Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected Section B Writing 课件

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—— An Unforgettable Weekend
Period 4
Writing
Topic 3:
Daily Routines
—What was your unforgettable weekend like
— It was…
Pre-writing
This is my most unforgettable weekend:
I went to the zoo on Sunday morning. I saw the dolphine show with my friend Cindy.
When I wanted to shake hands with a dolphine, I was kissed by him. It was so funny.
Pre-writing
Do you like the article Why
when
Pre-writing
who
where
what
How did the story happen
Why
请以My unforgettble weekend experience为题，通过以下表格提示，完整叙述自己的经历。要求合理运用by the time句型和过去完成时态以及一般过去时态。
My unforgettable weekend experience
When&Where&Who&What （开篇背景介绍）
How（事件的发展） 至少写出事件的三处细节
Why（结局和归因）
Pre-writing
Person(人称）
The first person
Tense(时态）
The simple past tense/past perfect tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
1.write a passage
What, when,where,who, how and why
2.80-100 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Beginning:
Why/feeling
Lead to the topic.
What,when,who,where
Introduce details
how
Pre-writing
Beginning: 引出话题
Body:具体介绍事情经过及感受
I will never forget…
Last summer/year/month, I …
Ending:
All in all, I learned a lot from it. I believe that …
In conclusion, it benefits me deeply. I know that …
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
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Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topicWhat,when,who,where. (1 point)
Para : I have written how the story happened. (3 points)
Para : I have showed my wishes. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
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Grammar and language I have used the simple past tense or the past perfect tense correctly. For example: By the time…, …had done… (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example:It was the first time for us to... (2 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
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What An Unforgettable Day
Last summer vacation I decided to visit my grandparents because I hadn’t seen them for many years.
That day when I was about to leave for the train station, I found I had arrived at the sation two hours later. While I was waiting in the waiting room, a woman came and asked me if I could help her look after her two boys for a while. I agreed and we played games until the woman came back. After they left, I found my wallet had been stolen. I called the police right away, They told me that the woman had cheated me. That made me really disappointed and worried. Finally, I got to my grandparent’s home with the help of the police.
It is a lesson to me.But I think we should still keep a kind heart and be more careful with ourselves, although life is full of the unexpected.