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应用文写作
假如你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Harry上周写信询问你的体育爱好。请根据以下要点给他回信,内容包括:
1. 你喜欢的运动项目及原因;
2. 何时喜欢上这项运动,现在参加该运动的情况如何;
3. 询问对方的体育爱好。
字数:100词左右,语句通顺,逻辑连贯。
(高考要求80词左右,其实可写到120-130词)
Step1: 审题
假如你是李华,你的加拿大笔友Harry上周写信询问你的体育爱好。请根据以下要点给他回信,内容包括:
1. 你喜欢的运动项目及原因;
2. 何时喜欢上这项运动,现在参加该运动的情况如何;
3. 询问对方的体育爱好。
字数:100词左右,语句通顺,逻辑连贯。
Step1: 审题
1. 确定文体:
回复信
2.主体时态:
一般现在时(介绍运动项目及喜欢原因)
3. 主体人称:
第三人称(介绍运动项目及喜欢原因)
Step2: 谋篇布局
Para1:
Para2:
Para3:
1)寒暄 2)说明写作目的(回复Harry提问)
3)引入话题( 你喜欢的运动项目)
1)何时喜欢上这项运动,现在参加该运动的情况如何
2)展开说明你喜欢该运动项目的具体原因(2-3个分点)
1)询问对方的体育爱好。
2) 盼回复。
Step2: 谋篇布局
Para1:
Para2:
Para3:
1)寒暄 2)说明写作目的(回复Harry提问)
3)引入话题( 你喜欢的运动项目)
1)何时喜欢上这项运动,现在参加该运动的情况如何
2)展开说明你喜欢该运动项目的具体原因(2-3个分点)
1)询问对方的体育爱好。
2) 盼回复。
中段可充分利用积累,写BOOK2U3 Sports 相关话题
(如足球,跑步,或太极拳...)
Step3: 遣词造句
Para1:
1)寒暄 2)说明写作目的(回复Harry提问)
3)引入话题( 你喜欢的运动项目)
1) How’s everything going Learning that you’re curious about my favorite sport, I’m writing to share with you my enthusiasm for football/running/tai chi.
1) How are you doing I feel so delighted to know that you take interest in my favorite sport. I can’t wait any longer to share with you my passion for football/running/tai chi.
Step3: 遣词造句
Para2:
1)何时喜欢上这项运动,现在参加该运动的情况如何
I fell in love with it when I was in junior high school under the influence of my teacher/father/friend(who is deeply fascinated by this sport). I keep the habit of playing football/going running/doing tai chi twice a week and am gradually improving.
1)何时喜欢上这项运动,现在参加该运动的情况如何
2)展开说明你喜欢该运动项目的具体原因(2-3个分点)
Step3: 遣词造句
Para2:
General Version: (通用版本)
The reasons why I’m deeply attracted are as follows.
Firstly, it benefited me a lot, both mentally and physically. Not only can it build up my strength, but also help me release stress from work.
Secondly, it can boost both my confidence and immune system(免疫系统) , contributing to a healthier life and better physical fitness.
Last but not least, during the process I have made numerous new friends and promoted my interpersonal skills.
2)展开说明你喜欢该运动项目的具体原因(2-3个分点)
Step3: 遣词造句
Para2:
Football Version: (足球话题:迁移版)
The reasons why I’m deeply attracted are as follows.
Firstly, football is such a simple and cheap game to play that I can play to my heart’s content, even with a ball made of plastic bags. It’s really available and affordable.
Secondly, the creativity and excitement on the field is so fun that I’m always amazed by professional players' to pass, score and defend. So I spare no effort to imitate them.
Last but not least, football is the best way to communicate, which breaks down walls and brings people together on and off the field. I deeply love the spirit it brings me.
2)展开说明你喜欢该运动项目的具体原因(2-3个分点)
Step3: 遣词造句
Para2:
Running Version: (跑步话题:迁移版)
The reasons why I’m deeply attracted are as follows.
Firstly, running can help me promote my physical fitness and boost my confidence.
Secondly, some running apps can list my performance against other runners in my social network. So I make efforts to run to see my name in the top five.
Last but not least, running is a perfect way to release pressure. My nervous energy pushes me through mile one. By mile two, my tension has moved from my mind to my legs.
2)展开说明你喜欢该运动项目的具体原因(2-3个分点)
Step3: 遣词造句
Para2:
Tai Chi Version: (太极拳话题:迁移版)
The reasons why I’m deeply attracted are as follows.
Firstly, tai chi teaches me to stay calm during life’s ups and downs and embrace the world with and open mind. By doing tai chi with its circular and relaxed movements, I can reduce stress from work.
Secondly, it helps me cultivate a righteous and neutral mind by teaching me to peacefully work in harmony with breath regulation.
Last but not least, as a regular practitioner, I must be upright and act from the perspective of others, which deepens my understanding of Confucianism’s emphasis on self-cultivation and benevolence.
2)展开说明你喜欢该运动项目的具体原因(2-3个分点)
Step3: 遣词造句
Para3:
1)询问对方的体育爱好。
2) 盼回复。
Obviously, no one can deny the benefits of doing sport. By the way, I’m really curious about your favorite sport as well. Could you share with me Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Step4:组合成篇
General Version: (通用版本)
How are you doing I feel so delighted to know that you take interest in my favorite sport. I can’t wait any longer to share with you my passion for football/running/tai chi.
The reasons why I’m deeply attracted are as follows. Firstly, it benefited me a lot, both mentally and physically. Not only can it build up my strength, but also help me release stress from work. Secondly, it can boost both my confidence and immune system(免疫系统) , contributing to a healthier life and better physical fitness.Last but not least, during the process I have made numerous new friends and promoted my interpersonal skills.
Obviously, no one can deny the benefits of doing sport. By the way, I’m really curious about your favorite sport as well. Could you share with me Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Step4:组合成篇
Football Version: (足球话题:迁移版)
How are you doing I feel so delighted to know that you take interest in my favorite sport. I can’t wait any longer to share with you my passion for football.
The reasons why I’m deeply attracted are as follows.
Firstly, football is such a simple and cheap game to play that I can play to my heart’s content, even with a ball made of plastic bags. It’s really available and affordable. Secondly, the creativity and excitement on the field is so fun that I’m always amazed by professional players' skills to pass, score and defend. So I spare no effort to imitate them. Last but not least, football is the best way to communicate, which breaks down walls and brings people together on and off the field. I deeply love the spirit it brings me.
Obviously, no one can deny the benefits of doing sport. By the way, I’m really curious about your favorite sport as well. Could you share with me Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Step4:组合成篇
Running Version: (跑步话题:迁移版)
How’s everything going Learning that you’re curious about my favorite sport, I’m writing to share with you my enthusiasm for running.
The reasons why I’m deeply attracted are as follows. Firstly, running can help me promote my physical fitness and boost my confidence. Secondly, some running apps can list my performance against other runners in my social network. So I make efforts to run to see my name in the top five. Last but not least, running is a perfect way to release pressure. My nervous energy pushes me through mile one. By mile two, my tension has moved from my mind to my legs.
Obviously, no one can deny the benefits of doing sport. By the way, I’m really curious about your favorite sport as well. Could you share with me Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Step4:组合成篇
Tai Chi Version: (太极拳话题:迁移版)
How’s everything going Learning that you’re curious about my favorite sport, I’m writing to share with you my enthusiasm for tai chi.
The reasons why I’m deeply attracted are as follows. Firstly, tai chi teaches me to stay calm during life’s ups and downs and embrace the world with an open mind. By doing tai chi with its circular and relaxed movements, I can reduce stress from work. Secondly, it helps me cultivate a righteous and neutral mind by teaching me to peacefully work in harmony with breath regulation.Last but not least, as a regular practitioner, I must be upright and act from the perspective of others, which deepens my understanding of Confucianism’s emphasis on self-cultivation and benevolence.
Obviously, no one can deny the benefits of doing sport. By the way, I’m really curious about your favorite sport as well. Could you share with me Looking forward to your earliest reply.