中考英语书面表达 How to draft a composition 课件

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How to draft a composition
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To help a foreign student set up a Chinese music club in the UK
Activity 1:Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music
Activity 2:Share stories of Chinese singers
Activity 3
opinion
reasons
opinion
reasons
opinion
reasons
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Activity 1:Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music
opinion
reasons
bad
boring
形容词:interesting;attractive;useful...
名词短语:an important way;a helpful idea...
verbs(动词):make sense;benefit...
1....However/But...
2....might not...
3....not...enough
4.I’m not sure if/whether
5.I’m afraid that...
Use proper words and expressions.
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Activity 1:Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music
opinion
reasons
advantages
disadvantages
Advantages:
something they can get/feel/improve...
Disadvantages:
how to improve...
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Activity 1:Listen to traditional and modern Chinese music
opinion
reasons
Tip 1:Use proper words and expressions.
Tip 2:Focus on the writing purpose.
key words
It’s a good idea to listen to traditional and modern Chinese muscic,especially some classic pieces.
This leads to a better understanding of Chinese music.
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Activity 2:Share stories of Chinese singers
opinion
reasons
Tip 1:Use proper words and expressions.
Tip 2:Focus on the writing purpose.
key words
It may help you know about their songs better.
There are many excellent Chinese singers whose life stories are interesting.
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Activity 3:
sing Chinese folk songs(民歌)
learn Chinese instruments
watch Chinese musical films
hold a Chinese song competition
...
opinion
reasons
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Activity 3:learn Chinese instruments
opinion
reasons
key words
You can learn to play Chinese musical instruments like the erhu or the pipa.
Playing them can be quite relaxing.
Beautify the language of your draft and polish it according to Checklist 1.
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Checklist 1 Content(内容) 1.Do you write with the purpose of helping with Tracy’s Chinese music club
2.Do you write about opinions and reasons on Tracy’s two activities
3.Do you write your advice on another activity
4.Do you use proper words and expressions to show you opinions and reasons.
Polish your composition
Complete the writing task with the help of checklist 2.
Homework
Parkland国际学校组织同学们参加社会实践活动(Social Practical Program)。假设你是该校学生张明，请在下表选择一项你喜欢的活动，并用英语给负责老师Mr.Green 写一封邮件标明你的选择理由及行动计划，以供学校统计并筛选。
Social Practical Program
help animals in danger
recycle useful things in the waste
take part in volunteer activities in/at__________
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Social Practical Program
Activity 1:help animals in danger
Activity 2:recycle useful things in the waste
Activity 3:take part in volunteer activities
opinion
reasons
opinion
reasons
opinion
reasons
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Activity 1:help animals in danger
opinion
reasons
Opinion:
It is a good idea to help animals in danger.
reasons:
1.Wild animals are in danger.
2.Animals are our friends.
3.Helping animals in danger can build a good relationship between animals and people.
Homework
Checklist 2 Content(内容) 1.Do you focus on the writing purpose of applying for thesocial practical activity you prefer
2.Do you write about reasons and plans for the social practical activity
3.Are your reasons convinving(有说服力的)
4.Are your plans proper and thorough
Complete the writing task with the help of checklist 2.
Assignments
1.Read the example and make your composition better with the checklist.
2.Use the checklist and choose the best composition in the class.
3.Post the best one on the school Wechat Official Account.