07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（湖北孝感）（含解析）

07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（湖北孝感）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．感恩是永恒的主题，孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德，父母给予我们生命，抚养我们长大。请以“Be Thankful to Our Parents”为题写一篇短文。内容包括：
1. 父母为我们做了什么？
2. 我们应该怎样感恩父母？
3. 帮助父母做家务，陪他们聊天，多陪伴他们，关心他们的身体等等话题来入手。
要求：1.100词左右；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
Be Thankful to Our Parents
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2．三年的初中学习生活就要结束，暑假即将来临。你打算过一个什么样的暑假呢？放松的(relaxing)？忙碌的(busy)？有意义的(meaningful)？……你准备在这个暑假做些什么？(吃喝玩乐？学习？做志愿者？旅行？……)请你以My Summer Vacation为题写一篇短文，说说你的计划和安排。
写作要求：
1、先填好标题，再围绕标题展开作文；
2、100词左右；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名；
4、短文内容与标题相符，文章逻辑结构合理，字、词、句、语法使用正确。
My ________ Summer Vacation
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二、材料作文
3．世界在发展, 文化在交融, 英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。经过两年多的学习, 你一定积累了许多成功的经验, 请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你对学习英语的建议。80词左右。
提示词：
1.listen to tapes, English songs and programs,watch English movies.
2.speak English, as much as possible, join the English club.
3. read more English newspapers and magazines.
4. keep diaries, pen pal.
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
4．随着年龄的增长，你周围的事物也发生了很大变化。请根据以下提示，以“Great changes around me”为题，写一篇短文。
写作要点：
1. 过去, 道路狭窄(narrow), 房展老旧, 空气…河水…
2.现在。路面洁净、宽阔, 交通便利；高楼林立；蓝天白云, 满城绿树鲜花, 小鸟歌唱；人们…
3.感受, …
写作要求：
1.要点齐全, 省略号处须作适当发挥, 但不要逐句翻译；
2. 语句连贯, 条理清晰, 详略得当, 书写工整；
3文中不得出现任何宾实的信息（地名、校名和人名等）；
4.100词左右, 短文的题目和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
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5．目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。
要点：
不重视课外阅读的原因 1. 作业太多 2. 没有读书习惯 3. 时间花在电脑或网络上
课外阅读的好处 1. 更多地了解世界 2. 学会如何思考 3. 生活更加丰富多彩
对学校或同学的建议 ……（至少一点）
注意：1. 词数: 80个左右（开头已给出的内容不记入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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6．假如你是某校九年级（1）班的学生，你校正在举行“Young Star Award”的评选活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的同学李明，以供参评。内容要点如下：
1. 个子高，性格外向，为人友善；
2. 学习认真，成绩优秀；
3. 爱好广泛，擅长踢足球；
4. 乐于助人，……；
5. 得到高度赞扬，我们以他为荣。
写作要求：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 第4要点的省略号部分，需作适当发挥（2—3句话即可）；
3. 词数在90个左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I’m glad to hear the news that “Young Star Award” is going on in our school. I think Li Ming is the hot favorite for the award. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．十月通常是举办校园运动会的好时节，同学们在赛场上挥洒汗水，挑战自我，努力争先。无论是个人项目还是团体项目，同学们都会在比赛的过程中感受到运动的魅力。你有钟情的运动吗？请以 My favourite sport 为题，写一篇不少于100词的文章来和我们来聊一聊吧。
My favourite sport What’s your favourite sport When did you start this sport When do you play the sport and how often Why do you like it …
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.须包括所有要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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8．同学们，在初中三年的英语学习中，我们从课本中学习了有关“Family”，“Be polite to sb”，“Protecting the environment”，“Volunteering”等话题。假定你是李华，请根据这些话题并依据以下要点提示，写一篇题为“I’m proud of my family”的英语短文，讲述你的家庭故事。
要点提示：
1. 家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作；
2. 邻里和睦、礼貌待人；
3. 爱护环境，从我做起；
4. 积极参加志愿活动。
写作要求：
1. 词数90左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，适当发挥，使文章内容完整，表达流畅；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇：work hard，be friendly to each other，get on well with，protect the environment，be volunteers
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Hua. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family-my parents, my sister and I.
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三、看图作文
9．你的安全牵动着家长、老师、朋友们的心，也是你健康成长的保障。请你根据图中有关交通安全、饮食安全、远离危险地点等内容写一篇短文，告诉同学们应如何保障安全。
提示：
1）What should we do when walking on the street
2）What should we eat to be healthy
3）How can we avoid accidents happening to us
要求：
1）短文要包括提示要点，可适当发挥。
2）不要出现真实姓名和校名。
3）词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Everyone bas only one life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
四、书信作文
10．书面表达
在初中即将毕业之际，假如你是李明，请你给曾经对你有很大帮助的张老师写一封感谢信。文章包含以下内容：
1. 三年前，你来到新的班级，没有朋友，感到孤独。
2. 张老师鼓励你多交朋友，告诉你要努力学好英语。
3. 现在你的变化。(性格变得外向，积极参加各种活动，学习成绩提高)
4. 对张老师表示感谢并祝福他身体健康。
注意：1.词数100左右，开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
2．短文必须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯，通顺。文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Mr. Zhang，
How time flies！I'll graduate from the junior high school soon，__________________________
Yours，
Li Ming
参考答案：
1．例文：
Be Thankful to Our Parents
Our parents love us more than anybody else in the world. They try to take good care of us in our daily life and help us with our lessons. They communicate with us and cheer us up when we are upset. They encourage us when we fail in the exam. When we meet difficulties, they are the first to come up and stand with us to solve the problems.
Thanks to them, we grow up healthily and happily. Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we are supposed to study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
All in all, we should always be grateful to our parents and do what we can to thank them.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“感恩父母”为题写一篇文章，内容需包括父母为我们做的事以及我们应该为父母做的事。根据题目要求可知，本文以第一和第三人称为主，时态为一般现在时。
2.例文点评：文章分为三部分，第一段介绍父母为我们做的事；第二段介绍我们应该为父母做的事，包括做家务、努力学习等；第三段总结全文，升华主旨。短文使用了正确的时态和人称，符合表达的需要。文章语法规范，句式完整，叙述清晰有条理。
3.高分亮点：
短语：take good care of；help sb with sth；cheer up；grow up；get on well with；be supposed to；all in all。
句型：They communicate with us and cheer us up when we are upset.（when引导的时间状语从句）Learning to care for our parents is what we should do.（what引导的表语从句）
2．范文：
My meaningful Summer Vacation
With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, I plan to relax myself, such as watching movies and traveling with my parents. I’ll exercise every day because it is good for our health. Then I am going to spend some time learning cooking, swimming and bike riding. And I want to communicate with my parents more. In my opinion, these skills will be useful and helpful in my future life.At the same time, I’ll read some books to open up my eyes. I also plan to take part in some social activities to prepare for future study.
I think I’ll have a meaningful summer vacation.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应首先填好标题，再围绕标题展开写作；接下来介绍自己有意义的暑假包含的内容：让放松自己；锻炼；学习各种技能等。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言通畅，语法正确，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
3．例文：
How to learn English well
English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well Here are my suggestions.
First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We’d better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries. We can find pen pals and write letters to them.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，根据提示内容从听说读写四方面说明学英语的方法。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主；具体说明学习方法描述详细且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：listen to the tapes；watching English movies；be helpful to；as much as possible; be afraid of; making mistakes; at last; in a word。
句型：as long as引导的条件状语从句，we should表示建议的句子；the more ..., the fewer ...形容词比较级的句型。
4．
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasn't fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It's really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white .The birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
Our country is rich and strong, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!
【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如take place，around me，used to be，convenient for，go out，different kinds of，lots of，most of us，look like，live a happy life，go on，become better and better等。而固定句型It's really convenient for people to go out.和固定句型The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.以及I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
5．At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven’t formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet.
However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful.
Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it’s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【分析】这是一篇材料作文，许多中学生不重视课外阅读，文章要求对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Here are…，quite a lot of students are…，reading has…，reading can…，teachers are supposed to…，it's a good idea to…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了许多中学生不重视课外阅读，接下来介绍阅读的好处，最后提出建议。此处be burdened with, form a habit of, would rather, learn about, last but not least, for one thing, for another, learn from等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
6．例文:
I’m glad to hear the news that “Young Star Award” is going on in our school. I think Li Ming is the hot favorite for the award.
Li Ming is a tall boy of wide interests, especially good at playing football. He is outgoing and always friendly to others. That’s why he has a lot of friends. Li Ming studies hard and of course is one of the top students at school. Besides, he takes an active part in different kinds of activities. Li Ming is helpful. He always helps the students who are in need. He often helps us with homework.
His actions have won high praise from our school. He sets a good example to us all and we are proud of him.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。写一篇短文介绍自己的同学李明。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，人称采用第三人称。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段从他的外貌，性格，爱好等方面介绍李明；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．例文：
My favourite sport
In October, it is common for schools to hold sports meetings. It is a good time to exercise and compete.
Of all sports, I like ping-pong best. I played it at the age of 6. Many of my friends and relatives play it well, so it’s easy for me to find partners. I often play ping-pong with them to improve my skills on weekends. After years of practicing, I can play it very well. Playing ping-pong not only builds up my strength but also develops my personality.
From this sport, I have learned that we will never know what we can do unless we try our best. Failure is the mother of success. We can always learn something useful from failure. It can benefit our lives.
【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“My favourite sport”为题写一篇不少于100词的文章，包括最喜欢的运动、什么时候开始的这项运动、多久做一次这项运动、为什么喜欢这项运动等，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍喜欢的运动及喜欢的原因时，应详细具体，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
8．例文
I’m Proud of My Family
My name is Li Hua. I have a happy family. There are four people in my family-my parents, my sister and I. My family love each other. My parents both work hard. My sister and I study hard at school, too. My family are kind and friendly to our neighbors. We are all polite to each other. We get on well with each other. My family try our best to protect the environment in our daily life. My mom and my sister usually bring a bag to go shopping. My father is used to taking the bus to work. I never order takeaway food. My family are glad to be volunteers at any time. My parents often help the children in poor areas. My sister helps the school library twice a week. Sometimes I read newspapers to the old people. What a happy family! I’m proud of my family!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“I’m Proud of My Family”为题写一篇短文。
2. 写作指导：时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。讲述家庭故事时，主要从以下四个方面去介绍：一是家人相亲相爱，努力学习、工作方面；二是邻里和睦，礼貌待人方面；三是爱护环境，从我做起方面；四是积极参加志愿活动，帮助贫困儿童方面。写作时，要避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语；要注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题，不要出现语法错误；要保证语句通顺，意思连贯，逻辑合理。
9．例文
Everyone has only one life. It is our parents’ best wishes to see us grow up happily and healthily. In return, we should treasure our lives. How to protect our lives
Firstly, now there are more and more cars, so when we walk on the road, we must obey the traffic rules, especially at the traffic lights. Wherever we are, we should stay away from dangerous places. Secondly, in my opinion, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. We’d better have enough sleep and do exercise every day. Remember, happiness is the most important thing. So smile every day! Be happy every day!
【详解】1.题干解读：根据图中有关交通安全、饮食安全、远离危险地点等的内容写一篇短文，告诉同学们应如何保障安全。写作时，短文要包括三条提示要点，可适当发挥。
2.例文点评：例文首段写每个人只有一次生命，提出该如何保护我们的生命呢？第二段围绕所给的三点提示告诉同学们如何来保护生命，最后，让同学们记住：幸福是最主要的，要每天微笑，开心每一天！语句表达通顺，连贯，符合写作要求。
10．Dear Mr.zhang，
How time flies！I'll graduate from the junior high school soon, words can't show my thanks to you. Three years ago, I was new in the class. I had no friends here and felt lonely. You encouraged me to make more friends. And you also told me to study English hard. With your help, I have changed a lot. Now, I am outgoing. I would like to take an active part in all kinds of activities. I also improve my grades a lot.
I'm so thankful to you for your kind help and I'll work harder and try to do better in the future. I wish you happy and healthy.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming
【详解】1.文章应该采用一般过去时和一般现在时两种时态结合。描述三年前的事情用一般过去时，描述现状用一般现在时。
2.文章分为两段来写。第一段写三年前的状态，老师的帮助，以及现在的状态。第二段主要表达对老师的感谢。
3.可以适当使用宾语从句和定语从句来使文章增添色彩。
亮点词汇短语：felt lonely感到孤独；make friends交朋友；study hard努力学习；With one’s help在某人的帮助下；outgoing外向的；take an active part in积极参加；all kinds of各种各样；in the future未来。
高分句型：
How time flies！时光飞逝!how引导的感叹句。
You encouraged me to make more friends. 你鼓励我交更多的朋友。Encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事。
I'm so thankful to you for your kind help that I'll work harder and try to do better in the future. 我非常感谢你的帮助，我将更加努力地工作，并努力在未来做得更好。That引导的宾语从句。