Unit 3 Our animal friends
单元话题满分范文必背
一、话题作文
1.(2022·广东·东莞市光明中学七年级阶段练习)动物是人类的朋友,所以许多人喜欢养宠物。请你写一篇英语短文讲讲你最喜欢的一个宠物。
内容要点包括:
1. 你最喜欢的宠物以及原因;
2. 这个宠物的外貌特征、爱好、生活习性、你和它的活动;
3. 呼吁人们保护动物。
作文要求:1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数 80 个左右。
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【答案】Animals are our friends, so many people like to keep a pet. My favorite pet is the dog. Because the dogs are very smart and loyal. They can accompany the lonely people.
The dogs have different colors like white, black, yellow and so on. They are very lovely and naughty. They run here and there. And they like playing with people, so I always take my dog to go for walk after dinner.
Dogs bring us happiness and make us relax. We should protect animals, they are our friends. And they have their life, we can't hurt them.
【详解】提干分析:阅读提干可知,这是一篇话题性作文,就你最喜欢的宠物进行讨论,呼吁 我们要保护动物。写作内容包括三个部分,第一段表达出喜欢的宠物及原因,第二段说明喜欢的宠物的特征,第三段呼吁保护动物。
例文点评:这是一篇优秀的例文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确的运用时态。首先第一段点名了喜欢的宠物,直奔主题,使用一些连接词,使行文紧凑,增加上下文连贯,用词准确,句子通顺。
高分亮点:
短语:like to do/doing sth 喜欢做某事 ;the lonely people 孤独的人;here and there 到处;make sb adj.使某人感到怎么样;
句型:(1)They can accompany the lonely people.他们能够陪伴孤独的人。the lonely people 孤独的人;(2)The dogs have different colors like white, black, yellow and so on.狗狗们有不同的颜色,像白色,黑色,黄色等等。表达等等除了用....,可以用“and so on”;(3)Dogs bring us happiness and make us relax.狗狗们带给我们幸福,使我们放松。bring sb sth 带给某人某事;make sb adj.使某人感动怎么样。
二、材料作文
2.(2022·广东·广州市新滘中学七年级期中)每个人都有自己最喜欢的动物。假如你是Anna,现在正和你的朋友们谈论自己最喜欢的动物以及原因。下面表格是你们谈论的内容,请以“Our favourite animals”为题,写一篇英语短文。词数70左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
人物 最喜欢的动物 理由
Linda 猫 能抓老鼠;很可爱
Ben 马 擅长奔跑;很漂亮
Anna 狗 能做很多事情;很忠诚
【要求】
1.内容准确,无遗漏;2.语法正确,语句通顺;3.字迹工整,条理清晰,可以适当发挥;
4.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
【参考词汇】忠诚的faithfulOur favourite animals
Everyone has their own favourite animals.
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【答案】例文:
Our favourite animals
Everyone has their own favourite animals. Now my two friends and I are talking about our favorite animals. Linda likes cats best. She thinks that they can catch mice and they look very lovely. Horses are Ben’s favorite animals. He thinks that they are good at running and they are very beautiful. As for me, I like dogs best, because they can do lots of things for people and they are very faithful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,介绍Linda、Ben以及Anna三人最喜欢的动物及原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引入主题,介绍自己和两个朋友在谈论最喜欢的动物;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,分别介绍Linda、Ben以及Anna最喜欢的动物及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②be good at擅长
③lots of很多
[高分句型]
She thinks that they can catch mice and they look very lovely.(that引导的宾语从句)
3.(2022·广东·广州市第二中学七年级期中)假设你是长隆野生动物园(Chimelong Safari Park)的工作人员,今天你需要带几位外国游客参观园内一只叫酷酷的大熊猫(giant panda)。请根据以下表格的信息,写一份讲解稿,向游客们介绍酷酷。
名字:酷酷 年龄:8岁
特征: 1. 国内最出名的大熊猫之一; 2. 不仅喜欢吃而且爱睡觉,经常一趴下就睡着;竹子是他最钟情的食物;擅长爬树;喜欢独居 3. 在饲养员的精心照顾下,他的寿命可超过20年
观看指引: 如果你对大熊猫的生活感兴趣,你可以尝试乘坐缆车俯视竹林里的大熊猫。
注意:
1. 参考词汇:竹子(bamboo)、饲养员(keeper)、缆车(cable car);
2. 可适当发挥,词数:80词左右(开头已给出,不计入词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Welcome to Chimelong Safari Park! Please follow me and see Kuku.
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【答案】例文:
Welcome to Chimelong Safari Park! Please follow me and see Kuku. Kuku is one of the most famous pandas in China. He’s 8 years old now. He likes not only eating but also sleeping. Bamboo is his favorite food. He often falls asleep as soon as he lies down. He is good at climbing trees and likes to live alone. With the care of his keepers, he can live for more than 20 years.
If you are interested in the life of pandas, you can take a cable car to see the pandas in the bamboo forest.
【详解】1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,要求根据表格中的信息,介绍一下大熊猫酷酷。注意要点齐全。
2. 写作指导:本文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来描述。写作中内容要包含题干所给的提示内容,并在此基础上选用合适的连词,短语和句型来进行串联和拓展;注意做到思路清晰,层次分明,要点齐全;行文要语句通顺,符合逻辑关系;无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
4.(2021·广东·广州市第一中学七年级期中)熊猫在地球上已经生存了至少800万年,被誉为 “活化石”和 “中国国宝”,请根据下面表格中的提示,写一篇英语短文。
熊猫描述 颜色:黑白相间
个性:害羞但可爱
生活习性:喜欢吃竹子,经常在阳光下玩耍
人们如何看待熊猫 友谊和幸运的象征
现状 数量越来越少(砍伐森林;猎杀)
如何保护 …(请你补充1-2点)
1. 参考词汇:bamboo竹子,symbol象征,luck幸运;
2. 词数70左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Pandas are a kind of world wild animals. Most of them live in China. People around the world love them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Pandas are a kind of world wild animals. Most of them live in China. People around the world love them. They are black and white. They are shy but very lovely. They like eating bamboo in their daily lives. People love pandas because they are symbols of friendship and luck.
However, people cut down forests, so lots of pandas lost their homes. Some people also hunt and kill them. As a result, the number of pandas is fewer and fewer. It is important for us to protect them. First, we should plant more trees and we shouldn’t cut down too many of them. Besides, never hunt or kill pandas. If we don’t want a world without pandas, we should do our best to protect them.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段,第一段描述熊猫并介绍如何看待熊猫;第二段描述熊猫的现状以及应该如何保护熊猫。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
5.(2021·广东·阳西县教育局教学研究室七年级单元测试)假如你是李文,你的外教Mr. Robin让你用英语向同学们介绍一种中国特有的动物。以下是你找到的关于金丝猴的资料,请根据下表,写一篇60词左右的演讲稿,向大家介绍一下金丝猴。
名称 金丝猴(Golden Monkey)
颜色 黄色或黑色
分布 中国南部
特点 群居;食树叶(leaves)和水果
现状 人类的捕杀导致它们处于危险之中
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【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone! Today, I want to tell you one of the Chinese animals—the golden monkey. Golden monkeys live in the south of China. Some of them are yellow and some are black. They live in groups. They like eating leaves and fruit. People kill many golden monkeys, so they are in great danger now. We must help save them.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题属于材料写作。写作时要注意表格的信息要写全。
2.例文点评:例文采用一段式,首先总的说明介绍中国的动物,金丝猴;然后介绍金丝猴的颜色,分布,特点;最后介绍金丝猴的现状以及呼吁大家保护金丝猴。用第三人称来进行写作;时态采用一般现在时为主。
3.高分亮点:
短语:want to do sth.,like doing sth.,be in great danger。
句型:and连接的并列句,so连接的并列句。
6.(2021·广东惠州·七年级期末)书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
请根据下面提供的信息,以“ My favourite pet dog”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求:1.不要逐句翻译。
2.文中不出现真实姓名和校名。
3词数60词左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
4.书写规范,整洁。
(1)我有一条宠物狗,他叫John.,是条狐狸犬( fox dog)。他来自欧洲。
(2)他今年3岁了。他长的非常漂亮,有着金黄色的毛发( golden hair)。
(3)他喜欢和我玩耍。我们一起去散步,去购物。当我们在公园里时,他喜欢奔跑,玩耍。我给他拍很多照片。他已经是家庭的一部分( a part of my family),是我朋友,是我兄弟,我很爱他。
(4)我们每个月带他看医生(take him to see the doctor),单年打一次针防止疾病(give him an injection half a half a prevent diseases to man).
My favourite pet dog
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【答案】I have a pet dog named John. It's a fox dog. He comes from Europe. He is three years old this year. He is very beautiful and has golden hair. He likes to play with me. Let's go for a walk and go shopping together. When we are in the park, he likes to run and play. I took many pictures of him. He is already a part of my family, my friend and brother. I love him very much. We take him to see the doctor every month and give him an injection half a preventive diseases to man once a year.
【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。根据下面提供的信息,以“ My favourite pet dog”为题写一篇英语短文。文章时态用一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细,考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并可适当发挥。在写作时,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
【点睛】点睛:首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后,要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等,还要检查语法结构是否合理,有无重复、啰嗦的语言,大小写是否正确,词数是否符合要求等。
三、书信作文
7.(2021·广东·深圳市高级中学七年级期中)如今,很多家庭都养着一只宠物狗。你也想养一只,但你妈妈不同意,说养狗不卫生,而且还会耽误你学习。请根据下面的要点写一封信,尝试说服你妈妈同意让你养狗。
要求 :80 词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数,可适当扩展。
内容提示:
1 . 自拟养狗的两个好处。
2 . 你会每天给狗狗洗澡,保持清洁。
3 . 不会让狗狗影响你学习,保证完成作业后才会和狗狗玩耍。
Dear Mum,
I really want to keep a dog.
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Yours,
Jack
【答案】例文
Dear Mum,
I really want to keep a dog. If I have a dog, I will give my dog a bath and keep it very clean every day. I’m sure I won’t let it do anything harmful to my study. I won’t play with it before I finish my homework. I think I can learn how to take care of others by keeping a dog. I can also exercise more by walking the dog every day. Please allow me to have a dog at home.
Yours
Jack
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。根据要点提示写一封信让妈妈同意养狗。
2.写作指导:本文是一般现在时。本文要介绍养狗的好处,并承诺养狗之后自己会如何做。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
四、讲稿
8.(2021·广东广州·七年级期中)10月4日是世界动物日,假设你是李明,你们学校组织以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛,你参加了比赛竞选,请根据下表信息写一篇演讲稿推荐你自己。
个人品质 勤劳、有耐心、乐于助人
事迹 总是善待动物、经常照顾无家可归的小动物
感悟 动物很有用、是人类的好朋友、保护动物就是保护我们自己
当选后打算 ……(至少两点)
要求:
1.词数:70词以上。演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
2.所写短文必须包含以上内容,可围绕主题适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
4.要求语言流畅、意思连贯、表达完整、卷面整洁。
5.提示词:volunteer志愿者、homeless无家可归的
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文:
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I’m glad to make a speech here. I am kind to others. I am good with animals. I like playing football and I’m fond of playing the guitar. I once organized a show to raise money for the project Save China’s Tigers. And I keep some homeless little animals.
Animals are our friends. We should love each other. I am always thinking that protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will encourage more people to love animals like me. I will try my best to make the world a better place for both humans and animals!
Thank you for listening!
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据表格提示以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”为主题写一篇演讲稿,推荐自己成为保护动物的志愿者。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态结合一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。要在演讲稿中介绍自己的个人品质、事迹、感悟及当选志愿者后的打算。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。