04：书面表达-2023年中考英语专题突破（湖南张家界）（含答案）

04：书面表达-2023年中考英语专题突破（含答案解析）（湖南张家界）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、电子邮件
1．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom对中国传统文化很感兴趣。请你用英语给他写一封 80 词左右的电子邮件，介绍一个中国的传统节日。
要求：1. 所给词不计入总词数。
2. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。
参考词汇：traditional 传统的；decorate 装饰
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to tell you something about _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．假如你是李华，你的英语外教Tina在你们学校组建了一个环保俱乐部。下周末在俱乐部要开展哪些活动呢？Tina希望大家提出一些建议，作为俱乐部的一员，请你根据提示内容给Tina写一封邮件，提出你的建议。
提示：1.Which activity do you prefer
2. Why do you like the idea
3. What can members do
要求：1. 语言通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥。2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tina,
I’m glad that you have set up the club to help protect the environment. I think ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can think about my advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华， 刚刚收到美国笔友给你发来的电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容回复她 。
Dear Li hua,
How’s everything going I’m unhappy these days. I need your help.
I went to a new school two weeks ago. The new school is big and beautiful. At first, I was excited. However, I have a problem now. It seems that my new classmates don’t like me. I feel left out. I don’t know what to do. Could you please help me out
Best wishes!
Yours,
Cindy
要求：1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺，连贯。
2. 60词左右。
Dear Cindy,
I’m sorry to know that you are having a hard time with your new classmates. But don’t worry, Making friends is easier than you might think. Here’s some advice for you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope I can help you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Lihua
4．假如你是张家界的李明，你的朋友Bill发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。请你根据以下信息，给Bill回一封电子邮件并建议他每周都要花点时间锻炼身体。
写作要点：
1．你最近正忙于即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。
2．介绍你平时锻炼的情况：
(1) 每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时；
(2) 偶尔不锻炼原因：去养老院做志愿活动或者去爷爷奶奶家帮忙做家务，没时间；
(3) 擅长的体育运动：球类运动。
3．谈谈锻炼给你带来的好处。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名和学校名；
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰 ；
4.至少80词。
Dear Bill,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
二、材料作文
5．假如你是李华，请根据下面的要求写一篇短文为大家介绍你的好朋友。
要求：
1.　内容必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；　
2.　文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；　
3.　不少于50词。
My Best Friend
Name：Jack
Looking：tall, handsome，straight brown hair，not wear glasses
Wearing：jeans，a T-shirt，sports shoes
Why l like him：cool，fun，good at soccer
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6．假设你是李华，你在美国的笔友Tom对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣, 他来信询问有关情况。请你根据下面的提示和要求, 给他回一封电子邮件, 介绍一个中国的传统节日。
内容包括:
(1) 节日的名称和时间;
(2) 节日的传统习俗;
(3) 节日的意义。
要求: (1) 80词左右 (开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数);
(2) 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
(3) 信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Tom,
I am glad to receive your e-mail.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What do you think of this festival I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，你们班上打算举办关于“My Habits”的主题班会。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。
要求∶
1.内容必须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥;
2.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.不少于50词（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Good Habits Bad habits
Activities exercise read books drink juice How often always every day often Activities watch TV eat hamburgers help with housework How often always often never
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
8．你校英语俱乐部即将举办一次主题为 “My favorite Chinese festival”的征文活动。假如你最喜欢的节日是端午节，请你写一篇英语短文参加此次活动，内容包括：
1.端午节的时间及意义。
2.端午节的活动（吃粽子，划龙舟，喝雄黄酒，挂艾草，佩戴香囊等）。
3.你最喜欢端午节的理由。
要求：1.紧扣主题，语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯。
2.词数不少于80字。
参考词汇：drink realgar wine 喝雄黄酒；hang Chinese mugwort 挂艾草；carry a spice bag 佩戴香囊
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9．随着外国游客日益增多，我市博物馆决定选拔部分中学生在假期为他们提供英语讲解任务。假如你叫李玲，你有能力并希望成为一名讲解员。请按要求写一封自荐信。
内容要点：
1. 性格外向；对人友好；乐于助人；
2. 擅长英语；能很好地与人交流；
3. 热爱家乡；了解土家文化和历史。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
3. 词数：50～80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：communicate(交流)；hometown（家乡）；Tujia culture（土家文化）
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Ling, a junior student from No. 6 Middle School. I’d like to become one of your guides.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I would be very thankful if you could give me the chance. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Ling
10．最近教育部发文要求中小学校开展劳动教育必修课，并且规定了中小学每周课外活动和家庭生活中的劳动时间。根据下面的提示，请你谈一谈作为中学生的你们可以在校内外做些什么劳动，以及这些劳动对你们的意义。
要求：
（1）内容必须包括所提示信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）不少于50词（文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数）。
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m very glad to tell you something about Chinese traditional festival. There are many traditional festivals in China and I like the Spring Festival best.
The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China. It’s also a traditional festival. It is usually called the Chinese New Year. It usually comes in January or February. To celebrate it, people always do a lot of preparations for it.
A few days before the festival, people usually have a thorough cleaning everywhere in order to get rid of bad luck. They also decorate their houses with couplets. On the eve of the Spring Festival, the whole family are sitting together, having a big dinner and enjoying the TV programmes until midnight. And children are especially happy because they can get lucky money that wrapped in red paper from their elders. On the first day of the New Year, all the people, the old and the young, wear new clothes to pay a visit to their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck in the coming New Year. Everybody has a good time and feels happy during the festival.
This is our traditional festival. What about yours
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于书信作文，主要是以传统节日“春节”为主，向外国朋友介绍春节的一些习俗和我们在春节要做的一些事情和庆祝活动，写作内容可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第三人称展开描述。主要是介绍春节前以及春节时人们要做的一些事情以及人们的一些感受。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。
2．例文：
Dear Tina,
I’m glad that you have set up the club to help protect the environment. I think next weekend we can help clean our city. When I walk in the streets or play in the park, I can always see litter on the ground or advertisements on the walls. It makes me feel bad. If we give the city a good clean, we can change the situation. There are many things we can do, like picking up litter, taking care of the grassland and plants in public places, cleaning the small advertisements on the walls, and so on. I’m sure the members of the club will be happy to see a cleaner city and feel proud of themselves.
I hope you can think about my advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以李华的身份，根据提示的内容要点向英语外教Tina写一封信，内容包括：你建议开展的活动，你喜欢这个活动的原因以及俱乐部成员可以为这个活动做的事情。
2. 写作指导：本文主要是陈述观点和建议，时态主要采用一般现在时；本文可根据提示要点的顺序进行写作，先从图片中三选一表明你希望俱乐部开展的活动，然后再用一到两句话简述选这个活动的原因，最后重点可放在活动的具体形式上，此处可多列举几种形式作为此次活动的参考；最后写作完成时应保证要点齐全，行文流畅以及语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
3．例文：
Dear Cindy,
I’m sorry to know that you are having a hard time with your new classmates. But don’t worry. Making friends is easier than you might think. Here’s some advice for you.
As students, we need to get along well with our classmates. In order to get along with them, here are some suggestions. First of all, we should be polite. Not only is it necessary for us but also it can help us to make a good impression on other people. What’s more, trying to communicate with others is a directed and good way to make friends with our classmates. Last but not the least, we should give a helping hand to whom is in trouble.
I hope I can help you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Lihua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件写作。在写作时应根据题目要求和来信讲述对朋友关于如何跟同学相处的看法和建议。
2.写作指导：本文应用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主；关于如何跟同学相处的看法和建议要表述完整，条理清晰，无语法和拼写错误。
4．例文：
Dear Bill,
It’s my great pleasure to receive your email. You want to know something about my usual exercise. I am glad to share with you.
I am busy preparing for the coming physical test recently. Though it is easy for me, I still take it seriously. Usually it takes me one and a half hours to do exercise, such as running, playing badminton, jumping and so on. I like playing badminton best and I can do well in it. However, sometimes I visit my grandparents and help them with the housework, so I don’t have enough time to do exercise.
Doing exercise can make me strong and keep me healthy. I will feel energetic after that. You can also do exercise every day or several times a week. You will be more active and energetic days later.
Best wishes!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时注意按照书信格式书写，写作时注意承接短文开头。第二段写你最近在准备即将到来的体育测试，同时写你平时做哪些锻炼包括锻炼时长，擅长的运动项目以及偶尔不锻炼的原因。第三段是谈谈锻炼给你带来的好处并建议Bill也花点时间来锻炼。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称叙述自己的情况和用第二人称写给Bill的运动建议，时态以一般现在时为主。描述时注意叙述的顺序，尤其是第二段，要有一定的逻辑顺序描述，注意写作时主谓一致，做到语言简练，条理清晰，同时注意字迹工整。
5．例文:
My Best Friend
My name is Li Hua. Jack is my best friend. He is a tall and handsome boy. He has long straight brown hair. His mouth is small. He has big eyes and he doesn’t wear glasses. Jack is a very cool boy. He often wears jeans, a T-shirt and a pair of sports shoes. I like Jack because he is cool and fun. I like playing soccer and he is also good at it.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述朋友杰克的外貌、穿着和喜欢他的原因。
2.写作指导：本文用第三人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致关系；讲述外貌、穿着和喜欢他的原因叙述完整，条理清晰。
6．例文
Dear Tom,
I am glad to receive your e-mail. I’m glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals. My favorite festival is the Mid-Auturnn Festival. It usually comes in September or October. On that day, our family members usually get together and have a nice meal. After that, I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families.
I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes. They are in the shape of a full moon. They carry people’s wishes to the families which they love and miss. In short, the Mid- Auturnn Festival is a special day of pleasure and happiness.
I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals.
What do you think of this festival I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。假设你是李华，你在美国的笔友Tom来信询问有关于中国传统节日的情况，要求你根据要点提示，给他写一封电子邮件，介绍一个中国的传统节日。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一、第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
7．One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I want to talk about my habits. I have a lot of good habits. I always exercise and read books every day. Also, I often drink juice. However, I have some bad habits, too. I usually watch TV for more than two hours a day, and I often eat hamburgers for dinner. My parents are not happy because I never help with housework.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，描述自己的习惯，包括好习惯和坏习惯等，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
8．例文：
My favorite Chinese festival
My favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year, It’s a day to remember Qu Yuan, a great poet.
On this day people usually eat Zongzi and hold dragon boat races. They also drink realgar wine, hang Chinese mugwort around the doors and carry a spice bag around with them. What makes the festival special for me is the dragon boat race, The members of the dragon boat team have such great team spirit—everybody tries their best to win the race.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容以“My favorite Chinese festival”写一篇文章介绍端午节，包括端午节的时间及意义、活动、喜欢端午节的理由等，要求要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。可分为两段式：第一段点明自己最喜欢端午节、端午节的时间及意义；第二段介绍端午节的活动及自己喜欢端午节的原因。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
9．[例文]
Dear Sir,
I’m Li Ling, a junior student from No. 6 Middle School. I’d like to become one of your guides.
Firstly, as an outgoing girl, I am friendly to others. I feel like making friends with different people, wherever they come from, I am sure I will get along well with them. Last but not least, I feel it my duty to spread Chinese culture to people all over the world.
Secondly, I am good at English and can communicate with others freely in English. Thanks to the Summer Camp that I took part in last year in America, my English has greatly improved.
Thirdly, I love my hometown very much. I am interested in the Tujia culture and its history. I spent much time learning about it. Therefore, I believe I can introduce it to foreigners clearly and fluently.
I would be very thankful if you could give me the chance. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Ling
【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据题目所给要点，以李玲的名义写一封信，申请成为一名英语讲解员。题目所给要点必须全部包含，切忌遗漏。
2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一人称，时态应根据具体语境使用现在时或过去时。文章应做到要点齐全，条理清晰，尽量使用Firstly、Secondly、Thirdly等词串联上下文，使段与段之间衔接自然流畅。不要出现单词拼写、语法时态使用错误。
10．例文
Labor education is becoming more and more important among teenagers. We can help our parents take out the rubbish and do the dishes. In school, we can clean the classroom and grow vegetables. We can also clean up city parks and plant trees. Taking part in labor can not only improve our life skills, but also enrich our spare time. I hope we can take part in labor as much as possible.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“劳动”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。从在学校，在家以及其他地方都可以做哪些劳动进行介绍，最后介绍劳动的意义。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。