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Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came
Section B 3a-SC
e
Do you remember
what you were doing at this time yesterday
I was looking through something
on my smartphone.
Free Talk
Do you remember what happened in the past
Pre-writing
an important exam
a piano competition
a school trip
an earthquake
a big fire
Why do you remember it well
Let's make some notes and write about it later.
Make notes about an event you remember well.
3a
What
was the event
When
did it happen
Where
did it happen
What
were you doing
What
were your friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
How
___ January 23, 2020, Wuhan was locked down
________ ___ COVID-19.
Event
On
because of
People’s
activities
I was_____________
_________________ when I heared the news on TV.
preparing for
the Lunar New Year
People’s
feeling
People were___________________ but also ________________. Chinese people had an unforgettable Lunar New Year.
scared and nervous
brave and united
生成新知
3a
What was the event
When did it happen
Where did it happen
What were you doing
What were your friends doing
Why was it important
Why do you remember this event
Make notes about an event you remember well.
3b
Write a short article about the important
event in 3a. Try to write three paragraphs.
Writing
Write a passage about an important event in your life.
Brainstorm
What were you doing
Who was with you
Where and when did it happen
What was the event
Why was it unforgettable
3a
An event
What were you and your friends doing
Where did it happen
Why was it important
How did it make you feel
What happened
When did it happen
First, write about the event (when and where it happened).
Next, write about what you and some of your friends were doing when this event happened.
Then, write about why this event was important.
1. Try to write three paragraphs.
Writing guide
写关于……
A
审题
(三审)
1. 体裁:本文描述过去发生的事情,故应记叙文。
2. 人称:为第一人称和第三人称。
3. 时态:应以一般过去时和过去进行时为主,
一般现在时为辅。
补充要点:记叙文的六要素(when, where, who,
why, what, how.
B
内容
大纲
写作句式和模式
what,when and where it happened
you and your parents’/
friends’ activities
why it was important
I remember well /I will never
forget was ______.It happened
in/ on________at\in ________.
事件
时间
地点
When I heard the news of this event /When this event happened, I was _____________ My friends were _____________.\I was doing ______________while my friends were doing _________________.
事件发生时我在的地方
我朋友在的地方
事件发生时我在做的事
事件发生时朋友在做的事
This event is very important to me because ____.\I remember this event well because______\I really learned a lesson from (吸取教训)this event because _________.
原因
原因
原因
第一段:
Introduction
(引入)
第二段:
details of the event
(事件的详细过程)
第三段:
reasons (原因)
C
重点
句式
An important event that I remember well /I will never forget was __________.It happened in/ on ______________at\in ____________.
When I heard the news of this event /When this event happened, I was _____________ My friends were __________________.\I was doing ______________while my friends were doing __________.
This event is very important to me because ____.\I remember this event well because___\
I really learned a lesson from (吸取教训)this event because _____________.
Event
People’s
activities
People’s
feeling
Try to write an outline of your article.
An unforgettable thing that I remember well was ___________.
It happened in/ on_____ at/in _____.
When I was_______________.
My friends were______________.
This event is very unforgettable to me because _____________.
/I remember this event well because ______________________________.
An
Unforgettable
Thing
Yesterday was a pretty lucky day for me. Something happened that I will never forget. Let me tell you this story.
At first, it was sunny all day yesterday. However, at 6:00 p.m., when I walked out of school, the weather suddenly changed. There were thick(厚重的) dark clouds in the sky and the wind was blowing(吹). Therefore(因此), I began to feel worried because I didn’t bring an umbrella or raincoat with me when I left home in the morning. Then, it soon started to rain heavily. I had no choice but(别无选择,只能) run to home in the shower(阵雨). When I was making my way to home, I heard someone calling me from behind. I turned around(转身) and saw it was Li Ping. Fortunately(幸运地), he had an umbrella and asked me to share it with him. The end of the story is he walked all the way with me until I got home. How thankful I was for his kindness!
As the saying goes, “helping others is a virtue.” I appreciate(感激) Li Ping’s help and I decide to help others more in the future, so that our society will become better and better. In addition(另外), it is also necessary to learn to plan ahead(提前).
根据补充(绿色/红色部分)
修改作文
1. _____ I was walking home from school, I saw a strange light in the sky. But _____ I pointed it out to my friend, it went away.
2. _____ I told my older brother about the strange light in the sky, he just laughed and didn’t believe me.
3. _____ my brother was laughing, the television news reported that other people had seen the light as well.
1. Fill in the blanks with when or while.
While
when
When
While
2. Fill in the blanks with the correct forms of the words in brackets.
When I _____ (be) in the sixth grade, I ______ (join) a piano competition. I ________ (practice) for four hours every day and my piano teacher ______ (come) three times a week to ______ (help) me. Then the big day finally _______ (arrive). I _____ (be) so nervous when they _____ (call) my name. I _____ (go) up and _______ (start) to play.
was
joined
practiced
came
help
arrived
was
called
went
started
While I __________ (play), everyone ______ (sit) still and listened. I played the song without any mistakes. Then I _______ (wait) for them to call out the winner. When I _______ (hear) my name, my heart __________ (beat) so quickly I thought I would stop breathing. I couldn’t believe it. I ______ (win)! It ______ (be) the happiest day of my life!
was playing
sat
waited
heard
was beating
won
was