【2023中考英语作文万能模板】09 日记

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
09 日记
1. 题型分析：
日记是中考英语书面表达命题的热点。日记常用来记述一天中所发生的重要的或有趣的事情，也可以用来叙述自己当天触景而发的感受等。日记的主要体裁通常是记叙文或简单的议论文。
2. 写作攻略
英文日记通常由书端和正文两部分组成。书端是专门记载写日记的日期及天气状况的。正文的格式与其他文章相近，一般缩进4个字母，也可以顶格写。由于日记所写的事件都是发生过的事情，所以日记通常用一般过去时。因为日记多为记叙自己的亲身经历或抒发自己的感想，所以一般用第一人称。
3.写作点拨：
一是明确格式要求。
英文日记格式与中文日记格式差不多，通常在正文上一行左边顶格写日期、星期，右边写天气状况。接着再另起一行写正文。
二是把握日记的人称和时态。
由于日记是记录自己亲身所见、所闻、所想、所感的事情，因此要使用第一人称;由于是记录发生过的事情，所以时态要使用一般过去时态，若是表达客观真理、描写景色或对某事发表评论，则用一般现在时态;若是展望未来、写学习计划等，则要用将来时态内容过渡自然、通顺连贯、条理清晰、富有逻辑;选取自己感触最深，认为最为意义的场景、事件、感受进行记录，要重视提示，明确中心，巧抓重点，无需面。
三是合理安排内容。
日记内容要按时间先后顺序展开，巧用连接词，确保日记面俱到;要流露真情实感，力求简单明了。
写日记的时候一般遵循以下步骤：
第一步：介绍事件：
第二步：具体阐述事情经过，补充细节；
第三步：表达感想或总结该事件的意义。
写日记要注意以下几点：
1. 日记的第一行要写清日期、星期和天气状况。日期和星期写在正文的左上角，月份与星期可以缩写。天气状况写在正文的右上角。如果是游记，还可以写明地点。
2. 日记通常使用过去时记录所发生的事件。若为议论、抒情或描述景物和人，为了生动，也可以使用一般现在时。
3. 日记的正文可以是叙事、描写、说明或议论等形式，且通常用第一人称。
4. 日记虽然是记录事件，但应该适当加一些个人感悟，写出亮点。
典例赏析：
上周末，我校的“厨艺小达人”李华给大家上了一节云家务劳动课。请写一则英文日记，记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点；
1. 授课者：李华，15岁，福州八中学生，校厨艺大赛冠军；
2. 上课内容：鱼丸的制作和烹饪，福州美食的历史等；
3. 你的收获和感受。
参考词汇：鱼丸 (fish ball)、冠军 (champion)。
注意事项：
1. 开头已为你写好，不计人总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Monday, June 20
Dear Diary,
Last weekend, we had a special online lesson. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Monday, June 20
Dear Diary,
Last weekend, we had a special online lesson. The teacher was the champion of school cooking competition named Li Hua. He is 15 years old, and he is also a student of Fuzhou No. 8 Middle School. In the class, he explained the way of making fish balls and showed us how to cook them well. We were interested in making fish balls. He also introduced us to the history of Fuzhou cuisine. From this lesson, I learnt that cooking skills are not easy to master, and to become a master of cooking needs a lot of practice, practice makes perfect. What a special lesson we had!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；讲述授课者的个人信息，上课的内容，最后讲述个人的收获和感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述授课人的信息和课堂内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
Day of the week Date Weather
Today is ___________. I did some meaningful things ___________.
In the morning, I ___________（事件一）. In the afternoon, I ___________（事件二）. After that, I ___________（事件三）.
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day! / Although I was very tired, I felt very happy because ___________.
【模板范文】
Sunday May 10th Fine
Today is Mother's Day. I did some meaningful things to show my love to my mother.
In the morning, I bought my mother some flowers with my pocket money. In the afternoon, I went shopping and then cooked a delicious dinner for my family. After that, I gave mother the card made by myself and said "Happy Mother's Day" to her. I told her I would study hard and never let her down. Hearing this, my mother was moved to tears.
What a warm and meaningful day! I will never forget the memorable day!
亮点词汇搭配
1. 表示天气
fine adj. 晴朗的 cloudy adj. 多云的
snowy adj.下雪的 rainy adj. 下雨的
windy adj. 有风的 hail n. 冰雹
2. 抒发感想
moved adj. 感动的 enjoy oneself 玩得高兴
memorable adj. 值得纪念的 meaningful adj. 有意义的
worry about 担忧 delicious adj. 美味的
3. 其他
finish v. 完成 classmate n. 同学
voluntary adj. 志愿的，义务的 although conj. 虽然
经典句子背诵：
开头句
1. It was a fine/nice day. 天气晴朗。
2. Today is... 今天是……
3. I went to the park to... 我去公园……
4. We decided to go out for a picnic today.
我们决定今天出去野餐。
5. My classmates and I went to the park to do some voluntary work.
我和我们班的同学去公园做义务劳动。
中间句
1. First we were divided into three groups and then began working.
我们首先分成了三个组，然后开始工作。
2. The task for Group Two was collecting the litter and cleaning benches.
第二组的同学收集垃圾和清理长凳。
3. Group Three wiped all the equipment in the park.
第三组的同学擦洗公园里所有的设施。
结尾句
1. I had a good time today. / I enjoyed myself today.
我今天玩得很高兴。
2. I will never forget it. 我永远不会忘记这件事。
3. What a warm and meaningful day!
这是多么温馨而又富有意义的一天！
4. I will never forget the memorable day!
我永远不会忘记这难忘的一天！
5. Although everyone was very tired, we felt very happy because we had done a meaningful job.
虽然大家都很累，但我们很开心，因为我们做了一件有意义的工作。
（一）（2021·广东广州·中考真题）
今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文日记，记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点：
1.授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生；
2.上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范等；
3.你的收获和感受。
注意:1.参考词汇：跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion)；
2.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Monday, May 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we had a special online PE lesson.
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例文：
Monday, May 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we had a special online PE lesson. The teacher was the world champion of rope skipping named Li Hua. He is 14 years old, and he is also the student of Hongxing Middle School. In the class, he explained the way of rope skipping and showed us how to do it well. We were interested in the sports. He answered some questioned and told his experience to us. I learned that the best way to do something best is by practicing it a lot. Practice makes perfect. What an interesting lesson we had!
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于日记写作。在写作时应承接短文开头；讲述授课者的个人信息，上课的内容，最后讲述个人的收获和感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时为主，讲述授课人的信息和课堂内容需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
（二）（2021·湖南常德·中考真题）
假设你是第二节（回答问题）材料中的Alan, 请写一篇80词以上的英文日记，描述对话中所发生的事情。
注意：
1. 要点包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等；
2. 不得出现自己的姓名和校名等真实信息；
3. 请按以下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
June 20th, 2021
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例文：
June 20th, 2021
On my way to school this morning, I saw a traffic accident. A boy was riding a bicycle, listening to music. At a crossing road, the traffic lights were about to turn red when a car appeared. Because the driver was on the phone, he didn’t notice the traffic lights and didn’t stop on time. The boy who was riding a bike fell off his bike and hurt his knee. What a terrible accident!
I think we must be careful on our way to school, don’t catch up, don’t listen to music, especially when crossing the road.
【详解】
题干解读：题目要求根据第二节材料中的Alan的叙述，描写目睹的事情情况，包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣材料内容，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
（三）（2019·天津·中考真题）
假如你是晨光中学的学生李华，平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点，描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，并表达自己的想法。
(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。
(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。
(3)你认为…．
参考词汇：开始呕吐begin to vomit
挤向座位push towards the seat
争吵havea quarrel
要求：
(1)词数：80～100个。
(2)日记格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Wednesday
When I took the underground back home from school, I noticed
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【范文】
Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school.I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.I was wondering what's wrong with him when he suddenly began to vomit.Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.And then the boy expressed gratitude with a low bow.
As time passed by, the subway arrived.Someone pushed toward the seat while others can't get off，therefore they had a quarrel angrily.
From my perspective,I wish we all can help each other when someone is in trouble just like the beautiful lady and be polite all the time.Only in this way can our world become better and better.
【详解】
这是一篇日记，根据材料中的相关信息用英语写一篇日记。所提供的材料中列举了你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情，主要从(l)一个男孩不舒服，开始呕吐，一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面，男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站，有人挤向座位，有人下不去车，有人因此争吵。(3)你认为…。写出自己的想法。这几个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
I noticed a boy who felt not very well and whose face was pale.我注意到一个男孩感觉不太好，脸色苍白。
句子who felt not very well是由who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Seeing this scene, a lady who wore beautiful dress not only gave a helping hand but also cleaned the floor without hesitate.看到这一幕，一位穿着漂亮衣服的女士不仅伸出援助之手，而且毫不犹豫地打扫了地板。
句子who wore beautiful dress是由who引导的定语从句。该句话还运用了not only…but also…：不但……而且……。
【高分句型三】
Only in this way can our world become better and better.只有这样，我们的世界才能变得越来越好。
这句话是由only引起的倒装句。
（四）（2019·湖北咸宁市·中考真题）
运动塑造健康，团结凝聚力量。5月10 日，学校举办了春季运动会。你和班上的许多同学参加了比赛项目，战绩显著。其他同学观看了比赛，并为选手们加油喝彩。请你根据下面四幅图片的提示，写一篇日记，介绍运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。
写作要求：
1．文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名；
2．文章须包含图片所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥。行文连贯，条理清晰；
3．词数80~100个，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：teamwork
Friday, May 11th, 2019 Sunny
It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文:
Friday. May 1lth,2019 Sunny It was sunny yesterday. Our school held a spring sports meet. There were 4 events for both boys and girls. They were the long jump, the high jump, the l00-meter race and the 400-meter relay race.
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. Sixteen of us took part in the activity and we got 4 first prizes, 2 second prizes and 3 third prizes. My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. In the boys' relay race, three boys and I ran very fast, coming out on top. In the meantime, all other classmates watched the matches, took photos and cheered us on. From this sports meet, know that sports can keep us healthy. We should do sports every day.
Meanwhile, teamwork plays an important role in the relay race. As the saying goes, one tree can't make a forest. So it made us learn to help each other in our daily life.
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，根据图片中的相关内容介绍一下运动会概况及班上同学参加的情况，并抒发自己的活动感受。所提供的卡片中列举了跳远、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要从同学们的参加情况和自己的活动感受这个方面去写。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意日记中必须包含图片上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
Everyone in our class felt very excited because we got a wonderful result. 我们班的每个人都很兴奋，因为我们取得了一个很好的成绩。句子because we got a wonderful result.是由because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
My classmates Yuan Ying and Fang Dan won the girls' long jump and the high jump without difficulty. So did I in the boys'100-meter race. 我的同学袁颖和方丹轻松地获得了女子跳远和跳高的冠军。我也参加了男子100米赛跑。So did I in the boys'100-meter race.是由so引起的倒装句。
（五）【2018年浙江宁波市中考】
今年5月11日，你校组织了一次社会实践活动，部分学生选择去了红星农场（见导图一），其余学生选择去了科技博物馆（见导图二）。请根据你所选择的实践活动写一篇英语日记，记录当天的经历和感受。
导图一 导图二
注意：(1)日记必须包括你所选择导图的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3)词数：80 -100。日记格式及首句己给出，不计入总词数。
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip.
【答案】Possible version 1:
Friday. May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!
(98 words)
Possible version 2:
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.
As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!
（99 words）
体即可。
Writing 1（2022·湖北武汉·模拟预测）
上周五是中国的传统佳节端午节，李华和几位好朋友相约去东湖观看了龙舟比赛，他们玩的很愉快。李华为此写了一篇周记，主要内容如下：
1. 搭乘公交，八点半在东湖大门口见面；
2. 天气炎热，带了帽子、饮水和望远镜；
3. 多艘龙舟竞速，气氛热烈，观众热情；
4. 品尝甜粽子，参观行吟阁，环湖骑行；
5. 补充一到两点相关内容。
表达要求：书写整洁、整齐、清晰：语句自然流畅；不得出现真实个人信息：词数80左右。
提示词汇：telescope n. 望远镜：the East Lake东湖；the poetry-reciting pavilion行吟阁
Friday, June10th
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【答案】例文
Friday, June 10th
Last Friday was China’s traditional Dragon Boat Festival. Several good friends and I went to the East Lake to watch the dragon boat race. We took a bus and met at 8:30 at the gate of the East Lake. It was kind of hot, so I wore a hat and took a big bottle of drinking water. And I thought a telescope would be very useful. There were many dragon boats there. The players were fighting hard for the winner. We were all very excited about the races, too. After that, we tasted sweet zongzi by the poetry-reciting pavilion and cycled around the lake for the beautiful scenery. We really had an unforgettable Dragon Boat Festival.
【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇日记类作文写作，要求写一篇端午节游玩的日记。内容上，除了提示的四点，还需要额外补充一到两点相关内容。
写作指导：本文人称上采用第一人称，时态上使用一般过去时。内容上主要包含：搭乘公交，八点半在东湖大门口见面；天气炎热，带了帽子、饮水和望远镜；多艘龙舟竞速，气氛热烈，观众热情；品尝甜粽子，参观行吟阁，环湖骑行；端午节真令人难忘。结构上可以采用一段式，包含所有写作要点。注意句与句之间的衔接，保障行文 的逻辑性。
Writing 2（2022·河北·滦南县教育局初中教研室二模）
疫情期间，人们居家隔离。有人在家制作美食，有人在家跳舞健身。你居家隔离时做了什么？请写一篇日记，从学习、饮食、卫生、运动等方面介绍自己的生活，并进行反思和总结，写出你的感受。
注意：1. 字数80词左右；
2. 开头已经给出，所给单词不计入总词数；
3. 请不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。
提示词：study online, eating habits, clean, exercise, feelings
My home quarantine (隔离) diary
During the epidemic (疫情), we students in Luannan stayed at home for more than one month. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文：
One possible version:
My home quarantine (隔离) diary
During the epidemic (疫情), we students in Luannan stayed at home for more than one month. From Monday to Friday, we studied online. The teachers taught us through Dingding, but sometimes I didn’t listen very carefully. My parents cooked delicious meals for me, because they couldn’t go out to work. I didn’t do much housework and I put on weight because of being short of exercising.
In the beginning, I felt excited about not going to school. But gradually I felt bored, because we couldn’t go outside to play and staying at home all day is not fun at all. I really hope that the epidemic can be over soon. I miss my classmates and teachers. I really want to go back to school.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇日记，介绍自己在疫情期间的生活。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍自己在疫情期间的学习、饮食、卫生、运动等方面，并进行反思和总结，写出你的感受；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
Writing 3（2022·黑龙江·哈尔滨工业大学附属中学校一模）
假如你是中学生王丽，昨天你们班召开了关于学生成长的班会，请你根据以下信息完成日记，并说一说如何成为优秀的(excellent)中学生。
写作要点:
1）班会的主题: 我的变化
2）介绍你和几名同学的成长
3）小红: 喜欢锻炼身体了；
4）小亮: 对英语感兴趣了；
5）你: 和父母相处得融洽了。
6）说一说如何成为优秀的(excellent)中学生。
写作要求:
7）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
8）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
9）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
10）至少 80 词。
April 15th, 2022 Sunny
We had a class meeting about the growth of the students yesterday
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【答案】例文
April 15th, 2022 Sunny
We had a class meeting about the growth of the students yesterday. There are lots of changes on us. For example, Xiao Hong likes doing physical exercise, Xiao Liang becomes interested in English, and I get along well with my parents.
We all grow up slowly, but how to be an excellent junior student, here are some suggestions.
Firstly, we should study harder and use the knowledge to solve problems. Secondly, we’d better have good manners. Last but not least, keep healthy. It’s the basis of everything.
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，但是要写成日记，注意格式；写作时要仔细阅读题干要求，包含所有要点提示，以“我的变化”为主题，可适当发挥。
写作指导：写作时注意第一段开头点题后，描写同学们的变化；第二段主要写如何成为一个优秀的学生，提出建议。写作时注意时态，虽然班会是昨天开的，变化却不是昨天的变化，因此使用一般现在时即可。在写作建议部分注意句型的灵活性，添加逻辑词，使文章句型丰富，逻辑清晰。
Writing 4（2022·黑龙江哈尔滨·一模）
面临世界的快速发展，21世纪的青少年应该拥有关键能力从容以对。假如你是李明，今天你们班召开了班会，请你根据以下信息，写一篇日记，并说说21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力和理由。
写作要点：
1. 班会主题：21世纪的青少年。
2. 同学们的发言：
（1） 很多同学认为沟通力（communication）是重要的；
（2）刘丽说表达力（expression）是有帮助的；
（3）说说你认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力（key skill）和理由。
写作要求：
1．不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节, 使内容充实, 行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
April 14th,
2022 Thursday
Sunny and warm
Today we had a class meeting. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope we all have a bright future.
【答案】例文
April 14th,
2022 Thursday
Sunny and warm
Today we had a class meeting. Many students think that communication is important. Liu Li says that the expression is helpful. I think it is very important to express my ideas well. First of all, no matter how knowledgeable you are, if you can’t express yourself well, others won’t understand your ideas. You can’t communicate well with others. Secondly, the organizational ability is also very important. A chopstick is easy to break, but a bundle of chopsticks is hard to break.
I hope we all have a bright future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该文章为日记，写作时候要注意符合日记的写作格式。日记内容主要包括两部分：（1）包括同学们的发言；（2）作者自己认为的认为21世纪的青少年应该拥有的2个关键能力。
2.写作指导：写作时应以第一人称来写；时态用一般现在时；写作时要注意围绕主题，并能准确地使用一定的语法，词汇，短语和句型。
Writing 5（2022·宁夏·银川市第十五中学一模）
2022寒假正值北京冬奥会，你和同学们也想去体验一下冰雪运动。周六天气晴朗，你和朋友相约到鸣翠湖滑雪场一起滑雪。请你根据以下提示写一篇日记，记录本次活动并简要谈谈感受。文中不得出现真实姓名，80词左右，所给字数不算在总字数中。
内容提示：
1. 活动时间：早上10:00出发，下午5:00返回。
2. 交通工具：公交车；
3. 活动：滑冰，滑雪(skiing)，参观鸣翠湖……(拓展至少两项活动)；
4. 感受：谈自己的感受或收获。
During the winter vacation of 2022, the Winter Olympics was held in Beijing. I also wanted to experience winter sports with my friends. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】[例文]
Saturday Sunny
During the winter vacation of 2022, the Winter Olympics was held in Beijing. I also wanted to experience winter sports with my friends. We left at 10:00 a.m. and returned at 5:00 p.m. We went there by bus because Mincui Lake Ski resort was not far from here. We had many interesting activities, such as skating, sking and visiting Mincui Lake. We also had an interesting ski race. In addition, we had a game about skiing. Everyone took an active part in the game. I was so happy that I didn’t want to go home.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一篇日记，记录周六你和朋友相约到鸣翠湖滑雪场一起滑雪的过程和感受。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般过去时行文；人称采用第一人称。写作时按照日记格式，内容需包含时间、交通工具、活动以及自己的感受。文章确保语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词语法错误。
Writing 6（2022·天津东丽·二模）
我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动。在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你校组织志愿者去天津敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇日记。
活动时间 3月5日
活动地点 天津敬老院（Tianjin Nursing Home）
参加人员 学校志愿者（volunteer）
活动形式 1.送去鲜花和水果 2.帮助打扫卫生 3.陪老人聊天（chat with sb）、唱歌、跳舞 4.送去美好祝愿 ……
活动感想 关爱老人、尊重老人
要求：
1.短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数80~100。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 老人the elderly people；尊重respect
Mar. 5th, 2021Fine
Today is 5th March. Our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home.
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I hope more people can join us.
【答案】Mar. 5th, 2021
Fine
Today is 5th March. Our teacher took us volunteers to Tianjin Nursing Home. As soon as we volunteers got to Tianjin Nursing Home, they gave us a warm welcome. We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Then we sang and danced. How happy we were! After that, we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them. The elderly people were very excited. We also had dinner together. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were thankful for our kindness.
This activity not only makes the elderly people happy but also lets us learn more. For example, we feel it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them.
I hope more people can join us.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求写一篇日记，记述去敬老院做志愿者的经历，表格中的内容要描述齐全，并适当进行拓展。
2.写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般过去时进行叙事，以第一、三人称进行写作。先承接所给开头重点描述活动内容，再另起一段表达感想。注意保持主谓的一致性，做到无标点和拼写错误。
Writing 7（2022·广东广州·一模）
今天，学校“英语节”总结交流会上，你的同学李华做了发言，分享了经验。请你写一则英文日记，记录这特别的分享。日记需包括以下要点：
1. 分享者：李华，学校英语演讲比赛一等奖获得者；
2. 分享内容：现场演讲、分享演讲技巧；分享学英语的方法等；
3. 你的收获和感受。
注意：
1. 词数80~120个左右（文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥）
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Thursday, March 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we listened to a wonderful speech. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Thursday, March 31st
Dear Diary,
Today, we listened to a wonderful speech. There were twelve students in the contest. Li Hua won the first prize. She shared her speech skills and English learning experience with us. Here are some in her speech.
Before the speech, we should pick the topic and prepare for it. We should write down the outlines and organize what we are going to say. Take a deep breath to relax yourself and start the speech. She said making a speech in public made her confident and brought her great pleasure. She advised us to do a lot of reading and sing English songs. It’s good to listen carefully and take notes in class. I learn a lot from her speech. I am sure I will do better in English.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以日记形式记录学校“英语节”总结交流会，内容包括介绍一等奖获奖者；谈谈现场演讲及获奖者分享演讲技巧和学英语的方法，最后谈谈自己的收获和感受。
2.写作指导：本文用一般过去时和一般现在时写作，介绍演讲及获奖者用一般过去时，介绍获奖者的经验用一般现在时；书写要紧扣主题，分层介绍获奖者，获奖者分析的经验及自己的收获和感受。做到中心突出，内容完整连贯。
Writing 8（2022·广东广州·一模）
假如你是李华，考上了一所理想高中。今天是开学的第一天，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文日记，记录这一天的经历及感受。
去学校前 感到紧张，期待新学校
在学校里 1. 认识新的老师和同学们； 2.了解学校的规章制度； 3.参观了校园；
回到家中 1. 制定学习和锻炼计划； 2. 你的感受……
注意：
1.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
September 1st
Today is the first of my new school life.
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【答案】例文：
September 1st
Today is the first of my new school life. I felt nervous before I went to school. Meanwhile, I was looking forward to it. Let me introduce something about my new school life.
At school, I met some new teachers and classmates. They were very friendly and helpful. With the help of my head teacher, I knew a lot about school rules. I also visited my school with other classmates. It was very big and nice. At home, I made study and exercise plans.
I think I will have a good time in the new school.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记。根据要点提示，描述今天新学校开学的情况。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己在学校的所见所闻以及回家之后的活动；第三段表达自己的期待。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
Writing 9（2021·广东广州·二模）
学校开展“小手拉大手，科技进生活”的交流活动，你结合Grandpa Green的需求，帮他一起在网上购买了一款智能手表，体验网上购物的便利。请你根据以下要点，用日记的方式写下这个体验和感受。
注意：
1. 词数80-120个左右(文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥)
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Friday Sunny
This afternoon I taught Grandpa Green ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文：
Friday Sunny
This afternoon I taught Grandpa Green to buy a smart watch online. We had a happy shopping experience.
First, we typed “smart watch” on the shopping website and lots of goods appeared. Then we chose a perfect one after checking the details of the watches. It has such a big screen with big numbers that Grandpa Green can know the time easily. More conveniently, if Granpa wears it, it can not only show where he is, but also lead him to where he wants to go. Grandpa can also make some phone calls when needed. Besides, it only costs 899 yuan. It is very popular and has been bought by 6,899 people with a five-star good review. We thought it was a good choice and paid it online finally. We were looking forward to receiving the watch.
Shopping online saves our time and makes our life more convenient and comfortable. And I feel happy to teach Grandpa to shop online successfully.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇日记。要求根据提示内容，写一下网上购物的体验和感受。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍选购的过程以及感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
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