16 青少年安全与保护-2022-2023学年中考英语热点话题写作 (含答案)

2023年中考英语热点话题写作-青少年安全与保护
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1．（2022·江苏·盐城市盐都区实验初中二模）你校举办了“中学生安全教育日”英语征文活动，请根据所给提示，以“Live a Safe Life”为题，写一篇短文参赛。
注意事项：1.词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Live a safe life
As middle school students, we should always keep safety in mind. ____________________________
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2．（2022·宁夏中卫·一模）一场波及全球的疫情，让人们深深懂得了生命的价值。作为中学生，我们更应该懂得珍爱我们年轻的生命。请你根据下面的提示，以“Treasure Our Lives”为题，用英语写一篇有关如何珍爱生命的短文。
要点：
1.遵守交通规则，注意食品安全，防止意外溺水。
2.交友谨慎，不沉迷于手机及游戏，提高安全意识。
3.倡议：拥有快乐、充实、健康的生活方式……
要求：
1.短文应包括所有要点，可适当发挥，不要逐句翻译；
2.语言表达准确，条理清晰，书写工整，句式规范；
3.词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
参考词汇：drown溺水V.
Treasure Our Lives
Each person only lives once, so we must treasure our lives. What should we do _________________
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3．（2022·江苏无锡·二模）为增强安全意识，学校英语俱乐部将开展“How to protect ourselves”的讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容，仅供参考。
How to protect ourselves At school get along with our classmates;…
In public never run after each other;…
On the Internet protect our personal information;…
… …
注意事项：
1. 短文须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右，短文标题、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
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4．（2022·湖南·长沙市立信中学一模）全世界每年因安全事故导致有数以万计的生命死于非命！面对每一次残酷的事故，面对每一个鲜活的生命的逝去，我们难道就只有感叹、哀伤？其实，只要我们行动起来，做到心中有安全意识，遵守安全规则，就能消除潜在危险。我校即将举行“珍爱生命，心系安全”的征文比赛，特此向你征稿。请你围绕生活中经常存在的安全问题，如：运动安全，交通安全……结合实际就如何减少安全事故的发生谈至少三点建议，并呼吁大家一起携手，珍惜生命，健康成长。
要求：
1.不逐字翻译；
2.文章总词数为80—100；
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名。
It is reported that there are thousands of accidents around the world every year. __________________
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5．（2022·黑龙江佳木斯·二模）话题作文：今年3月28日是第27个中国小学生安全教育日，教育部会同公安部治安管理局印发《关于开展全国中小学生安全教育日活动的通知》，请你就安全问题写一封80词左右的倡议书，从交通、饮食、运动、防溺水等方面向全校同学发出安全倡议。提示词：traffic rules, healthy food, hurt, swim alone
要求：（l）80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
How to Keep Ourselves Safe
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6．（2022·青海·治多县第二民族寄宿中学一模）青少年安全一直是人们关注的焦点。假如你校英语角将开展以“如何提升青少年自我保护能力”为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，以“How to Protect Ourselves”为题写一篇英语演讲稿。
要点提示:
1.提高自我保护意识；
2.不在网上泄露个人隐私；
3.遇到危险时要保持冷静。
写作要求：
1.包含提示中的所有要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 )。
参考词汇：awareness 意识
How to Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves Here are some of my ideas. ________________________________________________________________
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Danger is never as far away as we think. Safety must be put first whatever happens.
参考答案：
1．范文：
Live a safe life
As middle school students, we should always keep safety in mind. Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we should eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables every day. It’s wise to stay away from too cold food in summer.
Secondly, it’s necessary to follow traffic rules when crossing the road. Don’t ride side by side. It’s wrong to touch mobiles on the way.
Besides, be careful when we make friends online. We’d better not tell others our telephone number, address or passwords, especially strangers.
Finally, we ought not to run after each other at school. Moreover, when having sports, remember to protect ourselves from danger.
In a word, safety must come first.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Live a Safe Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给出安全的生活的建议”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“饮食、道路安全、交友，校园安全”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，安全必须是第一位的。
[亮点词汇]
①keep...in mind记住
②stay away from远离
③had better最好
④run after追赶
[高分句型]
①Secondly, it’s necessary to follow traffic rules when crossing the road.（It固定句型）
②Besides, be careful when we make friends online.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2．例文
Treasure Our Lives
Each person only lives once, so we must treasure our lives. What should we do
First of all, we should eat healthy and safe food instead of fast food or junk food every day. When we go out, we must obey the traffic rules. If we want to go swimming, we are supposed to go somewhere safe so that we can avoid drowning. And we should follow the school rules, don’t run in the hallways and be careful when we do sports.
Besides, we must be careful in choosing our friends and keep away from dangerous people. We shouldn’t play phones or computer games for a long time. What’s more, we can’t go to Net Bar or chat with strangers online and we shouldn’t stay out too long especially at night.
Life is valuable, we should take it seriously. We’d better live a happy, colorful and healthy life. Then we will study better and make our dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据下面的提示，以“Treasure Our Lives”为题，用英语写一篇有关如何珍爱生命的短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，点名我们要珍惜我们的生命；
第二步，具体阐述我们应该怎么做；
第三步，总结，表明自己对生命的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②instead of而不是
③be supposed to应该做某事
④keep away from远离
⑤come true实现
[高分句型]
①If we want to go swimming, we are supposed to go somewhere safe so that we can avoid drowning. （if引导的条件状语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句）
3．One possible version:
How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves.
First of all, it’s necessary for us to get along well with our classmates. Never forget your teachers. Ask them for help while meeting any danger at school. Second, not doing something dangerous in public is also important. Remember not to run after or crowd with each other, especially not push past others. Third, be careful to make friends online. Don’t give any personal information to others. Never meet e-friends alone. Let your parents go with you if you have to. Last but not least, we must follow the traffic rules outside and don’t carry too much money with us.
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲类作文，以“How to protect ourselves”为题参照表格中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括表格中所有要点，并适当拓展。
2.写作指导：本文以第一、二人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍如何从三个方面保护自己，可以多采用祈使句句式；第三段原文已给出；保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。
4．例文：
It is reported that there are thousands of accidents around the world every year. For example, many people die from car accidents every day. The unsafe food in the market can be seen everywhere. It is harmful to the our health. What’s more, improper exercise can also lead to safety problems.
In order to protect ourselves, we should obey the traffic rules. Don’t allow anyone to produce any unsafe food. We mustn’t sell or buy such unsafe food. When we play sports, we must pay more attention. We are supposed to stop as soon as we feel uncomfortable.
If we do so, every one will be safer.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求围绕常见的安全问题提出至少三点减少安全事故发生的建议，开头已给出，联系实际情况进行写作。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时，以第一、三人称为主，提建议时多用情态动词；写作时承接开头，先描述常见的安全问题，在提出具体建议，最后总结收尾。注意主谓一致，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．例文
How to Keep Ourselves Safe
Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers—so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，要求根据内容提示，就安全问题写一封80词左右的倡议书。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，主要采用第一人称来书写，多运用祈使句。写作时可分为两段式：第一段介绍安全的重要性；第二空具体介绍如何保护我们自己的安全。在写作时应该注意符合题意，同时注意语言的准确性和完整性，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
6．例文
How to Protect Ourselves
Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how can we protect ourselves Here are some of my ideas.
First of all, it’s important for us to raise our awareness of self-protection. It can be dangerous to go outside alone at night. If we have to stay outdoors, make sure there is an adult around. Besides, we should guard against any possible danger around us and always stay away from places with warning signs. Secondly, don’t let out our personal information on the Internet. Sharing information such as addresses, phone numbers, birth dates and school names is one of the biggest risks online. Last but not least, we’re supposed to keep our cool when facing danger. Remember to call the police for help as soon as possible.
Danger is never as far away as we think. Safety must be put first whatever happens.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，根据提示要点介绍自我保护的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①make sure 确保
②guard against 提防
③let out 泄露
④be supposed to do sth 应该做某事
[高分句型]
①Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers（“one of the+形容词+最高级”的结构）
②it’s important for us to raise our awareness of self-protection（动词不定式作主语）