Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands. Section B Writing 课件

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Unit 10
You're supposed to shake hands.
Section B Writing
Your pen pal is coming to China on an exchange program. He / She is asking you about Chinese customs and what he / she is supposed to do or not. Make notes in the chart.
Chinese customs
Table manners:
House rules:
Going out
with people:
you should tell your hostess where you are
going, who you are going with and when you
will come back.
don't eat first if there are older people;
don't point at other people with your
chopsticks;
don't stick your chopsticks into the
bowl of rice.
take off your shoes before you enter the house;
don't usually kiss or hug people.
Writing Topic
Suppose you are Xiao Wei, please write
a letter to your pen pal Ivan to give him
advice and suggestions on how to behave
properly in China.
写作要求：
1.词数在80~100词。
2.写作内容包括table manners, house rules
and going out with people
Person(人称）
The second person
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense/
the simple future tense
Text(文体）
A letter
Details(细节）
1.write a letter
(including table manners, house rules and going out with people)
2.80-100 words
What should we think about
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Beginning:
Show your wishes
Lead to the topic.
Introduce some Chinese customs including table manners, house rules and going out with people
Beginning: 引出话题
Body:具体介绍中国习俗
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me
give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.
It's polite/impolite to...
You're supposed/not supposed to...
Ending:表达感受
Have a good trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon.
You should...
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
已开始计时
时间到
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group
check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure
and
content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic.
(1 point)
Para : I have written some Chinese customs including table manners, house rules and going out with people.
(3 points)
Para : I have showed my wishes.
(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
1
1
1
2
4
3
1
1
1
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense and the simple future tense correctly. For example: You are supposed to take off
your shoes before you enter the house. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses.
For example:It's impolite to start eating first if there are older people. (2 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
80
1
Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
Dear Ivan,
You must be excited about coming to China soon. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.
When you are eating at the table, it's impolite to start eating first if there are older people. You should let them start first. When you are eating with chopsticks, you shouldn't point at other people with your chopsticks. It's also impolite. And you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the bowl of rice. In our house, you are supposed to take off your shoes before you enter the house. In our culture, we don't usually hug or kiss people. When you go out with people, you should tell the hostess where you are going, who you are going with and when you will come back. In our culture, the hostess will worry a lot about the safety of her guests.
All in all, when in Rome, do as the Romans do. Have a good trip, and I look forward to meeting you soon.
Li Hua