书面表达-2023年中考英语专题突破（湖南永州）（含解析）

书面表达-2023年中考英语专题突破（含答案解析）（湖南永州）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．作为一名中学生，请结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法。请你以“How to Make Our City More Beautiful ”为题，写一首英语短文。
写作要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 短文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息。
参考词汇：environment; pollution; reduce; sort (分类) the rubbish.
How to Make Our City More Beautiful
Nowadays, the environmental problems is a bit serious. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、材料作文
2．“双减(Double reduction)”意在减轻学生过重的学业负担，并非降低学习质量，相反对“自律(self-discipline)”提出了更高要求。假如你是第一中学九年级学生李勇，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文关于“双减”后学习上发生的变化以及这些变化带来的结果。
提示如下： practical work (实践性作业) assign (布置) classroom efficiency (课堂效率)
The changes of learning The results double reduction has brought Your opinion
Less homework What can you do without much homework What practical work do your teachers assign you 1-2points
Higher Classroom efficiency How can you behave better and learn more in class (1-2points)
Fewer after-school classes What other actions can you take to improve yourself (1-2points)
要求：1.内容须包含以上全部要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；2.词数100个左右；
3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名
My name is Li Yong. I’m a student in Grade 9, No. 1 Middle School.
“Double reduction” policy hopes to reduce students’ learning burden by reducing homework and after-school classes. After “double reduction”, great changes have taken place in our study.
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3．为积极响应落实国家“双减”政策，你校英语老师研发了多种形式的英语作业，为学生减负，为教学增效。英语组正在举办题为“My favorite English homework”的征文活动。请根据以下表中信息，写一篇短文投稿。
要求：1) 文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名；2) 语言通顺，表达正确；
3) 至少三个理由：4) 词数：80词左右。
My favorite English homework Reasons Wishes/Suggestions
1. the whole book reading整本书阅读 2. play show 话剧表演 3. king of words单词王 4. collection of translation of public places搜集公共场所的英语译文 5. movie dubbing 电影配音 6. volunteer guide for foreigners 给老外当导游 …… 1. develop/raise reading interest, reading habit… 2. improve reading ability, thinking ability, language ability, writing ability, communication ability... 3. build confidence 树立自信 4. enlarge vocabulary 扩大词汇 5. learn by practice 6. enrich knowledge and experience 7. know about western culture 8. tell Chinese good stories 9. spread Chinese traditional and excellent culture ......
参考词汇：
“双减”政策“Double Reduction” policy；减轻学生负担release students’ burden；提升教学效果improve teaching quality
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4．为配合扫黑除恶专项整治工作，杜绝校园欺凌，打造和谐安定校园，作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。
提示：1.尊敬老师（respect the teachers），努力学习。
2.与同学融洽相处（get on well with），互相帮助。
3.不要与他人吵架，不偷盗他人物品。
4.遵守学校的规章制度（follow the school rules），不下河洗澡，不携带管制刀具（restricted knives）。
5.不要私自会见陌生人，遇险应报警。
要求：1.语句通顺，语意连贯。
2.运用以上提示词，内容可适当发挥。
3.作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
It’s important for us students to have a harmonious and stable campus. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、书信作文
5．为了促进中小学生健康成长，近日教育部印发了 《中小学生减负措施》（减负三十条）。假如你是李华，请你站在中学生的立场，从下面几个方面向你的英国笔友Mike 简单介绍其中的内容，并谈谈你自己的看法。
1.作业方面：初中家庭作业不超过 90分钟；
2.电子产品方面：严禁学生将手机带入课堂；
3.习惯方面：上课专心听讲，课后主动复习；
4.你的看法。
注意：
1.词数 80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
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6．2022年2月冬奥会即将在北京举行，为了确保冬奥会成功，组委会发起志愿者招募活动。假如你是李华，请你根据如下表格内容给组委会写一封申请信。
年 龄 18
英语水平 口语好，能流利地与外国人交流
爱 好 喜欢体育
其 他 熟悉北京，乐于助人，能很好地服务运动员
注意：1. 词数80词左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）2. 必须包括所有内容和要点，但可适当发挥。
参考词汇： Beijing Winter Olympic Games 北京冬奥会 spoken English 英语口语
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
四、讲稿
7．在双减 (“Double reduction” policy) 政策下，学生的生活发生了很大的变化。假如你是李华，请根据下面的内容写一篇发言稿，介绍在减负的环境下你的学习生活的变化情况及如何成为一个优秀的学习者。
In the past Now
1.作业多。 2.周末去上辅导班。 …… 1.作业变少了。 2.课外活动丰富多彩。 ……
注意：（1）文中请勿使用真实人名，校名和地名。
（2）词数：不低于80词，文章的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）语句通顺，意思连贯，表达正确，可适当发挥。
Hello, my name is Li Hua. The policy calls for reducing homework and after-school classes, so my life has changed a lot.
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Thanks for your listening!
8．国庆档电影《长津湖》让无数观众泪洒影院。影片展现了志愿军战士钢铁般的意志。他们在严酷的环境中，克服重重困难，不畏牺牲，奋勇杀敌。他们是我们的榜样，是我们心中的英雄。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办“My hero”的演讲比赛，请你写一篇演讲稿。
要点：1. Which hero do you want to talk about
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What do you want to say to him/her
参考词汇：encourage鼓励；set a good example树立好榜样；challenge挑战
要求：1. 条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、语法正确；
2. 词数80词左右，文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
参考答案：
1． How to Make Our City More Beautiful
Nowadays, the environmental problems is a bit serious. The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. As a student, there are a lot of methods we can do to protect the environment and save energy. For example, we can turn off the lights as well as other appliances when we are not using them. We’d better recycle the waste water, paper and other waste so that we can reuse them. We should take public transportation to reduce air pollution. Also, we can plant more trees to have a greener world.
Last week I went to clean the park as a volunteer. We were divided into different groups. Some picked up the rubbish on the ground. Some emptied the rubbish. Some told people the importance of environmental protection. With our help, more people joined our activities. I think it’s our duty to protect the environment. We only have one earth to live on, so we should start from the things around us, and let our earth become a beautiful home.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“How to Make Our City More Beautiful ”为题，结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法，写一篇英文短文。注意在写作时应承接短文开头。
2.写作指导：本文应以第一人称为主；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。注意按照写作要求，并结合自己平时保护环境的亲身经历来写作。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。
2．例文：
My name is Li Yong. I’m a student in Grade 9, No. 1 Middle School.
“Double reduction” policy hopes to reduce students’ learning burden by reducing homework and after-school classes. After “double reduction”, great changes have taken place in our study.
First of all, there has been a marked reduction in our homework. It allows us to have more time for extracurricular activities, such as dancing, playing balls and so on. Next, teachers are taking their teaching more seriously. We have the opportunity to do experiments and can learn from real life. Last but not the least, there are fewer exams because of “double reduction”. Exams enable us to understand our progress and shortcomings and make us work harder. However, it is also a good thing that we have to be more “disciplined” without exams.
I believe we can study happily and have fun at school because of the “double reduction” policy.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍关于“双减”后学习上发生的变化以及这些变化带来的结果。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍双减”后，更少的作业，更高的课堂效率和更少的课外辅导课这些变化以及带来的后果，并表达我的观点；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。
3．例文
My favorite English homework
In response to the implementation of “Double Reduction” policy, our English teacher has developed various forms of English homework to release students’ burden and improve teaching quality. Among them, I like volunteer guide for foreigners best. It not only helped me improve my spoken English, but also provides a chance for me to spread Chinese traditional and excellent culture to foreigners. What’s more, I become more confident than before.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us like singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies develops.
I hope we will have more creative English homework in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My favorite English homework”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍“双减”政策下的新型英语作业，自己最喜欢哪项以及原因；第二段表明自己对英语作业的形式的建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
4．例文：
It’s important for us students to have a harmonious and stable campus. It’s good for our life and study. As students, we should do something to create a harmonious and stable campus.
Firstly, we should respect the teachers and study hard. Secondly, we should get on well with our classmates, and we should help each other. Thirdly, we should not fight with others or steal others’ things. What’s more, we must follow the school rules. We can’t swim in the rivers or take restricted knives to school. Lastly, we should not meet the strangers alone. And we should call the police when we are in danger.
It’s our duty to keep our campus harmonious and stable. Let’s start from today.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给提示，写一篇作文关于解决校园欺凌、打造和谐安定校园。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称行文。写作时涵盖要点，不要遗漏，内容可适当发挥，适当使用连词使文章更加连贯。最后力求语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
5．Dear Mike,
In order to improve students’ health, our country carried out 30 rules to reduce students’ pressure. Let me tell you something about them.
Firstly, homework for middle school students should take no more 90 minutes so that we will have more time to relax. Secondly, mobile phones shouldn’t be allowed to appear in class, because we are easily absent-mind from the lesson. Thirdly, students are expected to listen carefully and go over lessons in time so that they can master the right method of learning.
In my opinion, these rules are helpful to our students. If we follow them, we can improve our study as well as health.
Do you have such rules Hope for your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，结合所给提示，以书信的形式向Mike介绍减负措施的内容，并谈谈自己的看法。
写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称和第三人称；写作时首先开篇点题；然后根据提示分条介绍减负措施的内容；最后谈谈自己的看法。注意书信作文的格式，上下文衔接，无语法和拼写错误。
6．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a high school student in Beijing. I would like to work as volunteer for 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games. I’m a boy of eighteen years old from a high school. My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What’s more, I have other advantages—I’m especially fond of sports, familiar with Beijing, good at communication and always glad to help other. I’m willing to provide the best service for every athlete in Winter Olympic Games. Therefore, I think I’m suitable for serving the Games.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.
Looking forward to your early reply. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据表格内容给组委会写一封申请信，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表明写信的目的；
第二步，从自己的个人信息，自身的优势及爱好等方面详细介绍自己；
第三步，书写结语，表达“很希望能够成为其中的一员”。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb和某人交流
②be familiar with对……熟悉
③would like to do sth想要做某事
[高分句型]
①My spoken English is good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently.（and连接的并列句）
②I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．例文
Hello, my name is Li Hua. The policy calls for reducing homework and after-school classes, so my life has changed a lot.
I used to have so much homework. I always did my homework till midnight and had no time for my hobbies. At the same time, I had many after-school classes on weekends. So I felt very tired all the time.
Thanks to the policy, my homework is clearly less than before, and I have enough time to do things I like. On weekends, I can play sports with my friends. I can also spend more time taking part in clubs and activities, such as dancing and reading. What’s more, I have enough sleep now. Life is much easier and happier than before.
Although I have more spare time now, I should finish my homework on time. Listening to the teacher carefully in class becomes more important. I think if I can use my free time wisely, I can have a better life.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。以李华的名义写一篇发言稿，围绕“‘双减’政策带来的变化”这一主题展开叙述。
写作指导：本文主要以第一人称行文；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；文章可分为五段式：第一段和第五段文章已给；第二段引出“双减”政策及其影响。第三段根据要求展开，分述政策实施前后状况的对比。第四段总结全文，阐述政策之下该如何做一个明智的学习者。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，正确运用两种时态。
8．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua.
Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart. He spent nearly 60 years doing research on better rice in order to make people in the world have enough food. And he was successful! He was honored as Father of Hybrid Rice. I think he was a great man. He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. I will never forget him.
I want to tell him that I won’t waste any food. Also, I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. When I grow up, I’ll work hard for our country like him.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”，“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：要求以“My hero”为主题，结合提示问题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍自己心目中的英雄是谁，为什么钦佩他以及想对他说什么；
第三步，书写结语。表达“感谢大家的聆听”。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②be honored as被誉为
[高分句型]
①He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
②When I grow up, I’ll word hard for our country like him.（when引导的时间状语从句）