【好题精选】书面表达-2023年中考英语专题练（四川绵阳）（含解析）

05：【好题精选】书面表达 -2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（四川绵阳）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、材料作文
1．“Who knows that each bowl of rice is the fruit of hard toil (谁知盘中餐，粒粒皆辛苦).”“Clear your plate & refuse to waste food.”新学期，我市多家中小学及餐馆响应市政府的倡议“家在绵阳文明餐桌行动”， 展开相关“光盘行动”的活动。请以“Against Food Waste”为题，用英语写篇短文。
短文应包含以下内容：
1.“光盘“行动的目的和意义；
2.你对“光盘行动”所持的态度；
3.你对此行动的做法（至少写3条）。
要求: 1.100词左右，短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3.逻辑合理，语言优美，卷面整洁。
参考词汇：a waste of food & money; pollute the environment; shameful; pick (挑剔的); leftovers (剩饭 菜); order less or smaller dishes
Against Food Waste
At the beginning of the new school term, many schools & restaurants have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign (活动) against wasting food.
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2．人一直在悄悄成长，那些曾经的过往成就了现在的你；回首两年的初中时光，你在生活中和学习中一定取得了不少进步，比如学科知识，生活技能，人际交往，体育锻炼、饮食习惯等方面。请结合亲身经历谈谈自己的进步。
要求：1.只需选取两个方面；
2.对比过去和现在；
3.分享你是如何取得进步的；
4.80-100词；
In the past two years, I have changed a lot._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、电子邮件
3．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike 想了解你进入初中的一些变化（外貌、性格、爱好、学习……）。请阅读Mike的邮件并回复，要求至少3条具体内容且说明如何改变的。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua From: Mike Hi Li Hua,How’s it going As we all know, people sure change. I think you have changed a lot since you entered the junior middle school. Could you share some of your changes in the past two years Look forward to your reply. All the best! Mike
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4．假定你是Helen，你的朋友Sarah最近给你发了一封电子邮件，请根据邮件内容给她回复一封邮件，针对她目前遇到的困惑提出至少3条合理建议。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Helen,
I am really upset nowadays. I have many friends, but now none of them wants to talk to me. At lunchtime, nobody likes to share a table with me. I feel really puzzled and lonely. And I can’t understand why they’re trying to avoid me. Would you please give me some advice
Thank you!
Yours,
Sarah
Dear Sarah,
I’m sorry to hear you have some trouble getting along with your friends.
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Yours,
Helen
5．假如你叫李华，请回复朋友Mike的邮件，给他至少3条建议并说明理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
To: Li Hua From: Mike
Hi Li Hua,How’s it going I hope everything is OK with you! I am a hard-working boy and want to be a top student in my class. But in exams, I always make many careless mistakes. I really worry about it. What should I do to improve my performance in exams Would you please give me some advice I am looking forward to your reply. Mike.
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6．假定你是李华，请阅读你的朋友林强的邮件并回复。给他至少3条建议并分别说明理由。
To: LiHua @
From: Lin Qiang @
Subject: Ask for Advice
How is everything going with you Because of the COVID-19, my life has changed a lot. During the pandemic, our country has made many rules to protect us. Even though they are sometimes strict, they do help. As a teenager in China, we need to follow the rules and to be a good citizen in school, at home or in public places. Can you give me some suggestions on how to be a good citizen
注意：
1.词数 100词左右。
2.文中不能出现真实的姓名与学校。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假定你是李华，请回复笔友Mike的邮件。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua From: Mike
Hi, how is everything with you I found myself fatter and fatter. I am very worried. I don’t know what to do if my classmates laugh at me. Would you please give me some advice I am looking forward to hearing from you.All the best. Mike
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Hi, Mike
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三、书信作文
8．假如你是李华, 收到笔友Dale的邮件, 请你回复, 要点不少于三个, 并加以阐述说明。不少于80词。
To: Li Hua From: Dale Hi, Li Hua, How are you these days I have a big trouble now. Some of my classmates have given me several nicknames. I don’t like them at all. I feel really upset. Could you help me Dale
参考答案：
1．例文：
Against Food Waste
At the beginning of the new school term, many schools & restaurants have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign against wasting food.
The aim of “Clearing Your Plate” is to reduce food waste. And I am totally for it because it’s so meaningful. On one hand, it’s good for the environment. On the other hand, we can develop the good habit of saving food.
As for me, I think first I will eat up all the food on my plates. Second, when I go out for dinner, I won’t order more food than I can eat. Third, if I cannot eat up all the food, I will take it home.
In a word, we should take action to fight against food waste.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“Against Food Waste”为题写短文介绍“光盘行动”、你的态度及做法，要求要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称为主，时态结合一般现在时和一般将来时。可分为四段式写作：第一段点题；第二段介绍目的、意义及自己的态度；第三段介绍自己的做法；第四段收尾。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
2．例文
In the past two years, I have changed a lot.
On one hand, I used to stay up late while now I think it’s important for me to have a good rest, so I go to bed early at night. What’s more, I’m gradually fond of taking exercise, such as running and playing football. On the other hand, I was too lazy to finish my homework on time in the past, but now I have made much progress in studying, especially in my English. Because I have tried my best to improve myself with my classmates’ and teachers’ help.
In a word, these changes make me happy and I really believe my life will be better and better because of these changes.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容对比过去和现在，谈谈自己是如何取得进步的。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段对比过去和现在，谈谈自己是如何取得进步的；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
3．例文
Hi Mike,
Everything goes well with me. As time goes by people should change. It’s true that my life has changed a lot in the past two years.
First, I used to be short and overweight, but I’m not anymore. I’m very happy that I have lost much weight since I started exercising every day.
Second, I used to be shy and I had few friends. Thanks to my head teacher, she gave me some helpful ideas to make friends. Now I’m more active and friendly and have more friends. The biggest change in my life is that I have made great progress in my schoolwork. I used to be afraid of exams. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates, I do much better in all my subjects through hard work.
It’s so amazing that I have really changed too much.
All the best!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：请仔细阅读Mike的邮件并回复，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。首先点题，提出自己确实改变了。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。从三个方面具体说明自己是如何改变的。
第三步：书写结语。表示自己“改变了太多”。
[亮点词汇]
①changed a lot改变了很多
②in the past two years在过去的两年里
③used to曾经
④make friends交朋友
⑤made great progress取得了很大进展
[高分句型]
①It’s true that my life has changed a lot in the past two years.（that引导的宾语从句）
②The biggest change in my life is that I have made great progress in my schoolwork.（that引导的表语从句）
③It’s so amazing that I have really changed too much.（so…that…如此……以至于……）
④I’m very happy that I have lost much weight since I started exercising every day.（since引导的时间状语从句）
4．例文：
Dear Sarah,
I’m sorry to hear you have some trouble getting along with your friends. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, you’d better find out what got you into such a mess, and then turn to your teachers or parents for advice. Secondly, why not open your mind to communicate with your friends It shows you really cherish the friendship and value their viewpoints. Besides, in your daily life, it’s wise to be ready to help your friends and the people around you. In this way, you can not only win back your old friends but also make some new ones.
I hope my suggestions can make a difference. I’ll continue to offer help if you need.
Yours,
Helen
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。根据Sarah的问题提出建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段已给出；第二段就Sarah的问题提出合理性建议；最后一段希望建议能帮到对方。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
5．例文
Hi Mike,
Knowing that you have some trouble in improving your performance in exams, I would like to share some suggestions with you.
Firstly, you are supposed to pay attention to your learning methods because proper ones can make the learning more efficient. Secondly, try your best to practice your psychological quality in your daily exercises, which is a better way to reduce the careless mistakes in exams. Thirdly, form a habit of checking your answers before handing in, which helps you get better performance in exams. Most importantly, I firmly believe that practice makes perfect, so I suggest that you should do as many exercises as you can.
I would appreciate it if you take my advice into consideration. Looking forward to your reply soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。根据Mike遇到的问题提出相应的建议。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第二人称和第一人称为主。分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段给出相应的建议；第三段表达期待对方的回信；第四段表达祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
6．Dear Lin Qiang,
I am very glad to receive your email. Now let me tell you how to be a good citizen.
First of all, at home, we should make our own bed and help our parents clean up. Because it’s a basic skill for students. Secondly, we should obey the school rules in school. In this way, the campus will be harmonious and beautiful. Finally, in public places, behave appropriately, don’t litter, and be polite to people. Because we should be quality citizens.
These are my suggestions. I hope it is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。根据林强的邮件内容给他至少3条建议来说明如何做一个好公民，并分别说明理由。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作时内容需包括在学校、家里或公共场所做一个好公民的建议以及理由。最后行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
7．例文:
Hi, Mike.
I am so glad to hear from you. And I’ve also known the worry about your weight. It’s common to gain some weight due to lack of exercise. Here are my tips.
First, you needn’t pay too much attention to your appearance. Instead, just focus on improving yourself, as your inner quality always outshines your appearance. Second, you can spare more time to take exercise on a regular basis, which will surely help you lose some weight for one thing and improve your health condition for another. Third, you may as well keep a balanced diet. In this way, you can always keep your figure in the long run, no matter where you are.
I do hope my advice can be of some help to you and you can lose weight successfully.
All the best.
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目写作时要按邮件格式写。根据Mike的邮件中提到的问题，给出相应建议，并给他回复
2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来写；时态采用一般现在时为主；在写作时第一段陈述Mike的问题，并讲出认为导致此问题的主要原因；第二段提出建议；第三段希望自己的建议能够帮助到Mike，并结尾。保证行文连贯，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。
8．例文：
To: Dale
From: Li Hua
Hi, Dale,
Everything goes well with me. Thanks. I can understand your feelings. Let’s try to solve it.
First of all, it’s good to try solving problems by yourself first. Prepare to have a conversation with your classmates. Tell them how you’re feeling, why you feel that way and what they can please do to make it better. Usually it works. After that, think about yourself seriously to see if you did something unsuitable so that others gave you nicknames. If so, you’d better correct and make a difference. Finally, take it easy if your classmates just play jokes. You know teenagers are usually interested in everything and creative. Forget it and make friends with them. If they are really evil, you are supposed to ask teachers and parents for help. They should be punished.
Hope everything will be better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于应用文的书信写作，注意书信格式。第一段回答问候，并对发生的事情表示理解和帮助；第二段具体说明解决方法；第三段简单期望，希望事情顺利解决。
2. 写作指导：本文应用第二人称，时态用一般现在时，列举要点要全，条理要清晰，观点要明确，对要点需进行适当补充，注意多变句式，连词以及高级句型的使用。