Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry. Section B writing 课件

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Unit 11
Sad movies make me cry
writing
Free talk
Something that made me happy/sad was doing sth…
When,where and how did it happen
How did it make you feel
What did you learn from it
假定你是Li Hua, 你校校报Speak Out栏目向全校征集以“Something that made you happy or sad”为主题的稿件，请你根据以下提示要点写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示要点：
1.What made you happy or sad
2. When,where and how did it happen
3. How did it make you feel
4.What did you learn from it
写作要求：词数不少于100词；可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。开头已给出。
Person(人称）
The first person
Tense(时态）
The simple past tense
/the simple future tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
1.write a passage
What, When,where and how
2.80-100 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Beginning:
Show what you learn
Lead to the topic.
Introduce details
What, When,where and how
Pre-writing
Beginning: 引出话题
Body:具体介绍事情经过及感受
Something that made me … was doing…
…made me…
Ending:总结收获
All in all, I learned a lot from it. I believe that …
In conclusion, it benefits me deeply. I know that …
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para : I have written some Chinese customs including table manners, house rules and going out with people. (3 points)
Para : I have showed my wishes. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
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Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense and the simple future tense correctly. For example: You are supposed to take off your shoes before you enter the house. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example:It's impolite to...You are (not) supposed to... You are (not) expected to... (2 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
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Something that made me happy was winning the piano competition.
It was held on September 20th in City Music Hall.On tha day I saw many people there.I was so nervous.I was worried that I would make mistakes during my performance.Then I remembered what my father told me always believe in yourself ,and you are the best .His words made me feel much better.When it was my turn to play ,I walked up to the piano with confidence and performed well. You wouldn't believe how much I wanted to know the result.When I knew I won the first prize,I hugged my parents in excitement.
This experience taught me that it's very important to have confidence in yourself.