Marking Ladders
Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ______ : I have led to the topic and described what I used to be like. (1 point)
Para ______: I have written the biggest change and how I made it. (5 points)
Para _:I have showed my feelings. (2 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (2 point)
Grammar and language I have used the present perfect tense and the simple past tense correctly. For example： I used to be overweight. (5 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (2 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (2 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example: Three years ago, however, I was so shy that I felt nervous when I talked with others. (3 points)
I have checked my word count is around . (2 point)
Total score(共19张PPT)
Unit 4
I used to be afraid of the dark.
Section B Writing
What changes do you have
Pre-writing
Changes
Wearing
personality
…
appearance
I used to be/have/like...but now I...
I didn’t use to be/wear...now,I ...
habit
hobby
height
build
hair
wear glasses
shy
humorous
friendly
serious
get up early
do homework
carelessly
play online
games
play basketball
1.What was your biggest change
2.How did you change
In order to deal with..., I took up...
This is the most important change because ...
This is thanks to...
Pre-writing
Free talk
The biggest change in my life was that...
Pre-writing
Free talk
1.What do you think of your changes
It’s so amazing/good/... that I have really changed too much!
People sure change,and I’m changing for better.
I like/dislike my changes because....
Pre-writing
Everyone is developing and changing. What changes do you have Which was the biggest one, how did you change and what do you think of your changes
要求：1.层次清晰，语言流畅；2.80-100词。
Person(人称）
The first person
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense/
The simple past tense
Text(文体）
A passage
Details(细节）
1.write a passage
(1.What changes do you have
2.What’s the biggest change 3.How did you make it )
2.80-100 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Beginning:
Show your feelings
Lead to the topic.
1.What changes do you have
2.What’s the biggest change
3. How did you make it
Pre-writing
Beginning: 引出话题
Body:有哪些变化 ,最大的变化，怎么会变化
As time goes by, people sure change. It’s true that my life
has changed a lot.
The biggest change in my life was...
Ending:表达感受
It’s so amazing that I have really changed ...
In order to..., I took up...
This is the most important change because ...
This is thanks to...
People sure change,and I’m changing for better.
I used to ...now I...
I didn’t use to ...now I...
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
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Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic and described what I used to be like. (1 point)
Para : I have written the biggest change and how I made it. (3 points)
Para : I have showed my feelings (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
1
1
1
2
5
3
2
2
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense and the simple past tense correctly. For example: I used to be overweight. (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example: The most important change in my life is that I become much better in English. (2 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
5
2
2
3
25
80
2
Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Show Time
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
As time goes by, people sure change. It’s true that my life has changed a lot in
the last few years.
I used to be overweight but I’m not anymore. I lost much weight after I started playing tennis three times a week. Now I’m much healthier. I still remember that I used to be afraid of English tests because I was not good at English. But now the biggest change in my life is that I become much better in English. This is thanks to my English teacher, Mrs. Wang, who gave me some good ways to learn English. I tried my best to read and write English as much as possible. This is the biggest change because I am no longer afraid of English and I am doing better in my exams. This has made my parents even prouder of me.
It’s so amazing that I have really changed too much!Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
Section B 3a-3c Writing
Name
Ⅰ.Writing topic
Everyone is developing and changing, and their own advantages and disadvantages are not invariable(不变的). What did you use to be like Which change is the biggest one, and how did you make it
要求：1.层次清晰，语言流畅；2.80-100词。
Tips:Function sentences:
I used to be/have/like
I used to be afraid of...
The biggest change in my life was...
In order to..., I took up...
Because of...
This is thanks to...
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
Ⅲ.Finish the First draft
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)
(
)Ⅳ.Finish the second draft
