15 榜样人物-2022-2023学年中考英语热点话题写作 (含答案)

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2023年中考英语热点话题写作-榜样人物
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1.(2022·山东·宁津县教育和体育局教育科学研究所九年级期末)每个时代都有应运而生的榜样和楷模。在新时代,我们更需要榜样引领我们前行。在抗击新冠肺炎疫情斗争中做出杰出贡献的钟南山院士;卫国戍边,在斗争中负伤的解放军战士祁发宝;三度飞天,荣誉等身的航天员景海鹏;用全部生命在教书育人的 “燃灯校长”张桂梅。为弘扬新时代楷模,学校将举行一场以“My Hero”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据你熟悉的一位新时代楷模,写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 简要介绍这位人物;
2. 描述这位人物主要事迹;
3. 概述这位人物对我们的影响。
作文要求:
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名;词数:100词左右。
2. 能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
Dear teachers and students,
Today my topic is my hero. ___________________________________________________________
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Thanks for your listening!
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2.(2022·江苏·无锡市东林中学九年级期末)中宣部评选出了2021年度十大时代楷模(Role Models of the Times),”燃灯校长”(Lamp Burning Principal) 张桂梅名列其中。无论是过去作为任课老师或班主任,还是现在担任校长,她身患疾病依然勤奋耕耘。请你以”The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei” 为题写一篇短文,简要介绍她的事迹,并谈谈自己的感想。
注意事项:
1. 短文须根据思维导图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数100个左右,文章开头在答题卡上已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 思维导图中括号部分为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
4. 省略号处须作适当发挥,感想部分为2-3句。
The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei
The model I admire most is Zhang Guimei. ______________________________________________
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3.(2022·山东·模拟预测)在我们的生活中,有很多值得我们学习的楷模。某英文网站正在开展以“A Role Model in My Life”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈在生活中谁是你心中的榜样人物,以及你向他(她)学到了什么。
问题提示:
·Who is your role model in your life ·What’s he/she like ·Why is he/she your role model (Give one or two examples.) ·What have you learned from him or her
要求:1.文章应包括提示中所有的写作要点,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数不少于100,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A Role Model in My Life
My role model is ____________________________________________________________________
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4.(2022·江西赣州·一模)随着祖国的日益强大,我们越来越深刻感受到作为一名中国人无比骄傲。国人们更是表明此生不悔入华夏,来世还做中国人! 因为大到国家,小到我们身边,都有很多敢于担当,责任感强,让我们钦佩的人。这些人才是我们心中真正的榜样和楷模。请以" I admire_____"为题写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一位你最钦佩的人,并简单谈谈你的看法。
要点:
1. 这个人是谁
2他(她)为什么让你钦佩
3.从他(她)身上你学到哪些优秀品质
要求:
1.请补全标题。
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和考生学校名称。
3.词数100词左右。
I admire _______
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【5】
5.(2022·安徽合肥·二模)每个人的成长都离不开榜样的引领。榜样就在我们身边,他们可能是我们的老师、朋友。假设你是李华,某英文报社发起了主题为“A good example around me”的征文活动。你结合以下要点,写一篇英语小短文,介绍一下你身边的榜样,并谈一谈你对“何为榜样”的看法。
1.一件具体事例
2.几点你的看法
注意: 1. 词数: 80-100 词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
A good example around me
There are many good examples around me. _______________________________________________
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参考答案:
1.例文
Dear teachers and students,
Today my topic is my hero. As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my hero in my heart. He graduated from Beijing Medical College. He is one of the famous doctors in China.
In the winter of 2019, the COVID-19 broke out in China and across the whole world. Zhong Nanshan not only led but also took an active part in the battle against it. He worked hard day and night to treat the patients. With the help of him, soon the COVID-19 was under control.
He is a good doctor as well as a great hero in my heart. I think a hero should not only be brave, but also be ready to help others. I should learn from him and be a great person like him.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读:本题要求根据提示的三点内容要点并且以“My Hero”为题写一篇简要介绍新时代楷模的英语短文,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文在陈述事实和观点时,时态采用一般现在时为主,在描述发生在过去事情时,时态采用一般过去时为主;本文的篇章结构可根据提示的内容要点的顺序来展开,但写作时要注意不要遗漏包括参考词汇在内的写作内容;内容要点2作为文章的重点内容可围绕本文主题稍加详细地阐述;最后写作完成时应检查文章的表达是否符合语言规范和英文表达习惯等。
2.例文
The model I admire most—Zhang Guimei
The model I admire most is Zhang Guimei. Zhang Guimei used to be a teacher. She taught Chinese and politics. She worked hard though she was ill. She was strict and worked to high standards. When working as a headteacher, she had a heart full of love. She cared about the students’ daily lives and helped them with their schoolwork. She tried to stop the poor girls dropping school. As a principal, she set up the first free senior high for girls. She is praised as “Lamp Burning Principal” She has impressed me with her spirit. I want to be an excellent person like her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最钦佩的英雄,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍她的事迹。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth 过去常常做某事
②full of 充满
③care about 关心
[高分句型]
①She worked hard though she was ill.(though引导让步状语从句)
②She tried to stop the poor girls dropping school.(动词不定式作宾语,动名词作宾语)
3.例文:
A Role Model in My Life
My role model is my grandpa. He is the most respectable person I’ve ever knew.
He is a tall and handsome man who has big eyes and a round face. He always works very hard at his work. He gets up early and comes home late every day. At home, he is very kind to our family members. When my neighbors have some trouble, he always gives hands to them warmly.
He is very strict with me. He always helps me with my subjects patiently in his free time. In my memory, I always remember the day I got the first full mark. When I showed it to grandpa, he smiled and encouraged me to make more progress. With his help, I have overcome a lot of difficulties and learned a lot. So I have thought of my grandpa as my role model in my life.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以“我生命中的一个榜样”为题写一篇短文,短文要包含题目中所有的写作要点。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。本文分为三段式:第一段表明自己的榜样是谁;第二段介绍他的外貌及他的生活习惯;第三段讲述为什么把他看作榜样,从他身上学到了什么。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
4.例文
I admire Zhong Nanshan
There are many admirable people around us, such as our parents, teachers, police and so on. But the person that I admire most is Zhong Nanshan.
In January 2020, a terrible virus made many Chinese people sick or even dead. Zhong Nanshan, an 84-year-old hero, gave up the chance of spending the New Year with his families and rushed to the frontline immediately. He worked day and night and led us to overcome difficulties. He tried his best to save every patient and passed hopes to every Chinese.
I’m deeply moved by Zhong Nanshan’s spirit. I learned from him to be kind, brave and responsible. I will pay my highest respect to him.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给出的材料提示,以" I admire____"为题写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一位你最钦佩的人,并简单谈谈你的看法。首先我们要把题目补充完整,然后认真审题,根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作,辅以第一人称。时态主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主,在叙述人物所做的具体的感人事迹时用一般过去时,描述一般事实和自己的感悟时用一般现在时;文章要紧扣题目要点,围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
5.例文:
A good example around me
There are many good examples around me. My classmate Wang Fan is one of them.
It was a rainy day. Hurrying to return home, everyone seemed to forget to do the cleaning. Seeing this, Wang Fan stayed and started to sweep the floor quietly. I felt surprised because he wasn’t on duty! But he just said he was glad to do something for us. Moved by his words, I thought I should care more about others and the class.
Good examples are not far away from us. They are just common people who do common things. These things my be small but necessary and meaningful. Good examples always have something for us to learn from and warm others in their own way.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。针对“我身边的一个好榜样”进行写作。具体的内容要包含所给的提示,举出具体的事例并且谈一下自己的看法。
2. 写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段开头已给出,可以接着介绍要介绍的榜样是谁;第二段介绍具体的事情;最后一段表达自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。