【2023中考英语作文万能模板】02 记叙文之记事型

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02 记叙文之记事型
叙事性的记叙文(Narration):
叙事性的记叙文的主要内容的概括主要抓住记叙文的几个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件和影响或后果。
记叙文的重点在于"述说"和"描写"，因此一篇好的记叙文要叙述条理清楚，描写生动形象。下面就谈谈英语记叙文的特点和写好记叙文的基本要领。
【写作注意事项】
记叙文它包括＂六大要素＂：时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果（即when, where, who, why, how, what)。写记叙类文章时应该把这六大要素交代明白，同时还应注意以下三点。
（1）叙述方式：主要有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种，英语记叙文主要以顺叙为主。
（2）时态上：记叙文主要记述过去发生的事情，所以常用一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时等时态。
（3）人称上：常用第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称表示的是由叙述者亲身经历的事情。用第三人称是通过作者和读者之外的第三者把故事的具体情节呈现在读者面前。
【写作方法】
第一段：开门见山，交代事件的大体情况，如时间、地点、人物、事件等；
第二段： 详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因或结果等；
第三段：评价该事件：表明自己的看法、感受等。
写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式
1. ＂开门见山＂式开头
一般来说，文章的开头应尽量做到＂开门见山＂，即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题，使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
对于叙事类的文章，可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如＂A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头可以是：Last month, my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
2. 回忆性开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中，采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇，如never forget(永远无法忘记)、 remember (记得)、unforgettable(难以忘怀的)、 exciting(令人激动的)、surprising(令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的)... 如＂A Trip to Huangshan(黄山之旅)＂的开头还以这样写：I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问性开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中，都可采用疑问型开头，这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如＂Planting Trees(种树)＂的开头可以是：Have you ever planted trees Don’t you think planting trees is ... 再如＂Traveling Abroad(出国之旅)＂的开头可以是：If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章，特别是叙事类的文章中，可以采用倒叙的写作手法，先写出事件的结果，再陈述过程。如＂Catching Thieves (捉贼)＂的开头可以这样写：I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me Let me tell you. It’s a ... story.
典例赏析：
（2022·新疆·中考真题）
初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。
例如：1.一次难忘的旅行
2.一次难忘的比赛
3.一次难忘的志愿服务
……
要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：
3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories…
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【答案】例文
Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories.
Last summer vacation, I decided to learn to swim. At first, I was afraid of swimming in the water. I didn’t feel good in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. With the coach’s help, I knew how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited and proud of myself.
What I learn from this experience is that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
模板①
___（时间） ___
（人物）had a basketball match with .
The match began at ___（比赛开始时间）. At first, ___.Whenever we scored, I ___（我观看比赛时的表现）. In the last quarter, our team ___. In the last minute ___（我们队的表现）. Our class ___ the match（比赛结果）.
The exciting match gave us a lot of fun.
【模板范文】
Yesterday our class had a basketball match with Class Two. Class Two was the top team of our grade, but we didn’t want to settle for second best.
The match began at 4:30. At first, Class Two played better and was always in the lead. We were standing around the court, cheering loudly for our team. Whenever we scored, I jumped and shouted, forgetting I’m a girl. The unfavorable situation lasted for three quarters. In the last quarter, our team changed the plan and slowly caught up. In the last minute the score became 81 to 80. Our class won the match.
The exciting match gave us a lot of fun.
典例赏析：
（2022·江苏盐城·中考真题）
学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“One Thing I will Do for ________”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛，分享你将为朋友、家人、学校或社会做的一件事。
1. What will you do 2. How will you do it 3. Why do you choose to do it …
注意事项：
（1）补全题目，如“my friend, my parents, our school”等；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One Thing I will Do for ________
I have made great progress in the past three years. Now I want to do one thing for
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【答案】例文：
One Thing I will Do for My Parents
I have made great progress in the past three years. Now I want to do one thing for my parents.
I want to make a breakfast for my parents. I’m going to the supermarket on Saturday afternoon to buy what I need for breakfast. Then, the next morning I will get up early so as not to wake my parents. I will make my mother’s favorite sandwiches and coffee. My father likes to eat tomato beef noodles for breakfast, I will learn how to cook on my phone. Make sure they can have a delicious breakfast after getting up.
I have had this idea in my heart for many years, but I never get the chance to do it. In the past few years, my parents always got up early to prepare breakfast for me. It is their love and support that make me better, so I want to return them with the same love. I love them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：根据情景综合运用各种时态，注意主谓保持一致性；
③提示：文章写作要点已给出，注意将作文标题补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己想为谁做一件事；
第二步，具体阐述自己想做什么事，以及怎样做这件事；
第三步，阐述自己为什么想做这件事。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth.想要做某事
②get up起床
③make sure确保
④prepare sth. for sb.为某人准备某物
[高分句型]
①I’m going to the supermarket on Saturday afternoon to buy what I need for breakfast. （what引导的宾语从句）
②It is their love and support that make me better（It is+被强调部分+that+其他）
模板②
叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。
写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构，模板如下：
1. Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind, ...is the most unforgettable one．
2. On a sunny/rainy morning， while I was...First of all... Then...　After that... In the end...
3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met / experienced, I will remember him/in forever．
加分句子：
1. Sth. impressed me greatly...
2. What impressed me most is that...
经典句型：
1. Last Sunday（Saturday...）, it was sunny（rainy, windy, foggy）
2. I got up very early （late）. After breakfast I went to with my friends by bike, bus...
3. We enjoyed ourselves.
4. We forgot the time. We didn’t come back until 5 o’clock.
5. We all felt very tired, but we were happy.
6. I thought I would never forget this trip.
7. Last summer, my parents and I went to Beijing for our holidays.
8. We visited a lot of places of interest.
9. We had a good time there.
10. We bought a lot of things. The clothes here are good and cheap.
（2022·江苏连云港·中考真题）
“双减”之后，如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义？请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。
注意：
（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation Here is my advice.
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【答案】例文
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation Here is my advice.
First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. It’s necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What’s more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new world to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop our hobbies.
I hope you can have a colourful vacation.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从运动，做家务，阅读和参加俱乐部四方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2．（2021·山东聊城·中考真题）
假设你是一名中学生，今天早晨骑自行车上学时经历了一场交通事故。请你用英语简要叙述事故过程，并谈谈你的感受和今后的打算。主要内容提示如下：
1.自己边骑自行车边听音乐。
2.交通灯即将转为红灯时，一辆汽车突然出现。
3.汽车虽然及时停下，但自己摔下自行车并弄伤了手和膝盖。
4.自己的感受和今后的打算。
注意：
1.短文词数；80 左右。
2.短文必须包括以上要点，但可以适当增加内容，以使行文连贯。
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
4.短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I’m a middle school student. On my way to school this morning I had an accident.
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【答案】例文：
I’m a middle school student. On my way to school this morning I had an accident. I was riding my bike and listening to music on the road. While the lights were changing to red, a car suddenly appeared. The car stopped just in time, but I fell off my bike and hurt my left knee and right hand.
I think we should obey the traffic rules and be careful on the road. When we ride the bike, think about the risk of an accident, don’t listen to music while riding.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。题干主要讲述了一次交通事故，要求我们根据提示用英语简要叙述事故过程，并谈谈你的感受和今后的打算。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；叙述故事时，要描述材料中的四个内容；写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系；文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。
3．（2022·山东东营·中考真题）
在我们的生活中，有些事情看起来很难完成，但是通过我们个人的努力或别人的帮助等，我们做到了。请以“I made it”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。
内容包括：
1. 你做到了什么事情；
2. 你是如何做到的；
3. 做完后你的感受或收获。
要求：
1. 短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、学校及其他相关信息。
2. 照抄试卷内容不得分。
I made it
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【答案】例文：
I made it
Since I went to the middle school, my English grades have gone down rapidly. I felt very disappointed. And I didn’t know the way to improve my English grades.
“Never give up,” my father said to me. “Look for the methods which belong to you.” After hearing these, I decided to make a studying plan about improving my English. With my father’s help, I made a plan. The plan included doing some English reading, watching English news and so on. Since I made up the plan, I have followed the details of the plan. The following exam was coming. That time I became self-confident. I got nearly full marks. This made me very happy because I defeated myself. My parents congratulated me on this. And they said that they were proud of me.
From then on, I have become more and more confident, and I am determined to continue to try my best to study English as well as other subjects.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述自己做到的一件事情；
② 时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，仔细介绍自己所做的事情的前后对比，以及从中感悟到的道理等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己遇到的困难；
第二步，具体介绍自己是如何改变的，如何做成这件事情的；
第三步，最后介绍自己从此事中取得的收获。
[亮点词汇]
① give up 放弃
② be proud of 以……而骄傲
③ be determined to 下决心做……
[高分句型]
① Since I went to the middle school, my English grades have gone down rapidly.（since引导的时间状语从句）
② This made me very happy, because I defeated myself.（because引导的原因状语从句）
4．（2022·浙江衢州·中考真题）
每一次经历都是学习的体验，成长的积淀。近期你校英语社团将举办以“在学习中成长”为主题的征文活动。请以“To Learn, To Grow”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括：
1. 介绍你在文化、艺术、体育等方面的一次活动经历；
2. 谈谈你的感受。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
2. 词数：90-110；
3. 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇：activity, pleasure, improve, experience
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【答案】例文
To Learn, To Grow
Every experience is a learning experience, and we can always learn something valuable from it.
Last term, there was an English speech contest in my school. I decided to take part in it, because I thought I was good at speaking English and I had some experience in giving speeches. I was sure I could win the contest easily, so I spent little time practicing. Did I win Of course not. The winner was Jim, one of my classmates, who had practiced after school every day.
“Practice makes perfect”, as the saying goes. No one can succeed without hard work. This is what I learned from my failure. If there’s another chance, I’ll take it seriously and do my best.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“To Learn, To Grow”为题，结合提示内容进行写作。写作前，可以提前列举出可能需要用到的单词、短语和句型等；写作时注意写作手法要符合英语的表达方式；写作后注意检查。
2.写作指导：这是一篇材料作文，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在描述过去的经历时用一般过去时。例文采取三段式的写作手法：第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己的经历；第三段描述自己的感受。
5.（2022·湖北武汉·中考真题）
假如你是李欣，你与Bob叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。请你给Bob叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。
内容要点如下：
1. 6月30日下午2:00机场见；
2. 酒店已预订好，直接前往；
3. 第二天观看升旗仪式；
4. 游长城，吃北京烤鸭；
5. 补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或想法。
注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数60—80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：book v. 预订 directly adv. 直接地 flag-raising ceremony 升旗仪式
【答案】例文：
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan. We’ll meet at the airport at 2 p.m. on June 30th. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square early in the morning. It must be amazing! What about the Great Wall It’s worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. As for dinner, we’ll have the delicious food, Beijing duck. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.
Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Li Xin
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容要点及参考词汇给Bob叔叔回一封邮件，告知Bob叔叔自己对旅行的安排。
2.写作指导：邮件的开头和结尾已给出，写作时要补全正文内容，要以第一人称为主，时态多用一般将来时。邮件可分为两段式：第一段介绍具体的计划；第二段表达自己的期待。要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
6．（2022·广西桂林·中考真题）
图作文：自从2021年党中央颁布“双减”政策以来，孩子们的课余生活变得丰富多彩了。请看下面这张照片，这是大明一家在公园里度周末时照的。假如你是照片中画画的男孩大明（Daming），请以“A Happy Family Day”为题，写一篇英语短文，准备在班里作文课上展示。
写作要求：1.短文要包含照片中的主要内容，可适当发挥，增加一些细节，写成一篇连贯、通顺的文章；
2.文章80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
参考词汇：
Family members Activities
grandma, dad, mum, Daming, brother, sister take pictures/photos 照相 paint/draw a picture 画画 sit on the grassland 坐在草地上 drink/have tea 喝茶 ride a bike 骑自行车 read a book 看书 play with (toys/a pet...)玩（玩具/宠物……）
A Happy Family DayHi, everyone. I’m Daming. I feel happy because we have less homework now. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A Happy Family Day
Hi, everyone. I’m Daming. I feel happy because we have less homework now. So I went to the park with my family last Sunday. Look! This is a picture of my family in the park. My father was taking pictures. My mother was reading. My grandpa and grandma were sitting on the grass and drinking tea. The little boy who was drawing is me. My brother was riding a bike. My sister was playing with her toys. We enjoyed ourselves in the park.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和过去进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据图片，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍周末活动”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。要分别介绍每位家庭成员做了什么；
第三步，书写结语。表达“玩得很开心”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a picture of一张……的照片
②sit on the grass坐在草地上
③enjoyed ourselves玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I feel happy because we have less homework now.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②The little boy who was drawing is me.（who引导的定语从句）
（2022·天津·中考真题）
假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。
（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。
（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。
（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。
（4）人们过来帮忙。
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：被吹倒be blown down 挡住block 树枝branch 树干trunk
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear David,
How are you I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Do you have a story to tell Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How are you I’d like to share a story with you.
Last Friday, on Wang Hong’s way home, she saw a big tree was blown down by wind and it blocked the way. After Wang Hong saw it, she picked up the branches on the ground and then moved the trunk again. But the trunk was so heavy that she couldn’t move it by herself. When other people saw what she was doing, they were moved by her and came to help her. Finally, they succeeded in moving the trunk away.
I think she is a very kind person. And from this story, I learn that we should offer to help when someone needs help. It not only helps others, but also makes ourselves happy.
Do you have a story to tell Hope to hear from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
Writing 1（2022·山东·邹城市第十一中学二模）
请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。
(1)上周五放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上；
(2)李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶；
(3)乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上；
(4)老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是他应该做的；
(5)你觉得……
参考词汇：橘子皮orange peel；垃圾桶dustbin；发布post；表扬praise；谦虚的humble
要求：(1)词数：80-100词；
(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
The Story of Li Hua
Last Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school, he saw that someone was eating an orange. To his surprise, that man just threw the orange peel on the ground after he had it. Without thinking twice, Li Hua picked up the orange peel and threw it into the dustbin directly. All of the process was taken photos and posted on the Internet by a passenger. As a result, our teacher knew his good behavior and praised him because of what he did on the bus. Li Hua was very humble and said he just did what he should do. We were all impressed by his words.
As far as I’m concerned, the man who threw the orange peel around was not a good example, but luckily Li Hua set a good one for us. We are supposed to mind our behaviors and protect the environment around us all the time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的过程细节，并且要合理运用参考词汇。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示要点陈述事件发生过程；
第二步，表达自己对这件事的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result 结果
②as far as I’m concerned 就我而言
[高分句型]
①As far as I’m concerned, the man who threw the orange peel around was not a good example. (who引导的定语从句)
②All of the process was taken photos and posted on the Internet by a passenger. (一般过去时的被动语态)
Writing 2（2022·河北·石家庄市第二十八中学二模）
体育中考结束了，这对每个同学而言都是一次难忘的经历。请结合以下提示，谈谈你的收获。
提示：1.What do you learn from the experience
2.How can they help with your study
参考词汇：health; courage; strong will
要求：1.文章包括提示内容并适当发挥；
2.文章中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名；
3.词数 80 个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Recently, the P. E. exam has been over.
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【答案】例文
Recently, the P. E. exam has been over. Through this exam, I learned a lot. I used to be fat. I was tired when I ran. But for the exam, I exercise with my friends every day. After half a year’s efforts, I am very healthy now. And I’m not tired at all. I like running and sports very much. It also makes me understand that as long as I work hard, there is nothing I can’t do. And through exercise, I can sleep well every day and I can have enough energy to study the next day. My learning efficiency has also improved. In the future, no matter how busy I am, I will actively exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给英文问题提示介绍你体育中考的经历以及你的收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你从这次的经历中学到了什么；
第二步，介绍这次的经历对你的学习有什么帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②not...at all一点也不
③make sb do sth使某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It also makes me understand that as long as I work hard, there is nothing I can’t do.（that引导的宾语从句和as long as引导的条件状语从句）
②In the future, no matter how busy I am, I will actively exercise.（no matter how引导的让步状语从句）
Writing 3（2022·山东济宁·二模）
艺术陶冶情操，涵养生命。你喜欢的艺术形式是什么，有过怎样的经历，用英语写一篇短文。
注意:
1. 词数90左右, 短文开头已给出
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Art plays an important role in our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Art is an important part of our life. My favourite art is making kites.
According to my grandparents, I looked forward to flying. One year, my grandfather made a kite for me. That made me quite excited. When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true.
As I’m growing older, I will leave my parents. But I know the line is still in my parents’ hand. With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.
Art teaches us a lot. It makes our life rich and colourful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：采用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据图片内容，阐述自己最喜欢的艺术以及怎样的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述自己最喜欢的艺术形式；
第二步，阐述自己的经历；
第三步，总结艺术的魅力。
[亮点词汇]
①look forward to期盼；
②make sb adj.使某人……；
③come true实现
[高分句型]
①When I held a line to let my kite fly into the sky, I knew my dream of fliying came true.（when引导时间状语）
②With them behind me, I can fly farther and farther.（with复合结构）
Writing 4（2022·山东聊城·三模）
请根据以下提示以 “Experience” 为题介绍Jim的经历。
主要内容包括：吉姆现在和他的爸爸住在埃及（Egypt），他去过埃及的许多地方，他已经学了一点阿拉伯语（Arabic）。一周前他爸爸的公司要求他回美国工作，吉姆很高兴。
注意：1.词数：80词左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，但短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名。
3.字迹工整，语言流畅。
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【答案】范文：
Experience
Jim lives in Egypt now, because his father works there.
Jim has visited many places in Egypt. For example, he has seen the Pyramids and has visited the ancien palaces of the kings and queens of Egypt. Jim has learnt a little Arabic, and when he speaks it, he often mixes it with German, French and Chinese. But he feels really funny.
The company asked Jim’s father to return to the United States to work one week ago. Jim is very happy about this. He is counting down the days.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容，适当增加细节描写，使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍吉姆和爸爸住在埃及；
第二步，介绍吉姆在埃及的生活经历；
第三步，介绍吉姆爸爸公司要求他回美国工作的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①a little一点
②mix...with与……混合
③count down倒数
[高分句型]
①Jim lives in Egypt now, because his father works there.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②when he speaks it, he often mixes it with German, French and Chinese.（when引导的时间状语从句）
Writing 5（2022·山东临沂·二模）
童话是人类文化的瑰宝，一直深受孩子们的喜爱，你读过哪一些呢？最喜欢哪一个？请以 “My favorite story/storybook”为题，根据以下提示，把你印象最深的用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示:1. What’s the name of it
2. What’s the story about
3. Why do you like it
要求：1.语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
2.文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
My Favorite ________
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【答案】例文
My favorite story
I love reading and I have read many books. My favorite story is The Three Little Pigs.
There were three little pigs in the story. They built their own houses. The first built a straw house. The second built a wooden house. The third built a brick house. Then a wolf hit the straw house and the wooden house. But he couldn’t hit the brick house because it was very strong. At last, the three pigs killed the wolf.
This is my favorite story, because it is interesting and it teaches us to be hard-working. There are also many colorful pictures in the book.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的故事的名字；
第二步，具体阐述这个故事的内容；
第三步，最后是叙述喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① There be有
② At last最后
③ teach sb to do sth教某人做某事
[高分句型]
① But he couldn’t hit the brick house because it was very strong. （because引导原因状语从句）
② This is my favorite story, because it is interesting and it teaches us to be hard-working.（because引导原因状语从句，and连接两个并列句）
Writing 6（2022·辽宁辽阳·一模）
良好的运动习惯是生活的重要组成部分。请你根据以下内容要点提示，以“Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic”为题，写一篇短文，可以适当发挥。
1）每天早晨6: 30按时起床，运动半小时，晚饭后运动一小时左右；
2）骑自行车或步行上下学；
3）主动上体育课，积极参加课外活动；
4）身体强健，精力充沛，保持运动习惯。
要求: 开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；内容合理，要点齐全，句子及篇章结构正确连贯，书写规范；不得出现姓名校名等个人信息。
Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic
Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.
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【答案】例文
Sports Make Me Strong and Energetic
Everybody, men or women, young or old, should have a good habit of doing sports. As teenagers, we should play sports often.
In the morning, I usually get up at 6:30 on time, and do morning exercises for half an hour. After breakfast, I ride or walk to school, which is also a kind of exercise. In the school, I take an active part in PE. Sometimes we play football or volleyball, and sometimes we play basketball, table tennis or badminton. Football is my favorite sport. I also take part in some after-class activities. I have never been absent from them. In the evening after supper, I often take a walk along the street near my house for an hour either with my parents or with my friends.
I like sports, which makes me healthy, strong and energetic. So I often get the first prize in the school sports meeting. I will keep the good habit all my life.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。第二段应包含内容要点提示中的前3点，都是关于“我”平时具体的运动习惯；第三段综述运动的优点，并得出结论我们应该保持运动习惯，呼应文章主题。
2.写作指导：根据文章的标题可知，本文应该用第一人称来写作；根据内容要点提示可知，时态采用一般现在时为主。
Writing 7（2022·广东·广州市越秀区育才实验学校二模）
中国传统文化深受世界各国人们的喜爱，而广东则以岭南文化而出名，假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办岭南文化节（Lingnan Cultural Festival）活动，你美国的笔友Mike想了解本次活动的细节。请你给他回信，内容包括：
（1）时间：下周六上午；地点：学校操场；参加人员：全体师生；
（2）介绍岭南文化节的活动（至少两项），注意事项（至少一点）；
（3）邀请他通过网络观看和体验本次活动。
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，字数80词以上，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Mike,
How are you
I’m glad to hear from you. It’s known that Guangdong is a birthplace of Lingnan Culture in China.
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Hope you’ll enjoy the festival online.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
It’s known that Guangdong is a birthplace of Lingnan Culture in China. Our school is going to hold the Lingnan Culture Festival on Jun. 12, 2022, which will be held on the playground of the school. All teachers and students will take part in the activity, and some social groups will be invited to perform folk customs.
There are two major programs to hold this cultural festival: “music appreciation” and “Cantonese opera appreciation”. It is worth noting that after the wonderful Cantonese opera performance, the actors will turn over to the stage wearing opera costumes. We should pay attention to safety when participating in activities.
You can watch and experience this activity through 5G network.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，需写为书信格式；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时主要包含提示要点写清楚举办信息，在介绍活动时注意围绕文化主题自己展开描写，写作时注意不需抄写开头和结尾内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍文化节举办的时间、地点和参加人员；
第二步，具体描写文化节上的活动和注意事项；
第三步，邀请Mike通过网络观看。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in参加
② participate in参加
③ pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
① Our school is going to hold the Lingnan Culture Festival on Jun. 12, 2022, which will be held on the playground of the school. （定语从句）
② It is worth noting that after the wonderful Cantonese opera performance, the actors will turn over to the stage wearing opera costumes. （主语从句+时间状语从句）
Writing 8（2022·江苏镇江·模拟预测）
近期学校开展了“My Favorite Ancient Mythology of China”的英语演讲活动，旨在鼓励同学们通过讲述中国神话故事（如愚公移山、嫦娥奔月、后羿射日），加深对中国传统文化的理解，弘扬传统文化。请根据以下框架，写一篇英语演讲稿，简述一个你最喜欢的中国神话故事并给出理由。
My Favorite Ancient Mythology of China
the main story 1）when
2）where
3）who
4）what
5）...
the reasons why it is my favorite mythology of China
mythology 神话
注意：
（1）短文必须包括所有要点, 并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数 80—100 词；标题已给出, 不计入总词数。My Favorite Ancient Mythology of China
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【答案】[例文]
My favorite ancient mythology of China is “Chang’e Flying to the Moon”.
Long long ago, Hou Yi got a special medicine from a goddess as a reward after he shot down nine suns. Peng Meng wanted to get it when Hou Yi was not home. To stop Peng Meng, Chang’e had to take it and she flew up to the moon. Hou Yi missed her so much that he became really sad every night. One night, he found that the moon was so bright and round that he saw his wife there. He quickly laid out her favorite fruits and desserts in the garden.
I really love this ancient mythology because it shows our strong desire for family reunion and love.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己最喜欢的中国神话，包括时间、地点、人物和情节等，也要介绍为什么这是自己最喜欢的神话故事，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；采用一般现在时介绍自己喜欢的神话和原因。用一般过去时介绍神话故事；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
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