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Family Rules
unit 7 writing
Watch the video and answer these questions
What are the rules in Mary's family
What are Mary's parents’ opinions about the family rules
What are Mary's opinions about the family rules
What are the rules in Mary's family
only use the computer from 8:00 to 8:30 at night
get rid of the WIFI
cut back on all the electronics they use
1. use the electronics less
What are the rules in Mary's family
need to go outside more and do some playing outside
2. go outside more and do some playing outside
What are the rules in Mary's family
need to get to know her little sister
3. spend more time with her sister
What is Mary's parents’ opinion about rule 1
They think Mary doesn’t spend enough time with the family when she is constantly on her iPhone and computers.
What is Mary's opinion about rule 1
She thinks she needs to use it for her homework.
What is Mary's opinion about rule 2
She thinks noboday does those silly things at her age.
What is Mary's parents’ opinion about rule 3
They think Mary can get along well with her sister
What is Mary's opinion about rule 3
She thinks she doesn’t want to be friends with her sister because she is too young .
Mary’s family rules
1.she needs to use the electronics less.
2.She should go outside more and do some playing outside.
3.She needs to spend more time with her sister.
Mary’s ideas
Parent’s ideas
They think Mary doesn’t spend enough time with the family when she is constantly on her iPhone and computers.
She thinks she needs to use it for her homework.
She thinks noboday does that silly things .
They think Mary can get along well with her sister.
She thinks she doesn’t want to be friends with her sister because she is too young .
My parents are very strict with me , because I have too many rules at home.
Firstly,I’m not allowed to use the electronics more. My parents think I spend more time on the iPhone and computers. But I think I need to use them for my homework. What’s more, I am asked to go outside more and do some playing outside. In my opinion,nobody at my age does those silly things . Furthermore, I have to get to know my little sister. Because they hope that I can get along well with my sister. But I don’t want to be friends with her because she is too young.
Although they give me too much pressure, I know that is because they really care about me.
My parents are very strict with me , because I have too many rules at home.
Firstly,I’m not allowed to use the electronics more. My parents think I spend more time on the iPhone and computers. But I think I need to use them for my homework. What’s more, I am asked to go outside more and do some playing outside. In my opinion,nobody at my age does those silly things . Furthermore, I have to get to know my little sister. Because they hope that I can get along well with my sister. But I don’t want to be friends with her because she is too young.
Although they give me too much pressure, I know that is because they really care about me.
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rule
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parents’ reason/opinion
parents’ reason/opinion
my reason/opinion
my reason/opinion
my reason/opinion
feelings
What are the rules in your family
You should begin like this:
I am not allowed to…
I have to/should / I must do…
what are your/your parents’ opinions
My parents think…
I think…
Dear Li Hua,
I’m wondering if your parents have made any rules for you. What are the rules What do your parents think of them What do you think of them Why
Requests:
1.around 3 rules
2.around 80-100 words
假设你是李华，收到了朋友Lucy 的一封来信，请用英语
写一封100词左右的回信给她。格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Person(人称）
The first/third person
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense
Text(文体）
A letter
Details(细节）
80-100 words
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Pre-writing
Beginning:
Show your feelings
Lead to the topic.
1.family rules
2.parents’ opinions and reasons
my opinions and reasons
I’m not allowed to….
I should be allowed to….
I am asked to….
I must/ I should….
I have to/need to...
It is bad for sb to do sth
I t is a good habit to do ….
It is a good way to….
have a bad infuence on….
Good sentences you may use:
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic . (1 point)
Para : I have written my and my parents’opinions and reasons about the rules (5 points)
Para : I have showed my feelings (2 points)
My writing is tidy and clear. (2points)
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Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense . (5 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (2 points)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (2 points.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example: I am asked to.... I think ...because... (3 points)
I have checked my word count isaround .(2 points)
Total score
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Thank youUnit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes
Marking Ladders Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Peer Check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ______ : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para ______: I have written my and my parents’ opinions and reasons about the family rules. (5 points)
Para :I have showed my feelings. (2 points)
My writing is tidy and clear. (2 points)
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense correctly. (5 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (2 points)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (2 points.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example: I am asked to.... I think ...because... (3 points)
I have checked my word count is around . (2 points)
Total score
What can I do to improve my composition next time Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes
Writing
Name
I. Analyse the sample
My parents are very strict with me , because I have too many rules at home.
Firstly,I’m not allowed to use the electronics more. My parents think I spend more time on the iPhone and computers. But I think I need to use them for my homework. What’s more, I am asked to go outside more and do some playing outside. In my opinion,nobody at my age does those silly things . Furthermore, I have to get to know my little sister. Because they hope that I can get along well with my sister. But I don’t want to be friends with her because she is too young.
Although they give me too much pressure, I know that is because they really care about me.
II.Writing topic
假设你是李华，收到了朋友Lucy 的一封来信，请用英语写一封100词左右的回信给她。格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m wondering if your parents have made any rules for you. What are the rules What do your parents think of them What do you think of them Why
Requests:
1.around 3 ruless
2.around 80-100 words
III. Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
Some useful phrases
I’m not allowed to…. I should be allowed to….
I am asked to…. I must/ I should….
I have to/need to... It is bad for sb to do sth
I t is a good habit to do …. It is a good way to….
have a bad infuence on….
IV.Finish the First draft
V. Finish the second draft
