(共20张PPT)
Unit1
How can we become good learners
Section B Writing
Do you know any ways of learning English
Brainstorming
listening to English tapes;
listening to English songs;
listening to English radios;
speaking English in class;
speaking English with friends;
reading English textbooks
reading English notes;
reading English newspapers;
reading English magazines;
writing e-mails to your friends;
writing English diaries
We can learn English by
1.What’s the best way do you think to learn English
Free talk
2.Why do you think so
It is the best way to learn English by…
If you do this….you will…
It is a good idea to… because...
This will help you to…
It is a good idea to…
Doing…is the best way to…
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From: Li Ming
Dear classmates,
How is it going I am Li Ming from No.2 Middle School. I have difficulties in learning English all the time. However, next year, I will take part in high school entrance examination. Therefore I am worried about my English and I want to improve my English. Can you help me
Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
Ling Ming
Writing Topic
Please write an e-mail to Li Ming , give him some suggestions about the best ways to learn English.
提示内容：
1.What are your suggestions(the best ways)
2. Why do you think they’re the best ways
要求：
1.At least 3 ways
2.At least 80 words
Person(人称）
The second person
Tense(时态）
The simple present tense/
The simple future tense
Text(文体）
An e-mail
Details(细节）
1.write an e-mail
(3 ways and why)
2.80-100 words
What should we think about
Structure
(结构)
Body:
Ending:
What should we think about
Beginning:
Show your feelings
Lead to the topic.
Some advice about best ways to learn English
Why
Beginning: 引出话题
Body:方式及原因
I’m sorry to hear that…Here are my suggestions.
I know that...I’d like to give you some advice.
There are three best ways to learn English. Firstly… secondly …thirdly…
I think you should… If you do this, you will…
Ending:表达希望
I believe that...
I understand your worries. Let me tell you my advice.
It’s a good idea to…because…
You could improve your English by…because this will help…
I wish you could...
I hope you can...
Write a passage in 15 minutes
While-writing
已开始计时
时间到
Correction codes:
Spelling and punctuation mistakes
Wrong sentences
Beautiful sentences
Transitional sentences
Conjunction words
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For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content,grammar &language Self-check Group
check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure
and
content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have led to the topic.
(1 point)
Para : I have written at least 3best ways to learn English and reasons (3 points)
Para : I have showed my feelings
(1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
3
1
1
1
2
4
3
1
1
1
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense and the simple future tense correctly. For example: you should learn/improve English by doing...
(3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses.
For example: If you do like this, you will… …because(2 point)
I have checked my word count is around .(1 point)
Total score
3
1
1
1
15
80
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Sharing Time
Evaluate(评价) your group members’ compositions, then show them to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. language(语言)
6.fluency( 流畅）
Post-writing
Summary
1.Person
2.Tense
3.Text
4. Details
5.Structure
Before writing
Focus on
Summary
Evaluation
1. structure
2. handwriting
3. points
4. grammar
5. language
6.fluency
Focus on
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
Post-writing
Sample
Dear Li Ming,
I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about your English. I’d like to give you some advice.
There are three best ways to learn English. Firstly, being interested in what you are doing is a good way. If you are interested in something, your brain will be more active and you will be more focused. Secondly , it’s a good idea to listen to English songs. If you do this, you will be able to improve your pronunciation . Thirdly , I think you should read English books because well-written books can teach you many new words and how they are used. Finally ,You could try to improve your English by watching English movies. This will help you to improve listening and speaking skills as you will have a chance to listen to natural speech.
1 hope these three ways will work well for you!
Your friend ，LindaMarking Ladders
Name
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure ,content, grammar &language Self-check Group check Teacher’s assess-ment
Structure and content I have organized my writing into_________ paragraphs. (1 point)
Para ______ : I have led to the topic. (1 point)
Para ______: I have written at least 3 best ways to learn English and reasons. (3 points)
Para _:I have showed my feelings. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I have used the simple present tense and the simple future tense correctly. For example：You should learn/improve English by doing... (3 points)
I have used some linking words and transitional sentences to make my passage fluent. (1 point)
I have checked the spelling of the uncertain words by using a dictionary or asking my teacher. (1 point.)
I have used some beautiful sentences and some clauses. For example:: If you do like this, you will…I think…because… (2 points)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total score
What can I do to improve my composition next time Unit 1 How can we become good learners
Section B 3a-3c Writing
Name
Ⅰ.Writing topic
Dear classmates, How is it going I am Li Ming from No.2 Middle School. I have difficulties in learning English all the time. However, next year, I will take part in high school entrance examination. Therefore, I am worried about my English and I want to improve my English. Can you help me Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Ling Ming
Please write an e-mail to Li Ming, give him some suggestions about the best ways to learn English.
提示内容：
1. What are your suggestions (the best ways)
2. Why do you think they are the best ways
要求：1. At least 3 ways 2.At least 80 words
Ⅱ.Analyse the topic
Person: Tense：
Text: Details：
Structure：
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Ⅲ.Finish the First draft
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)Ⅳ.Finish the second draft
