外研版初中英语七下Module 12 单元话题满分范文必背

Module 12 Western music.
单元话题满分范文必背
1．假如你是张磊，你的几位朋友喜欢不同的音乐。请写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下。60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone!
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2．根据以下信息写一篇作文。
冼星海，1904年生于澳门(Macao)一个贫苦的家庭，7岁时跟随母亲去了新加坡(Singapore)，开始学习音乐。他先后去过上海、北京学习钢琴和小提琴，1928年他去法国继续学习音乐。1939年创作了著名的歌曲《黄河大合唱》(The Yellow River)。1945年去世。冼星海是一位伟大的音乐家，在今天他的许多音乐作品仍然非常流行。
要求：(1)包括所给内容，可适当发挥；
(2)条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确；
(3)70词左右。(短文开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Xian Xinghai is a great Chinese musician.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．请根据以下提示以“Mozart”为题目介绍音乐家莫扎特的情况。
莫扎特是一位很重要的作曲家。他于1756年出生于奥地利。不到6岁就开始弹奏钢琴，还可以演奏小提琴。他的家人带着他在欧洲许多城市进行巡演。他谱写了几百首动听的乐曲。然而他变的很穷。并且在1791年，年仅35岁的莫扎特去世了。和施特劳斯父子一样，他是一位伟大的欧洲音乐家，许多人仍然认为他的曲子是完美的。
1.词数80左右；
2.文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。
提示词：作曲家composer；奥地利Austria ；施特劳斯Johann Strauss
Mozart
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4．冼星海是中国最伟大的作曲家之一，有“人民音乐家”之称，请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍一下他。
出生于 1905，澳门
去世于 1945，莫斯科
主要经历 13岁时，开始学习音乐 1926，去北京大学学习音乐 1929，去巴黎勤工俭学 1939，创作出《黄河大合唱》，并因此出名
提示词：澳门Macao 莫斯科Moscow 北京大学Beijing University 《黄河大合唱》 The Yellow River Cantata
要求：
（1）短文必须包括所给的提示要点，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）语法正确，书写工整；
（3）词数在70词左右。
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5．你们学校的“周末音乐倶乐部（Weekend Music Club)”正在招聘，急需两名教授钢琴和吉他的音乐老师。倶乐部的联系电话是886-8686。请你根据以上信息，为“周末音乐倶乐部”写一则英文招聘广告。
Teachers Wanted for Weekend Music Club
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6．在今天英语课上的小组讨论活动中，老师要求各组员谈论自己喜爱的音乐类型及原因。请根据以下提示写一段话，汇报你们小组的讨论结果。
Who What music you like Why you like it
Tony piano music great fun
Daming rock music excited
Betty Beijing Opera different
You …
要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．必须包含所给提示词，并做适当拓展；
3．词数60左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Hello, everyone! There are many kinds of music in the world. Good music makes us happy, so most people love it. In our group,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
7．贝多芬的音乐闻名全球，深受人们的喜爱。请根据下面表格所给的提示，写一篇60词左右的人物简介。
贝多芬 德国伟大的作曲家 1770－1827
自幼爱好音乐，钢琴弹得很好；28岁得了耳疾，18年后完全听不见声音了；在此期间他仍继续工作，他的大部分作品都出自这段时间；《第九交响曲》是他一生中最著名的作品之一
参考词汇：
贝多芬Beethoven; 德国的German; 作曲家composer; 聋的deaf; 继续工作go on working; 《第九交响曲》The Ninth Symphony
8．书面表达
李华想要参加学校的音乐明星（music star）评选活动。假如你是李华，请根据以下信息（可适当发挥），写一封推荐信介绍自己。
要求：文章句子通顺，语意连贯，语法规范；字数60左右。开头结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。
Age 15
Favorite musician Lang Lang
Hobby sing and play music well listen to music, have around 200 CDs
Activity (活动) Wednesday: sing in the school music club weekends: play the piano and violin
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua.
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Music is my life. I hope I can be a music star in our school.Yours,
Li Hua
二、书信作文
9．假如你是李明，美国朋友迈克来信询问你的学校生活。请根据以下信息提示，给他写一封回信，说说你最喜欢的科目。
写作要点：
(1)最喜欢的科目（英语和音乐，至少说出两点喜欢英语课和音乐课的原因。）
(2)介绍上课情况及课后活动。
上午：四节课，从8点12点。下午：两节课，从2点到4点。
课后活动：和朋友踢足球、弹吉他和读书。
写作要求：
(1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
(3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
(4)至少60词。
Dear Mike ,
Thanks for your letter.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to get your letter.
Yours,
Li Ming
三、便条
10．假如你是林峰，10 月 10 日是你们学校的艺术节，校方下午 3 点，将在体育馆举行歌唱比赛。你的朋友 Mary 喜欢音乐，你想邀请她参加学校的艺术节。请给你的朋友写一张便条，邀请她参加学校的艺术节。不少于
60 词。
要求:1.应包含思维导图所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。
3.不能出现真实的个人信息。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Lin Feng
四、启事类
11．假如你是Alan，你们学校的音乐俱乐部需要招募工作人员。请你根据表格内容，写一则招募启事。要求60词左右，可适当发挥。
要点 （1）热爱音乐，擅长唱歌或者跳舞； （2）能演奏一种乐器（鼓、吉他、钢琴或小提琴均可）； （3）放学后有时间，需要待在俱乐部两个小时。
联系人 王老师
联系电话 0379-6673825
提示词汇：待stayStudents Wanted for the School Music Club
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12．假如学校让你负责组建一个乐队（School Music Band），你想召集一些有音乐才能的同学参加，请你写一则招聘广告。
提示：1. 参加的同学要在音乐方面有一技之长；
2. 联系电话：632-8550；联系人：Gina。
Musicians Wanted for School Music Band
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参考答案：
1．例文
Hello, everyone! I'm Zhang Lei. I have three friends. They like different music. Peter likes pop music best. He likes Liu Huan because the words are good. Linda likes Chinese classical music. Her favourite musician is Lang Lang because he plays the piano best. Tim likes rock music best. His favourite musician is Cui Jian, a famous Chinese rock singer. He thinks his music can make people excited and happy.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的几位朋友喜欢的音乐。
2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称，时态采用一般现在时。介绍朋友喜欢的音乐及其原因，写作时要注意保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，叙述完整。
2．范文：
Xian Xinghai is a great Chinese musician. He was born in Macao in 1904. At seven his mother took him to Singapore and he began to learn music. To learn to play the piano and the violin he went to Shanghai and Beijing as well. In 1928 he studied in France. He wrote the song The Yellow River in 1939. The song made him very famous all over the world. He died in 1945 when he was only forty. But many people still think his music is perfect.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题属于记叙文写作，要求考生介绍冼星海，在写作时应承接短文开头；利用所给信息叙述冼星海的家庭背景、学习经历、代表作品、去世年份以及对他的评价。
2.写作指导：写作时主要用第三人称以及一般过去时进行书写。人物描述已给出，考生应注意用准确的语言将要点表达出来，并适当发挥。书写时注意条理清晰，层次分明，语言规范。
3．参考范文：
Mozart
Mozart was a very important composer. He was born in Austria in 1756. Before he was six he played not only the piano, but also the violin. His family took him around Europe and he gave concerts in many cities. He wrote hundreds of beautiful pieces of music. But he became very poor and died in 1791 when he was only 35. Like Johann Strauss, father and son, he was a great European musician, and many people still think his music is perfect.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍莫扎特的相关信息。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时。从他的出生地，学习和演奏钢琴的经历，以及人们对他的评价等方面来进行描述。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4．例文
Xian Xinghai is one of the greatest composers in China. He was born in 1905 in Macao, China.
He started learning music at the age of 13. He worked very hard and showed great talent in music. He went to Peking University to study music in 1926. Three years later, he went to Paris and studied there. He brought Western and Chinese music together. He wrote The Yellow River Cantata in 1939. This made him famous all over China. He died in 1945 in Moscow. He was called the People’s Musician.
Today, many people still like listening to his music. We’ll never forget the great composer—Xian Xinghai.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示信息，介绍冼星海的生平。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍冼星海的主要经历；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
5．例文
Teachers Wanted for Weekend Music Club
Hey, friends! Can you play the piano or the guitar Do you have time on the weekend Our club needs your help. We need two music teachers to teach the piano and the guitar. Do you want to join us Please call us at 886-8686.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文要求写一篇英文招聘广告，主要招聘两名教授钢琴和吉他的音乐老师。联系电话是886-886。
2.写作指导：本文叙述了周末音乐俱乐部急需两名教授钢琴和吉他的音乐老师，所写的句子应该是第二人称，所写句子要符合英语广告类语言，短文应用一些短语和句式，如：on the weekend在周末；need sb. to do sth需要某人做某事；want to do sth想要做某事。
6．例文
Hello, everyone! There are many kinds of music in the world. Good music makes us happy, so most people love it. In our group, Tony likes piano music very much. When he was eight, his father asked a music teacher to teach him to play the piano. It’s great fun for him. Daming’s favorite music is rock music. He feels excited when listening to it. But Betty thinks it’s too noisy. She enjoys listening to Beijing Opera. It sounds different because it has fantastic voice. As for me, I’m a fan of western music. The Blue Danube is one of my favorite music. It’s so beautiful. Do you think so
Thanks for listening.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。请根据以下提示写一段话，汇报你们小组的讨论结果。注意写作要点，注意语句通顺，要点齐全。注意时态的使用，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时为主，人称主要为第一、三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：many kinds of；very much；play the piano.；feels excited；As for me；one of my favorite music；Thanks for listening；too noisy等。
句型：1. In our group, Tony likes piano music very much. 2.When he was eight, his father asked a music teacher to teach him to play the piano. 3 Daming’s favorite .music is rock music.4. It sounds different because it has fantastic voice.5. The Blue Danube is one of my favorite music.
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如many kinds of；very much；play the piano.；feels excited；As for me；one of my favorite music；Thanks for listening；too noisy等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．例文
Do you know music by Beethoven He was a great German composer. He was born in 1770 and died in 1827. He was famous all over the world.
When he was young, he liked music and played the piano very well. At the age of 28, there was something wrong with his ears, and 18 years later, he was deaf. During the time, he still went on working. He wrote most of his works. The Ninth Symphony was one of his most famous works in his life.
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍贝多芬的人生经历。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为第三人称单数。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替应用，写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
2. 例文点评：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了贝多芬是德国伟大的作曲家，接下来介绍他生平经历，最后指出《第九交响曲》是他一生中最著名的作品之一。文章以第三人称叙述，使文章更加客观公正，逻辑清晰。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：be born in；at the age of；go on doing sth。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；one of the+最高级+名词复数。
8．Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I am 15 years old. I like music very much because it’s really relaxing and exciting. My favorite musician is Lang Lang. I like singing and playing music. And I can do them well. I also like listening to CDs. I have around 200 CDs. On Wednesday I often sing in the school music club. On weekends I usually play the piano and violin at home.
Music is my life. I hope I can be a music star in our school.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，向学校音乐明星评选中心推荐你自己。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如very much, favorite, like doing, also, around, on weekends以及play the piano等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
9．Dear Mike,
Thanks for your letter. Here I will tell you something about my school life.
My favorite subjects are English and Music. I think English is very useful for me. If I can learn English well, I will talk with foreigners freely. And my English teacher is really humorous. I like him. Music can make me feel relaxed. What’s more, I’m good at singing songs. During the weekdays, I have four lessons from 8:00 to 12:00 in the morning, and two lessons from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon. After class, I often play football with my friends. It’s good for my health. And I also play the guitar and read books.
This is my school life. I think it’s exciting. How about you
Hope to get your letter.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应承接开头，分别描写对方想知道的信息。
2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时，讲述自己的学校生活，分两个方面来写，一是最喜欢的科目及原因，二是上课情况及课后活动。要求叙述完整，要点齐全，条理清晰。
10．Dear Mary,
There will be an art festival at our school next week. It's on December 10th. There is a Singing Contest in our school gym at 3 p.m. I know you are a music lover, would you like to come and enjoy it I have a singing show on that day. You can have a good time.
Hope you can come, see you!
Yours,
Lin Feng
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇便条，开头和结尾已给出。要求根据所给内容提示来写一篇邀请朋友参加学校学校歌唱比赛的便条，要写明其目的及可以实施的计划，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主。描述内容时，内容应描写细致；要根据材料所给内容叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
11．参考范文：
Student Wanted for the School Music Club
Our school music club needs your help. Do you love music Are you good at singing or dancing Can you play the drums, the guitar, the piano or the violin Do you have time after school We need you to stay in the club for two hours. It is interesting. Do you want to join the club Please call Miss Wang at 0379-6673825.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文——招募启事的写作。在写作时应根据汉语提示的内容，叙述学校音乐俱乐部需要招募的工作人员的条件，包括对音乐的热爱、在音乐方面的特长以及需要的时间等；最后写出联系人及其电话。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
12．例文
Musicians Wanted for School Music Band
We want some good musicians for our School Music Band. Can you play the guitar Can you play the drums Can you play the violin Can you play the piano Can you sing or dance Come and join us! Please call Gina at 632-8550.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写一则招聘广告。在写作时应按照广告的格式写，首先介绍需要什么样的人加入乐队，然后再介绍联系方式。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称及第二人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；可以借鉴课文中关于招聘的句型和语言，像We want some... for our School Music Band./ Can you ... /Come and join us! Please call sb. at+电话号码。要运用提示要点，需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰连贯，写完注意检查，确保单词拼写、语法、标点使用正确。
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