(新课标) Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainsrorm came Section B 3a-Self check 写作课优质课课件(共29张)

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Unit 5 What were you doing when the
rainstorm came
Period 5 Section B 3a-Self check
写作课优质课
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Learning aims
1.掌握下列词汇：point out, go away
掌握句型：While I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But when I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
When I heard my name, my heart beat so quickly I thought I would stop breathing.
2. 通过同桌对话在3a中把学过的语言用回答问题的形式进行梳理，再按照3b的写作框架提示完整地描写件难忘且重要的事，说明时间、地点、事件过程以及为什么自己记得这么清楚。
3.通过写作指导，能就本单元的话题进行写作。通过写过去的故事激励自己关心生活、关注社会，能辩证地积极地看待它们，形成正确的价值观。
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Revision
Pre-writing
Look and answer.
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What was Robert Allen doing
The World Trade Center was taken down.
It happened on April 4, 1968.
It happened in the US.
When he heard the news,
he is eating dinner in the kitchen.
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What was Kate Smith doing
The World Trade Center was
taken down.
It happened on September 11, 2001.
It happened in New York.
When she heard the news, she is
working in her office.
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Revision
Pre-writing
Look and say.
Look at the picture and talk about what they were doing when the plane hit the World Trade Center.
What was/were sb. doing when the plane hit World Trade Center
Sandy
Twin
brothers
Sammy
father
mother
dog
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Reading for writing
Pre-writing
Look and say.
What words, sentences or other things can you learn
from this text to write your event
文章中心句
例子来支撑
背景来介绍
细节来填充
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Reading for writing
Pre-writing
Look and say.
How are you going to
write the event
What & When: I remember what I was doing on…
Where & who: I was….with…
Feelings: I was completely shocked…
分段中心句
单元新表达
末段总起句
细节来填充
How are you going to write the event
衔接词：More recently
新表达：has meaning to
This was the day I will never forget...
I remember doing sth. …
I didn’t believe...
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Reading for writing
Pre-writing
Look and say.
Although the storm broke many things apart, it brought families and neighbors closer together.
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Interview
Pre-writing
Look and say.
the lockdown of the city of Wuhan on January 23rd
What was the event
The lockdown of the city of Wuhan.
When did it happen
It happened on January 23rd.
Where did it happen
It happened in Wuhan.
What were you doing
When/While…
What were your friends doing
My friends were …..
Why was it important
Because it brought people closer together.
Why do you remember this event
Because my mother went to Wuhan as a voulunteer.
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Making notes
Pre-writing
Look and fill.
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
event
time
place
activities
reasons
Facts (事实情况）
Details (细节信息）
Meaning (意义影响）
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Making notes
Pre-writing
Look and fill.
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
The lockdown of the city of Wuhan.
on January 23rd
in Wuhan
I was doing my homework.
My friends were playing basketball.
Because it brought people closer
together.
Because my mother went to Wuhan
as a voulunteer.
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Writing
While-writing
Look and write.
3b
Write a short article about the important event in 3a.
Try to write three paragraphs.
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
use the past progressive tense
use the past progressive tense
what event it was
the time
the reason
the reason
the place
①
②
Facts (事实情况）
Details (细节信息）
③
Meaning (意义影响）
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
Writing
instructions
A
审题
（三审）
B
内容
大纲
C
D
梳理
成文
重点
句式
3b
Write a short article about the important event in 3a.
Try to write three paragraphs.
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
A
审题
（三审）
记叙文
第一人称
一般过去时
过去进行时
体裁
人称
时态
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
B
内容
大纲
写作句式和模式
what,when and where it happened
you and your parents’/
friends’ activities
why it was important
I remember well /I will never
forget was ______.It happened
in/ on________at\in ________.
事件
时间
地点
When I heard the news of this event /When this event happened, I was _____________ My friends were _____________.\I was doing ______________while my friends were doing _________________.
事件发生时我在的地方
我朋友在的地方
事件发生时我在做的事
事件发生时朋友在做的事
This event is very important to me because ____.\I remember this event well because______\I really learned a lesson from (吸取教训)this event because _________.
原因
原因
原因
第一段：
Introduction
(引入)
第二段：
details of the event
(事件的详细过程)
第三段：
reasons (原因)
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
C
重点
句式
The important thing that I will never forget is that…
An important event that I remember well was…
It happened in/on…
When…, I was…
While I was doing…, … was/were doing…
He / She was… when…
It was an unforgettable day.
I will never forget… because…
The event has meaning to me because…
开头句
中间句
结尾句
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
D
梳理
成文
An important event that I remember well is the lockdown of the city of Wuhan. It happened on January 23rd. I heard the news on TV.
I was doing my homework in the the living room when I heard the news. My friends were playing basketball. And my parents were cooking lunch in the kitchen. I told them about it. We all felt completely shocked.
I remember this event well because my mother left for Wuhan to work as a volunteer. I was really proud(骄傲的) of her. Although the virus put us in great danger, it brought Chinese people closer together. So this event is very important to everybody.
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Writing practice
While-writing
Look and write.
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
on February 4, 2022.
at Bird Nest(鸟巢) in Beijing
I was having dinner.
My friengs are watching TV.
It was the first time for China to have
the Winter Olympic Games
We won the most gold medals.
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
话题分析
本单元的话题是“难忘的事件”，要求同学们学会描述自己或他人过去经历或发生的一件难忘的事。写作时，首先要点明事情发生的时间、地点、人物等；其次详写事情的发展过程；最后阐明令人难忘的原因或自己的感受及看法。写此类作文时，主要以一般过去时和过去进行时为主，写作时要注意正确使用时态。
人称时态
第一人称
一般过去时和过去进行时为主
人称
时态
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
谋篇布局
an event
开篇点题
具体描述
总结全文
开门见山陈述这件最令你难忘的事件(What, Where, When)
An important event that I remember well was ___________
__________________________________. It happened in/on ___________________ at/in ________________________.
描述当事件发生时你和你的一些朋友正在做什么和感受。(Where, When, What, feelings)
When I heard the news of this event/When this event happened, I was____________________________. My friends were______________.
写出这件事为什么重要的原因。(Why)
This event is very important to me because _____________
__________________________________________________. I remember this event well because _____________________.
of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games
the opening
on February 4, 2022
Bird Nest in Beijing
having dinner with my parents
watching TV
the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games.
it was
we won the most gold medals.
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Writing guidance
While-writing
Look and write.
范文欣赏
The important event that I can remember well was the opening of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games. It happened at Bird Nest-The National Stadium(鸟巢-国家体育场) in Beijing on February 4, 2022. This was an important event in Chinese history.
When the opening began, my parents and I were having dinner. My friengs were watching TV.We finished it quickly, then we sat in front of the TV to watch it. It was great.
The 2008 Olympic Games was very important for the Chinese. Because it was the first time for China to have the Winter Olympic Games. It has also made Beijing the world's first city of double Olympics. We won the most gold medals. It showed that our country was becoming stronger and stronger.
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Post-writing
Look and fill.
Self Check
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
1. _____ I was walking home from school, I saw
a strange light in the sky. But _____ I pointed
it out to my friend, it went away.
2. ______ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn’t believe me.
3. ______ my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
While
when
When
While
消失
也 too
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Post-writing
Look and fill.
Self Check
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I ____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I ________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher _____ (come) three times a week to _____ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I ____ (be) so nervous when they _____ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and _______ (start) to play. While I _______________ (play), everyone ____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______ (hear) my name, my heart ____ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ____ (win)! It ____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was
joined
practiced
came
help
arrived
was
called
went
started
was playing
sat
waited
heard
beat
won
was
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Language points
Post-writing
When I was in the sixth grade, I joined a piano competition.
__________________________________________________
While I was playing, everyone sat still and listened.
__________________________________________________
一般过去时表示_______________发生的______或存在的
______（强________动作）；
过去进行时表示在过去_______________________________动作
（强调_________动作）。
e.g: 昨天晚上她写了点儿东西。______________________________
昨天她整个晚上都在写东西。____________________________________
当我六年级时，我参加一场钢琴比赛。
当我在谈的时候，每个人都坐着不动去听。
过去某个时间
动作
状态
一次性
某一时刻或某段时间
正在进行的
反复的
He wrote something last night.
He was writing something all night last night.
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Emotion
Post-writing
历史是说过和做过事情的记忆。
过去的事就让它过去吧。
充实今天的生活，昨日已成历史，明天还是未知数。
◆ History is the memory of things said and done.
◆ Let bygones be bygones.
◆ Enrich your life today; yesterday is history; tomorrow is the unknown.
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Class test
Post-writing
一、用括号内所给单词的适当形式填空。
6．It rained _________(heavy) last night.
7．They had dinner in __________(silent)．
8．_________ (recent)，they didn't come home.
9．Can you tell me the ________(true) about that event
10．He ________________(sleep) when I left home.
heavily
silence
Recently
truth
was sleeping
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Class test
Post-writing
二、完成句子
1. 午夜时分，风渐渐变弱了。
The wind was ______ _____ at the midnight.
2. 起初，我并不赞同他的观点。
____ ______, I didn't agree with him.
3. 你能指出这家旅馆在地图上的位置吗？
Can you _____ _____ the hotel on this map
4. 我记得关掉电视了。
I ____________ ___________ off the television.
5. 昨晚他太兴奋了，无法入睡。
He was too excited to ______ _______ last night.
At first
dying down
point out
remember turning
fall asleep
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Homework
在日常生活中,总有些事情影响着你的自身发展。请写一篇不少于80的英短文,叙述一件对你影响较大的事情,谈一谈这件事情是如何影响了你某一方面品质( quality)的提升,如独立、勤奋、乐于助人等，并在班级的英语园地展出。(文中不能出现真实的人名和校名)
Finish your own composition and hand it to your teacher.
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