06：【好题精选】作文-2023年中考英语专题练（湖南岳阳）（含解析）

06：【好题精选】作文-2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（湖南岳阳）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．某英语网站开展关于“How to Improve Myself”的征稿活动，倡导同学们提升自我，努力成为“终生运动者，责任担当者，问题解决者，优雅生活者”，请根据以下图示内容积极投稿。
要求：
1.词数80~100；
2.请根据以上提示信息，结合实际情况叙述，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.
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二、材料作文
2．今年，响应党中央和政府号召，“双减”政策正式施行，同学们的课外辅导和家庭作业减少了。假如你是一名初三学生李华，正在接受学校小记者采访，请你结合自己的亲身经历谈一谈以下两个问题：
1.“双减”政策落实前后，你和你的同学们有些什么变化（比如学习、课余生活等方面）？
2.面对“双减”，你有一些什么个人感受？
要点提示：“double reduction” policy“双减”政策； used to 过去常常；training course 培训课程；by doing sth通过做某事
要求：1. 内容必须包括所有要点，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 语言表达准确，语篇连贯；
3. 词数：80--100词；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! Since the “double reduction” policy was released, our lives have changed a lot. Next let me talk about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．2022年1月1日，《家庭教育促进法》开始生效。未成年人的父母应该重视家庭教育。英语课上，英语老师组织了一场关于“家庭教育该如何进行”的班会，你要代表学生说出大家的心声。请你根据以下要点写一份80字左右的发言稿。
要点提示：（1）父母应该多花时间陪我们；
（2）父母要多和我们交流；
（3）父母可以树立良好榜样（set good examples），在家不能经常玩手机、打游戏；
（4）父母应注重培养（develop）我们的好习惯；
（5）……
注意：每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺。
Hello everyone,
It’s my honor to speak out our students’ thoughts here.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．现在有些地方水资源污染和浪费非常严重，请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
1、在所有的吃喝的东西中，水是最重要的。人没有水只能活两到三天。
2、保护水资源的措施：不能往江河湖泊里扔垃圾；工厂减少往江河中排放污水；当看到水龙头开着时，应该及时关闭水龙头；重复使用水。如：冲洗厕所，拖地板等。
3、建议所有人行动去保护水资源。
词汇：水龙头：tap；保护：protect；重复使用：reuse； 减少：reduce
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5．习主席在中国共产主义青年团成立100周年大会上寄予新时代的广大青年要做理想远大，信念坚定的榜样；刻苦学习，锐意创新的榜样；崇德向善，严守纪律的榜样。请以“The person I admire”为题介绍你周围所熟悉的榜样，写一篇 80~100词的英语短文。
要点提示：
(1)这位青年榜样是谁？
(2)他的外貌或性格怎样？(诚信 honest；可爱 cute)
(3)他有哪些值得学习的地方？(擅长 be good at；关爱 care for；帮助 help with；责任 be responsible for)
(4) ……
注意：每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺。
The person I admire
The person I admire is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．自“双减”政策进校园后，学生学校生活发生了一系列的变化，学校精心设计了丰富多彩的校园活动。给学业做减法，给成长做加法，多元的校园活动已成为孩子们每日翘首以盼的内容。请根据表格中的要点提示，以“Changes in our school life”为题写一篇短文，并简要阐述你的看法。
在校时间 作业时限 假日安排 课外活动(after-school activity)
过去 9个小时 4个小时 周末和节假日上课 少而乏味
现在 不超过7个半小时 不超过1个半小时（90分钟） 不上课 丰富多彩，如：打球、唱歌、跳舞、绘画、下棋等社团活动
要求：1．词数80-100；必须包括所有提示信息，课适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总数Great changes have taken place in students’ school life since the “double reduction” policy（政策） came into our school. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．文明是城市发展的灵魂、文明是城市进步的标志。 “平江是我家, 文明靠大家！”作为中学生，我们应积极参与文明城市（civilized city）的建设。请根据下面给出的提示，写一篇短文。
1.尊敬老师，对人礼貌。
2.帮助他人，友善待人。
3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯。
4.保护环境，人人有责；不乱扔垃圾、不踩草地等。
提示词：respect（尊敬）；be polite to；obey（遵守）；traffic rule；zebra crossing（斑马线）
要求：1.词数80—100（开头已给出, 不计入总词数）；
2.短文应包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥；
3.字迹工整，语句通顺，注意连贯，表达正确，逻辑清晰；
4.文中不可出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
5.请把文章写在答题卡相应位置的横线上。
Pingjiang is now making its effort to become a civilized city. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．寒假即将来临，为了丰富学生的假期生活，学校将组织同学们去岳阳楼假期研学旅行。假如你是珍妮，让同学们了解规章制度。
DOs DON’Ts
（1）佩戴口罩；出示健康码； （2）可以拍照； （3）保护景区文物。 （1）不要大声喧哗，不能乱扔垃圾； （2）不能在湖内游泳； （3）避免人员堆积游览。
要求:
（1）要点齐全，可以适当发挥；
（2）不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）提示词:戴口罩: wear a mask 健康码:heath codeHello, everyone! Winter vacation is coming. We will take a trip to Yueyang Tower. So today I want to introduce some rules to you___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．疫情期间，很多志愿者奔赴疫情一线，以勇担使命的奋斗精神和勇气，争当疫情防控先锋。假如你是上海一名防疫志愿者，请和大家一同分享你的志愿者经历和感受。
志愿者生活 1. 在社区；分发口罩等； 2. 在超市，提醒人们保持距离； 3. 在学校，……。
活动意义 1. 宣传戴口罩的重要性；2. ……。
感受 ……
提示词：1. wear a mask(带口罩) 2. keep a one-meter distance (保持1米距离)
要求：1. 要点齐全，可以适当发挥；2. 80—120词，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。My name is Li Hua. I was a volunteer in the worldwide epidemic (疫情防控). Let me tell you something about the life as a volunteer during these days. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、书信作文
10．假如你在一次聚会中认识了外国朋友Mike。他在中国学汉语，但是成绩不太理想，他希望你能给他提一些建议。请你根据下面的提示，教他一些学汉语的方法，并鼓励他不要放弃。（80—100词左右）
提示：
（1）在学习语言的过程中遇到问题是正常的；
（2）看或听汉语节目，学汉语歌曲；
（3）交一些中国朋友；
（4）不要害怕出错，坚持不要放弃。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Liu Mei
参考答案：
1．例文：
How to Improve Myself
Life is really a long lesson, so I have to improve myself.
First, I need to exercise one hour every day. It is bad to stay at home and play games for a long time. Second, I should be responsible for myself and my family. I should be independent instead of depending on my parents too often. Third, in face of the problems, I have to take up the challenges and work them out rather than run away from them. Next, I will develop my interest in many things, such as playing basketball, and knitting, instead of being interested in nothing. Last but not least, I will communicate with others and be a good team player.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于议论文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述运动，责任担当，问题解决和兴趣爱好方面提升自己的方法。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述提升自己的方法，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
2．例文：
Good morning, everyone! Since the “double reduction” policy was released, our lives have changed a lot. Next let me talk about it.
We used to do our homework till midnight and have no time for our hobbies. At the same time, we always attended many training courses at weekends. So we felt very tired all the time.
However, with the support of the “double reduction” policy, though we go home late, we have more interesting activities we like. We feel very excited when we join in these activities. Moreover, we can have more time to communicate with our parents because we have little homework after school.
I believe we can study happily and have fun at school because of the “double reduction” policy.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给参考问题结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，一般过去时用于介绍实行“双减”政策前的状态。人称采用第一人称。短文要介绍政策前后在不同方面的变化以及自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。
3．例文：
Hello everyone,
It’s my honor to speak out our students’ thoughts here. Parents of minors should attach importance to family education. Parents should spend more time with us. Parents should communicate with us more. Parents should be concerned about our study and life in school. Parents can set a good example. For example, they can’t often play mobile phones and games at home. Parents should pay attention to cultivating our good habits and help us form the good habit of going to bed early and getting up early.
It is very important that children’s healthy growth needs the company of their parents.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，在关于“家庭教育该如何进行”的班会，你要代表学生发言，介绍孩子们的心声，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态，人称主要为第三人称。文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
4．例文：
Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. People can only live two to three days without water. However, some people still don’t realize how important water is in our daily life. They keep throwing trash into rivers. They also pour waste water into rivers or lakes. As a result, the river and lakes are polluted.
What should we do to protect water resources First, we must prevent the factory from pouring waste water into rivers. Second, we should stop people from throwing litter to rivers and lakes. Many kinds of litter may pollute the environment. Third, we should reduce the waste of water in our daily life. When you see the tap on, you should turn it off in time. We can reuse water by flushing the toilet, mopping the floor and so on.
I hope all people can take action to protect water resources. After doing these things, I think water will become cleaner sooner or later.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据内容提示围绕水资源的重要性和保护措施写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态主要采用一般现在时。正文可分为三段式：第一段介绍水的重要性和水资源被污染的现状；第二段介绍保护水资源的措施，注意选用合适的连词、短语和句型来将内容进行串联和拓展；第三段总结全文呼吁保护水资源。文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
5．例文：
The person I admire
The person I admire most is my cousin, Mike. He is short and kind of fat. He is honest and cute. He is popular with people around him. He is good at English. He often helps his classmates with their study. He cares for the old and also helps the old people cross the road. He is kind to others. He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is brave enough to challenge all kinds of difficulties. He is a man responsible for his work. He always encourages me to be a kind and helpful person. He sets a good example to me. I’ll learn from him.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“The person I admire”为题介绍自己周围所熟悉的榜样，写一篇 80~100的英语短文。写作必须包含要点提示，每个要点可适当发挥，使文章连贯、连顺。
2.写作指导：因为本文要求介绍周围所熟悉的榜样，所以主要以一般现在时为主，写作时注意主语和谓语动词的搭配、be动词的使用以及名词单复数问题。严格按照要点提示进行书写，确保写出的句子符合英文表达习惯、上下文连贯，没有单词书写以及句型上的错误。
6．
Changes in our school life
Great changes have taken place in students’ school life since the “double reduction” policy（政策） came into our school. In the past, we had to stay at school for nearly 9 hours, but now, we just stay at school for no more than seven and a half hours. That makes us not so tired. Most of the time, we had to have classes on weekends and during the holidays. However, we don’t have classes during these time periods any longer. That’s cool, and we can have more free time of our own. As for the after-school activities, there were few and they were boring, in fact. Now everything has changed. We have plenty of wonderful club activities, such as playing ball games, singing, dancing, painting, playing chess and so on.
The great changes really do a lot of good to us students. We can no longer be too tired or too stressful. The most important thing is that we can lead a more colorful school life now.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，要求以“Changes in our school life”为题，说明学生的学习情况和校园生活的今昔对比，并阐述自己的观点或看法，因此写作时按说明文格式来写。
2. 写作指导：本文采用以第一人称为主来写，时态以一般过去时及一般现在时为主。写作时，第一段须承接短文开头，接着在四个方面进行今昔对比，写作时注意时态的正确使用；第二段阐述自己的观点并结尾。
7．范文：
Pingjiang is now making its effort to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do
We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When we cross the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn’t go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What’s more, we should protect our environment. For example, we mustn’t step on the grass and climb the trees. Litter mustn’t be thrown everywhere.
Pingjiang is our hometown. Let’s try our best to make it a civilized city.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据所给的提示写一篇短文谈谈作为中学生的我们，在“文明城市的建设”中应该如何做。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时和第一人称来行文。可分为三段行文：第一段点题；第二段详细介绍我们应该怎么做；第三段以号召大家结尾。确保内容全面，行文连贯，条理清晰，文中无单词和语法错误。
8． Hello, everyone! Winter vacation is coming. We will take a trip to Yueyang Tower. So today I want to introduce some rules to you. When we are in public, we must wear a mask. When we go in and out of public places, we have to show the health code. We can take pictures. We must protect the cultural relics in the scenic spot. We must obey orders. We should take good care of our belongings. Besides, there are also something that we had better no do. Don’t speak in a loud voice. Don’t make noise. Don’t litter everywhere. Swimming in the lake is prohibited. When we visit, we should avoid crowding. I hope these tips will help you and you will have a good time.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中可以做什么和不可以做什么，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，具体阐述写作内容，先介绍可以做的事情；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍不可以做的事情；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望同学们能开心地研学旅行”的愿望。
【亮点词汇】①in public在公开场合
②health code健康码
③cultural relics文物
④prohibit禁止
【高分句型】① Besides, there are also something that we had better no do.(定语从句)
② Don’t speak in a loud voice.(祈使句)
9．例文
My name is Li Hua. I was a volunteer in the worldwide epidemic (疫情防控). Let me tell you something about the life as a volunteer during these days.
First, I gave out facial masks to those in need in many communities. Then I went to the supermarket to remind people to keep a social distance between each other. In my school, I also made a speech about how to fight against the epidemic. It is meaningful for me to take part in the voluntary work.
To begin with, it gives me a chance to make more friends and improve my social skills. In addition, people’s spirits have been inspired so that we can get through this hard time positively.
The experience as a volunteer made me feel tired but proud of myself. I believe that only when we work together can we build up a world full of harmony and beauty.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的志愿者生活；
第二步，介绍活动的意义；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①give out分发
②to begin with首先
③in addition此外
[高分句型]
①it gives me a chance to make more friends and improve my social skills.（动词不定式作定语）
②people’s spirits have been inspired so that we can get through this hard time positively.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③I believe that only when we work together can we build up a world full of harmony and beauty.（that引导的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句以及部分倒装）
10．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. As we know, it’s normal to have some problems while learning a language. Don’t worry about it. I think you should watch or listen to Chinese programs often. You can also read Chinese stories and learn Chinese songs.
You know a good language environment is very helpful in learning a language, so you can make some Chinese friends and communicate more with them. You can also visit Chinese families and even live with them for some time. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Keep on practicing Chinese and never give up.
I’m sure you will make progress.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Liu Mei
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，结合题目所给提示，给Mike提供一些学汉语的建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称主要采用第二人称。分为三段式：第一段和第二段就如何学好中文提出相应的建议；最后一段表达鼓励。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。