07：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（湖北咸宁市）（含解析）

0:7：【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（湖北咸宁市）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、通知
1．假设下周你们班级将开展为期一天的研学（journey）活动，请根据下面的提示用英语写一则通知。
大地农场之旅
活动时间 一天
活动地点 大地农场
活动内容 1. 帮助清理农场垃圾，打扫农场卫生
2. 学习种菜，植树
3. 野炊，采摘水果（苹果、橘子等）
自拟其它活动
安全事项 不要单独活动，不要到河里游泳
要求：1. 字迹工整，书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；3. 80词左右，开头结尾已经给出，不计入总数。
参考词汇：rubbish (垃圾) clear away (请清理)
Hello, everyone,May I have your attention, please
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That’s all. Thank you!
二、讲稿
2．众志成城抗疫情，齐心向阳迎春天。随着新冠肺炎疫情的有效控制，各校已经陆续复学，久别的师生回到了熟悉的校园。复学后，王老师在班上将开展一个主题为“Share your life at home during the COVID-19”的演讲活动，让同学们分享疫情期间居家生活的经历和感受。假如你是李华，请从以下四个方面写一份演讲稿。
1 Study have online classes (上网课), do homework …
2 Housework clean the rooms, cook the dishes …
3 Leisure activities do sports, watch TV …
4 Feeling warm, happy …
写作要求：
1. 文章中勿出现真实的姓名和校名。
2. 文章须包含所提供的主要信息，可适当发挥；行文连贯，条理清晰。
3. 词数80~100个，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总字数。Hello, everyone! Long time no see. It's my honor to share my life at home during the COVID-19 with you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、材料作文
3．请根据下表提示介绍Tom过去和现在的情况，并就此事谈谈你的看法及对他的建议。80词左右。
In the past 喜欢看书，功课好，花很多时间学习和锻炼。
Now 因沉溺于玩电脑游戏和看电视导致对学习没兴趣，上课时不专心听课。
Your opinion 玩电脑游戏可以使人放松，但……
Your advice 1-2点
提示词：lose himself in; no interest in; relaxed; after-school activities
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4．相信大家对拼车(Carpooling)都不陌生吧？近年来，拼车成为了一种比较流行的交通方式，但这种方式有利也有弊。请以”Carpooling”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈自己的观点吧！开头已给出，但不计入总字数。
内容提示：
1.什么是拼车(together, share...)
2.相比于出租车的昂贵，公交车的拥挤，拼车舒适又便宜；还可以……。(compare, taxis, reduce, park , safety...)
注意：短文必须包括所有提示内容，但可以适当发挥。
Carpooling
In recent years, carpooling has become more popular. It means____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．“民以食为天”，饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say NO to Junk Food”为题，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。
写作要点：
1、垃圾食品尽管美味，但对健康无益，而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾；
2、远离垃圾食品，还应该选择正确的生活方式，如：①三餐要有规律，少吃零食、快餐；②多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物，以提供身体必需营养；③多参加户外活动……
写作要求：
1、词数：80左右，开头与结尾已写出，不计入总词数；
2、内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥；
3、参考词汇：过多包装 over packaging； 有规律的 regularly； 营养 nutrition
Say NO to Junk Food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.
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In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can make us stronger and stronger.
6．“双减”来了，学校的作业少了、课外辅导班叫停了、学生有了更多可自由支配的时间。作为政策的受益者，你的学习与生活发生了哪些明显的变化？你是如何看待这一政策的？请以此为话题写一篇不少于80词的英语作文。
提示词： assignment(s)作业 carry out执行 after-class service activities 课后服务活动 offer 提供 join ... club 加入……俱乐部 off-campus tutoring classes 校外辅导课
要求：
1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
2.短文必须包括所有要点，并请适当发挥；
3.80词左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
你的学习、生活发生了什么变化(作业减少、校内完成、不用参加课外辅导班、更多的睡眠和锻炼……)
学校(提供多种课后服务活动)
双减后你能做的事情……
你的感受……

Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, our school and our students’ lives have changed greatly.
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7．为响应我市“创建国家文明城市”的号召，6月3日，5000多名市民以绿色出行的方式参与了“生态咸宁——环淦河健步走”活动。请以“共建文明城市”为主题，根据以下要点提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。
主题 Let’s create the civilized city together
具体做法 方式 益处
1. 骑车、徒步出行 避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染
2. 不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰 让城市变得干净舒适
3. 植树造林 美化城市，保护环境
你的建议 联系自己的生活实际提出几条具体的合理的建议。（至少2条）
写作要求：
1. 词数90个左右。（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
参考词汇：avoid避免，jams堵塞，reduce减少，throw rubbish扔垃圾，spit吐痰，pick up捡，dustbin垃圾箱，As a middle school student of Xianning, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．灿烂星空，谁是真正的英雄？在你心中，英雄是戍边战士吗？是载人航天寻中国梦的宇航员吗？是为国争光的运动之星吗？还是在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人呢？请你根据下面的提示，以The Hero in My Heart为题，写一篇你心中的英雄的作文。
要点提示：
1. 简单介绍你心目中的一个英雄。
2. 阐述他能成为你心目中英雄的原因。
3. 你对英雄的定义是什么？
写作要求：
1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案：
1．Hello, everyone,
May I have you attention, please
Next week our class are going to have a journey to Dadi Farm. The journey will last for one day. On the farm we’re going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we’ll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetables. During the day, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such as apples and pears. We should keep safe, we mustn’t go swimming. In the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone. Wish you a happy journey!
That’s all. Thank you.
【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一则我们班下周大地农场之旅的通知。
【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The journey will last…….，we’re going to……，We should……，Nobody is allowed to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我们下周要去大地农场旅行，接下来介绍活动时间、活动地点、活动内容和安全事项，最后祝大家旅途愉快。此处do some cleaning, clear away, such as, go swimming, be allowed to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
2．One possible version:
Hello, everyone! Long time no see. It's my honor to share my life at home during the COVID-19 with you. At home, I had online classes on the Internet. I could see my teacher through the computer or the cellphone. After having the class, I did my homework. Then, I used the cellphone to send the photos of homework to my teachers. In the spare time, I cleaned my rooms, learnt to cook the dishes for my parents, and so on. Besides, I watched TV, listened to music, or did sports at home. At that time, though we couldn't go out because of the COVID-19, we had a happy and warm family life. We should study hard from now on and treasure the present life.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，主要是介绍疫情期间居家生活的经历和感受，从学习、家务活、业余活动和感受四个方面来写，根据写作的内容应用第一人称和一般过去时。
2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮点：
短语：through the computer or the cellphone；use sth. to do；send sth. to sb.；in the spare time；listen to music；from now on。
句型：①时间状语从句 After having the class, I did my homework.
②让步状语从句 At that time, though we couldn't go out because of the COVID-19, we had a happy and warm family life.
3．例文：
Tom has changed a lot in the last few years. He used to like reading books and do well in his lessons. He also spent much time studying and doing exercise at school. But now he is so crazy about computer games and watching TV that he has no interest in his school work and doesn't listen to teachers as carefully as before in class. Perhaps playing computer games can make him relaxed, but if he spends too much time on it, he will have less time to study. He should pay more attention to his school work. Why not take part in some after-school activities when he feels bored Why not spend more free time chatting with his friends
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。在写作时应根据题目要求及表格内容讲述汤姆过去和现在的情况变化，个人的看法及对他的建议。
2.写作指导：本文用第三人称来写作，时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主，讲述汤姆过去和现在的情况变化叙述完整，条理清晰。
4．例文：
Carpooling
In recent years, carpooling has become more popular. It means a group of people traveling together in a car, especially to work or school. They share the cost equally. It has a lot of advantages. But of course, it has its problems, too.
Carpooling is good for the environment. More families have their own cars these days, which means more people are driving. This causes air pollution. Carpooling reduces the number of cars on the road, then reducing pollution.
It’s also good for parking. As we all know, it’s hard to park cars, especially in big cities. But if more people carpool, this won’t be a problem.
And compared to expensive taxis or crowded public transports, carpooling is more comfortable and cheaper.
But carpooling has some disadvantages. For example, some people are worried about safety. However, as long as people are careful enough, the danger can be avoided.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Carpooling”写一篇短文，谈谈自己对拼车的看法， 内容要包括什么是拼车、拼车的优势及存在的问题。在包含所有提示内容的前提下，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，采用一般现在时写作。要包含所有提示要点，并进行适当的拓展。做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
5．例文
Say NO to Junk Food
Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food.
There is no doubt that junk food is delicious and attractive, but it surely does harm to our body. Meanwhile, the over packaging necessarily leads to much more rubbish.
To get away from the junk food, we should focus on how to keep a healthy lifestyle. There are many tips to follow. First, eat regularly, three meals a day on time. Try as few snacks or fast food as possible. Second, take more fruits and vegetables which can provide the nutrition we need .What’s more, do more outdoor activities, as long as you are busy with something interesting, you will more probably get away from junk food.
In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can make us stronger and stronger.
【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“Say NO to Junk Food”为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有的写作要点，可适当发挥。
写作指导：此作文以一般现在时态为主，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用四段落格式，第一段：开门见山，点明自己的观点；第二段：说明垃圾食品的特点；第三段：介绍远离垃圾食品的方法；第四段：总结全文，呼吁大家健康饮食。
6．参考范文：
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, our school and our students’ lives have changed greatly.
Thanks to the policy, we have less homework than before. And we are required to finish it all at school, which means there are no more school assignments at home. The most exciting thing is that I don’t need to take off-campus tutoring classes anymore. So I can have enough sleep every day. And I can spend more time on physical exercise. I think it’s better for our health. Even though parents are worrying about our grades, we students seem to be happy. Our school offers many after-school activities. I joined some sports clubs. I love to play basketball and softball with my friends. I used to do my homework after dinner until 10:00 pm.
Can you imagine that now I get free time to read novels at night I love “double reduction” policy.
【详解】1.题干解读；本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“双减后的生活”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为三段式：第一段开头已给出；第二段介绍双减后学习和生活都发生了什么变化，自己能做的事情；最后一段表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
7．例文
As a middle school student of Xianning, it’s our duty to help build a civilized city. We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn’t throw rubbish and spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we'd better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also save the energy by turning off the lights when leaving the room. In a word, everyone should take an active part in creating the civilized city.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格所给要点以“Let’s create the civilized city together”为主题写一篇短文，谈谈如何共创文明城市。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍从哪些方面来建造文明城市以及这种方法的益处；最后一段联系自己的实际生活提出相应的建议。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
8．例文：
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Li Lianjie is one of the most famous film stars in China. And he is also a hero in my heart.
He played a role in a film when he was a child. Through his hard work he has made a lot of films. He is so brave and careful that he always tries his best to make the action perfect. As a Chinese he promises to make every foreigner know Chinese kung fu culture well. He gave away much money to help the children in poor villages. From Li Lianjie I can learn a lot, such as the resolution to succeed and the thoughts of helping others. I think a person who can be a role model for us is our hero.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示，以“The Hero in My Heart”为题，写一篇作文介绍你新心中的作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作内容包括：英雄是谁；为什么他/她是你心目中的英雄；你对英雄的定义。写作时注意语言的连贯性，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。