09 书面表达满分训练-2022-2023年八年级英语下期期中高频考点专练（仁爱版）（带答案解析）

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2022-2023年八年级英语下期期中高频考点专练（仁爱版）
09 书面表达满分训练
（2022春·云南保山·八年级统考期中）
提示：疫情反反复复，很多人的出行愿望从疫情之前的出国变成出省，最后变成能平平安安出门。你有什么旅行计划呢？请你以“My Travel Plan”为题，写一篇你的旅行计划，说说你想去哪里，和谁一起去，并简单介绍下你想去的地方。期望疫情早日结束，愿望成真。
要求：
1. 短文不少于60词。
2. 语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁。
3. 文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。
4. 短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。
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2．（2022春·河南周口·八年级校考期中）你是康康，你的笔友Bill想了解你的旅游情况，请给Bill写一封信，讲一讲让你难忘的一次旅行。
要求：1. 格式正确； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯； 3. 不得出现个人真实信息；4. 词数80—100。
提示：unforgettable 难忘的
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3．（2022春·海南海口·八年级校联考期中）2022年3月21日的东航客机坠毁事件和持续三年多的新冠肺炎疫情告诉我们：人生在世，生命很重要，健康很重要。但是在学习和生活中，我们会有一些不好的情绪(bad feelings)，坏的情绪会影响我们的健康，请以“Good Ways to Keep Happy”为题，谈一谈中学生如何在学习和生活中保持愉快的心情。
提示词：listen to music， do more exercise，make friends， smile often…
要求：1.语句通顺，表达连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给信息；
3.词数70左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Good Ways to Keep Happy
It is very important for us to keep happy. Because being happy is to be healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us happy
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I hope you can keep happy every day.
4．（2022春·广西崇左·八年级统考期中）学校近期组织了一次户外郊游活动，假如你是学校英文报的记者，请你以“A Visit to West Hill Park”为题写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1. 时间与地点：5月8日，西山公园West Hill Park；
2. 活动内容：放风筝，湖边钓鱼，欣赏自然美景等；
3. 你对这次活动的评价。
写作要求：
1. 必须包含所有要点内容，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现题目要求之外的人名、校名以及透露个人信息的地名，否则不予以评分；
4. 不少于80词。
A Visit to West Hill Park
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5．（2022春·广西梧州·八年级统考期中）请以“A Trip to Beijing ”为题，用英语写一篇关于你去北京旅游的文章。
要点：
时间 last summer
地点 Beijing
人物 我和我的父母
经历 1. 参观天安门广场(Tian’anmen Square)；看京剧；2. 参观故宫(the Palace Museum)和颐和园(the Summer Palace)；3. 爬长城；4. 王府井(Wangfujing Street)购物；品尝北京烤鸭(Beijing Duck)；
感受 ……
要求：
1. 包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实校名、人名、地名等信息；
3. 60 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。A Trip to Beijing
As we know, Beijing is a must visit for everyone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022春·江苏淮安·八年级校考期中）读万卷书，行万里路。在即将到来的4月23日世界读书日，我校将举行“读好书，行好路”的主题征文活动。请以“Reading and travelling make a better me”为题，写一篇80—100字的英语短文。内容必须包括表格中所有要点，不得出现真实的校名和人名。
读好书 一本世界著名小说：Robinson Crusoe。作者：英国作家Daniel Defoe。读后感受：生活时而让我们精疲力竭，但采取行动胜于自我放弃。
好处：开启一个全新的世界，在空余时间放松自己，……
行好路 一次旅游经历：时间、地点、感受。
好处：了解不同文化，……
Reading and travelling make a better meFriends are not books, yet books are friends. I have read different kinds of books. But my favourite one is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Reading and travelling make a better me and I hope you can find a better you some time in a future.
7．（2022春·贵州铜仁·八年级统考期中）在成长过程中，每个人都会遇到困难，面对困难你该如何解决呢？请根据下表的提示以“Learn to Smile”为题，写一篇80词以上的作文，开头已给出，不计入总数。
学会对自己微笑 1. 面对考试失败或与同学发生矛盾时学会微笑。2. 使你自信，相信自己，克服困难。
学会对他人微笑 1. 便于与人交流，容易交到朋友。2. 给别人带来快乐，自己也快乐。
总结 微笑能调整好人的心情，能传递友谊，能使自己快乐成长。
提示词：fail in the exam, smile to yourself, feel confident, overcome (克服), make friends, get close to, make sb. happy
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence is “Just a smile and the rain is gone”. Do you like smiling I think you should learn to smile.
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8．（2022春·陕西渭南·八年级统考期中）假如你是李华，你最喜欢的动画电影是《功夫熊猫》(Kung Fu Panda)，你想把这部电影推荐给同学们。请你根据以下提示，以“My favourite movie”为题，用英语写一篇小短文来介绍这部电影。
提示：1. 主人公阿宝(Po)的形象：看起来可爱，善良并且勇敢；
2. 故事情节：阿宝努力学习功夫来保护自己的村庄和村民；
3. 谈谈你对这部电影的感受和体会。
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4. 词数：不少于50词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
My favourite movie
My favourite movie is Kung Fu Panda. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（2022春·山西吕梁·八年级统考期中）家是每个孩子成长的摇篮，家是每个孩子栖息的港湾。在我们的成长过程中，可能有全家人一起去旅行收获的快乐，也可能有因某次争执而带来的不快，有令人感动的瞬间……，请根据以下三个提示要点写一篇英语短文。
1. Do you have a happy family
2. Tell us a story that happened in your family.
3. What will you do for your family
要求：
1. 词数不少于70词(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 书写工整、规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
Happiness is important for our family.
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10．（2022春·浙江杭州·八年级校考期中）假设你叫李华，你的笔友Peter给你发来邮件，请你根据他的邮件内容，用英语给他回一封邮件。注意：
（1）词数：80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
（3）文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going I know that Chinese students had a long holiday from May 1 to May 5. What do you usually do in those days How do you feel Well, in our country, we also have a long holiday between December 19 and January 5. This year, my family will travel to Hangzhou during your May Day holiday. Where can we visit What can we do What Chinese gifts can I bring back to my classmates Please give me some advice.
Thanks.
Yours,
Peter
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last e-mail. Everything is fine with me.
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．（2022春·福建漳州·八年级福建省诏安第一中学校联考期中）假如你是李华，你的同学给你发邮件说她最近在学习和生活上遇到一些麻烦，上周数学考试不及格，情绪不好，在课堂上没法集中注意力，头痛失眠，作为她的好朋友，你想给她发一封邮件劝说她，帮助她解决问题，摆脱不良情绪，重获快乐。
注意事项：
1. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名，字数80词左右。
Dear Li Hong,
I am glad to receive your email.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
12．（2022春·浙江温州·八年级校考期中）第19届亚运会足球和龙舟比赛将在温州举行，为协助引导外国友人，组委会正在招募志愿者。假如你是Li Hua，你想报名参加志愿者工作，请用英语给组委会写一份100词左右的自荐信。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
It’s great that the football match and dragon boat race of the 19th Asian Games will be held in Wenzhou. I really want to be one of the volunteers.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2022春·浙江杭州·八年级校考期中）假如你是Peter的好朋友Wang Lin，根据他给你的求助信，给他一些表扬或建议。
Dear Wang Lin,
How is everything going I’m very sad now.
Last Saturday, I volunteered at the Children’s Home. I did many things to cheer them up. When I was cleaning the window, it suddenly rained heavily. When I made my way home, I got all wet. The next day, I had a bad cold. However, I didn’t finish most of my homework. So I copied my classmate’s homework. At that time, my mum came back. When she saw that, she was really angry. We argued. Now, we don’t talk to each other. What should I do
Look forward to your letter.
Thank you.
Yours,
Peter
注意：
1. 可对其中一个话题进行详细评价或建议，其他两个话题可略写（详略得当）。
2. 提示词：feel proud(自豪), kindness, feel sorry, lie down, communicate with, understanding, care for
3. 字数：80字左右（已给字数不算）。
Dear Peter,
I am glad to hear from you.
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14．（2022春·广西柳州·八年级统考期中）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。
你的感谢 父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你
父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你
你的决心 努力学习
你的祝愿 祝愿父母健康快乐
参考词汇：感谢某人……thank sb. for ... 养育raise 做饭cook food生病be sick 信任trust 关心care about
个人感受personal feelings 处于困难中be in trouble
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. Firstly, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2022春·广东湛江·八年级统考期中）2022 年杭州亚运会志愿者正在招募中。假如你是学生李华，希望能成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会陈女士写一封申请信，内容包括：1. 个人情况；2. 自身优势；3. 服务承诺
Name 李华，13 岁，中学学生
Abilities 擅长英语，口语很棒；爱好运动，了解亚运会；性格外向，善于与人交流，且乐于助人；会为人们提供最好的服务。
参考词汇：the Asian Games 亚运会 spoken English 英语口语 service 服务
注意：1. 内容必须包括提示的信息；可适当发挥，字数80左右。
2. 逻辑通顺，表达得体，书写工整。
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参考答案：
1．例文
My Travel Plan
I want to take a trip to Yunnan with my parents. It is in the southern part of our country. Every year there are lots and lots of visitors. Li Jiang is one of the most famous cities in Yunnan. The roads in that city are just like the Eight Diagrams. Any road in the city goes to the center of Li Jiang. A river runs through the whole city. If you go along the river, you’ll never get lost. There are many ethnic minority people in Yunnan. They are very cordial. And they all like singing and dancing. I want to dance with them. I really hope the epidemic will end soon, and my wish will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你想去哪里，和谁一起去；
第二步，介绍你想去的地方的风土人情；
第三步，谈谈自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of许多
②the center of………的中心
③go along沿着
[高分句型]
①If you go along the river, you’ll never get lost.（条件状语从句）
2．例文
An unforgettable trip
I took a trip to Yunnan last winter vacation. Yunnan is a famous place. I’m always dreaming of visiting it.
I arrived there by plane with my parents and two cousins. The weather was sunny and cool, just right for the trip. We stayed in Yunnan for seven days. We visited some places of interest, such as the zoo and the National Park. We also saw birds and elephants. I rode an elephant there. How exciting! We also took many photos and ate delicious food. It was very nice. I bought some special gifts for my friends as well.
I really felt excited and happy. It was an unforgettable trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：题干中没有给出写出要点，考生可围绕“难忘的旅行”介绍旅行的经历和感受，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，点明旅行的目的地；
第二步，具体介绍旅行的经历；
第三步，表达旅行的感受，照应主题。
[亮点词汇]
① dream of 梦想
② by plane 乘坐飞机
③ places of interest 名胜古迹
④ take photos 拍照
[高分句型]
① How exciting!（how 引导的感叹句）
② I bought some special gifts for my friends as well.（buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物）
3．参考范文：
Good Ways to Keep Happy
It is very important for us to keep happy. Because being happy is to be healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us happy
First, we can listen to music. It makes us relaxed. Also, we should try to do more exercise every day. After school we can spend hours playing ball games with our friends. Second, making friends is another way to keep happy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If we smile often, we also feel happy. Third, it’s a good idea to have good hobbies, such as reading and learning something new. That’s because interests give us a lot of fun.
I hope you can keep happy every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要是“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文写作话题已经明确，考生应结合该话题以及提示词阐述自己的观点，注意逻辑清晰和行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，用问句“但你知道让我们快乐的方法吗”引出下文；
第二步，结合提示词有逻辑地介绍让我们快乐的方法；
第三步，总结并希望能够每天开心。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb adj让某人……
②try to do sth尽力做某事
③spend time doing sth花时间做某事
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①Second, making friends is another way to keep happy.（动名词短语作主语）
②When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends.（when引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文
A Visit to West Hill Park
To help students relax, our school organized an outing to the West Hill Park on May 8.
It was a beautiful sunny day. At 7:30 a.m, We meet at our school gate and set off for the West Hill Park. Twenty minutes later, we reached the park. The scenery there was very wonderful. We were free to walk around and enjoy the amazing scenery for a few hours. After lunch, we divided into groups playing games, singing and dancing. And then we also flew kites and went fishing by the lake. At around 4 p.m, we started to head back, tired but happy.
This activity not only offered us a chance to get close to nature, but also brought us closer to each other.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍本文的主题是户外郊游活动；
第二步，具体阐述活动的时间地点和内容；
第三步，书写结语，评价这次活动。
［亮点词汇］
①set off出发
②divide into分成……
③get close to接近
［高分句型］
This activity not only offered us a chance to get close to nature, but also brought us closer to each other.（not only…but also…并列句）
5．例文
A Trip to Beijing
As we know, Beijing is a place where visitors must go. The day finally arrived, my parents and I visited it last summer. Let me tell you something about it.
On the first day, we went to Tian’anmen Square in the morning. It’s the biggest square in the world. There were many people there. In the afternoon, we watched Beijing Opera. We had great fun. On the second day, we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. We learned much about Chinese history culture. On the third day, we climbed the Great Wall. We enjoyed the natural beauty very much. I couldn’t stop taking photos. We went to Wangfujing Street and did some shopping on the fourth day. We bought some presents for our relatives and friends. We had a big meal. Beijing Duck was very delicious.
This trip will always have a special place in my heart.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍去旅游的时间、地点、人物等信息。
第二步，按照时间顺序重点描述旅游经历。
第三步，抒发旅游感受。
［亮点词汇］
①have great fun 玩得很开心
②take photos 照相
③do some shopping 购物
［高分句型］
①Let me tell you something about it.（let sb. do sth. 句型）
②We bought some presents for our relatives and friends. （buy sth. for sb. 句型）
③This trip will always have a special place in my heart.（have a special place in one’s heart在某人心中占有特殊的地位）
6．例文
Reading and travelling make a better me
Friends are not books, yet books are friends. I have read different kinds of books. But my favourite one is the English writer Daniel Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe, which is a famous novel in the world. After reading the book, I learn many things from it. Especially, when we get tried of the life, we should remember that taking measures to face it is better than giving up. Reading good books can teach us a lot of knowledge. It can help us know a new world, also can make us relaxed in our spare time.
Travelling is our friend, too. I have traveled to plenty of places. But my most unforgettable is the trip to Beijing in my childhood. During the trip, I experienced the long history of China and the deep pride. So travelling can help us to know the cultures of the different places.
Reading and travelling make a better me and I hope you can find a better you some time in a future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文应是一篇说明文。
②时态：本文要用到一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，开头已给出，接着开头来介绍自己最喜欢的书，并表达出读好书的好处；
②第二步，介绍自己的一次旅行，并表达出行好路的好处；
③第三步，总结全文，说明阅读和旅行会让我变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①learn…from… 从……学到……
②especially 尤其
③get tired of 厌倦
④take measures to do 采取措施做某事
⑤give up 放弃
[高分句型]
①But my favourite one is the English writer Daniel Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe, which is a famous novel in the world. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②when we get tried of the life, we should remember that taking measures to face it is better than giving up. (when引导时间状语从句，that引导宾语从句，动名词作主语)
7．例文
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence is “Just a smile and the rain is gone”. Do you like smiling I think you should learn to smile.
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself. Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence. Sometimes the one who beats you isn’t others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It helps you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes you happy as well.
In a word, smile can adjust the mood of people, convey friendship, and make yourself grow up happily.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意逻辑清晰、行文连贯、无语法拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题：面对困难时应该学会微笑；
第二步，结合表格提示，具体介绍该如何做；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① unpleasant 不愉快的
② misunderstand 误解
③ confidence 自信
④ communicate with sb. 与某人交流
⑤ adjust 调整
[高分句型]
① If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② Sometimes the one who beats you isn’t others, but yourself.（who引导的定语从句）
8．例文
My favourite movie
My favourite movie is Kung Fu Panda. It’s a funny and exciting cartoon movie. The main character Po looks lovely. He is very kind and brave. In this movie, Po keeps practicing Kung Fu and never gives up. Finally, he protects his village and villagers successfully. I think we should always face difficulties like Po. I’m sure you will enjoy watching the movie.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍电影主人公阿宝；
第二步，简单介绍故事情节；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①main character主角
②gives up放弃
[高分句型]
①I think we should always face difficulties like Po.（省略“that”的宾语从句）
②I’m sure you will enjoy watching the movie.（省略“that”的宾语从句）
9．例文
Happiness is important for our family. From my point of view, having a happy family is the most important thing. Luckily, I have a happy and warm family. My family give me love without asking for return.
Every child is surrounded by the deep love. However, we often turn a blind eye to the love. One day I hurried home for lunch after school. But when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt unhappy. When the dishes were served, I found none I like. I ran out of my house angrily, hung out on the street for a while, and then walked to school. When I got into the classroom, I saw a lunch box on my desk. After opening the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes were full of tears.
Now, I have realized that as a family member, it is my duty to be responsible for my family. I will make efforts to do better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍有一个幸福家庭的重要性；
第二步，分享一件发生在家里的故事；
第三步，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①ask for return要求回报
②run out of跑出
③hang out闲逛
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①having a happy family is the most important thing.（动名词作主语）
②Every child is surrounded by the deep love.（被动语态）
10．例文：
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your last e-mail. Everything is fine with me.
I hear that you are going to visit Hangzhou for May holiday. I’d like to make some suggestions. Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. There are many places of interest such as West Lake and Lingyin Temples. You can go boating on the lake, taste delicious food and learn about different cultures. I believe you’ll have a great time. As for gifts, Longjin Tea is the best choice for your classmates. It’s one of the most popular drinks around the world. I think your classmates will enjoy it. By the way, I’ll be your guide if I’m free on May holiday.
Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：题干中没有给出明确的写作要点，考生要先阅读Peter的邮件内容，并根据邮件内容给他一些建议；注意语言通顺，条理清楚。
[写作步骤]
第一步，感谢问候（已给出）；
第二步，给出去杭州旅行的建议；
第三步，书写结语，期盼对方的到来。
[亮点词汇]
① places of interest 名胜古迹
② go boating 泛舟
③ have a great time 玩得开心
④ look forward to 期待；期盼
[高分句型]
① Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country.（one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数 最……之一）
② There are many places of interest such as West Lake and Lingyin Temples. （there be句型）
③ I’ll be your guide if I’m free on May holiday.（if引导的条件状语从句）
11．例文
Dear Li Hong,
I am glad to receive your email. It is common that everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes. It’s all right to tell others your bother when you are anxious.
I think communicating with your classmates, teachers or parents is a good choice. Then you’ll find that you can solve the problems from study or life easily. What’s more, we are supposed to have a heart-to-heart communication with our parents or friends around us. In this way, we can get their more understanding and support. Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.
No matter how many difficulties we have, believe all of them can be overcome in the end.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为应用文，是一封电子邮件。
②时态：本文要用一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明焦虑是常见的，发生时与人交流是正确的。
②第二步，提出了一些解决办法：和人交流，听音乐，保持微笑和不保持沉默等。
③第三步，总结全文，告诉对方无论有多少困难，也要相信最后一定能克服。
[亮点词汇]
①bother麻烦，困难
②be supposed to do应该做某事
③heart-to-heart率直的；诚实的
[高分句型]
①Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed. (动名词短语作主语，谓语动词用单三)
②No matter how many difficulties we have, believe all of them can be overcome in the end. (no matter how引导的让步状语从句)
12．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
It’s great that the football match and dragon boat race of the 19th Asian Games will be held in Wenzhou. I really want to be one of the volunteers.
I am Li Hua, a 14-year-old middle school student in Wenzhou. Firstly, I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with foreigners. Secondly, I am very outgoing and I’m ready to help others. So I can get on well with others. I’m willing to provide the best service for every athlete in the Asian Games. Thirdly, I was a volunteer in City Sports Meeting last year, which gave me some experience. Last but not least, I am fond of football matches and dragon boat races. I hope to take part in the Asian Games one day.
I will be grateful if I am given the chance. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文，为自荐信；
②时态：主要是一般现在时；
③提示：没有给出具体写作要点，须围绕自荐成为亚运会志愿者展开，描写能够胜任志愿者工作的自身条件或优势。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍自己的基本信息；
第二步，描述自己能够胜任志愿者工作的自身条件，这是写作重点；
第三步，表达希望得到机会、期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
get on well with 友好相处
provide the best service for 为……提供最好的服务
be fond of 爱好
last but not least 最后
[高分句型]
I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with foreigners. （定语从句）
I will be grateful if I am given the chance. （条件状语从句）
13．Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I’m OK, thank you. Firstly, I should say, I feel proud of your kindness. Volunteering means a lot. You did a good job.
Second, I feel sorry that you had a problem with your mother. I know your feeling. As we all know, parents are always worrying about our studies. So you should understand your mother. And in my opinion, if you really can’t finish your homework, you can communicate with your teacher. In that case your teacher will surely be understanding.
At last, take care of yourself. Drink more water, lie down and have a good rest.
Hope your cold will be better. Take it easy. Everything will turn out better.
Yours,
Wang Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一封回信；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：对信中提到的一个话题进行详细评价或建议，其它两个话题略写。
[写作步骤]
第一步：首先对他的志愿者行动提出表扬和肯定；
第二步：对他和妈妈的关系问题给出详细的建议；
第三步：对于身体状况简单给出建议，并提出自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
① feel proud of以……而骄傲
② have a problem with在某方面有问题
③ in my opinion依我看
④ communicate with和某人沟通
[高分句型]
And in my opinion, if you really can’t finish your homework, you can communicate with your teacher. （用if引导的条件状语从句）
14．例文：
A Letter to My Parents
Dear Mum and Dad,
I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. Firstly, I want to thank you for raising me. I thank you for cooking delicious food for me every day, and taking care of me when I am sick. Secondly, I am grateful to you for trusting me, caring about my personal feelings and encouraging me when I am in trouble. In order to repay you, I will study hard and not let you down. I really hope you can be healthy and happy every day.
Thanks again for everything you have done for me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无语法和拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对父母的感谢，介绍父母为自己做过的事情；
第二步，表达自己的决心和祝愿；
第三步，书写结语，再次感谢父母做的一切。
[亮点词汇]
① thank you for doing sth. 感谢某人做某事
② take care of 照顾
③ grateful 感激的
④ encourage 鼓励
⑤ let sb. down 使……失望
[高分句型]
① I am grateful to you for trusting me, caring about my personal feelings and encouraging me when I am in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② I really hope you can be healthy and happy every day.（hope后接省略that的宾语从句）
15．例文
Dear Ms Chen,
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old and I am a middle school student. Knowing that you are recruiting volunteers for the 2022 Hangzhou Asian Games, I am writing to apply for the position.
First of all, I am good at English and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Besides, I have other advantages. I am fond of sports. I was born in Hangzhou, so I am familiar with Hangzhou. What’s more, I do well in communication and I am ready to help others. I am willing to provide the best service for every athlete in the Asian Games. Therefore, I think I am suitable for serving the Games.
I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息以及想申请成为一名志愿者的想法；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，希望对方能给予这次机会，并期待回信。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②be good at擅长
③communicate with与……沟通
④be fond of喜欢
⑤be born in出生于
⑥be familiar with熟悉
[高分句型]
①I think I am suitable for serving the Games（省略that的宾语从句）
②I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance to be a volunteer（if引导条件状语从句）
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