(共20张PPT)
Unit 4 The universal language
Extended reading
薛 军 南通市通州区金沙中学
Summary writing of
Li Bai and his works
Step 1: Read for the topic
Step 2: Read for the structure
Step 3: Clarify the logical relationship
Step 4: Rewrite and polish up the language
How to write a summary
Topic: The romantic style of Li Bai’s poetry
Step 1 Read for the topic
Step 2 Read for the structure
CP
(Para. 1)
Part 1
(Paras. 2-4)
causes
Part 2
(Para. 5)
characteristics
Part 3
(Para. 6)
influence
Step 2 Read for the structure
Part 1
(Paras. 2-4)
causes
Para. 2
Para. 3
Para. 4
Li Bai's love of reading and travelling from an early age contributed to his romantic style.
Reading→ familiarized ...
Driven by a burning desire for adventure and travel, Li Bai left home and started to travel around in his early twenties.
Travelling → inspired …
Li Bai’s romantic style was also deeply rooted in the social and historical context in which he lived.
Atmosphere → allowed …
Step 3 Clarify the logical relationship
Paras. 2-4
Li Bai’s love for reading and travelling from an early age contributed to his romantic style, which was also rooted in the social and historical context in which he lived.
Summary:
Li Bai’s love of reading and travelling from an early age familiarized him with classical Chinese culture, and inspired him to write his poems. The social and historical context also accounted for his style.
Step 3 Clarify the logical relationship
Given his personal experiences and the historical background, it is only natural to see that majority of Li Bai's poems are characterized by the romantic style. Even the most uninformed reader would not fail to be impressed by the poet's rich imagination. The moon and stars in the sky, the natural landscape and the figures in legends all become a vehicle for his imagination. Equally impressive is Li Bai's free expression of strong feelings, which breathes vitality into the lifeless objects he describes, and which distinguishes from other landscape poets. These features are inseparable from Li Bai's wide use of exaggeration, metaphor and other artistic techniques. The poem below, written in his fifties, is representative of his romantic style.
Para. 5
Even the most uninformed reader would not fail to be impressed by the poet's rich imagination. The moon and stars in the sky, the natural landscape and the figures in legends all become a vehicle for his imagination.
Step 3 Clarify the logical relationship
Topic sentence + an example
Equally impressive is Li Bai's free expression of strong feelings, which breathes vitality into the lifeless objects he describes, and which distinguishes from other landscape poets.
Step 3 Clarify the logical relationship
Opinion + further explanation
Step 3 Clarify the logical relationship
Leave out minor information:
● the examples
● the repeated information
● the too general information
● the further explanations
Step 3 Clarify the logical relationship
Summary
Readers are impressed by Li’s rich imagination, free expressions of strong feelings. These features are inseparable from his wide use of exaggeration, metaphor and other artistic techniques.
Para. 5
Step 3 Clarify the logical relationship
Para. 6
With his extraordinary imagination, free expression of strong feelings and mastery of language, Li Bai is widely recognized as the greatest romantic poet after Qu Yuan. Generations of poets, both in China and abroad, owe a debt to his inspirational poems. One such poet is Ezra Pound, a 20th-century American poet. He was fascinated by Li Bai's poems and translated some of them in his 1915 poetry collection entitled Cathay. Today Li Bai's poetry continues to be enjoyed by countless readers around the world.
Step 3 Clarify the logical relationship
poems
readers
Summary:
Li Bai is widely recognized as the greatest romantic poet. And his poetry inspired generations of poets both in China and abroad, and continues to be enjoyed by countless readers around the world.
Para. 6
inspiring
adorable
influence
Step 4 Rewrite and polish up language
Li Bai’s love of reading and travelling contributed to his romantic style. The social and historical context in which he lived also allowed him the liberty to develop a free and unconstrained personality, which had a huge impact on his poems. Readers are impressed by Li’s rich imagination, free expressions of strong feelings. These features are inseparable from his wide use of exaggeration, metaphor and other artistic techniques. Li Bai is widely recognized as the greatest romantic poet. And his poetry inspired generations of poets both in China and abroad, and continues to be enjoyed by countless readers around the world.
Main point 1
Step 4 Rewrite and polish up language
Li Bai’s love of reading and travelling contributed to his romantic style. The social and historical context in which he lived also allowed him the liberty to develop a free and unconstrained personality, which had a huge impact on his poems.
Li Bai wrote many poems inspired by what he read and what he saw when he was travelling, which helped him gain a reputation as a romantic poet. Growing up during the most glorious period of the Tang Dynasty also impacted his poems greatly.
●Use our own words
Main point 2
Step 4 Rewrite and polish up language
Readers are impressed by Li’s rich imagination, free expressions of strong feelings. These features are inseparable from his wide use of exaggeration, metaphor and other artistic techniques.
Most of his poetry is of the romantic style, featuring rich imagination, free expression of strong feelings and wide use of artistic techniques like exaggeration and metaphor.
●Combine sentences
Main point 3
Step 4 Rewrite and polish up language
Li Bai is widely recognized as the greatest romantic poet. And his poetry inspired generations of poets both in China and abroad, and continues to be enjoyed by countless readers around the world.
Not only did Li’s poetry influence generations of poets both at home and abroad but it also continues to be appreciated by readers worldwide.
●Change sentence patterns
●Use synonyms
Li Bai wrote many poems inspired by what he read and what he saw when he was travelling, which helped him gain a reputation as a romantic poet. Growing up during the most glorious period of the Tang Dynasty also impacted Li Bai's poems greatly. Most of his poetry is of the romantic style, featuring rich imagination, free expression of strong feelings and wide use of artistic techniques like exaggeration and metaphor.Not only did Li’s poetry influence generations of poets both at home and abroad but it also continues to be appreciated by readers worldwide.
Step 4 Rewrite and polish up language
Write a summary
content
language
Find out major information
· topic sentences
· conclusive sentences
Delete minor information
· examples
· repeated information
· too general information
· further explanations
Use different sentence patterns
· clauses
· non-finite verbs
Use synonyms
Combine sentences