05：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（湖北荆门）（含解析）

05：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（湖北荆门）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．青少年是祖国的未来。在创建全国文明城市的过程中，你市举办了“美德少年”评选活动。请根据以下提示，以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书，号召大家积极争做“美德少年”。
要点：
1. 在学校：努力学习知识，养成良好的学习习惯，爱运动；
2. 在家里：经常与家人交流，感恩父母，分担家务，知错就改；
3. 在社会：遵守规则，在公共场合不要大声喧哗，注意安全；
4. 发表你的观点。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
4. 词数：80-100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to become a virtue teenager of our city
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二、书信作文
2．湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会近期在荆门成功举办，其景区已向市民开放，现面向全市中学生招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英文写一封自荐信。
要点：
1. 性格开朗，待人友善；
2. 面对困难，勇于挑战；
3. 对园艺兴趣浓厚，了解园林文化；
4. 有做志愿者的经历；
5. ……
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
4. 词数：80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会；garden culture园林文化；gardening园艺
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. Can I have the chance to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
三、材料作文
3．为弘扬中华传统文化，你校举办了一次“戏曲进校园”展演活动。假定你是李华，请你将活动的相关情况写信告知你的英国笔友John。
要点：
1. 时间：5月16日下午2:30;
2. 地点：学校操场;
3. 内容：校长在开幕式上致辞；戏曲知识竞赛；师生戏曲表演等；
4. 感受：对传统文化有了进一步的了解……
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名或地名；
2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
4. 词数：80—100 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：戏曲 opera (n.) 开幕式 opening ceremony ( n.) 表演 performance ( n.)致辞 make a speech
Dear John,
How is everything going I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
4．亲爱的同学，你喜欢阅读吗？在4月23日世界读书日来临之际，我校决定举办2020春季校园师生“悦读节”活动。请你为我校拟定一则海报宣传读书日。字数：80-100。文章开头已给出，不记入总词数，文中包含以下几点：
1.阅读很容易，不受时间、地点限制。
2.阅读能给我们带来快乐。（如：能与智者为伴…）
3.阅读非常有用。（如：能帮我们解决生活中的难题…）
4.你有关阅读的做法和打算（1-2点即可）。
参考词汇：open up, improve, wisemen, knowledge…
要求：①书写规范、工整，条理清晰。
②不逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
③文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等。
Dear students,
Reading is not only a good habit but an enjoyable thing.
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5．去年7月，国家颁布了《关于进一步减轻义务教育阶段学生作业负担和校外培训负担的意见》，要求切实减轻中小学生学业负担。对于学业负担，你有什么看法？“双减政策”对学生的学习生活有什么影响呢？你还有什么好的建议吗？一家英语杂志社想要了解湖北各地相关的情况，请你用一篇文章来表达自己的观点。
要点：
1. 花费太多时间在大量作业上不利于身体健康；
2. 如果有足够的时间休息，我们可以学得更好；
3. 我们的生活已经发生了改变，市区见不到那么多的补习班了；
4. 有足够的时间参加体育活动，可以交更多的朋友，感觉压力更小了；
5. 你的建议……
要求：
1. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：双减政策Double Reduction Policy 补习班after-school program
I think Double Reduction Policy is very good for us students. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、电子邮件
6．假如你是李明，你的外国笔友Alice想了解我国的传统节日“元宵节”。请根据以下所给的要点提示，用英语给Alice写一封电子邮件，向她介绍这个传统节日。
要点：
1. Date: On the 15th day of the 1st lunar month;
2. History: Over 2,000 years;
3. Activities: * guessing lantern riddles（灯谜）;
* watching the dragon dance and the lion dance;
* enjoy festival lanterns;
* walking on stilts （踩高跷）;
* ...
要求：
1. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Alice,
How are you I’m glad to tell you something about the Lantern Festival. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
How about visiting China next year and celebrating the Lantern Festival with us I believe you will have great fun here.
Yours,
Li Ming
7．假如你是李明，你的英国朋友Henry给你发来电子邮件，询问关于新冠疫情 (COVID-19 pandemic) 对你们生活习惯带来的改变。请你根据以下要点给他回邮件，并表达你对此变化的看法。
要点：1.在公共场所带口罩的多了；
2.去人群聚集场所的人少了；
3.更注重身体锻炼了；
4.养成了餐前餐后勤洗手，餐中用公筷的习惯；
5.你的看法……
要求：1. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；
2. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：病毒 virus (n.) 口罩 facial mask (n.) 公筷 serving chopsticks (n.)
Dear Henry,
How is everything going You asked me about how the COVID-19 pandemic has changed our living habits in your e-mail, and I’m glad to share with you the new changes.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
8．假如你是李平，报名参加了今年荆门市举办的迎新春长跑。请你根据以下提示及要求，向某英语报社的编辑写一封电子邮件，谈谈你的参加经历及感受。
提示：1. 活动于3月9日上午9点开始；
2. 大约12万人参加，沿着漳河大道跑完5公里；
3. 你提前到达，大约一个小时跑完全程；
4. 虽然很累，但收获很多，不仅锻炼了身体，而且增强了毅力。
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥。
参考词汇：a Greeting New-Spring long-distance race（迎新春长跑）; Zhanghe Avenue（漳河大道）; strengthen one’s will（增强毅力）
Dear editor,
In order to build up our bodies, a Greeting New-Spring long-distance race was held in Jingmen. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Li Ping
9．假如你是黄婷，你的英国笔友Jenny给你发来一封邮件。在邮件中Jenny提及自己在学习中遇到了一些困难，导致她压力很大，经常和父母发生争吵，为此她感到很苦恼。请你根据以下要点提示，给Jenny回复一封邮件，帮助她走出困境。
要点：
1. 和父母进行一次交谈；
2. 做一些放松身心的活动；
3. ……
要求：1. 邮件内容须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 提出至少一条自己的建议；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范。
4. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jenny,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m really sorry to hear about your problems.
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Yours,
Huang Ting
五、通知
10．难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行 “告别初中生话”的主题班会。假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。要点如下：
1、时间；6月26日下午3:00。
2、地点：301教室。
3、活动内容：
1）对老师用话语表达谢意；
2）与同学交流暑假计划；
3）师生合影，互赠留言。
参考词汇：look back at, say goodbye to, express thanks to, talk about, take photos
注：词数100字左右；通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
参考答案：
1．例文：
Be a Virtue Teenager
Teenagers are the future of our motherland, and also the symbol of our city. What should we do to become a virtue teenager of our city
At school, we should study hard and form good learning habits. In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to build up a good body. It's our duty to help parents do some housework at home and we should always be thankful for what our parents have done for us. Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them. Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and correct them timely. What's more, I suggest we obey the rules in public and don't speak loudly. Last but not least, keep in mind that safety is first.
In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above. I sincerely hope everyone can join us and try to be a virtue teenager.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“Be a Virtue Teenager”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书，号召大家积极争做“美德少年”，并从学校、家庭、社会三方面谈谈自己的观点和做法。结合所给材料，可知主要考查一般现在时态，人称主要为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用，写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，逻辑顺畅。首段开门见山，直接点明文章“争做美德少年”的主旨，第二段从学校、家庭以及社会三方面浅谈自己作“美德少年”的方法，最后一段总结全文，升华文章立意。另外文章语言简练，运用简单的句式结构将题目主要内容完整表述。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in our spare time；build up；be thankful fo；make mistake；last but not least；be supposed to。
句型：It+be+名词+不定式（it作形式主语）；if引导的条件状语从句。
2．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. Can I have the chance to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province As a volunteer, not only can I help people in need, but also I can learn a lot from the experience.
Outgoing and energetic, I get on well with others. When facing challenges in life, I always choose to deal with them bravely instead of staying behind. Gardening is exactly what I’m fond of and I have a good knowledge of different garden cultures which are quite helpful for the job. Last but not least, my experience of being a volunteer in the Flower Expo last year won high praise from others.
I hope to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province so as to help people know more about the different garden cultures in Hubei Province.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容写一封自荐信介绍自己的情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，申请做第三届（荆门）园林博览会的志愿者；
第二步，介绍自己的相关情况和优势；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with与……相处融洽
②deal with处理
③be fond of喜欢
④Last but not least最后但同样重要的
[高分句型]
①As a volunteer, not only can I help people in need, but also I can learn a lot from the experience.（not only...but also...连接并列句）
②Gardening is exactly what I’m fond of and I have a good knowledge of different garden cultures which are quite helpful for the job.（what引导的表语从句和which引导的定语从句）
3．Dear John，
How is everything going I’m writing to share with you an activity called Opera Entering Campus in our school.
The activity was held at 2:30 pm on May 16 on the playground. In the beginning, the headmaster made a speech at the opening ceremony, inspiring us students to learn more about Chinese culture. After that, there was an exciting competition about opera knowledge. In the end, we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera.
Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be hold，on the playground，in the beginning，make a speech，at the opening ceremony，after that，in the end，put on，have a chance等。而we enjoyed wonderful opera performances put on by some teachers and students who are talented in opera./ Through this activity, we have a better understanding of opera and get closer to Chinese traditional culture. /I hope you can have a chance to come to China and experience Chinese culture on your own.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
4．例文：
Dear students,
Reading is not only a good habit but an enjoyable thing.
Firstly, it’s very easy to keep on reading. We can read anywhere and anytime if we want. Secondly, we may communicate with the wisemen all over the world by reading. It can open up our eyes to the outside world and bring us happiness. Thirdly, reading is useful for each of us. We can learn much knowledge from books to solve the problems we may meet every day. Since reading is so important. I’m going to read more on weekends or during the vacations.
In a word, books are our best friends and teachers. Let’s enjoy reading and enjoy our life!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一则海报宣传读书日，介绍阅读的好处。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍阅读容易、阅读给我们带来快乐、阅读有用以及自己的阅读打算；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
5．[例文]
I think Double Reduction Policy is very good for us students. As everybody knows, spending too much time on homework is not good for our health. If we have more time to rest, we can learn better, I think.
Luckily, our life has changed a lot. As we can see, there are not so many after-school programs in the city these days. Now we have enough time to take part in more sports activities in some sports centers, such as Ping-Pong clubs, basketball clubs and football clubs. These activities can not only make us strong and relaxed, but also make more friends and feel less pressure.
I hope that there are more activities at school, and we can enter more sports centers for free.
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求就“双减政策”写一篇文章，内容涉及对于学业负担的看法、“双减政策”对学生的学习生活的影响、还有自己对此给出的建议等。文章已就前两点给出提示，学生只需在自己的建议上自行发挥即可。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，因为是对某种现象的事实及观点进行陈述，时态应用现在时。文章应做到层次分明，条理清晰，语言流畅，不要出现单词拼写及语法时态方面的错误。
6．Dear Alice,
How are you I’m glad to tell you something about the Lantern Festival. The Lantern Festival is a traditional festival in China. It falls on the 15th day of the 1st lunar month with a history of over 2,000 years. Family members usually get together on the day of the festival and eat tangyuan. In the evening, people go out to enjoy festival lanterns, which is relaxing and pleasant. In some parts of China, people take part in activities, such as guessing lantern riddles, walking on stilts and watching the dragon dance and the lion dancing.
How about visiting China next year and celebrating the Lantern Festival with us I believe you will have great fun here.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求给笔友写一封电子邮件，向她介绍中国传统节日元宵节。要涵盖所有的内容提示，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，词数为80—100。
2.写作指导：本文时态主要以一般现在时为主，时态为第一、三人称；描述元宵节时，详细具体，结构完整，逻辑性强。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．One possible version:
Dear Henry,
How is everything going You asked me about how the COVID-19 pandemic has changed our living habits in your e-mail, and I’m glad to share with you the new changes.
Many of our habits have changed because of the COVID-19 pandemic. Nowadays, we usually wear facial masks in public places to protect ourselves from viruses. In addition, many people don’t go to crowded places any more, for it’s better to be safe than sorry. Different from before, we exercise a lot more now, hoping to build up our health. Another big change is in our dining habits. We wash our hands as much as possible before and after dinner and try to use serving chopsticks when taking food from plates, which greatly reduces the risk of spreading the virus.
In my opinion, these changes are good and necessary, because they can best protect us and help us finally defeat the pandemic.
Please take care and stay in touch.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。在邮件中向朋友介绍疫情给生活带来的改变。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为四段式：第一段点明主旨；第二段根据所给的提示要点描述疫情给人们带来了哪些改变；第三段发表自己的观点；最后一段表达自己对朋友的关心。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
8．One possible version:
Dear editor,
In order to build up our bodies, a Greeting New-Spring long-distance race was held in Jingmen. I took part in it. Now I’d like to tell you something about it.
The race began at 9 a.m. on March 9th. About 12,000 people joined in it. I arrived there ahead of time. I ran along the Zhanghe Avenue with the other runners. It took me about an hour to finish running 5 kilometers. It was really a hard job, but I kept telling myself to stick to the end.
Although I was tired, I achieved a lot. Not only did it make me healthier and stronger, but also it strengthened my will. I will never forget this meaningful experience.
Best wishes!
Li Ping
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求给某英语报社的编辑写一封电子邮件，谈谈自己的迎新春长跑经历和感受；要求包含所有要点，不能出现真实信息，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：此作文时态以一般过去时为主；采用第一人称口吻来行文。此作文可采取4段落格式，第一段：开门见山，谈谈自己参加长跑的目的；第二段：介绍参加长跑的经历；第三段：介绍参加长跑的感受；第四段：表达对编辑美好的祝福。注意内容全面，语句通顺、条理清晰，保证文中无单词和语法错误。
9．例文：
Dear Jenny,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m really sorry to hear about your problems. You said you had trouble with your schoolwork. I think you should think about the reason for it and then find the way to solve it. If you are slow when you study, you can practice finishing the questions as many as you can in an hour. If you have questions you can’t understand, you must ask your teachers and classmates for help. Reading more and taking notes are all good ways to get good grades. You said you were stressed. Relax yourself by listening to music or doing sports. You can also do anything you like to relax. Sit down and have a talk with your parents. You tell them you are trying your best to be better and they needn’t worry about you. I believe they can understand you.
I hope you can be happy soon.
Yours,
Huang Ting
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要求”中“提出至少一条自己的建议”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，书信问候后，提出听到对方遇到了一些问题很难过；
第二步，具体给出解决问题的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
① had trouble with sth. 在某方面有困难
② think about 考虑
③ ask sb. for help 向某人求助
④ try one’s best to do sth. 尽最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
① If you have questions you can’t understand, you must ask your teachers and classmates for help.（If引导的条件状语从句中包含省略that的定语从句）
② Reading more and taking notes are all good ways to get good grades.（动名词作主语）
10．参考范文：
Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spent together, how sweet we feel! In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26, next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Classroom 301.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, each should say thankful words to our dear teachers. We can chat with our classmates and teachers freely about our plans for the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we give our wishes to each other.
Don’t be late! That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，班级要举行“告别初中生话”的主题班会，要求以班长口吻写通知。写作内容包括时间、地点、活动内容等，注意写作时不要漏点，同时可以适当地添加合理的内容，使文章内容更加丰富。
2.写作指导：这是一篇通知类作文，回忆过去的情况，句子用一般过去时，叙述以后的生活应该用一般将来时，句子的主语一般用第一人称，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，使用自己熟悉的句式及词汇，为了上下文的衔接，要使用一些过渡词或句子。