06：写作-2023年中考英语专题突破（湖南常德）（含答案）

06：写作-2023年中考英语专题突破（含答案解析）（湖南常德）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．助人为乐是中华民族的传统美德。作为一名中学生，我们应该在学习和生活中学会帮助别人。假如你校英语俱乐部将就这一话题举办一次题为“Helping Others”的英语演讲比赛，请你根据第二节（回答问题）短文内容并结合自身的经历写一篇演讲稿。
要求: 1．80词以上，书写规范，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2．文中不得出现校名和人名等真实信息。
Helping Others
Hello, everyone! I’d like to share with you my ideas about this topic.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
2．在三年的初中生活中，我们不断地成长、收获、取得进步，变得更加优秀。请以“__________ make me better”为题，谈谈你是如何变优秀的。
1. 要点：
(1)请补全标题，如Books, Friends, My English teacher, Good habits, 等等。
(2)是什么让你变得更优秀；
(3)你将如何变得更加优秀。
2. 要求：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
(2)词数80左右。
_____________ make me better
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二、材料作文
3．成长是生命的主旋律。在你的生命里一定出现过一个对你帮助很大、影响很深的人。这个人可能是你的父母、你的老师或你的朋友……请用英语写出你和他（她）的故事以及你的感悟。（题目自拟）
内容包括：1.Who helped/influenced you a lot
2.What did she/he do
3.How have you changed
4....
要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名。
2.语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
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4．根据以下要点，以“How to Keep Ourselves Safe”为题写一篇80词以上的英文短文。
要点：
1. 你觉得安全问题重要吗？
2. 你周边安全形势如何？
3. 关于如何保护自身安全，你有些什么想法？
注意：不得出现人名、校名等真实信息。
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5．请你结合第二节（回答问题）材料和以下提示内容写一篇英语短文：
1.你最好的朋友是谁？他（她）有什么喜好？
2.他（她）算得上一位真朋友吗？为什么？
3.你们之间发生过的让你最难忘的一件事是什么（请描述事情的经过和你的感受）？
要求：1.80词以上，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.文中不得出现校名和人名等真实信息。
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6．时光荏苒，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年多的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？请结合以下要点，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示：1.介绍你在上初中后哪些方面发生了变化，如：外貌、性格、学习、爱好等方面；
2.你打算如何度过余下的初中时光。
要求：1.包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
2.80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得透露自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been more than two years since I went to the middle school.
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7．Lingling: Where are you going on holiday, Tony
Tony: To Los Angeles.
Betty: Oh, really You’ll love it. I went there two years ago and enjoyed it a lot.
Tony: How long did it take to get there Did you fly
Betty: Yes, we did, and that took about nine hours. Then our friends met us and drove us to their home.
Lingling: Who was with you
Betty: My parents.
Tony: So what did you do
Betty: Well, first we went to Disneyland, and guess what I met Snow White and Mickey Mouse! I was so excited!
Tony: Wow! How long did you stay there
Betty: We stayed there for two days. And then we went to Hollywood.
Lingling: Did you see any movie stars
Betty: No, but we swam in the Pacific Ocean at Santa Monica. It was great!
Lingling: Where are you going on holiday this year, Betty
Betty: Hong Kong.
假设你是材料中的Betty，请写一篇80词以上的英文短文，介绍自己两年前的度假经历，以便在英语课上分享。
注意: 1.要点包括度假的时间、地点、人物、经历和感受等；2.不得出现自己的姓名和校名等真实信息；3.请按照以下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
三、日记
8．假设你是第二节（回答问题）材料中的Alan, 请写一篇80词以上的英文日记，描述对话中所发生的事情。
注意：
1. 要点包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等；
2. 不得出现自己的姓名和校名等真实信息；
3. 请按以下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
June 20th, 2021
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9．假如你是第二节（回答问题）材料中的Paul，请写一篇80词以上的英文日记，描述一下你今天下班回家的路上遇到你多年未见的cousin——Tom的事情。说说自己没有认出Tom的原因，描述Tom过去和现在的变化，以及Tom的现在的情况。
November 4, 2022 Friday Sunny
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参考答案：
1．例文：
Helping Others
Hello, everyone! I’d like to share with you my ideas about this topic. Everyone needs help and I’ve learned a lot from it.
I was not good at math at the beginning. A few months ago, my teacher asked me to help my classmate Mike with his math at school. Before helping him I felt a little nervous, so I went over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To my surprise, I could even work out some difficult problems that I couldn’t understand before.
With my help, Mike made great progress experience, not only did I help him out of his trouble, but also I improve my own math a lot. I have realized that it is good for everyone to help others. That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，讲述自己帮助他人的亲身经历。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体讲述我帮助他人的经历；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
2．例文
Good habits make me better
Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways. I think good habits improve my life and make me better.
First, I have good study habits. I listen to the teacher carefully in class. I always finish my homework on time. I’m interested in reading habits. What’s more, I love to eat fruit and vegetables because they are good for my health. I have eggs and milk every morning. I think it’s important to keep a balanced diet.
Because of these habits, I feel stronger and more energetic. I am living a better life. I believe good habits make me better. I will continue to keep these good habits and make me better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是根据所给的材料，以“__________ make me better”为题，谈谈自己是如何变优秀的。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先要补全标题；其次介绍是什么让自己变得更优秀；接着介绍自己将如何变得更加优秀。
第三步：书写结语。表示“我会继续保持这些好习惯，让自己变得更好。”
[亮点词汇]
①on time准时
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③be good for有益于
④What’s more更重要的是
⑤because of 因为
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I love to eat fruit and vegetables because they are good for my health.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think it’s important to keep a balanced diet.（省略了that引导的宾语从句）
③Because of these habits, I feel stronger and more energetic.（stronger and more energetic是形容词的比较级）
3．例文：
My English teacher
The person who helped me a lot is my English teacher. She’s very kind and hardworking. She’s so helpful that she’s ready to help almost every student in my class. Two years ago, I used to be afraid to speak English. But she tried her best to help me to solve my problem. Thanks to her help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak in public and don’t feel nervous. She teaches me not only to learn but also to be a good person.
I’ll remember her forever.
【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们介绍一个自己生命里出现过的对你帮助很大、影响很深的人，如父母、老师、朋友等。短文中应包括以下内容：首先要点明这个人是谁；然后具体叙述他或她为你做了什么，如何帮助了你或他或她做的事对你有怎样的影响；你有了怎样的改变等等。
写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文的时态应视表达需要进行选择，叙述这个人的情况时应用一般现在时；他或她为你做的事应用一般过去时态。人称应该是第一人称和第三人称。写作时应注意根据时态变化谓语动词的正确形式，句式结构应完整、规范，符合英语表达习惯。使用正确的词汇、短语和句型，同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。
4．例文：
How to Keep Ourselves Safe
Safety is important to us all. As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. There are many dangers around us. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据所给要点提示，以“How to Keep Ourselves Safe”为题写一篇80词以上的英文短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第一人称写作，时态主要为一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
5．例文：
My best friend
My English teacher, Ms. Li, is a middle-aged lady. She is my best friend. She likes sports. She is my best friend because she helps me when I need it.
Last week, I fell ill and was in a very low mood. One class I sat with my head against my desk and felt sleepy. Then, Ms. Li walked up to me and patted me on the back, asking me softly whether I was well and advising me to have a good rest. At her words, I felt a stream of warmth flowing into my heart and tears filled my eyes.
Sometimes a few words can bring others strength and confidence. It’s never too late for us to do this.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇英语短文，要求根据提示内容介绍你最好的朋友的基本信息，并说明你们是真朋友的理由和你们之间难忘的事情等，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：介绍人物基本信息时，以一般现在时为主，例举你们之间难忘的事情时，以一般过去时为主，介绍是真朋友的理由时，应描写细致、合情合理；短文需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
6．例文：
Some Changes in My Life
How time flies! It has been more than two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot. I used to have a cold, but now I am much healthier than before. I used to have a lot of time to play, but now I have to study all day. I used to spend a lot of time playing sports, but now I stay at home and do homework. I used to be lazy, but now I study harder than before. I used to be shy, but now I am more confident. I used to get up on Sunday, but now I get up early. I used to read a lot of cartoon books. but now I have to read textbooks.
In short, great changes have taken place in my life. I feel very happy. I believe I will become better and better in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。写作时要包含以下要点：上初中后发生了哪些变化；打算如何度过余下的初中时光。词数在80左右，不包含标题和已给出的开头。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时与一般过去时相结合。写作时需突出现在与之前的变化，保证条理清晰，结构分明，逻辑连贯。
7．例文
Hello, everyone!
I went to Los Angeles two years ago. I’d like to share the experience with you. I went to Los Angeles with my parents by plane. It took us about 9 hours to get there. When we got to the airport, our friends met us and drove us to their home. We went to Disneyland and we met Snow White and Mickey Mouse! I was so excited! We stayed there for two days. And then we went to Hollywood. I didn’t see any movie stars, but I swam in the Pacific Ocean at Santa Monica. It was great!
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据对话内容，介绍自己两年前的度假经历，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍去洛杉矶旅游的经历；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
8．例文：
June 20th, 2021
On my way to school this morning, I saw a traffic accident. A boy was riding a bicycle, listening to music. At a crossing road, the traffic lights were about to turn red when a car appeared. Because the driver was on the phone, he didn’t notice the traffic lights and didn’t stop on time. The boy who was riding a bike fell off his bike and hurt his knee. What a terrible accident!
I think we must be careful on our way to school, don’t catch up, don’t listen to music, especially when crossing the road.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据第二节材料中的Alan的叙述，描写目睹的事情情况，包括时间、地点、人物、事情的经过和启示等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣材料内容，用第一人称和第三人称相结合来写作，时态以过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。
9．例文：
November 4, 2022 Friday Sunny
Today on my way home, I met my cousin Tom. I haven’t seen him for years. When he called me, I didn’t recognized him. He changed so much!
He used to be fat and short, but now he is tall and thin. He said that he used to have sweet food and ate too much, so he was fat. He didn’t wear glasses, but now he wears glasses. After he graduated from Cambridge University, he became a teacher and now he is working in Fudan University. How great he is!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明今天遇见了表弟Tom，但是没有认出他，他变化很大。
第二步，回忆Tom从前的外貌长相和现在的外貌情况。
第三步，介绍Tom现在的工作情况。
[亮点词汇]
①one one’s way home 在某人回家的路上
②graduate from 从……毕业
[高分句型]
How great he is! (how引导的感叹句)