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书面表达1—新人教版必修三高频考点专练（原卷版）
1．你校学生会将举办一次以中国文化遗产（Chinese cultural heritage）为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一个书面通知。内容包括：
1）比赛目的；
2）比赛时间及地点：5月4日下午3点，报告厅；
3）报名时间及地点：4月26—30日，学生会办公室。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
2．暑假就要到了，假定你是刘华，你的加拿大朋友David写信告知你，他打算来中国参加暑期实践活动，请给他回信，内容包括:
⒈对他的安排表示赞许；
⒉欢迎他来江西。
注意:⒈词数100左右；
⒉可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
Yours sincerely,
Liu Hua
3．假设你是李华，你的好朋友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1） 学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；
2） 多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；
3）积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意：1）词数：100词左右；2）可适当增加细节。
Dear Susan,
Yours,
Li Hua
4．卡塔尔(Qatar)世界杯赛刚刚落幕，无处不在的中国元素成了人们津津乐道的话题。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Mike 对此非常感兴趣，写信给你想要了解近 10 年中国的发展变化，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
1）写信目的；
2）简介中国近 10 年的发展变化；
3）你对这些变化的感受。
注意：
1）词数 80 词左右
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3）开头结尾已给，不计入词数
Dear Mike,
The Qatar World Cup is over.
I hope that you can come to China for a visit to experience more.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了一次户外徒步活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括:
1）你的所见所闻；
2）对此次活动的感受。
注意:
1）词数 100 左右；
2）题目已为你写好。
A Hiking Activity
6．假定你是李华，上周六你校组织学生去希望社区参加社会实践活动。请你就此写一篇英文报道发表在校英文报上。内容包括：
1）活动目的；
2）活动内容；
3）个人感受。
注意：1）词数80左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Social Practice in the Hope Community
7．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David对你校的实践项目 Herb Garden（香草园）非常感兴趣。写信询问相关情况，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1）项目内容；
2）邀请体验。
参考词汇：rosemary（迷迭香）；mint（薄荷）thyme（百里香）
注意：
1）词数80左右。
2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Peter发邮件说他正在学汉语，但感觉很吃力，请求你给予帮助。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1）举例说明汉语学习的特点；
2）提供一些可行的建议。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【写作要点】
第一段说明写作的目的；
第二段提出建议；
第三段表达愿望。
Dear Peter,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
9．推行垃圾分类，提倡低碳生活是全民活动，你班英语课堂将举行主题为"Let's Go Green Now"的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
1）倡导绿色生活的原因；
2）实践途径(至少两点)。
注意：
1）词数80左右(首尾已给出，不计入词数)；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
10．假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括:
1）收到照片表示感谢;
2）回顾一起度过的时光;
3）邀请他周末来家作客。
注意:
1）写作词数应为80左右;
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
11．假定你是李华，校报英文栏目 Tour across the world 的编辑，请你给外教 Mr. Brown 写邮件邀请他给该栏目撰稿。内容包括：
1）栏目介绍；
2）稿件要求；
3）期待来稿。
注意：
1）写作词数应为 80 左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
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书面表达1—新人教版必修三高频考点专练（解析版）
1．你校学生会将举办一次以中国文化遗产（Chinese cultural heritage）为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一个书面通知。内容包括：
1）比赛目的；
2）比赛时间及地点：5月4日下午3点，报告厅；
3）报名时间及地点：4月26—30日，学生会办公室。
注意：
1）词数80左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Notice
【答案】Notice
In order to improve students' spoken English and inspire their interest in protecting Chinese cultural heritage, we are going to hold an English speech contest on Chinese cultural heritage in the lecture hall at 3:00 p.m. on May 4, 2022. Those who have an interest in it can sign up at the office of Student Union from April 26 through April 30. Please try your best and be well-prepared. You are supposed to get there on time. All the students are welcome.
Student Union
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生 写一个书面通知 。写作背景： 你校学生会将举办一次以中国文化遗产（Chinese cultural heritage）为主题的英语演讲比赛 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）比赛目的；2）比赛时间及地点：5月4日下午3点，报告厅；3）报名时间及地点：4月26—30日，学生会办公室。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：In order to improve students' spoken English and inspire their interest in protecting Chinese cultural heritage, we are going to hold an English speech contest on Chinese cultural heritage in the lecture hall at 3:00 p.m. on May 4, 2022. 运用了不定式作目的状语；Those who have an interest in it can sign up at the office of Student Union from April 26 through April 30.运用了限制性定语从句； Please try your best and be well-prepared.运用了祈使句。
2．暑假就要到了，假定你是刘华，你的加拿大朋友David写信告知你，他打算来中国参加暑期实践活动，请给他回信，内容包括:
⒈对他的安排表示赞许；
⒉欢迎他来江西。
注意:⒈词数100左右；
⒉可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
Yours sincerely,
Liu Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I'm Liu Hua. I'm so happy today, for I
received your airmail and knew you would come to China. It's a great idea that
you'd have your practice activity in this coming summer vacation. I appreciate
your decision and warmingly welcome you to Jiangxi, my hometown. Jiangxi is
famous for its beautiful scenery and friendly people. My hometown has
diversified and colorful culture, which is quite different from yours. As for
your activities and schedule, my friends and I will plan for you carefully and
let you know the details in advance. I'm sure you'll have a good time here.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours sincerely
Liu Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以刘华的身份给加拿大朋友David回信。写作背景：暑假就要到了，David写信告知你，他打算来中国参加暑期实践活动。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：⒈对他的安排表示赞许；⒉欢迎他来江西。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： I'm so happy today, for I
received your airmail and knew you would come to China.运用了原因并列句； It's a great idea that you'd have your practice activity in this coming summer vacation. 运用了主语从句；I appreciate your decision and warmingly welcome you to Jiangxi, my hometown. 运用了同位语；My hometown has diversified and colorful culture, which is quite different from yours. 运用了非限制性定语从句； I'm sure you'll have a good time here.运用了名词性从句。
3．假设你是李华，你的好朋友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你用英语给她写一封电子邮件，要点如下：
1） 学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；
2） 多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；
3）积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。
注意：1）词数：100词左右；2）可适当增加细节。
Dear Susan,
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear
Susan,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in
America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my suggestions.
Now my suggestions are as follows:
Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to
communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends They can help you
to know more about America, and friendship can help you to forget your
loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all
kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. I believe
by doing this, you will be happier with your new life soon.
I hope these suggestions can be very useful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给好朋友Susan写一封电子邮件。写作背景：Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1） 学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2） 多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3）积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my suggestions. 运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句，转折并列句和条件状语从句； Firstly, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. 运用了非限制性定语从句； They can help you to know more about America, and friendship can help you to forget your loneliness. 运用了并列句；Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. 运用了条件状语从句，非限制性定语从句；I believe by doing this, you will be happier with your new life soon.和I hope these suggestions can be very useful to you.运用了宾语从句。
4．卡塔尔(Qatar)世界杯赛刚刚落幕，无处不在的中国元素成了人们津津乐道的话题。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Mike 对此非常感兴趣，写信给你想要了解近 10 年中国的发展变化，请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信：
1）写信目的；
2）简介中国近 10 年的发展变化；
3）你对这些变化的感受。
注意：
1）词数 80 词左右
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3）开头结尾已给，不计入词数
Dear Mike,
The Qatar World Cup is over.
I hope that you can come to China for a visit to experience more.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】【范文】Dear Mike,
The Qatar World Cup is over. I, as well as you, am amazed by the Chinese elements almost everywhere in the World Cup. Knowing that you are interested in the great changes in our country over the past decade, I'm glad to share some with you.
Actually, remarkable achievements have been made in our economy, life, science, and so forth. For example, the goal of poverty elimination has been achieved, thus paving the way for the accomplishment of common prosperity.
As a high school student, I'm proud of these achievements, which enhance my national confidence and motivate me to study harder.
I hope that you can come to China for a visit to experience more.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 写一封回信 。写作背景： 卡塔尔(Qatar)世界杯赛刚刚落幕，无处不在的中国元素成了人们津津乐道的话题。假定你是李华，你的外国朋友 Mike 对此非常感兴趣，写信给你想要了解近 10 年中国的发展变化 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）写信目的；2）简介中国近 10 年的发展变化；3）你对这些变化的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I, as well as you, am amazed by the Chinese elements almost everywhere in the World Cup. 运用了主谓一致；Knowing that you are interested in the great changes in our country over the past decade, I'm glad to share some with you.运用了现在分词作原因状语，宾语从句；Actually, remarkable achievements have been made in our economy, life, science, and so forth. 运用了被动语态；
As a high school student, I'm proud of these achievements, which enhance my national confidence and motivate me to study harder.运用了非限制性定语从句；I hope that you can come to China for a visit to experience more.运用了宾语从句。
5．假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了一次户外徒步活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括:
1）你的所见所闻；
2）对此次活动的感受。
注意:
1）词数 100 左右；
2）题目已为你写好。
A Hiking Activity
【答案】A Hiking Activity
Our school held a hiking activity last Sunday, which has a great effect on my study and life.
It was at 6 o'clock that we set off in order. In the beginning, we walked all the way, chatting and singing. After a while, some students were so tired that they couldn't keep up with their classmates. What moved me most was that they didn't give up, but helped each other to the end. Four hours later, we all made it to our destination
In my opinion, the activity relieved our mental pressure. More importantly, we had a good chance to strengthen our will, which will leave a happy experience in our youthful memories.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份为校英文报写一篇报道 。写作背景： 上周日你校举办了一次户外徒步活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）你的所见所闻；2）对此次活动的感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Our school held a hiking activity last Sunday, which has a great effect on my study and life.运用了非限制性定语从句；
It was at 6 o'clock that we set off in order. In the beginning, we walked all the way, chatting and singing. 运用了强调句，现在分词作伴随状语；After a while, some students were so tired that they couldn't keep up with their classmates. 运用了结果状语从句；What moved me most was that they didn't give up, but helped each other to the end. 运用了主语从句，表语从句；More importantly, we had a good chance to strengthen our will, which will leave a happy experience in our youthful memories.运用了非限制性定语从句。
6．假定你是李华，上周六你校组织学生去希望社区参加社会实践活动。请你就此写一篇英文报道发表在校英文报上。内容包括：
1）活动目的；
2）活动内容；
3）个人感受。
注意：1）词数80左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Social Practice in the Hope Community
【答案】Social Practice in the Hope Community
To arouse students' awareness of social service, our school conducted a social practice in the Hope Community last Saturday. On arriving there, we were classified into three groups. Some students were in charge of collecting the scattered garbage on the paths and put them into the different trash cans according to garbage classification. In the meanwhile, there were other students cleaning and wiping the notice board with care, using various cleaners. Besides, the rest of students offered timely assistance to those in need. Exhausted as we were, we benefited a lot, relieving our pressure and strengthening the bond between us and society.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以李华的身份写一篇英文报道发表在校英文报上。写作背景：上周六你校组织学生去希望社区参加社会实践活动。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）活动目的；2）活动内容；3）个人感受。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：To arouse students' awareness of social service, our school conducted a social practice in the Hope Community last Saturday. 运用了不定式作目的状语；On arriving there, we were classified into three groups.运用了被动语态； In the meanwhile, there were other students cleaning and wiping the notice board with care, using various cleaners. 运用了there be句式； Exhausted as we were, we benefited a lot, relieving our pressure and strengthening the bond between us and society.运用了倒装句，让步状语从句。
7．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David对你校的实践项目 Herb Garden（香草园）非常感兴趣。写信询问相关情况，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1）项目内容；
2）邀请体验。
参考词汇：rosemary（迷迭香）；mint（薄荷）thyme（百里香）
注意：
1）词数80左右。
2）请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
Learning about your keen interest in the project "Herb Garden", I am writing to offer a brief introduction and invite you to experience it first hand with us.
Aiming to raise our awareness of labour and give us a chance to get close to nature, our school has organized the project. Each class is assigned a patch of field. On which we plant rosemary, mint, thyme and so on. Every few days. We water them. Weed the field and record the growth. Better yet. We are going to appreciate the garden-fresh plants produced with our own hands.
Come to experience the mix of education and fun!
Yours.
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份 回复邮件 。写作背景： 你的英国朋友David对你校的实践项目 Herb Garden（香草园）非常感兴趣。写信询问相关情况 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）项目内容；2）邀请体验。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Learning about your keen interest in the project "Herb Garden", I am writing to offer a brief introduction and invite you to experience it first hand with us.运用了现在分词作状语； Each class is assigned a patch of field.，on which we plant rosemary, mint, thyme and so on. 运用了被动语态，非限制性定语从句； Weed the field and record the growth.运用了祈使句；Come to experience the mix of education and fun!运用了祈使句。
8．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Peter发邮件说他正在学汉语，但感觉很吃力，请求你给予帮助。请给他回封邮件，内容包括：
1）举例说明汉语学习的特点；
2）提供一些可行的建议。
注意：1）词数100左右；
2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【写作要点】
第一段说明写作的目的；
第二段提出建议；
第三段表达愿望。
Dear Peter,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
Last time in your letter you said you were learning Chinese but ran into some difficulties. It's unavoidable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning. ①I am writing to offer some personal advice on how to learn Chinese. My suggestions are as follows：
Firstly, I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis, which will help you speak and understand Chinese more easily. ②Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs③ can make the learning process much more interesting. Last but not least, you should communicate more with them in Chinese if you make some Chinese friends④.
I do hope you will find these proposals practical.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份回封邮件。写作背景：你的留学生朋友Peter发邮件说他正在学汉语，但感觉很吃力，请求你给予帮助。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）举例说明汉语学习的特点；2）提供一些可行的建议。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Last time in your letter you said you were learning Chinese but ran into some difficulties. 运用了宾语从句；It's unavoidable because English emphasizes the structure, while Chinese focuses on the meaning. 运用了原因状语从句，对比并列句；I am writing to offer some personal advice on how to learn Chinese.运用了“疑问词+不定式”作宾语；Firstly, I would recommend you to find a native speaker as a language partner, and meet with him on a regular basis, which will help you speak and understand Chinese more easily.运用了非限制性定语从句；Besides, watching Chinese movies and listening to Chinese songs can make the learning process much more interesting. 运用了动名词短语作主语；Last but not least, you should communicate more with them in Chinese if you make some Chinese friends.运用了条件状语从句；I do hope you will find these proposals practical.运用了强调句，宾语从句。
9．推行垃圾分类，提倡低碳生活是全民活动，你班英语课堂将举行主题为"Let's Go Green Now"的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
1）倡导绿色生活的原因；
2）实践途径(至少两点)。
注意：
1）词数80左右(首尾已给出，不计入词数)；
2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Boys and girls,
【答案】Boys and girls,
I'm greatly honored to deliver the speech. As we all know, with the development of the economy and society, the number of private cars is increasing amazingly. Cars and other vehicles release carbon gases, so do many other human activities, which causes global warming. It's high time that we should go green.
From my point of view, we should raise the public awareness of the importance of going green. And taking public transportation or riding bicycles instead of driving should be greatly encouraged. What's more, it's a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.
That's all. Thank you.
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇演讲稿。写作背景：推行垃圾分类，提倡低碳生活是全民活动，你班英语课堂将举行主题为"Let's Go Green Now"的英语演讲比赛。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）倡导绿色生活的原因；2）实践途径(至少两点)。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I'm greatly honored to deliver the speech. 运用了不定式作原因状语；As we all know, with the development of the economy and society, the number of private cars is increasing amazingly. 运用了非限制性定语从句；Cars and other vehicles release carbon gases, so do many other human activities, which causes global warming.运用了非限制性定语从句； It's high time that we should go green.运用了固定句式It's high time that...，虚拟语气； And taking public transportation or riding bicycles instead of driving should be greatly encouraged.运用了动名词作主语，被动语态； What's more, it's a good idea to classify our rubbish and recycle it in our daily life.运用了it作形式主语。
10．假定你是李华，春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括:
1）收到照片表示感谢;
2）回顾一起度过的时光;
3）邀请他周末来家作客。
注意:
1）写作词数应为80左右;
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mike,
How are you Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories,
The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible. We woke up early to see the sunrise over the sea. On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. I really had a great time. I'd like to invite you over this weekend. It will be a chance for you to meet my family.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份回一封邮件。写作背景：春节期间你和朋友Mike一起出游，你刚收到他发给你的照片。 写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）收到照片表示感谢；2）回顾一起度过的时光；3）邀请他周末来家作客。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如： Thank you for sending me the photos that bring back those wonderful memories,运用了祈使句，限制性定语从句；The time we spent together during the Spring Festival was just incredible.运用了限制性定语从句； On the way back, we tasted the fine local food, which was impressive indeed. 运用了非限制性定语从句；And what was truly unforgettable was the hospitality I had as a guest at your home. 运用了主语从句，限制性定语从句； It will be a chance for you to meet my family.运用了it作形式主语。
11．假定你是李华，校报英文栏目 Tour across the world 的编辑，请你给外教 Mr. Brown 写邮件邀请他给该栏目撰稿。内容包括：
1）栏目介绍；
2）稿件要求；
3）期待来稿。
注意：
1）写作词数应为 80 左右；
2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
……
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to invite you to contribute an article to Tour across the world, an English column of our school paper.
The column is meant to introduce scenic spots across the globe. It is one of the most popular columns among us students. We hope to know about the most impressive tourist destination of your country from your article, which is about 200 words long. Would you please email us before this Friday afternoon
Looking forward to your contribution.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【分析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份给外教 Mr. Brown 写邮件邀请他给该栏目撰稿 。写作背景： 校报英文栏目 Tour across the world 的编辑 。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）栏目介绍；2）稿件要求；3）期待来稿。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I am writing to invite you to contribute an article to Tour across the world, an English column of our school paper.运用了不定式作目的状语，同位语；The column is meant to introduce scenic spots across the globe.运用了被动语态； We hope to know about the most impressive tourist destination of your country from your article, which is about 200 words long. 运用了不定式作宾语，非限制性定语从句。
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