中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
03 议论文
1. 体裁解读
议论文是针对某个问题或某个事件进行分析、评论,表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。议论文三要素是论点、论据、论证。
l. 论点:即要阐述或议论的中心。
2. 论据:即支持观点的依据。
3. 论证:即通过—定的方法,比如摆事实、讲道理等证明观点。
2. 写作攻略
初中生在写议论文时要首先考虑自己的观点是什么,明确观点后要围绕观点进行论证,最后再进行总结。议论文在写作手法上以议论为主,但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。初中议论文的写作格式一般为三段式:开头、主体和结尾。一般写作步骤如下:
第一步:确定主题,引出论点;
第二步:通过摆事实、讲道理来支持自己的观点。所用的事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系在一起;
第三步:得出结论。要简明扼要、回扣全文。
注意:大部分的议论文采取总分总的议论模式,但是过渡句的使用要恰当好处,使文章衔接自然。
◆主题归纳
【常用词汇】
1. 表示观点:agree with, be in favor of, support, approve, be in agreement, be against…
2. 表示数量:a great many, a member of, thousands of, a quarter of, some, a little, a few, several…
3. 表示评价:be bad/ good for, speak highly of, be proud of/ take pride in…
4. 表示顺序:first of all, then, second, third, at last…
5. 表示并列、对比关系:and, as well as, also, besides, in addition, what’s more, on the other hand…
【常用句型】
1. I think it’s+adj.+for sb. to do sth.我想对于某人来说做某事是……的。
2. It’s good for your health to walk after meals.饭后散步对于你的健康有好处。
3. This is a fact that many people are interested in…很多人对……很感兴趣,这是一个事实。
4. It’s well known to us that…我们都知道……
5. It’s neither too big nor too small.它既不太大也不太小。
6. I agree/disagree with you. 我赞成/不赞成你的观点。
7. She not only sings well but also dances well. 她不但歌唱得好,而且舞跳得也好。
8. People have different opinions on his problem. 在这个问题上,人们有不同的观点。
9. However, each coin has two sides. 然而,任何事情都有两个方面。
典例赏析一:
(2022·内蒙古通辽·中考真题)
最近你班召开了“学生是否应该上网”为主题的班会,同学们就此话题进行了热烈的讨论。
下表为讨论结果,请根据下表写一篇短文,表述讨论结果并阐述你的观点。
Opinions Reasons
68%赞成 1. 可以从网上得到各种信息并且有利于学习。2. 可以网上购物、聊天、交朋友……
32%反对 1. 网上的信息并非都是真实的。2. 学生们沉迷于网络游戏……
你的观点 ……
要求: 1. 语言通顺,逻辑清晰,字迹工整。
2. 必须包括表格中所给的提示信息,可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
4. 词数:不少于80词。
Whether Students Should Surf the Internet
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:
Whether Students Should Surf the Internet
Recently, we held a discussion about whether students should surf the Internet. 68% of the students said that students can surf the Internet. First, we can get all kinds of information from the Internet and it is good for our study. Secondly, we can shop, chat and make friends online.
However, 32 percent of the students are against surfing the Internet. On one hand, they think not all the information on the Internet is true. On the other hand, students may be addicted to online games.
In my opinion, we should make use of the Internet to study well and get rid of the disadvantages of the Internet.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,要求就表格内容写一篇关于“学生是否应该上网”的文章。要点包括:讨论结果、赞成和反对两方的原因以及个人观点。
2.写作指导:文章应以第一、三人称,一般现在时为主,注意主谓一致问题;写作时注意按照要点分段叙述,第一段点题并介绍赞成方观点;第二段介绍反对方的观点;最后一段介绍个人观点。在写作时还要注意使用连接词来增强文章条理性。
模板① 观点态度型(一)
Many students think that _____________, because _____________
But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think, _____________, so _____________(我的看法). First of all, _____________(原因一). Secondly, _____________(原因二). Thirdly/Most important of all, _____________(原因三).
All in all/In a word, I hold the opinion that _____________(总结观点). And I hope _____________(提出愿望).
【模板范文】
Many students think that they do not need to learn Engish, because they don't plan to go abroad.
But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think that English is very important to us, so we should learn English well. First of all, in the opening times, if you want to do business with foreigners, you must use English because most of them speak and write in English. Secondly, in the world today most books are written in English. If you know much English, you can read newspapers and magazines in English. Most important of all, you can learn something more widely.
All in all, I hold the opinion that we should learn English well. And I hope that all the students can use English freely.
典例赏析二:
(2022·黑龙江牡丹江·中考真题)
随着义务教育“双减”政策的实施,学校的作业少了,课外辅导班叫停了。作为政策的亲历者,你的课余生活发生了哪些变化?你如何看待这一政策?现你校英文报刊就“双减”这一话题开设专栏,展开讨论。请根据思维导图以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一篇短文,向该栏目投稿。
提示词:the“double reduction”policy“双减”政策
要求:
1.内容全面,语言流畅,层次清晰,可适当发挥;
2.词数不少于90词,至少含有两个复合句,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly. I used to have much homework. But now I have less homework than before. I had to do homework that was boring in the past. Now I have some creative homework.
As for weekend activities, I had to take after-school classes. I used to be busy and tired. I had too much pressure. But now I have more time to take up my hobbies. On weekends I often play basketball with my friends to improve my skills. I also plan to learn to play the guitar. I read more books to develop my reading abilities. I have more time to do what I like.
All in all, I think the “double reduction” policy is good for my body and mind. It makes my life colorful.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文以第一人称行文;在介绍“双减政策”前的课余生活时用一般过去时,介绍现在的课余生活时用一般现在时;文章可分为三段式:第一段承接开头点题;第二段具体讲述课余生活的变化;最后一段讲述作者对“双减政策”的看法。在写作时要保持主谓一致性,除了要含有两个复合句之外,还要正确运用好两个时态。
模板② 观点态度型(二)
The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.
典例赏析三:
(2022·湖南娄底·中考真题)
俗话说:“技多不压身,功到自然成”。假如你是李华,中考即将结束,某英语网站委托你做一项关于你校初三学生暑期技能学习计划的问卷调查。请根据下列图表中的数据,用英语写一篇调查报告,并谈谈你的计划及看法。
要点:
学做美食 学做手工 学会游泳 学一门乐器 其他
35% 25% 20% 15% 10%
参考词汇:做传统手工make traditional handicraftsAn English website invited me to do a survey about what skills students of Grade 9 in our school will learn in the coming summer vacation. Here are the results.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
An English website invited me to do a survey about what skills students of Grade 9 in our school will learn in the coming summer vacation. Here are the results. Thirty-five percent of the students plan to learn how to cook. Twenty-five percent of the students are going to learn how to make traditional handicrafts. Twenty percent of them plan to learn swimming. Fifteen percent of them plan to learn a musical instrument. Ten percent of them plan to do other things. I’m going to be a volunteer to teach the children English in the countryside. I think we should do what we can to help people in need.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇看图作文,以“介绍你校初三学生暑期技能学习计划的问卷调查”为话题参照图表中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括图表中五项要点,并适当拓展。
2.写作指导:本文以第一、三人称为主,时态为一般将来时;写作时注意分层叙述,第一层开门见山,表达各个部分的占比情况;第二层介绍自己的观点及原因,保证文章条理清晰,语句通顺。
模板③ 说明利弊型
Nowadays, _____________ like to _____________(社会现象). About this different people have different opinions.
On the one hand, some people think _____________(优点一). Moreover _____________(优点二). But every coin has two sides. Firstly, _____________(缺点一). Besides, _____________(缺点二).
I think _____________(我的观点).
【模板范文】
Nowadays, many students like to make friends online. About this different people have different opinions.
On the one hand, some people think it's interesting to talk with friends online. So you will never feel lonely when you are alone. If you are lucky enough to make a friend from English speaking country, you can improve your English greatly. Moreover, it's pretty cool to have several foreign friends. But every coin has two sides. Firstly, only a few people have made really good friends online. Many people are cheated by the "friends". Besides, it is terrible for students to spend much time making friends and talking online.
Some people say making friends online is making trouble. I think there is something in what they say.
典例赏析四:
(2021·浙江湖州市·中考真题)
假定你是李雷。某英语杂志正在举办征文活动,请根据广告中的信息写一篇短文,用于投稿。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;词数:80—100。
ARTICLES WANTED! Being Healthy Which do you think is more important, doing exercise or eating healthy food What do you do to stay healthy Tell us what you think! Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.
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【答案】
People are paying more and more attention to staying healthy. Ways such as doing exercise, eating healthy food etc. help a lot. But I think doing exercise is more important.
For me, I used to sit at the desk for too long and seldom go outside doing some sports. As a result, I put on 5 kilos just in a year and I felt tired easily. But when I tried to take up running after school, I began to feel energetic and healthier.
Since then, I have kept the habit of taking exercise. And I find it does good to both the mind and the body.
例如2:
People may have different ways to keep healthy, such as doing exercise, eating healthy food, etc. I think eating healthily is more important.
At school, we have sports time every day, so I think we’ve got enough exercise. However, we usually have lunch hurriedly at school. So eating healthily at home is important for us. Luckily, we can enjoy delicious and healthy food cooked by our parents which also makes us feel good. As for me, I often make some vegetable salad for breakfast or even cook something I like at weekends.
I think I will eat healthily to stay strong and happy.
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据征文广告信息写短文,介绍做运动或吃健康的食物哪个更重要,告诉大家你的想法,及你如何保持健康。
2.写作指导:写作时要引出话题后先对做运动或吃健康食物中做出选择,给出自己的观点,可结合自身经历来写一些如何保持健康。人称以第一人称为主,时态根据具体的语境做出选择。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
模板④ 解决方法型
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is _____________(问题). For example, some _____________(例一); some _____________(例二); some _____________(例三)and still some _____________(例四).
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should _____________(解决方法一). For another thing, we'd better _____________(解决方法二). Because, we should _____________(解决方法三).
In my opinion, if _____________ , we will _____________.
【模板范文】
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is many students have bad eating habits. For example, some go to school without breakfast; some like to eat snacks; some always like to eat the same food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these habits are bad for our health.
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should eat all kinds of healthy foods, such as rice, fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. For another thing, we'd better have meals at the right time. Besides, we should not eat too much especially before we go to bed.
In my opinion, if we have god eating habits, we will have good health. And we can study beer.
1. 表示反对
oppose v. 反对 be against... 反对……
be opposed to反对,不赞成 object to... 反对,对……反感
disagree with不同意;不一致 on the contrary反之,正相反
2. 表示赞同
support v. 支持 stand by支持
in favour of 有利于;赞成,支持 agree v. 同意
3. 表示对比
on one hand/side 一方面
on the other hand/side 另一方面
4. 表示递进
further more 进一步 in addition此外
besides 除此之外
5. 表示顺序
last/finally adv. 最后 first of all 首先
what's more而且 the last point 最后一点
last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
6. 表示转折
yet adv. 然而 however adv. 可是,然而
in all 总的说来 in a word 简而言之
in short 总之
8. 其他
nowadays adv. 现在 discussion n. 讨论
argument n. 争论 as follows 如下
mental health 心理健康 establish v. 创建
limited adj. 有限的 reduce stress减压
in the opening times在开放时代
take a series of effective measures 采取一系列有效措施
【夺人眼球篇首句】
1. Nowadays, there is a wide-spread concern over…
现今,……引起了人们的广泛关注。
2. Nowadays, people are paying a lot more attention to…
如今,人们把更多的注意力放在……上。
3. It is universally acknowledged that... 众所周知的是……
4. It's commonly/generally believed that... 人们普遍认为……
5. Recently, sb. has/there is a discussion about…
近来,(某人)就……展开了一次讨论。
6. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
大体上,有以下几方面优点。
7. Recently, the students of my class had a discussion about whether Grade Two students should go to school in the evening. 近来,我们班针对二年级的学生是否应该夜间上课展开了讨论。
【亮点出彩篇中句】
1. People have different opinions on this problem.
在这个问题上人们有不同的观点。
2. It has to be noticed that... 需要注意的是……
3. As to me, I am not in favour of this point of view.
对我来说,我不赞成这种观点。
4. I hold an opinion that... 我认为……
5. Ithink it harmful to... 我认为……是有害的。
6. There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问的是……
7. There is no denying that... 不可否认的是……
8. Compared to/In comparison with..., ... are more... 与……相比,……更……
9. Unlike A, B... 不像A一样,B………
10. It's good/beneficial for sb.to do...
对某人来讲做……是有好处的/有益处的。
11. What's more, everything has its own two sides.
而且,任何事情都有两个方面。
12. What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是……
13. Further, we hold the opinion that... 还有,我们的意见是……
14. I can't agree with their opinions for the reasons below.
我不同意他们的观点,原因如下。
15. My argument/advice for this problem goes as follows.
针对这一问题,我的观点/建议如下。
16. I can't entirely agree with the idea that... I believe...
我不能完全同意……的观点。我认为……
17. They can ask their teachers and parents for advice on how to solve problems.
他们可以向他们的老师和家长寻求解决这些问题的建议
18. However, unlike the former students, some others think they should have their own time to study.
然而,与前面这些学生观点不同的其他一些学生认为,他们应该拥有自己的学习时间。
19. There is no doubt that it is harmful if a person works without rest.
毫无疑问一个人只工作不休息的话是有害的。
20. Just as the saying goes, "A smile can make you ten years younger."
正如俗语所讲:"笑一笑,十年少。"
【韵味无穷结尾句】
1. From above, we can predict that…
从以上情况,我们可以预测……
2. I will conclude by saying... 总结一下就是说……
3. Therefore, we have the reason to believe that... 因此,我们有理由相信……
4. As a student, we should face all the possible difficulties in our life positively.
作为学生,我们应该乐观地面对生活中所有可能存在的困难。
5. I agree with the later. I think we should develop our own self-study habit.
我同意后者。我认为我们应该培养自主学习的习惯。
6. From my point of view, our life would be better if we learned how to reduce stress.
我认为,如果我们学会了如何减压,我们的生活会更好。
(一)(2022·四川内江·中考真题)
近年来中学生身体健康越来越受到重视。假定你是李华,你校英语校报正在开展主题为“我运动,我健康”的征文比赛。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向校报投稿。
内容包括:
1.你的运动方式(两种):
2.你对运动的看法:
(1)增强体质;
(2)缓解压力;
(3)……。
注意:
1.所写内容应包括以上要点,内容连贯,并进行合理拓展;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.词数100左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class. As for me, I think highly of jogging because it’s good for health. I often jog in the playground for half an hour. Another sports that I like is playing football. I often play it with my friends after school. It is very interesting.
There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us. We can not only build up our body and keep us healthy and strong. What’s more, when we feel stressed, we can do some sports to relax ourselves. The most important is that we can make friends when we do sports. I met my best friend when I once played football in the playground.
Let’s do more sports. In this way, we can be healthy and happy every day.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文主要是根据题干中的提示要点介绍自己的运动方式以及对运动的看法,可适当增加细节。
2.写作要点:本文以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主。第一段主要介绍自己的运动方式;第二段讲述对运动的看法;第三段号召大家多运动。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(二)(2022·内蒙古赤峰·中考真题)
近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化,取得了很多世界瞩目的成就,例如航空航天技术的一步步突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两届奥运会的成功举办……
某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了,我的国!” 为主题的征文活动。请你以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。
要求:
1. 选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述,并写出你的感受;
2. 书写规范,要点齐全,条理清晰,可合理发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名,否则不予赋分。
参考词汇:aerospace industry 航空航天工业;spaceship 宇宙飞船;develop hybrid rice 培育杂交水稻;Beijing 2008 Olympics 北京2008奥运会;Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics 北京2022冬奥会
China makes me feel surprised
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China makes me feel surprised
In recent years, great changes have taken place in China and many achievements have attracted the attention of the world. For example, two Olympic Games were held successfully. It really surprised me. China successfully hosted the 2008 Summer Olympic Games and once again introduced China to the world. China has developed rapidly since then. The Winter Olympic Games were successfully held this year. And many Chinese athletes won gold medals. As a Chinese, I am very proud. Also I feel excited for the strength of the motherland.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。以“China makes me feel surprised”为题目,选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述,并写出你的感受。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,一般过去时为辅。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时选择一个中国取得的成就进行简单叙述,并写出你的感受。注意语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
(三)(2022·山东日照·中考真题)
为响应教育部加强中小学劳动教育的要求,培养学生爱劳动的好习惯,你校学生会举行了主题为“Do housework and develop ourselves”的征文比赛。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇知文参加这次征文活动。
1.劳动内容(做饭、洗衣服……);
2.你的收获。
注意:
1.词数:90左右;
2.根据提示要点表述,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Do housework and develop ourselves
Do you often do housework I often
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Do housework and develop ourselves
Do you often do housework I often clean the room, sweet the floor, fold the clothes and take out the rubbish. My parents are very busy with work and housework on weekdays, so I usually do some housework on weekends to let them have a rest.
Last Sunday, I found my bedroom was in a mess, so I decided to do the cleaning. I made my bed, washed my sports clothes. And then I made a delicious lunch for my parents. How happy they were!
From the experience, I realized that I am old enough to look after myself. And doing the housework is a good way to exercise, and it can also develop our independence.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“做家务,培养自己”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式:第一段介绍自己所做的家务;第二段介绍自己做家务的一段经历;最后表达自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(四)(2022·湖南永州·中考真题)
为积极响应落实国家“双减”政策,你校英语老师研发了多种形式的英语作业,为学生减负,为教学增效。英语组正在举办题为“My favorite English homework”的征文活动。请根据以下表中信息,写一篇短文投稿。
要求:1) 文中不得出现真实人名,校名和地名;2) 语言通顺,表达正确;
3) 至少三个理由:4) 词数:80词左右。
My favorite English homework Reasons Wishes/Suggestions
1. the whole book reading整本书阅读 2. play show 话剧表演 3. king of words单词王 4. collection of translation of public places搜集公共场所的英语译文 5. movie dubbing 电影配音 6. volunteer guide for foreigners 给老外当导游 …… 1. develop/raise reading interest, reading habit… 2. improve reading ability, thinking ability, language ability, writing ability, communication ability... 3. build confidence 树立自信 4. enlarge vocabulary 扩大词汇 5. learn by practice 6. enrich knowledge and experience 7. know about western culture 8. tell Chinese good stories 9. spread Chinese traditional and excellent culture ......
参考词汇:
“双减”政策“Double Reduction” policy;减轻学生负担release students’ burden;提升教学效果improve teaching quality
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【答案】例文
My favorite English homework
In response to the implementation of “Double Reduction” policy, our English teacher has developed various forms of English homework to release students’ burden and improve teaching quality. Among them, I like volunteer guide for foreigners best. It not only helped me improve my spoken English, but also provides a chance for me to spread Chinese traditional and excellent culture to foreigners. What’s more, I become more confident than before.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us like singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develops.
I hope we will have more creative English homework in the future.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My favorite English homework”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段介绍“双减”政策下的新型英语作业,自己最喜欢哪项以及原因;第二段表明自己对英语作业的形式的建议;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误
(五)(2022·江苏常州·中考真题)
某中学生英文报Your Voice栏目中有如下征文通知,请你写篇英语文章投稿,谈谈你的想法。
It’s not very easy for teenagers to make true friends. Some of them make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to.Share your ideas about the topic. 1. Is it wise to follow suit in order to make friends 2. How can teenagers make true friends Don’t forget to support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右;文章的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
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I want to share my ideas about the topic.
In my opinion, making friends by following suit is not wise. Because everyone is an individual, with his own interests and personality. So don’t follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do.
We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness. To make true friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you will get a smile in return. You can make friends with those who share the same interest with you or those who are totally different from you. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”为话题,结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一、第二人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风是否是明智的;第三段介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式:第一段介绍国庆节的由来;第二段介绍自己和父母的打算;最后一段表达对节日活动的期待。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(六)(2022·北京·中考真题)
某英文网站正在开展以“提升效率”为主题的征文活动。假定你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在学习或生活中是如何提升效率的,取得了什么效果。
提示词语:plan, task, attention, make use of, progress
提示问题:How do you increase your efficiency(效率)
What have you achieved
High efficiency is important for a busy student. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
High efficiency is important for a busy student. It is necessary for everyone to learn how to increase efficiency.
I have tried many ways to increase my efficiency since I was a middle school student. Before the beginning of a day, I always think about my goals and make a list of things I need to do. Then, I organize my to-do list to make an effective plan for the day. I always spend time doing important tasks first and make good use of the rest of the time.
By managing my time well, I have made progress. I usually finish my homework on time and still have time to relax myself. High efficiency and time management have helped me be successful in various areas of my life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“提升效率”为主题,结合提示问题进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己是如何提高效率的以及取得了什么成就;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(七)(2022·海南·中考真题)
为创造美好的生活,青少年在成长的过程中应不断学习新的生活技能(如烹饪、种植、救护方法……)。请结合下列提示和自身的需求,以“Little Life Skills Are a Big Help”为题写一篇短文,在英语课堂上分享。
提示:
1. What life skill do you want to learn
2. Why do you want to learn this skill
3. How do you learn this skill
要求:1.内容须涵盖所有要点;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名;
4. 80词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Little Life Skills Are a Big Help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new skills...
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Little Life Skills Are a Big Help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new skills. As for me, I would like to choose cooking, which is a basic skill in our daily life. It’s wonderful to create my own dishes. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish.
In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a good idea to learn from the cooking videos online.
Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文以“Little Life Skills Are a Big Help”为题,并结合题干中的三个问题,描述自己想要学习的生活技能,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和一般将来时为主,人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍自己想要学习什么样的生活技能以及为什么要学习这项技能;第二段描述如何学习这个技能;最后一段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(八)(2022·内蒙古包头·中考真题)
假定你是李华,下周你的英国朋友Alan要来北京游玩,并发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封邮件。
Hi, Next week I’ll be with you in Beijing. I can’t wait! We could do lots of exciting things together. And now I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me I always take lots of things in my bag and can’t find what I really want! Please tell me how I could pack. Since I am interested in history and culture of China, I want to know where we will go. I’d like to get you some souvenirs from where I live. What would you like me to get you I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Alan
Make a list
(T-shirts, sunglasses…)
Place small bags inside big bags…
Places of interest
(the Palace Museum, the Great Wall…)
Postcards, books…
参考词汇:pack v. 打包 souvenir n. 纪念品
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Hi Alan,I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’m looking forward to meeting you!
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Hi Alan,
I’m so happy to get your email saying that you’re coming to visit us next week. Since you are going on a long flight, I suggest you make a list of things you take. It is a bit hot in summer here. So you can take T-shirts and sunglasses with you. Do you hate that feeling when you can’t find what you’re looking for in your bag Me too! Placing small bags inside big bags is the best solution.
I think it’s a good idea to go to some places of interest together, such as the Palace Museum and the Great Wall. You will learn a lot about Chinese culture and history. As for the souvenir, I like collecting postcards and books from different places. Do you have any postcards of Tower Bridge That would suit me fine. Thanks!
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目属于邮件写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求讲述去北京游玩需要携带的东西,打包的方式,可以参观的地方以及建议带的纪念品。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般将来时为主,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主,讲述旅行需要携带的东西,打包的建议,在北京可以参观的地方,从英国带到中国的纪念品,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
(九)(2022·广西河池·中考真题)
今年4月,教育部颁发了《义务教育劳动课程标准(2022年版)》。从2022年秋季学期起,多种劳动技能将纳入中小学课程,引发同学们的热议和关注。假如你是李华,请根据下面内容对即将开设的劳动课(labor classes)写一封信给校长,提出你的想法及建议。
1.感觉非常高兴及兴奋。从中可以学到一些劳动技能,学会照顾自己(learn some labor skills, look after)。
2.希望学校能提供给每班劳动课的场地。每周开课两节。由生活经验丰富的老师教授同学们如何做饭、种菜……(补充两个内容)(provide ... for, with rich experience, teach)。
3.希望学校在期末举行各种劳动技能比赛;邀请家长们参观并分享劳动课成果(at the end of, hold, labor achievements)。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名;
2.内容需包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整,语言精练,表达准确,条理清晰;
4.词数100左右。(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。)
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are going to have labor classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing to you to share my ideas about the coming labor classes.
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That’s all my opinions. We’re looking forward to the classes. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear headmaster,
My name is Li Hua. I’m in Class 6, Grade 8. It is said that we are going to have labor classes next term. All my classmates are interested in it. I’m writing to you to share my ideas about the coming labor classes.
I feel very happy and excited. I think we can learn some labor skills and learn to look after ourselves. I hope the school can provide a place for each class to work. The school can have two classes a week. The teachers with rich experience teach students how to cook, grow vegetables, wash clothes, clean the house and other simple housework. I also hope that the school can hold all kinds of labor skills competition at the end of the term and invite parents to visit and share labor achievements.
That’s all my opinions. We’re looking forward to the classes. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目属于书信类写作。书信的第一段和第三段已给出,第二段则需要包含题目中所给的三个要点,缺一不可。
2.写作指导:本文应使用第一人称书写;时态采用一般现在时;在展开写第二段的时候需要用到括号中的所给内容,并在第二点中进行适当拓展。写作过程中需体现词汇及句式的多样性,同时保证叙述过程条理清晰。
(十)(2022·湖南益阳·中考真题)
你们班将举办“好习惯益终身”的主题班会,请你写一篇发言稿,谈谈中学生要培养哪些良好的生活和学习习惯。
内容包括:
早睡早起,锻炼身体;认真听讲,按时完成作业;每晚阅读……
要求:
1.内容可适当发挥,使行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校名称等信息;
3.词数60﹣80。开头结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: habit take exercise finish
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
As students, we can also choose good living habits. In daily life, we should insist on exercise, don’t stay up late and get enough sleep. We should insist on eating breakfast, more fruit and vegetables, and less junk food. At home, we should be considerate of our parents and do more housework. As students, we should also choose good study habits. We must listen carefully and take notes frequently in class. We must finish our homework on time and read widely. We should also insist on reading every night. Finally, we should develop good healthy habits and keep the classroom and bedroom clean. We should wash our hands before eating and pay attention to the prevention and control of infectious diseases.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇发言稿,要求介绍中学生要培养哪些学习和生活习惯。写作要点题目已经给出,要求从生活方面,如日常作息、饮食习惯等,以及学习方面,如及时完成作业、坚持阅读等介绍好的习惯。
2.写作指导:文章以第一人称、一般现在时为主,注意主谓一致问题;写作时按要点分层次叙述,首先介绍生活习惯,其次学习习惯,最后再适当补充一些其他习惯。写作时注意连接词的运用,如First、Finally等,用以增强文章的条理性。
(十一)(2022·广西·中考真题)
假设你是李雷,是建华中学一名九年级学生。市里将举行一年一度的中学生英语演讲比赛,今年演讲题目为“My Dream”。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语演讲稿为此做准备。
提示:
1. What do you want to be
2. Why do you want to be a/an …
3. How are you going to be a /an …
要求:
1. 需包含上述三个要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数;
4. 文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名,校名或地名。
My Dream
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
My Dream
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be here to share my dream with you. I want to be an English teacher, and I am going to work and live in the city of Beijing.
First, English is becoming more and more useful and important and being an English teacher is exciting, too. If I am an English teacher, I can help my students with their English study. Second, I like being with children because it makes me feel young. Last, Beijing is the capital of China. I can meet many English speakers and I can improve my English by communicating with them.
To make my dream come true, I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible. I will do more listening in the morning. I’m sure I’ll love my job and students and be a friend of them.
No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.
Thank you.
【解析】
1. 题干解读:本文属于演讲稿写作,要求以“My dream”为题,根据提示的三个要点进行讲述,说明你的未来职业,选择这一职业的缘由以及如何为这一职业去奋斗。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来写,时态以一般现在时及一般将来时为主。写作时第一段承接短文开头,并说明自己的未来职业选择是什么;第二段依次说明选择这一职业的理由,可列举三四个原因,运用表示次序的衔接词进行衔接,使内容表达更有条理性;第三段指出要实现这一职业的梦想的具体做法,时态采用一般将来时,可列举两到三条做法;第四段总结并结尾;第五段致谢。
Writing 1(2022·山东菏泽·三模)
自新冠病毒(C0VID-19)在全世界传播蔓延以来,健康成了一个重要的话题。请你以“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇短文,说说你的看法和建议。
要点:(1)我们应该多吃水果和蔬菜;
(2)我们应该锻炼身体,保证睡眠;
(3)出门必须戴口罩(mask),回家勤洗手。
要求:(1)参考要点内容,可适当发挥不抗辩。
(2)语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
(3)文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4)词数:不少于80词(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important thing in our lives, especially with the COVID-19 spreading.
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【答案】例文
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important thing in our lives, especially with the COVID-19 spreading.
First of all, we should eat more fruits and vegetables to ensure a balanced nutrition. Only in this way can we improve our physical strength.
Secondly, we should take more exercise and do more mit to at least three hours of exercise a week. At the same time, you should pay attention to sleep, sleep a full 8 hours a day.
Finally, it is necessary to wear masks when we go out and wash our hands frequently.
I hope we all stay healthy and safe.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以“How to keep healthy”为题介绍如何在疫情的情况下保持健康,添加适当细节,使文章内容更加丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题说明文章主题是介绍如何保持健康;
第二步,按照题目所给内容介绍保持健康的方法;
第三步,提出自己的希望,希望所有人都保持健康和安全。
[亮点词汇]
①at least至少
②At the same time同时
③pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Finally, it is necessary to wear masks when we go out and wash our hands frequently.(it作形式主语,动词不定式作真正的主语,由when引导的时间状语从句)
②Commit to at least three hours of exercise a week.(祈使句)
③Only in this way can we improve our physical strength.(倒装句)
Writing 2(2022·江苏·泰州中学附属初中三模)
有人如此比喻:散文是海水,诗是浓缩的咸卤,格言是结晶的盐粒。格言给人们以启迪、指导、帮助和教诲,帮助人们完成优秀人格的自我塑造,顺利地度过人生的荒海。
请在下列格言中任选一句自己喜爱的格言,并根据要求写一篇短文。
1、Actions speak louder than words. 行动比语言更响亮。
2、Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
3、Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。
Tips:
1、What’s your understanding of the motto
2、Why do you like it best
3、Who or What comes to your mood first when you read it Why
4、How does it influence you
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【答案】例文
My favourite motto is Where there is a will, there is a way.
I think that one of the most important things to success is a firm resolution. If a man doesn’t have a strong will to win the final victory, he will never succeed in his life. Whenever I see this motto, I think of many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give up. Later, I made a resolution to improve my English. I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
From this thing, I really understand this motto. There is nothing difficult in the world. If you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end. So I will never give up easily.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求任选一句自己喜爱的格言,并根据要求写一篇短文。学生不要遗漏提示中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步,首先引出话题,写出自己喜爱的格言;
第二步,具体阐述如何理解格言、为什么喜欢这个格言、它能让你想起的人或事等;
第三步,讲述这个格言对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①think of想起
②be able to do sth.能够做某事
③give up放弃
④as much as possible尽可能
[高分句型]
①I think that one of the most important things to success is a firm resolution.(宾语从句)
②If a man doesn’t have a strong will to win the final victory, he will never succeed in his life. (if 引导的条件状语从句)
③When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English.(When引导的时间状语从句)
Writing 3(2022·广东·广州实验中学二模)
你根据如表提示,用英语写一篇短文向校刊投稿,阐述书写的重要性。
你的观点 在电脑普及时代,书写依然重要
你的理由 (1)书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分,所以练习书写有助于传承文化;
(2)每个人的字迹都有个人意义,例如手写信更能表达情感;
(3)……(再自拟至少一个理由加以阐述)
[参考词汇] handwriting 书法;字迹;书写(不可数名词);inherit 传承(及物动词)The importance of handwriting
Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to their handwriting.
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【答案】One possible version:
The importance of handwriting
Nowadays many Chinese students no longer pay much attention to handwriting. They believe their keyboards can do the work. However, I think that handwriting is still important.
First of all, handwriting is an important part in traditional Chinese culture. It’s important to pass on the traditional culture to practice writing Chinese characters. Good handwriting can make us proud as a Chinese and make us love our country further. Next, there’s a certain meaning in one’s handwriting. For example, some ways of writing can show feelings in writing letters. Also, writing Chinese characters carefully can help you form a habit of learning Chinese well. At last, a good handwriting can help you get good grades in exams from your excellent look of papers.
All in all, it’s everyone’s duty to write characters well and take action to be good at writing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明自己的观点;
第二步,介绍自己认为书写仍然重要的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②pass on 传递
③at last 最后
[高分句型]
①I think that handwriting is still important(that引导宾语从句)
②It’s important to pass on the traditional culture to practice writing Chinese characters(动词不定式作主语)
Writing 4(2022·江苏镇江·模拟预测)
假如你是李华,你校心理辅导中心将提供两种不同的交流方式,你校网站的英文栏目邀请你写一篇文章。请根据提供的信息,谈谈你更喜欢的其中一种交流方式及理由,并另外提供1—2种合理的放松方式。
Face-to-face communication ●from 8 a.m. to 6 p.m. every day ●face-to-face communication with experienced experts (专家) ● offer a report with the experts’ advice Online communication ● from 5 p.m. to 9 p.m. on the weekend ●online communication with 5 students of your age ● no record of your personal information
要求∶
1. 所写内容必须包括一种你喜欢的交流方式及理由;
2. 提供1—2种合理的放松方式;
3. 文章不少于90词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。Our school psychological service has been on the way. I think if I have problems, I prefer
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【答案】例文:
Our school psychological service has been on the way. I think if I have problems, I prefer the face-to-face communication,
The face-to-face communication service is from 8 a.m. to 6 p.m. There I can have a face-to-face communication with experienced experts. They may be good at solving teenage problems. Moreover, I can receive a report with their advice which is also be helpful. The flexible timetable and experienced experts make me feel it is a wiser choice to have the face-to-face communication.
As a Grade 9 student, if you feel stressed in daily life, I think you can also listen to music to relax yourself. The soft music will be a great way to make you both happy and comfortable.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据提供的信息,自主选择你更喜欢的一种交流方式,并阐述你喜欢这种方式的原因,同时需要额外补充合理的放松方式。
2.写作指导:本文人称采用第一人称,时态使用一般现在时。内容上包含:喜欢的沟通方式(任选一个),该沟通方式的基本信息(根据表格撰写),喜欢这种沟通方式的原因,合理的放松方式(1—2种即可)。结构上可以采用三段式结构,第一段介绍自己喜欢的方式,第二段描述该沟通方式的基本信息及喜欢该方式的原因,第三段补充合理的放松方式。注意段与段之间的衔接,保证文章的逻辑性。
Writing 5(2022·河北·衡水滨湖新区志臻中学一模)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你正参加与法国巴黎友好校以“畅想奥运盛事”为主题的线上英语交流活动。友好校的学生Chris得知2022年北京冬奥会的主题口号(official motto) 是“一起向未来”,认为这个口号非常棒。他请你进一步谈谈看法。
内容包括:
1. 向Chris表示感谢并认同他的看法;
2. 你对口号的理解(体现奥运精神、构建人类命运共同体);
3. 对巴黎2024年奥运会筹备工作表达祝愿。
要求:1.内容完整,语法正确,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2.100词左右;
3.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
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【答案】范文
Hi, Chris, I want to express my most sincere appreciation to you. I totally agree with your opinion.
We hope to tell the world several meanings by the official motto of the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics. First, it is connected with the core values of the Olympics. It also shows China’s promise to overcome global challenges as a community with a shared future for mankind. Second, China is inviting the world to join hands. COVID-19 brings us more global challenges, so only by helping each other can we build a beautiful future.
In the end, I want to send my best wishes to the preparations for the Paris 2024 Olympic Games.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求根据内容提示,谈谈对北京冬奥会的主题口号的看法,并对巴黎2024年奥运会筹备工作表达祝愿。要包含所有要点,并适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文时态是一般现在时,主要采用第一和第三人称书写。写作时,首先向Chris表示感谢并认同他的看法;然后谈谈对口号的理解;最后对巴黎2024年奥运会筹备工作表达祝愿。在写作时,应该注意符合题意,可适当补充细节使文章连贯,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
Writing 6(2022·浙江·温州市第二中学三模)
生活中,一些小习惯,却拥有着无穷的力量。长期坚持好的习惯,足以改变你的一生。请你参考以下图片,以“A Tiny Habit Changes My Life”为题写一篇英语短文,分享坚持一个好习惯给你带来的变化以及你对此的感受。
要求:①不能出现真实的个人身份信息;
②词数:110词左右
A Tiny Habit Changes My Life
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【答案】例文
A Tiny Habit Changes My Life
There’s a lot of power in the little habits of life. Good habits can change your life over time. I have a good habit of reading.
I didn’t like reading before. But now I insist on reading for an hour every day. It changed me a lot. I’m very organized in everything I do, because I learned how to deal with things in books. I’m also more patient than before. Through reading, I become better and better.
I think reading is important in the whole life for people. It has many advantages. It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent. We can learn more about the world by reading. Besides, it can help us develop the way of thinking. Also, it can make our life more colorful.
Keeping reading every day is a good habit. Let’s start reading now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇议论文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,参考以下图片,以“A Tiny Habit Changes My Life”为题写一篇英语短文,分享坚持一个好习惯给你带来的变化以及你对此的感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步,第一段开篇点题,根据图片内容,介绍阅读是我的爱好;
第二步,说明一下通过阅读,我有什么改变;
第三步,阐述一下,我对阅读的感受;
第四步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①insist on坚持
②deal with处理
③not only...but also不但……而且
[高分句型]
①I think reading is important in the whole life for people. (I think接宾语从句。)
②It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent. (not only...but also不但……而且,连接并列谓语。)
Writing 7(2022·广东·深圳市南山外国语学校(集团)二模)
你校学生会英语俱乐部将举行题为 “初中学生是否应该承担家务”的演讲比赛活动。现请你拟写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容需包括:
1.赞成与反对的声音;
2.你对该问题的看法(观点;理由至少列出两条);
3.你的结论。
要求:1. 80 词以上,短文的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;
3.可适当增加细节以使全文连贯。
参考词汇:家务活 household chores
Good morning, boys and girls,
Recently the topic of doing household chores has been brought to public attention.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】One possible version:
Boys and girls,
Recently the topic of doing household chores has been brought to public attention. Some believe that doing household chores is a waste of time and they’ll have less time for homework. Others hold the opposite view.
As for me, I am for the opinion that students should do household chores. This can be expressed as follows.
On the one hand, it’s obvious that doing household chores like washing dishes and watering the flowers can develop our respect and love for hardworking spirits. On the other hand, no one can deny that chores like cooking, mopping or walking the dog can form good habits, gain working experience and learn time management skills.
To sum up, it’s high time we should take our responsibility and offer helping hands towards the whole family.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文一篇议论文,为演讲稿。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容,适当增加细节描写。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍赞成与反对的声音;
第二步,具体阐述你对该问题的看法;
第三步,介绍你的结论。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②On the one hand...on the other hand一方面……,另一方面……
③to sum up总之
[高分句型]
①Some believe that doing household chores is a waste of time.(that引导的宾语从句)
②I am for the opinion that students should do household chores.(that引导的同位语从句)
Writing 8(2022·湖北武汉·二模)
你校近期将举行有关“如何做一个新时代的优秀中学生”演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请你为之准备一篇英语演讲稿。
内容要点如下:
1. 努力读书,关心时事;
2. 积极锻炼,保持健康;
3. 保护自然,从小事做起;
4. 积极参加活动,培养独立能力;
5. 补充一两点有关信息和个人想法。
注意:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数:60-80;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译。
参考词汇:healthy adj. 健康的 independent adj. 独立的 nature n. 自然
Good morning, my dear teachers and fellow students. My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Good morning, my dear teachers and fellow students. My name is Li Hua. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First of all, studying hard to get knowledge and skills is our students’ main task. Besides, we are supposed to care about what’s happening all over the world. At the same time, we should exercise a lot to stay healthy. As we all know, protecting nature is our duty, so we need to start from small things. Last but not least, we are expected to take an active part in activities to develop our independent abilities.
All in all, we should try our best to improve ourselves. Thank you for listening.
【详解】1.题干解析:题目要求写一篇60词到80词的英语演讲稿介绍如何做一个新时代的优秀中学生。题目给出的内容要点需要全部包括在内,文章开头已给出,要注意上下文衔接。
2.写作指导:本文时态主要使用一般现在时,人称使用第一人称。文章可以分为三段,第一段原文已给出,第二段介绍具体如何成为一个优秀的新时代中学生,第三段总结自己的想法,适当使用短语和句型,增加文章亮点,不要出现单词和语法错误。
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