(共35张PPT)
Unit5
What were you doing when the rainstorm came
SB 3a-Self Check
Sylvia W 原创出品
Let’s look back the events happened in the past.
Dr. Martin Luther King was killed.
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On April 4, 1968.
In America.
Robert Allen were eating dinner with his family.
Shocked.
The World Trade Center was taken down by terrorists.
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On September 11, 2001.
In New York.
Kate Smith were working in her office near the two towers.
Unbelievable[难以置信的).
The city was under the coronavirus lockdown.
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On January 23, 2020.
Wuhan, China.
I was preparing for the Lunar New Year when I heard the news.
Scared and helpless.
It rained heavily and the city was flooded.
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On July 20, 2021.
Zhengzhou, China.
I was surfing the Internet when I saw the news.
Sad and sorry.
Three astronauts[宇航员] of the Shenzhou-13 spaceflight mission[神州13号飞行任务] gave the first session of the Tiangong class series(天空课堂系列).
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On December 9, 2021.
On the spaceship Shenzhou-13.
I was watching it on the Internet.
Curious and excited.
Olympic Winter Games 2022 was opened.
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On February 4, 2022.
Beijing, China.
I was watching the opening ceremony with my family on TV.
Excited.
Russian Army began to fight against Ukraine's.
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On February,24, 2022.
Ukraine.
I was teaching English to my students in the classroom.
Sympathy(同情的).
A passenger jet MU3575 crashed with 132 people onboard.
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On March 21, 2022.
Guangxi, China.
I was reading a book while my friend was telling of the news to me .
I couldn’t believe it was a truth at first.
I know everyone at school has to do the nucleic acid testing (核酸检测).
Event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were people doing
How did people feel
On April 11, 2022.
In the school gymnasium.
I was preparing for an English when I heard the news.
Nervous and anxious(焦虑的).
Discussion
If you want to learn something about the event happened in the past, which aspects would you like to ask
who what when where why how
______ was the event
______ did it happen
______ did it happen
______ were you doing
______ did you feel
______ do you remember this event
What
When
Where
What
How
Why
3a
Make notes about an event you remember well.
Free Talk
Sure. …
Can you tell me an event you remember well
3b
Write a short article about the important event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs.
审题(三审)
内容大纲
重点句式
梳理成文
体裁:说明文
人称:第一人称
时态:一般过去时;过去进行时
【注意】
简述重大事件发生时用一般过去时作为背景,介绍事件发生时你, 你的家人和你的朋友的活动时用过去进行时,这两种时态的配合建立起上下文的逻辑联系。
Step1
Write about the event (when and where it happened)
Write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
Write about why this event was important.
First
Next
Then
Step2
第一段:
Introduction (引入)
第二段:
Details of the event
(事件的详细过程)
第三段:
Reasons (原因)
Write about the event (when and where it happened)
Write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
Write about why this event was important.
First
Next
Then
An important event that I remember well /I will never forget was __________.It happened in/ on ______________at\in ____________.
When I heard the news of this event /When this event happened, I was _____________ My friends were __________________.\I was doing ______________while my friends were doing __________.
This event is very important to me because ____.\I remember this event well because___\I really learned a lesson from (吸取教训)this event because _____________.
第一段:
Introduction (引入)
第二段:
Details of the event
(事件的详细过程)
第三段:
Reasons (原因)
Step3
what
when
where
be doing
be doing
be doing
be doing
why
why
why
Example1
An important event that I remember well was that three astronauts[宇航员] of the Shenzhou-13 spaceflight mission[神州13号飞行任务] gave the first session of the Tiangong class series(天空课堂系列). It happened on December 9, 2021 on the spaceship Shenzhou-13.
When this event happened, I was watching the live broadcast (在线直播) with my students in the classroom. I guess all the middle school students were enjoying the excellent Tiangong class all around China.
I remember this event well because it is the first time I watched scientific experiments in the outer space. It was interesting and exciting. I learned a lot from the class.
What
When
Where
How
Why
Example2
An important event that I remember well was that I broke my leg. It happened on the school sports day last year on the playground.
When this event happened, I was running very fast to get the first prize. My friends were cheering me on. Although I was very tired, I was still keeping on running. With the last ten meters, suddenly, I fell down and broke my leg. It really hurt and I couldn’t stop crying. My friends ran towards me and took me to the hospital.
After that, my friends cared about me with my schoolwork and my health. I recovered soon and I came back to school. This event is very important to me because I realize how important the friendship is!
When
Where
What
How
Why
Example2
An important event that I remember well was the forest fire. It happened on March 30th, 2019 in Sichuan Province. In this forest fire, thirty firefighters were killed.
When I heard the news of the forest fire , I was having fun in my friend's house. My friend and I were eating snacks and watching TV. However, when I heard the news, I was completely shocked. I was so worried about these firefighters.
I remember this event well because these killed firefighters are so young that I couldn't believe the news. I think this event is very important to me because these firefighters lost their lives to save others. Their spirit encourages us. We should learn from them.
When
Where
What
How
Why
本单元以“谈论过去正在发生的事情”为话题,讲述了大事件发生时人们正在进行的各种活动。具体到书面表达中,要求同学们会对过去正在发生的事情进行描述,在写这类短文时,要运用相应的过去时态,如一般过去时或过去进行时等。在写作时要注意以下几点:
① 明确中心,无论是看图写话,还是情景描写,都要围绕中心展开。
② 要注意记叙文的几个要素,即把时间,地点,人物, 事件,起因,经过,结果等交代清楚。
③ 要合理安排好写作顺序和层次结构。
④组织好语言,叙述事情时语言要简洁,把文章写得生动详实。巧用连接词,使各段之间衔接自然得体。
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟了英文专栏,征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示,为该专栏投稿。
(1)在一个寒冷的早晨,你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶。
(2)女孩要离开时,发现树下有一个老年乞丐,他看上去又冷又饿。
(3)女孩走到乞丐身旁,把食物递给了他。
(4)乞丐向女孩道谢,女孩微笑着离开。
(5)你很感动……
参考词汇:乞丐beggar 感动be moved
要求:(1)词数:80—100个。(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
On a cold morning, while I was _________________________________
___________________________________________________________
中考作文
审题 体裁 记叙文 话题 身边的感人故事
时态 一般过去时和过去进行时 人称 以第三人称为主
段落 布局 介绍时间、人物 介绍事情的经过 介绍我的感受 时间:on a cold morning
人物:a girl, an old beggar
When the girl was about to leave ...
He looked cold and hungry ...
The girl came up to the beggar ...
The beggar ...
I was moved by ...
I decided to ...
On a cold morning, while I was buying some
food for my breakfast, I saw a girl standing in
front of me buying some bread and milk. When she was about to leave, she found an old beggar under the tree. He looked cold and hungry. The girl came up to the beggar without thinking twice and gave the food to him. The beggar said thanks to the girl. But the girl said nothing and went away with a smile on her face.
I was moved by what the girl did. I think
it was the warmest thing on that cold morning.
Revision
Self Check
1. ______ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But ______ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
2. ______ I told my older brother about the stange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn't believe me.
3. _______my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
While
when
When
While
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
Self Check
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I _____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I _________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher ______ (come) three times a week to ______ (help) me. Then the big day finally ________(arrive). I _____ (be) so nervous when they ______ (call) my name. I ______ (go) up and _______ (start) to play.
arrived
joined
was
came
help
practiced
was
called
went
started
While I ___________ (play), everyone _____ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I ______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I ______ (hear) my name, my heart ________ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn't believe it. I _____ (win)! It _____ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was playing
sat
won
heard
was beating
waited
was
Remember
History is the memory of things said and done.
历史是说过和做过事情的记忆。
Enrich your life today; yesterday is history; tomorrow is the unknown.
充实今天的生活,昨日已成历史,明天还是未知数。
Be thankful for life and
be in awe of nature.
Thank You