【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（四川泸州）（含解析）

【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（四川泸州）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、话题作文
1．友爱与温情似甘泉可以滋养人们的心灵，也是长夜明灯指引你前进的方向，生活中温暖友爱无处不在，或来自你的父母、家人、朋友、老师、同学，甚至陌生人。请你用“Life is full of love”为题写一篇短文。叙述一个你经历过的充满温暖友爱的故事。
要求：
1.书写规范、卷面整洁，110词左右；
2.语法正确，文理通顺，流畅。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名，校名。
Life is full of love
Is there a thing full of love buried deeply in your heart I want to share a thing with all of love and push myself.
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二、材料作文
2．很多学校根据学生的爱好和兴趣开展了许多有益的课外活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇110字左右的短文。
内容包括：
1.列举你们学校开展的课外活动。
2.介绍你对哪些活动感兴趣，并说明原因。
3.为同学如何选择课外活动提出建议。
4.鼓励同学们积极参加学校课外活动。
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3．目前，我市已经成为“全国文明城市”。全市人民都积极行动起来，用自己的一言一行践行社会主义核心价值观，争做一名“讲文明、爱环保”的新时期泸州人。作为中学生的我们更应该用我们的实际行动参与其中。请你以“Let’s make a better Luzhou!”为题写一篇短文。
内容必须包括：
1、泸州发展好，人们也从中受益，大家都行动起来；
2、自己计划的一次公益活动 (时间、人物、事件、你对此事的看法)；
3、向人们提出号召或建议 (至少3点)：如关闭一些工厂……等等。
要求：
1、不可逐字翻译，必须先转化为自己的语言；120词左右；不得出现真实姓名、班级学校；
2、要点必须完整，必须使用相关连接用语，必须合理分段，语言表达要准确。
提示：
1、尽量使用自己记住的词汇句型，未学的尽量不乱写；
2、酒城：the City of Wine；文明城市：the civilized city
Let’s make a better Luzhou!
Beside the Long River lies a beautiful city.
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4．生命只有一次，学生的安全非常重要。请你根据以下要点提示，以How to Keep Safe为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1.校园安全：和同学友好相处；遇到麻烦向老师求助；
2.交友安全：谨慎交友，特别是网上交友；不独自会见网友；
3.食品安全：吃健康食物；拒绝垃圾食品等；
4.交通安全：守规则；不闯红绿灯等；
5.个人观点：……（补充至少一条其他安全注意事项）。
要求：
1.词数110词左右（已给出的词句不计入总词数）；
2.要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
3.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语：careful; net-friend; traffic.
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三、电子邮件
5．假如你是李华，你校学生会正在招募下周去敬老院看望老人的志愿者。请根据下列要点提示，给学生会主席写一封电子邮件申请成为志愿者，并为该活动开展提几点建议。
要点提示: （1）个人情况：来自九年级一班，对泸州很了解等；
（2）能力方面：和人相处好，健谈等；
（3）经验方面：当过儿童医院志愿者，家里有老人等；
（4）对老人的看法：亲情缺乏，需要关爱等；
（5）活动建议：……
要求: （1）词数110词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）要点提示均须涉及，可适当增加内容；
（3）不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语：know, get on well with, Children’s Hospital, volunteer
Dear chairperson,
I’m writing to apply to join the volunteer activity. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．现在越来越多的外国人开始学习汉语。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank打算学习汉语，写信询问你学习汉语的方法。请你用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
要点:
1.你的认识：汉语有用且有趣，是世界上最重要的语言之一。
2.你的建议：看汉语电视节目 (programs)、听磁带；多阅读汉语书籍；尝试用汉语写作，不怕犯错误。
3.表达祝愿。
注意：
1.不少于80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Frank,
How’s it going You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter.
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7．母亲节就要来临。假定你是王林，请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你的母亲以及将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。
（一）要点提示：
1. 描述你母亲的外貌、性格（tall、beautiful、outgoing…hardworking）；
2. 回忆一件你们之间难忘的事；
3. 母亲节将要做的事情：
1）为母亲准备一份特别的礼物；
2）陪母亲散步等。
（二）要求：
1．词数：110词左右；
2．所有要点提示必须用完；请不要逐词逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
5. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
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四、讲稿
8．作为一名初三的学生, 你即将毕业离开母校。在过去的三年中，你在学校度过了很快乐的时光。请你根据下面的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，表达你对母校、老师、同学和工作人员的感激之情。
a.母校：校园非常美丽，是一个学习的好地方等；
b.老师：关心学生，对我们有耐心等；
c.同学：勤奋好学，互相帮助等；
d.工作人员：工作努力，晚睡早起等；
e.个人想法：……
要求：
1. 词数110词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）
2. 要点提示均需涉及，可适当增加内容；
3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅；
4. 不用真实姓名、校名、地名。
参考词语：patient, help each other, thanks for
Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school.
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Thanks for listening.
参考答案：
1．例文
Life is full of love
Is there a thing full of love buried deeply in your heart I want to share a thing with all of love and push myself.
One afternoon, I was tired and got onto a bus to go home. It was the rush hour and the bus was extremely crowded. I was even secretly happy that I had a seat. Just at that moment, a woman got on the bus with a baby in her arms. She was standing right next to me. Just as I was hesitating, our eyes met. I was embarrassed and nervous. Before I could get up, she said to me with a warm voice “Boy, you must be very tired after the whole day’s study. But fighting for your dream is a happy thing. I will get off at the next stop. Sit and have a good rest.”
How kind and understanding she was! What she said made me not only ashamed but moved. It was her love that is pushing me to be a better person!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：这是一篇话题作文，要求叙述一个你经历过的充满温暖友爱的故事。学生写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先借“分享一件充满爱、指引你前进的故事”引出话题；
第二步，具体讲述故事的时间、地点、经过、结果；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己对这件事的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①get on上车
②fight for sth.为某事而奋斗
③get off下车
[高分句型]
①Before I could get up, she said to me with a warm voice “Boy, you must be very tired after the whole day’s study.（时间状语从句）
②How kind and understanding she was!（How引导的感叹句）
③What she said made me not only ashamed but moved. （主语从句）
2．例文
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in schools. We also have many kinds of after-class activities in our school, such as the English corner, playing basketball and swimming. I am interested in the English corner, because it can help me make some new friends there.
If you also want to take part in after-class activities, I have some suggestions. You had better choose the activities which are good for you and you had better choose what you like.
Dear friends, please take part in after-class activities. I’m sure you will learn a lot and you will find it very interesting at the same time. Your school life will be colorful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据所给提示介绍一下自己学校的课外活动。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主；人称以第一人称和第二人称为主；文章可分为三段式：第一段例举自己学校的课外活动。第二段介绍自己喜欢的活动，以及就同学选择课外活动给出建议。最后一段发出呼吁。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，正确运用好人称和时态。
3．例文
Let’s make a better Luzhou!
Beside the Long River lies a beautiful city. It is the City of Wine — Luzhou. It is the civilized city in the country. To become more civilized, everyone should play a part in it. Because Luzhou develops well and people can benefit from it.
Last Sunday, my friends and I volunteered to clean the city park. We picked up the rubbish and fallen leaves. It took us three hours to make the park clean and beautiful. Though we were a little tired, we were very happy.
To make a better Luzhou, I think we should close some factories so that there will be less pollution. What’s more, everyone should behave well when we are in public areas. The most important is that we should help others when people are in trouble.
Hope we can work together to make a better Luzhou.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Let’s make a better Luzhou!”为题，并根据题干中的提示介绍如何创造一个更好的泸州，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍为什么要创造一个更好的泸州；第二段介绍自己计划的一次公益活动；第三段向人们提出号召；最后一段表达希望。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
4．例文：
How to Keep Safe
Life is only once, so safety is important for us teenagers. But how can we keep safe Here are some suggestions.
First, we should get on well with our classmates at school. Don’t fight with them. If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. We shouldn’t meet net-friends alone. Third, we’d better buy and eat food carefully. We should eat healthy food such as vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat junk food. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Fourth, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Besides, summer is coming and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.
In a word, safety must come first!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示写作，可适当增添内容，注意不要遗漏“补充至少一条其他安全注意事项”的写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过写“生命只有一次”引出话题；
第二步，从“校园、交友、食品、交通”等方面讲述安全注意事项；
第三步，书写结语，阐述个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①get on well with和……相处得好
②do harm to对……有害
③besides此外
[高分句型]
①If we really have trouble in communicating with them, we can ask our teachers for help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red.（祈使句的否定形式，when引导的时间状语从句）
5．参考范文：
Dear chairperson,
I’m writing to apply to join the volunteer activity. My name is Li Hua. I am a middle school student. I come from Class One, Grade Nine. I know Luzhou very well. I am outgoing and helpful. I get along well with people. I am good at talking and so on. I have experience as a volunteer. Last summer, I worked as a volunteer in children’s hospital. My family has grandparents. I often take care of them. I think the old people lack family affection and need love. If I get the chance, I promise I will offer the best service.
I suggest to visit the elderly in the nursing home next week and prepare some flowers and other gifts for the elderly. I think they will be happy.
Look forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。给学生会主席写一封电子邮件申请成为志愿者。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍自己的个人情况以及自己的做志愿者经历；第二段为该活动开展提几点建议；最后一段期待回复。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
6．例文：
Dear Frank,
How’s it going You asked me about the ways of learning Chinese in your last letter. Let me give your some advice about it now.
Chinese is a very useful and beautiful language, it is one of the most important languages in the world. You can watch Chinese TV programs and listen to the tapes to learn Chinese well. Reading more Chinese books is also a good way to learn Chinese. Try writing in Chinese so that you can improve your writing skills. Keeping diaries is a good choice. Don’t be afraid to make mistakes. We can learn more from mistakes.
The more you learn Chinese, the best you will like it. I believe you will learn Chinese well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“汉语有用且有趣，是世界上最重要的语言之一”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出将给对方一些学汉语的建议；
第二步，具体阐述建议的内容，并阐明汉语是有用的，且是世界上最重要的语言之一；
第三步，书写结语，升华情感，祝福对方学好汉语。
[亮点词汇]
① give sb. some advice about...给某人一些关于……的建议
② one of the most important languages最重要的语言之一
③learn from从……学习
④ the more...,the best....越……就越……
[高分句型]
①You can watch Chinese TV programs and listen to the tapes to learn Chinese well. (动词不定式作目的状语)
② Reading more Chinese books is also a good way to learn Chinese. (动名词作主语)
7．例文
Dear John,
My mother is tall and looks very beautiful. She is outgoing and hardworking. My mother loves me very much. When I was eight years old, I was seriously ill. But it was late on a winter’s night, and my dad wasn’t at home. My mother carried me on her back and hurried to the hospital. Along the way, I could feel my mother’s small and weak body. My mother was so worried about me that she didn’t sleep all night. Mother’s love kept her going on that cold night.
Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner. I’m sure she will be very happy.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的母亲，以及和母亲之间发生的一件难忘的事；
第二步，介绍母亲节将要做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about担心
②hurry to赶往
③take a walk散步
[高分句型]
①When I was eight years old, I was seriously ill.（when引导时间状语从句）
②My mother was so worried about me that she didn’t sleep all night.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
8．例文
Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school. We will graduate in a few weeks. I think it is a good chance for me to say “Thanks” to our school, all the teachers, classmates and school workers. Our school is very beautiful. I have spent my happiest three years here. And I really hope she will be better and better. For me, the most unforgettable people are all the teachers who are so knowledgeable and experienced. You are always kind and caring, patient and responsible. I will never forget your help. I’m also thankful to my classmates and friends who are very hard-working. I hope everyone will enter their dream school to study. In the end, I’d like to give my special “Thanks” to all the workers in our school. Thank you for everything you have done for us.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇发言稿，表达对学校的感激之情；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：题目已给出写作要点，写作时要围绕写作要点，并可以适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接文章开头，开篇点题，并引出后文对学校的感激；
第二步：按照题目给出的提示分别写出对学校，对老师，对同学，对学校工作人员的感谢；
第三步：最后进行简单的总结及对未来的期待。
[亮点词汇]
① a good chance to do sth 做某事的好机会
② be thankful to 对……感激的
③give thanks to sb 对某人表示感谢
[高分句型]
① And I really hope she will be better and better. （用到“比较级+and+比较级”的结构）
② I’m also thankful to my classmates and friends who are very hard-working. （who引导的定语从句）