-campus tutoring classes any more. Finally, I have more spare time to do things I enjoy. I can play basketball with my friends after school or I can join the music club in our school. I can sing songs, play the piano and play the guitar in it.
All in all, the “double reduction” policy has changed my school life and I love the “double reduction” policy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍“双减”以来你的变化，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示自己有很多变化；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍“双减”以来自己发生的变化；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out执行
②all in all总的来说
[高分句型]
①Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my school life has been changed a lot.(since引导的时间状语从句)
②I have less homework than before and I’m required to finish my homework all at school, which means there are no more school assignments at home.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．范文：
My Idol at School
My idol is my best friend. Her name is Lily. She is a girl from America. She is tall and has bright eyes. Lily is a kind person and always ready to help others. She is the person who has influenced me most.
Lily is in the same class with me, so we always study together. Through getting along with her, I find her very helpful. No matter who comes to her for help, she will help them warmly and patiently. It was a weekend, and it’s raining cats and dogs. I forgot to bring my umbrella. It was Lily who shared her umbrella with me. From then on, we became best friends.
I should learn from Lily and do my best to help my classmates, too. After all, helping others is helping ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，介绍了“我在学校的偶像”；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主，一般过去时为辅；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意根据写作要点进行写作，不要遗漏，可以适当添加细节，使文章内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍人物。简要介绍自己在学校的偶像是谁，并描述她的外貌以及乐于助人的品质等信息。
第二步，具体描述崇拜的理由。从TA对待别人以及对待自己这两个方面说明她的乐于助人的品质。
第三步，书写结语。阐述自己会以她为榜样，也尽力帮助他人。
[亮点词汇]
①get along with sb.与某人相处
②rain cats and dogs下倾盆大雨
③try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①She is the person who has influenced me most.（定语从句）
②It was Lily who shared her umbrella with me.（强调句，强调主语Lily）
③After all, helping others is helping ourselves.（名言警句“帮助别人就是帮助我们自己。”）
4．范文：
The Double Ninth Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. On that day, people usually climb mountains and go outing with their family. It’s also a day to show respect to the old.
As a teenager, I try my best to do what I can to be nice to the old. I often visit my grandparents on weekends and talk to them and cheer them up. I also help them with the housework. Meanwhile, I am polite to the old. When I see them on the bus, I always offer them my seat. Moreover, I volunteer to look after the old who live alone in our neighborhood. I help them carry heavy things when they need help.
I think it’s very important to respect the old because they have done a lot for their family and for the country. One day, we will all be old.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容向人们介绍重阳节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述中国人如何庆祝重阳节；
第二步，阐述自己是如何尊重老人的；
第三步，阐述认为重阳节重要的原因和理由。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do尝试做某事；
②volunteer to do志愿做某事；
③look after照顾。
[高分句型]
①As a teenager, I try my best to do what I can to be nice to the old.（宾语从句）
②Moreover, I volunteer to look after the old who live alone in our neighborhood.（定语从句）
③I think it’s very important to respect the old because they have done a lot for their family and for the country.（宾语从句和原因状语从句）
5．
It’s good to help others in need. Being willing to help others is one of the fine traditions of the Chinese nation. While helping others, we can also get happiness.
I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Grade Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved, too. Finally, we became the best friends. I understood what it means to help others.
Actually, helping others is helping ourselves. We should start from bit by bit and help each other.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：开头已给出，并根据内容提示完成内容，适当补充要点，并注意主谓一致性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题。
第二步，讲述自己的经历以及这件事对自己的影响。
第三步，呼吁大家传递善意。
[亮点词汇]
①was patient to… 对……有耐心
②from then on… 从那以后……
[高分句型]
①I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Grade Eight. （remember后的宾语从句中包含了when引导的时间状语从句）
②So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. （whenever无论何时，引导时间状语从句）
6．例文
I disagree that teenagers use their mobile phones too often. It’s not good for their development.
On the one hand, using mobile phones often can hurt their eyes. Most teenagers have to wear their glasses. It’s very inconvenient for their lives and study. On the other hand, they will miss lots of chances to communicate with their friends which make them feel lonely. Besides, if teenagers depend on mobile phones too much, they will have no more time to chat with their family and relatives. They can’t enjoy the time with family.
I hope the teenagers can put down their mobile phones and spend more time with family and friends. Then they will find more enjoyable moments around them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：中文提示已给出，考生结合所学知识，写一篇作文，可适当发挥，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先确定对这种现象的看法，发表自己的观点；
第二步，具体阐述自己的理由；
第三步，讲述对同龄人的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①On the one hand…On the other hand一方面……另一方面
②communicate with和……交流
③depend on依靠
④put down放下
[高分句型]
①On the one hand, using mobile phones often can hurt their eyes.（动名词作主语）
②On the other hand, they will miss lots of chances to communicate with their friends which make them feel lonely（动词不定式作定语）
7．例文：
My Dream
Hello, everyone! I would like to share my dream with all of you here. Everyone has a dream and my dream is to be a reporter. Because I would like to see different people and I can make friends with more people. What’s more, I can tell people the truth about something popular. What can I do to become a reporter I want to write articles for magazines or newspapers. When I finish high school, I want to go to college in Beijing. Because I think I can learn more there. I want to work at a station and I want to travel around the world one day. Everyone should understand that there is hope where there is dream. Everyone should never give up trying to realize their dreams. Only by studying hard can our dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先简述你的梦想；
第二步，接下来介绍如何实现你的梦想；
第三步，最后是对其他人的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① share…with和……分享
② make friends with和……交朋友
③ give up放弃
[高分句型]
① When I finish high school, I want to go to college in Beijing.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② Everyone should understand that there is hope where there is dream.（that引导的宾语从句，where引导的地点状语从句）
8．
Everyone is excellent!
There are many excellent people in the world, such as excellent scientists, excellent players and so on. But I think everyone including ordinary people can be excellent, too. My friend Tom is very excellent.
Tom is my best friend. He is tall and fat. He likes to read books and play football. He is good at every subject and always ready to help others. One day, I failed my math exam, and I felt very sad. He noticed my feeling and tried his best to help me with my math. With his help, I made progress in math. Last Monday, our classmate Mike was seriously ill and we decided to donate money to him. Although Tom himself doesn’t have much money, he still donated all his pocket money to Mike.
I think he is very excellent. As middle school students, we should learn from those excellent people and make ourselves excellent.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“每个人都了不起！”为题，并结合所给提示，写一篇短文介绍自己身边了不起的人。
2.写作指导：人称采用第一人称和第三人称，时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。文章内容可分为三段：第一段引出自己想要描述的了不起的人，第二段具体描写他/她是谁，以及做了哪些事情，第三段写自己的愿景。注意时态衔接，句子通顺，做到单词和语法无错误。
9．例文
I like playing basketball very much. I can play basketball very well. If I have time, I often go to the park to play basketball with my friends.
Last term, our school organized a basketball match. Our class chose me as its leader. We used our spare time to practice playing basketball and teamwork. Sometimes some students didn’t play well. I would teach them how to play basketball better. Through our efforts, we won the first place at last. Although we were tired, we were very happy.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，结合自己的特长或爱好，介绍一下自己与与同伴共同参与、合作完成的一次活动。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；时态以第一人称为主；写作时要具体介绍自己的特长，与同伴参加的一次活动以及活动感受，针对细节可适当发挥，在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，正确运用好两种时态。
10．例文
The Chinese government has carried out the so-called double reduction policy since September, 2021. It hopes to reduce school work burden on primary and junior high school students. The policy calls for reducing homework and after-school classes.
In my opinion, the policy is good for us. Our homework is clearly less than before, and we have enough time to process new knowledge now. We have more chances to do experiments and learn from real life. This is a much better way to learn things than just hitting the books. We can also spend more time taking part in clubs and activities.
Although we feel less stressed than before, self-discipline becomes the key. We should balance the schoolwork and after-school activities. We should also finish our homework on time. Moreover, listening to the teacher carefully in class becomes more important. Otherwise, we will fall behind other students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简述对该政策的看法；
第二步，详述双减后我们学习和生活发生的变化；
第三步，介绍在这样的大环境下，如何成为一个优秀的学习者。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out实施
②in my opinion在我看来
③be good for对……有好处
④on time按时
[高分句型]
①Although we feel less stressed than before, self-discipline becomes the key.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②Moreover, listening to the teacher carefully in class becomes more important.（动名词作主语）