中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
04 说明文
题材分析:
说明文是中考书面表达题中常见的写作形式。在初中阶段,说明文主要要求考生将活动、人物、地点等要素进行清楚的描述,考查考生的观察能力和将图表或所给提示转化为完整文字信息的能力。
指点迷津:
一审 要想做到文章切题、要点齐全,审题至关重要。下笔之前要将所给的材料看清楚,读懂材料所要表达的内容或情景。
二定 一定要点:根据所给材料要点,定出中心句。注意适当发挥,避免逐字逐句翻译。二定方法:常用的说明方法有举例法、过程分析法、分类法、因果分析法、比较法、细节法等。要根据说明的对象、目的来选择最佳的说明方法。
三理 理顺各中心句之间的关系,排列好各中心句的顺序。说明文常用的结构安排顺序有以下三种:时间顺序、空间顾序和逻辑顺序。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚、脉络明晰。
四查 查写作要点,查段落层次,查时态语态,查用词、拼写、标点等。通过检查,可以避免一些不必要的错误,使文章趋于完美。
说明文主要包括:人物说明文、事物说明文及方式、方法类说明文
(一)人物说明文
◆写作要求
人物说明文一般包括人物的出生年月、主要经历、事迹成就、影响和评价等。首先要全面了解这个人,然后根据需要选取写作素材,简明扼要又重点突出地去介绍,力求真实准确,恰如其分。人物介绍一般都是从外形到性格,或从一般经历到创造性的贡献,在最后常有结论性的评语。
写人物说明文一般包括以下几点:
1. 出生年月;2. 主要经历;3. 事迹成就;4. 影响、评价。
叙述方法:一般按照时间顺序,从外形到性格,从一般经历到创造性的贡献,最后常有结论性的评语。
语言简洁生动:说明文的目的是向读者介绍他们不了解、不熟悉的人物、事理等,因此说明文的语言要浅显、简洁、生动。
时态语态:说明文常用一般现在时。如果说明的是人物、事物过去或将来的情况,则要用过去或将来的有关时态。另外,由于说明文重点放在被说明的人物、事物上,故有些说明文被动语态的使用频率相对比较高。
【常用词汇】
1. 表示外貌特征:beautiful, big nose, black eyes, fat, good-looking, handsome, healthy, near-sighted, ordinary-looking, pretty, short, strong, tall, thin, with a big smile, white-haired, curly/ straight hair, medium height…
2. 表示性格特点:absent-minded, attractive, bad-tempered, bright, confident, friendly, generous, humorous, kind, kind-hearted, lazy, naughty, smart, warm-hearted, wise, outgoing, quiet…
3. 表示兴趣爱好:be good at, be interested in, be fond of, be pleased with, enjoy doing, expect to do, look forward to doing sth, put one’s heart into…
4. 表示经历事迹:become a member of the …, concentrate on doing sth, devote oneself to, encourage sb to do sth, fight for, have a good way of doing sth, make up one’s mind to do sth, try one’s best to do sth…
5. 表示他人评价:a model …, be considered as, be famous / known as, be regarded as, make great contributions to our country, set a good example to all of us…
【常用句型】
1. He/ She is really… 他/她真的是……
2. He/ She looks like… 他/她看上去像……
3. He used to be/ have … 他过去常常……
4. Her favourite… is… 她最喜欢的……是……
5. She is good at… 她擅长……
典例赏析一:
2022北京冬奥会赛场上,中国天才少女谷爱凌因超人的运动天赋、乐观的个性和不断挑战自我的形象,成功收获了众多粉丝的喜爱。谷爱凌曾直言,天分仅仅是一部分,而大部分是努力以及自律的生活方式。请你根据下面的表格,介绍一下这位人气偶像,并谈谈你从她身上学到了什么。
Name Eileen Gu
Birth September 3rd, 2003
Family father (American), mother (Chinese)
Hobby horse riding, piano, skiing
Experience and achievement(成就) 3 years old—start skiing 9 years old—become a champion (冠军) the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics—two gold medals (金牌)
提示: 1.What do you know about Eileen Gu
2.What can you learn from her
要求:1. 短文须包括表格中所给的全部信息和提示中的两项要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3. 词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:talent天赋 self-discipline自律My idol(偶像) is Eileen Gu. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
My idol(偶像) is Eileen Gu. Can you tell us something about her Do you want to know something more about her (引出人物)
Now I introduce her to you .She was born on September 3, 2003. She is 1.75 meters tall. Her father is an American person. Her mother is a Chinese person. She has many hobbies, such as horse riding, piano, skiing and so on. She studied skiing at the age of three and soon showed her talent. When she was 9 years old, she became a champion. In the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, she won two gold medals and one silver medal. She will enter Stanford University in the fall of 2022. (介绍人物基本信息及主要事迹)
I think Gu Ailing’s achievements and talents are only part of it. Most of them are hard training and self-discipline lifestyle. She is self-conscious and self disciplined. Ambition and love are the wings of Gu Ailing’s success.(作出评价)
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,要求根据所给英文提示介绍中国天才少女谷爱凌,包括她的生日、家庭、爱好以及经历和成就。
写作指导:本文人称以第三人称为主;时态采用一般现在时为主,用过去时描述经历。同时注意文章的连贯性,保证条理清晰。
(二)事物说明文
◆写作要求
事物说明文是以介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等方面的特征。说明的目的是给读者提供知识,使之理解客观世界,掌握解决问题的方法。对中学生而言,事物说明文的出题形式为文字、图标、图表、文体则可见于短文、书信、便条、日记等。写说事物明文必须注意事实准确,表达清晰,条理清楚,层次分明,语言简练,用词准确。
要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点:
1. 要善于抓住事物的特征
介绍事物,一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征,就是这一事物区别与其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征,才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说的明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。
2. 要遵循一定的顺序
介绍一件事物,目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等,因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物:
(1)时间顺序,即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。
(2)空间顺序,即按事物空间位置的顺序,由上至下,由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。
(3)逻辑顺序,即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明,如由概括到具体,由整体到部分,由现象到本质,由表及里,由原因到结果,由主要到次要,由特点到用途等。
3. 运用恰当的语言
介绍事物,文字要力求简洁、明白、准确。除讲究语言平实准确的前提下,我们还可以运用描写的方法,来增添文章的可读性。
◆注意事项
事物说明文的主要特点:一是知识性和科学性,二是应用性和解说性,三是行文的条理性。写这类文章宜少用描写,要用具体翔实的材料说明问题,而不要抽象、空洞的讨论。语言要简洁、准确、条理要清楚。讨论问题是要集中,切忌面面俱到。说明文的时态常用一般现在时,语态常用被动语态,有时用虚拟语气。
模板①
(事物) is / lies (地理位置) . It has/ is (特征) . There are many places of interest here, for example, (景点介绍) . There are also many (人们的活动、风俗等) . I hope/ think (看法和感受) .
模板②
The table below shows that (说明问题或现象) . (数据) percent (现象一) . (数据) percent (现象二) . (数据) percent (现象三) . In my opinion (自己的观点或感受) .
【常用词汇】
1. 表示形状:round, square, long, tall, short, triangular(三角形的)…
2. 表示材料:wood, wool, cotton, metal, plastic, gold …
3. 表示特点:important, common, sweet, crispy, sour, salty, hard, soft, delicious, nice, fresh, pleasant, popular …
【常用句型】
1. It’s 400 meters long/ wide/ high. 它有400米长/宽/高。
2. The ruler is as long as that one. 这把尺子与那把一样长。
3. It’s made of/ from wood. 它是由木材做成的。
4. All that we can do is to ... 我们所能做的就是……
5. It is quite clear that ... 十分清楚的是……
6. There are some reasons for ... 关于……有以下理由。
典例赏析二:
(2021·湖南岳阳市·中考真题)
根据《中国美好生活大调查》结果,我们的家乡岳阳荣获“中国美好生活城市十大心仪之城”的称号,是湖南省唯一入选的地级市。家乡,一个你成长的地方,请你根据下面的图表信息,以“My Hometown—Yueyang”为题,写一篇英语短文向别人介绍你的家乡岳阳。
要求:
1.词数80 100;
2.请根据以上提示信息,结合实际情况叙述,可适当发挥;
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名;
4.字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
My Hometown — Yueyang
Yueyang is one of the top ten favorite cities in China._____________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
My Hometown — Yueyang
Yueyang is one of the top ten favorite cities in China. It is located in the northeast of Hunan, covering about 15,019 square kilometers. It has a population of about 5.77 million. Yueyang has a history of over 2,500 years. There are different seasons in Yueyang. Yueyang is a place with fresh air and clean water. There are also many places to visit, such as Dongting Lake and Yueyang Tower. Yueyang also has a lot of good things to eat. You can eat fish, rice, crayfish and so on.
Do you like my hometown Welcome to visit my hometown.
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求根据思维导图内容介绍自己的家乡——岳阳,要包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称和一般现在时来介绍岳阳,内容需包含位置、面积大小、人口、历史、天气、环境、名胜和美食等方面,可适当发挥。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
(三)方式、方法说明文
◆写作要求
常见的方式、方法说明文有学习方法指导、产品使用说明、操作程序介绍、计划安排等。
写这类说明文应把握的要点有:
首先,要细致、准确地了解被说明对象的发展变化规律,也就是要准确地把握一个步骤或进程,不跳跃,不遗漏。只有这样,才能写出能够指导我们生活、工作、学习的说明文。
其次,要用准确、科学的语言来表达。方式、方法说明文所涉及的多是操作步骤、使用方法之类的内容,所以写作时不要说外行话。
再者,内容要点要有详略安排。关键的要点应详写,其余的可以略写。根据说明对象的不同特点来安排详略,不仅能使读者了解其关键所在,还可以避免文章的呆板乏味。
【常用单词】
1. 表示建议:should, had better do, suggest, advice, …is a good way…
2. 表示步骤:first of all, at last, and then, after that…
3. 表示计划:plan / prepare for/ to do, be going to, will…
【常用句型】
1. With the rapidly growing popularity of… 随着……的快速普及……
2. It is quite clear that… 十分清楚的是……
3. There are some reasons for … 关于……有以下理由。
4. A recent survey suggests that… 最近的一项调查显示……
5. All we can do is to … 我们所能做的就是……
典例赏析三:
(2022·广西·中考真题)
在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中,你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧!现校刊英文专栏以 “Learning to learn”为主题征稿。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 一个科目名称;
2. 此科目的学习方法(至少两个);
3. 此科目的学习感受或期望。
写作要求:
1. 将标题和首句补充完整;
2. 包含所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得透露个人信息;
4. 词数80左右。
Methods of learning ________
Here are my methods of learning ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Methods of learning English
Here are my methods of learning English. First, I usually watch English movies and listen to English songs. I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions. Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words. In this way, the new words can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s more, it’s a good habit to keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and improve my writing skills as well.
English is a bridge which connects the world and us. It’s interesting to learn it. I hope I can make greater progress in the future.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“学会学习”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段先介绍自己学习英语的方法;第二段表达学习英语的感受或期望。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误 。
(一)(2022·辽宁朝阳·中考真题)
自从“双减”政策实施以来,我们学生有更多的空闲时间参与文娱、体育、艺术等方面的课外活动,这些活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题,写一篇英语短文来介绍你参与的课外活动。
内容:1. 介绍你所参与的1至2项关于文娱、体育或艺术方面的课外活动;
2.谈一谈课外活动给你带来的收获及感受。
要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名校名或地名;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.词数在80词左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
After- school Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays, we have more free time to take part in after -school activities.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful
Nowadays, we have more free time to take part in after -school activities. There are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball after school. In the volleyball club, I’ve made lots of friends. We often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play volleyball after school in the future.
All in all, after-school activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。以“After-school Activities Make My Life Colorful”为题,写一篇作文来介绍你参与的课外活动。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主;人称以第一人称为主。写作时需介绍你所参与的1至2项关于文娱、体育或艺术方面的课外活动,同时还需要谈论课外活动给你带来的收获及感受,同时注意写作过程不要出现单词拼写和语法错误,保证语句通顺,逻辑清晰。
(二)(2022·湖南张家界·中考真题)
最近教育部发文要求中小学校开展劳动教育必修课,并且规定了中小学每周课外活动和家庭生活中的劳动时间。根据下面的提示,请你谈一谈作为中学生的你们可以在校内外做些什么劳动,以及这些劳动对你们的意义。
要求:
(1)内容必须包括所提示信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)不少于50词(文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers. We can help our parents take out the rubbish and do the dishes. In school, we can clean the classroom and grow vegetables. We can also clean up city parks and plant trees. Taking part in labor can not only improve our life skills, but also enrich our spare time. I hope we can take part in labor as much as possible.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“劳动”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。从在学校,在家以及其他地方都可以做哪些劳动进行介绍,最后介绍劳动的意义。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(三)(2022·湖南株洲·中考真题)
某英文网站征稿。请你以“Sports and Health”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
要点如下:
1. 一项你喜爱的运动;
2. 该运动带给你的益处;
3. 你的暑假运动计划。
注意:
1. 写作时不要抄题;
2. 词数90左右;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Sports and Health
I do like to do all kinds of sports. My favorite sport is table tennis. At 9, I got a bat of table tennis as a birthday present. Since then, I have been playing it. I love it for several reasons.
Firstly, table tennis helps build my body. Each time after playing it, I am sweaty, which makes me feel relaxed and refreshed. What’s more, table tennis helps build my mind. When a ball flies over, I have to respond quickly, judge its speed and direction, predict its falling spot, and then act it back in time.
Therefore, table tennis is a wonderful companion that I will keep all my life. I plan to play with my friends twice a week during the holiday.
【解析】
1. 题干解读:本文属于材料作文写作,要求以“Sports and Health”为题,按说明文的格式,根据提示的要点介绍一项你喜欢的运动,说明该运动带给你的益处以及你的暑假运动计划。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来写,时态以一般现在时为主。写作时,第一段介绍一项喜欢的运动,可说明喜欢的时长;第二段主要说明这项运动给你带来的益处,列举几个喜欢的理由;第三段主要介绍暑假的运动计划并结尾。
(四)(2022·贵州贵阳·中考真题)
劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分。因此,青少年应该主动参加各类劳动,如社区服务、学校劳动和日常家务等。近期,育才中学围绕“劳动让我成长”这一主题开展了问卷调查。请你参考问卷内容或结合自身经历,以“Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities” 为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文。
要求如下:
1.请列举2~3项你经常参加的劳动;
2.重点谈谈你参加劳动的收获并提出建议;
3.文中不得出现真实个人信息。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities
Labor is the source of all happiness. Labor is one of the necessary conditions for students’ all-round development. And I think it is good to do housework.
Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. I used to be lazy at home. Seeing this, my mother came up with an idea—I have to earn my pocket money by doing housework. It changed me a lot. For example, when I can’t work out a math problem, I prefer to sweep the floor or tidy up my room to clear my mind. Once my mother told me to buy some fruit. I quickly made a list, compared prices and bought fresh fruit. I now have a habit of managing money and I know it’s great of my mother to look after my family so well!
This is how I learn to do housework—it’s a skill that lasts a lifetime.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Let’s Take Part in Labor Activities” 为题,结合提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍经常参加的劳动以及参加劳动的收获并提出建议。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(五)(2022·湖南长沙·中考真题)
新学期来了,学生社团又要招新啦!假如你是社团招新工作负责人,请根据以下内容和要求写一篇短文,为同学们介绍社团的情况(包括名称、活动及目的)。
要求:
(1)介绍下表中第1和第2两个社团,并联系实际或发挥想象,补充介绍第3个社团;
(2)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
1. Public Speakers Activities: practice speaking in public and give speeches; … Purposes: to voice opinions clearly and confidently; to overcome fear and shyness; … 2. Cool Cooks Activities: design(设计)healthy menus and learn how to cook; … Purposes: to have balanced(均衡的)and healthy eating; to enjoy life; … 3. ____Sports____ Activities: choose your own favourite sports and do exercise with friends;… Purposes: to keep fit and lose weight; to make more friends;…
Clubs Are Calling!The new term is here. Are you ready for an interesting and colorful school life Now I’d like to introduce some of our clubs.
In the club of Public Speakers, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Clubs Are Calling!
The new term is here. Are you ready for an interesting and colorful school life Now I’d like to introduce some of our clubs.
In the club of Public Speakers, you will practice speaking in public and give speeches. The purpose is to voice opinions clearly and confidently. By joining this club, you can overcome your fear and shyness and become more out-going. The Cool Cooks club is really cool. It holds activities such as designing healthy menus and learning how to cook. You can taste different food and develop a balanced and healthy eating habit. It will make your life more enjoyable. If you want to lose weight or just keep fit, the Sports Club is your best choice. There are many kinds of sports in this club. You can choose your own favourite sports and do exercise with friends and other students. So you will make more friends at the same time.
You can choose more than one club, depending on your interest and time. I believe these clubs will make your school life full of surprises. Join us now!
【解析】
1.题干解读:题干要求根据表格中所给的两个社团的信息,并补充第三个社团信息,介绍这三个社团,包括它们的名称、活动内容和目的。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现时和一般将来时,以第三人称介绍俱乐部。写作时承接所给开头,对三个俱乐部的活动和目的分别进行描述,最后另起一段表达期望并呼吁同学们加入。注意保持主谓的一致性,做到无标点和语法错误。
(六)(2022·黑龙江大庆·中考真题)
2022年令世人瞩目,在过去的半年里,涌现出了很多为了梦想拼搏奋斗的人物。例如,圆梦航天,胜利返航的神舟十三的3名宇航员;开场失利,永不言弃,最终夺得亚洲杯冠军的中国女足运动员……正是这种对梦想执着追求的精神,使得他们为祖国做出了突出贡献。作为新时代的青少年,你的梦想是什么?请以“My Dream”为题,写一篇短文。
要点:1.你的梦想是什么?
2.原因是什么?
3.为此你会怎么做?
注意:1.词数90左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。
My Dream
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My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I am very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger. To be a doctor is really good. I think my dream will come true one day.
【解析】
1. 题干解读:本文属于材料作文写作,要求以“My Dream”为题,介绍自己的梦想,以及拥有这个梦想的原因,和为此会做些什么。写作时按说明文的格式来写。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来写。写作时,说明“梦想是什么”这一部分应用一般现在时;讲述拥有这个梦想的事件时,应用一般过去时;而在讲述为了实现梦想,“会做什么事”这一部分应用一般将来时。按照题目要求,先介绍“我”的梦想,再讲述拥有这一梦想的事件过程,最后列举为了实现梦想会做的事情并结尾。写作时注意三种时态的正确使用方法。
(七)(2022·贵州铜仁·中考真题)
你校广播站面向全校学生举办一场以“丰富的课外活动”为主题的英语征文活动。假设你是李华,请撰文投稿,分享学校的课外活动情况及体会。
要求:
(1)短文必须包括左图所有信息,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
(2)80词左右(文章开头句已给出,不计入总词数)。
(3)文章不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
(4)书写正确规范,卷面整洁。
提示词:
labor practice base(劳动实践基地)
digging the land(松土);
respect(尊重)。
Colorful After-School Activities
I’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Colorful After-School Activities
I’m Li Hua. Glad to share the colorful after-school activities of our school. In our school, we can choose what we are interested in.
If you want to improve your oral English, you can choose English Club. You can learn about how to recite here. If you are good at drawing, you can join Drawing Club. You can also learn about paper-cutting. If you are interested in growing vegetables and planting, you can join Labour Practice. If you want to keep healthy, you can join Sports Club. You can learn how to swim, play football and so on.
These after-school activities not only enrich our after-school lives, but also teach us some basic skills.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“丰富的课外活动”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时,人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式:第一段引出主题,文章开头已给出;第二段根据提示材料介绍学校不同的课外活动,以及参加这些课外活动的好处;最后一段表达自己对这些课外活动的体会。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(八)(2022·广西梧州·中考真题)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友David很喜欢春联。正巧你市将于6月28日举行春联艺术展,你想邀请他同去,请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.春联的寓意和相关习俗;
2.艺术展的内容展览品、体验活动.;
3.艺术展的时间、地点。
注意:
1.文中必须包括以上内容,可适当发挥,增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息;
3.词数不少于80开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:the Spring Festival couplets 春联 put up 张贴 experience 体验
Dear David,
How’s it going
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How’s it going Spring Festival couplets are also called spring stickers. The ancients put up the word “Yichun” on the beginning of spring, and then gradually developed into spring couplets, expressing the good wishes of the Chinese working people to ward off evil spirits, eliminate disasters, welcome good fortune.
Our city will hold an art exhibition of Spring Festival couplets in the stadium on June 28. In this exhibition, you can enjoy the exhibits, experience the activity of putting up Spring Festival couplets, and feel the atmosphere of Chinese New Year. If you can come, you will be very happy.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文要求以李华的名义,写一篇电子邮件邀请自己的英国朋友David一起去参加春联艺术展。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;人称以第三人称和第二人称为主;文章可分为三段式:第一段承接上文,具体介绍春联的寓意和相关习俗。第二段介绍春联艺术展的相关信息,包括内容、时间和地点。最后一段文章已给。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误,正确运用好几种时态
(九)(2022·辽宁盘锦·中考真题)
假如你是李华,你们学校将组织一次主题为“用行动温暖世界”的志愿者活动,活动地点在养老院。你打算邀请你校的交换生Peter参加,请你用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他活动的时间、地点、内容以及需要做什么准备。
写作要求:
(1)内容包含以上信息,词数 80—100;
(2)文中已给出内容,不计入总词数;
(3)语言准确,行文连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;
(4)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I’m writing to invite you to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts make the world warm”.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I’m writing to invite you to join us for the volunteer activity “Acts make the world warm”. We are going to organize the activity at the old people’s home in our neighborhood next Friday afternoon. We’ll meet at the gate of our school at 8:00 am.
As soon as we reach the old people’s home, we’ll help the old to clean their rooms first. Then we’ll have a talk with them. We’ll tell them something interesting so that they can feel happy and comfortable. At last, there will be a talent show. Some classmates will sing songs, dance and play games with them. Besides, remember to take a camera to take photos and you should prepare something that you want to give them. I’m sure you can learn a lot.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一封电子邮件,要求以李华的名义给Peter写一封电子邮件,邀请他参加学校组织的志愿者活动,需要将活动的时间、地点、内容以及准备事项一一列出。
2.写作指导:文章以第一人称为主,时态主要为一般将来时,注意主谓一致问题。写作时注意按要点分段叙述,第一段介绍活动的时间、地点;第二段介绍活动的安排及准备事项;最后一段作为结束语。写作时应注意英语句式结构的特点,语法应符合英语规范,用词准确。
(十)(2022·北京·中考真题)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣,他给你发来邮件,询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件,介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语:manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题:· What do we do when we meet people for the first time
· How do we behave properly at table
Dear Chris,I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them.
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.
I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题,给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第二人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(十一)(2022·山东济宁·中考真题)
假设你是李华,正和英国笔友Jack寻找假期共读的书。你发现下图中的书特别适合你们共读。请你根据下面的提示信息,给他写一封e-mail,介绍此书并征求他的意见。
◆tell how things change from start to finish
◆win many world awards (奖)
◆six topics of interest (nature, food, animas…)
◆written in both English and Chinese.
◆hundreds of color photos
注意:
1.须包括以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息;
3. 100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
I’ve just found a book and can’t wait to tell you about it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
I’ve just found a book and can’t wait to tell you about it.
It tells how things change from start to finish. It is very interesting and meaningful. It won many world awards. It is well-known in the world. There are six topics of interest, including nature, food, animals and so on. So no matter what topic you are interested, you will find something you like. It was written in both English and Chinese and it will not only improve students’ understanding, but also improve students’ English. It has hundreds of color photos and it is fun to read.
What do you think of the book Do you have other suggestions
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容,介绍《Start to Finish》这本书,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段,第一段引出话题;第二段详细介绍这本书;第三段询问对方的意见;第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(十二)(2022·湖南邵阳·中考真题)
“双减”政策实施后的第一个暑假即将来临,假如你是Zhang Wei,你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你今年的暑期计划,请你给他写一封回信,内容要点如下:
要求:1. 至少写四点暑期计划,可适当发挥;2.语言表达准确,语意通顺连贯;
3. 词数80左右。书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 请勿在文中出现其实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you In your letter, you asked me about my summer holiday resolutions. Now I’m writing to tell you some details.
Firstly,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
All in all, I hope I’ll spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【答案】[例文]
Dear Tom,
How is everything going with you In your letter, you asked me about my summer holiday resolutions. Now I’m writing to tell you some details.
Firstly, I want to have a good rest and relax myself. I will listen to some music or watch some TV. Secondly, I will read some books. I like reading very much. So I read a book every week to broaden my horizons. Thirdly, I will be a volunteer to help those in need. Finally, I will help my parents do some housework at home.
All in all, I hope I’ll spend a meaningful and colorful summer holiday.
Yours,
Zhang Wei
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示,给英国笔友Tom回一封关于你今年的暑期计划的信。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般将来时为主。人称以第一人称为主。写作时包含要点,且自己需要再加一点暑期计划,可使用过渡词Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly以及Finally使文章更通畅,最后确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
(十三)(2022·广西柳州·中考真题)
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣,想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信介绍“中国红”。
地位 最受欢迎的颜色之一
代表 幸福,好运
节日 春节等
形式 剪纸,灯笼,红包等
注意:
(1)词数70左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)短文的开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数;
(4)文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。
参考词汇:
受欢迎的popular 代表stand for 幸福happiness 好运good luck
春节the Spring Festival 剪纸 paper-cuts 灯笼lanterns 红包red packets
Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red. I’m writing to tell you something about it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Jack,
It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red. I’m writing to tell you something about it. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.
People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper-cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.
I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一封书信。针对“中国红”进行写作。具体的内容要包含所给的提示,从地位、代表、节日和形式方面进行叙述。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。第一段开头已给出,可以接着从地位和代表两个方面介绍“中国红”;第二段可以从节日和形式方面进行介绍;最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
(十四)(2022·辽宁沈阳·中考真题)
榜样是我们学习的楷模、努力的方向。学校英语社团开展以“介绍我心中的榜样”为主题的社团活动。假如你是李华,请你写一封英文发言稿来介绍你心中的榜样——李想。
内容包括:
1. 人物描写;
2. 说明理由;
3. 表达希望。
【注意】
1. 词数80—100,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文须包括所给内容信息,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind.
He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I don’t do well in studying. So he not only helps me with every subject but also tells me how to study in order to catch up others. With Li Xiang’s help, I made great progress and I thank him very much.
I think I’m lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. And I hope I will learn from Li Xiang to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.
Thanks for your listening!
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿,要求根据提示问题,介绍自己心中的榜样。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:文章以第一、三人称,一般现在时为主,注意主谓一致问题;写作时要分别介绍榜样是谁,为什么是自己的榜样并表达自己的希望。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
(十五)(2022·四川广安·中考真题)
坚定文化自信,弘扬中华优秀传统文化,做中华文明的传播者是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华,近期,一批外国朋友要到你所在的学校参观访问,你将作为学生代表向他们介绍中华优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
总体介绍 中华传统文化种类多、历史悠久,影响很多人。
京剧 国粹之一,来自“Huiban”,包含singing, dancing, speaking;讲述了很多故事,受各个年龄段人的喜欢。
茶文化 茶的种类多,对健康有益。
瓷器 中国是瓷器之乡,技术世界最早,闻名于世。
要求:1.字迹工整,书写规范,不逐字翻译,包含全部要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;
3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。
参考词汇:traditional Chinese culture中华传统文化 influence影响
china瓷器 Beijing Opera京剧 national treasure国粹 technology技术
Dear friends,Welcome to our school. Today, I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.
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Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文:
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. Today. I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.
There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have influenced many people.
Beijing Opera comes first. As one of Chinese national treasures, Beijing Opera comes from “Huiban” and it has three parts, including singing, dancing, and speaking. It’s full of famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.
Next, let’s talk about tea. In China there are many different kinds of tea in different areas, such as green tea and black tea. It is good for our health.
The last one is about china. China is the hometown of china. Our china technology is the earliest in the world, and it’s famous all over the world.
Thanks for your listening.
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目属于讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求讲述中国传统文化,讲述京剧、茶文化和瓷器。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第三人称为主,根据提示内容,讲述中国的京剧、茶文化和瓷器,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
Writing 1(2022·浙江温州·三模)
有些同学不能妥善安排好时间以至于影响了学习。“Don’t put off today until tomorrow.”是美国科学家本杰明·富兰克林(Benjamin Franklin)关于“时间”的一句名言。请以他的这句名言为题用英语写一篇约110词的短文。
内容要求:
1)你对这句名言的理解;
2)用一个具体事例加以说明;
3)对如何管理好时间提出一点建议。
注意:
1)文章的标题已给出,不计入词数;
2)字迹端正,书写规范,卷面整洁,表达清楚;
3)不要出现含有考生个人信息的人名、校名、地名等,否则按作弊行为认定。
Don’t put off today until tomorrow
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【答案】例文:
Don’t put off today until tomorrow
This well-known saying from American famous scientist Benjamin Franklin tells us how to use and manage time well. Some students can’t make good use of their time and this has a bad influence on their study.
One weekend, I forgot to finish my homework because I only thought of relaxing myself. On Saturday I played computer games and on Sunday I played football with my friends. But soon I found I had no time at all to do my homework. The next Monday, the teacher asked me to do more homework to punish me.
To manage our time well, we should make a good plan and follow it strictly.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文,为命题作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时+一般过去时”,视情况而定;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要求内容,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍对名言的理解;用一般现在时态;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。结合名言,用一个具体事例加以说明,注意时态为一般过去时;
第三步,书写结语。谈谈自己对如何管理好时间提出的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① how to do sth.如何去做某事
② make good use of好好利用
③ ask sb. to do sth.要求某人做某事
[高分句型]
① I forgot to finish my homework because I only thought of relaxing myself.(because引导的原因状语从句)
② I found I had no time at all to do my homework.(省略that的宾语从句)
2.(2022·江苏·扬州中学教育集团树人学校三模)
分享是一种智慧,分享的幸福是双倍的幸福,分担的痛苦是一半的痛苦。请观察以下图片,并根据图片所涵盖的内容,用英语写一篇题为“Learn to Share”的短文。
要求:(1) 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2) 必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
(3) 词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Learn to Share
Learning to share is a process to learn how to lead a happy life.
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【答案】例文
Learn to Share
Learning to share is a process to learn how to lead a happy life. It’s very important to learn to share with each other. Sharing means letting someone else have or use something that belongs to you. You can share some beautiful pictures, favorite music, different ideas and also some hobbies and experience. And there are different ways to share things. For example, I can share with other people face to face or by QQ and email.
In a word, sharing is not only interesting but also helpful for us to grow up. We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our life better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,给材料的作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文话题;
第二步,介绍分享的重要性以及可以分享什么事物;
第三步,总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①each other 彼此,互相
②belong to 属于
③for example 例如
[高分句型]
①Learning to share is a process to learn how to lead a happy life(动名词作主语)
②And there are different ways to share things.(there be句型)
(2022·广东·深圳市南山区第二外国语学校(集团)学府中学三模)
教育部实施“双减”政策,要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量,合理布置不同类型的作业。为此,某英文杂志社正在开展以“My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文,讲述自身经历,提出合理建议。
要求:1. 80—120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称;
3. 内容涵盖提示要点,可适当发挥。
作业类型 你的感受
双减前 背诵,抄写…… ……
双减后 画思维导图,制作海报…… ……
你的建议:1. ……;2.……
提示词:背诵recite;抄写copyMy Creative English Homework
After the Double Reduction Policy, our English teachers have made some changes in our homework.
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【答案】例文
My Creative English Homework
After the Double Reduction Policy, our English teachers have made some changes in our homework.
Before the Double Reduction Policy, our homework is to recite the text and copy the text and words. I think the assignment is very simple and repetitive. After the Double Reduction Policy, our homework is to draw mind maps and make posters. I think it is creative and meaningful. We all like it.
I suggest we can perform small programs in English. I suggest we can talk with our parents in simple English at home, such as practicing introducing three meals in English. If we do this often, I believe our English will improve quickly. It’s necessary for us to make a plan for our study and life and I think everyone should make it reasonable.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生要注意不要遗漏信息提示中的“你的建议”,可适当细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题,表明双减后英语作业有了很多变化;
第二步,具体阐述双减前和双减后的作业类型以及你的感受;
第三步,阐述自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①talk with和某人交流
②such as例如
③in English用英语
[高分句型]
①our homework is to recite the text and copy the text and words.(动词不定式作表语)
②If we do this often, I believe our English will improve quickly.(if引导的条件状语从句)
(2022·江苏·仪征市实验中学东区校三模)
随着第 24 届冬季奥林匹克运动会在北京的胜利举行,中国再一次成为世界关注的焦点。为了让国外友人更好地了解中国,21 世纪英文报开辟了“Cities in China” 的专栏,鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。 假如你是张华,请你选择中国的一个城市,根据下列问题提示,完成一篇 100 词左右的征文。
提示:
1.Which city would you like to introduce
2. What’s the city like ( location, places of interest, local food, people…)
3. What do you think of the city
要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括提示中所有信息,并适当发挥;
3.词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名等。
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【答案】例文
There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing is one of the greatest. It is the capital city of China. It lies in the northeast of China.
Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace.
You can also try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit. (100 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文;
②时态:本文时态用“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求根据提示内容介绍中国的一个城市,可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出自己想要介绍的城市;
第二步,介绍这个城市的特点;
第三步,阐述自己对这个城市的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜景点
②and so on等等
③be worth sth值得某物
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.(if条件从句)
②If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there.(if条件从句)
③I think Beijing is worth a visit.(宾语从句)
(2022·浙江·乐清市乐成实验中学三模)
2022年“设计激活世遗”国际文创大赛作品征集活动即将开始。该活动面向全球征集以世界文化遗产为主题,兼具艺术性与实用性的文创产品。假设你是以下某一件文创产品的设计者,请你用英语为你的作品写一篇推介短文,简要介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。
要求:
(1)文中不得出现校名、人名等真实信息;
(2)词数:110词左右;
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【答案】例文
Fans are widely known, among which folding fans are the most famous and most Chinese. In the folding fan culture, it can be said that it is the standard configuration of famous families and scholarly children. Today, I recommend folding fans.
Folding fans are easy to carry because they are foldable. They are the most popular and almost everyone has one in ancient times. The folding fan can be opened and closed freely. When it is opened, it can be used. When it is closed, it can be hidden. It has the meaning of advancing and retreating freely and being carefree.
Because the folding fan is both artistic and practical, it can not only cool the fan, but also watch and play. Its shape is simple and smooth, easy to carry, hidden in the sleeve, flying between the fingers, gently shaking the fan bone, which is unspeakably elegant and indifferent.
Folding fans is refined and elegant, with integrity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为产品推介;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:注意选择其中的一个作品作为自己的产品进行推介,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。从所给的产品中选择一件作为自己的产品,然后介绍该产品并阐述其文化内涵。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。首先提出自己要推介的产品——折扇;其次具体介绍折扇的文化内涵;接着介绍折扇的作用。
第三步:书写结语。表示“折扇是儒雅风流,气节风骨”。
[亮点词汇]
①the most famous最著名的
②the meaning of……的含义
③not only…, but also…不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①In the folding fan culture, it can be said that it is the standard configuration of famous families and scholarly children.(that引导的宾语从句)
②Folding fans is easy to carry because they are foldable.(because引导的原因状语从句)
③Its shape is simple and smooth, easy to carry, hidden in the sleeve, flying between the fingers, gently shaking the fan bone, which is unspeakably elegant and indifferent.(which引导的定语从句)
(2022·湖南·长沙市立信中学二模)
“研学旅行”是以组织中小学生集体旅行的方式走出校园,以各种不同的形式亲近社会与自然而开展的研究性学习与旅行体验相结合的教育活动。每个学期学校都会组织类似活动,大部分学生会参加,他们认为通过研学活动可以增加不一样的体验,也有小部分学生不参加,他们认为学习时间过于紧张,不如在学校自习。对此,你的看法是什么?请根据以下要点提示为校刊写一篇英语短文。
1、要点提示:①介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受;
②表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由(至少2点)。
2、注意事项:①短文内容应包含提示的要点,可适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;
②80词左右;
③文中不得出现个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇:研学旅行 study trip; 乘骑设施 ride
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
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【答案】例文:
The Study Trip
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
Last year, we went to the USA. We had a good time there. We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. We studied English with them. I think a study trip is a good way for students to study.
When we have a study trip, we can visit many places of natural beauty. During the study trip, we can learn many things that we can’t learn at school. We can be served with different new food and know more things about different customs.
In my opinion, we should hold more activities like this. If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries.
I hope study trips are becoming more and more popular.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”关于研学旅行的写作要求,用英语写一篇短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写作开头已给出,点名主题,“研学旅行”现在很受学生欢迎;
第二步,介绍一次你的研学旅行经历以及你的感受;
第三步,表明你对研学旅行活动的观点及理由;
第四步,表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种 ②have a good time玩得高兴
③be served with向……提供 ④in one’s opinion在某人看来
[高分句型]
①We made friends with them who are interested in Chinese. (who引导的定语从句)
②If we travel to other countries, we will speak English every day, because English can help us understand people from different countries. (If引导的条件状语从句;because引导的原因状语从句)
(2022·浙江·温州外国语学校三模)
我们每天接触的网络信息纷繁复杂、真假难辨。请以Online Rumors (网络流言)为题,解读图片信息,结合你的生活经验,说说你的看法并提出合理的建议,写一篇约110词的英语短文,向Teens英语报投稿。
要求:文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Online Rumors
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【答案】例文
Online Rumors
Fast changing online information makes it difficult for us to tell whether it’s true or not. Some people post online rumors to draw others’ attention. Sometimes they even tell lies to annoy others on purpose just for fun.
During the epidemic, an online rumor flew to every corner of streets—there won’t be enough rice in short time. That made people so worried that they rushed to supermarkets and bought a lot more rice than they need. People who posted this rumor enjoyed spreading fear and panic. Therefore, when we see some online rumors, we need to keep calm. More importantly, we should never post them without thinking.
Pinocchio’s nose gets longer and longer because of telling lies, and those people will certainly get punished for posting online rumors. What we should do is to keep a cool head.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇说明文写作,需结合图片写作;
② 时态:时态为一般现在时和一般过去时;
③ 提示:写作主题已给出,写作时注意观察图片信息,而且要结合自己实际生活的例子展开说明。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明网络流言产生的背景,点明主题;
第二步,结合自己生活中的实例说明网络流言的危害;
第三步,结合图片信息做出总结,提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
① draw others’ attention吸引别人的注意
② on purpose故意
③ more…than多于……
④ keep calm保持冷静
⑤ tell lies说谎
[高分句型]
① That made people so worried that they rushed to supermarkets and bought a lot more rice than they need.(结果状语从句)
② People who posted this rumor enjoyed spreading fear and panic.(定语从句)
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