【好题精选】短文改错 2023年中考英语专题练（四川遂宁）（含解析）

06：【好题精选】短文改错-2023年中考英语专题练（含答案解析）（四川遂宁）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、短文改错(共0分)
1．请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分；
3.将答案写在答题卷上，写在本卷上无效。
I live in the country and my father was a farmer. He is now forty-five year old. Because of hard work, he looks old than his age.
When I was young, he is used to tell me the importance of study. Father knows few about English and other subjects, but he usually gives me some good advices on how to learn my lessons good. He is not only kind to me but also very strict in me. With his help, I’ve made great progress. I’ll never forgets what he taught me. I think my father is best father in the world.
2．下列短文中每行均有两处错误，在原文中找出，并把正确答案写在对应单词的下面。
每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号＾，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
I live in the country and my father was a farmer. He is now forty-five year old.
Because of years of hard work, he looks old than his age. When I was young, he is used to tell me the importance of study.
Father knows little about English and other subject, but he usually gives me some good advices
on how to learn my lessons good. He is not only kind to me but also very strict in me.
With his help, I’ve made great progress. I’ll never to forget what he taught me. I think my father is best father in the world.
3．改正所给短文中的10个错误。多改少改均不得分，把多余的单词用斜线\划掉，在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的单词。在错的单词下划一横线，并在下面写出改正后的单词。
Then one day I watched an English movie call Toy Story. I fell love with this exciting and funny movie! So I began to watch others English movies, too. Although I could not understand everything the characters said, but their body language and the expressions on their faces helped me to get the means. I also realized I could get the meaning by listen for the key words. My pronounce improved as well by listening to the conversations in English movies . I discovered that listen to something interesting are the secret of language learning.
4．下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错误的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：
1.每句不超过两处错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In Sunday morning, a terrible accident happened to my best friend Tom While he is riding a bike to the supermarket, the car suddenly came out. Tom was listening music on his bike and he didn’t pay attention to the car. Luckily, the driver in the car was such careless that he didn’t stop in time and hit Tom. Tom was badly hurt. When I saw he in the hospital, he regretted what he did in the morning. “Because there are much cars in the street and not every driver follows the rules, so you must be careful when you cross the road.” He said to me. “Safety is the more important thing in life.”
5．下面短文中有10处是错误的，请在错误的下面划线，把正确的写在对应的下面，但不得改变原文意思。
As Mother’s Day was geting close, many children were thinking about what gift to buy for they mothers, and so are Tony and Jane. Tony asked his father for one hundred yuan and go to buy a pair of glove, he hoped his mother would feel happy. But differently thinking from Tony, Jane decided to do anything meaningful instead of buying an usual gift. In the end, she painted a nice picture by heart and wrote the following words in it:
I LOVE YOU, MOM! Her mother was real moved when she received it. I agree with Jane, but I think I’d do the same as her next Mother’s Day.
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其横线上面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，并在横线上写出该词用（\）划掉；
修改：在错误的词下划一横线（—）, 并在横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：
每句不超过两处错误；
每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Boys and girls,
Today, I’m very exciting to speak here ____6____
and I'd like to talk my grandma. ____7____
A little months ago, my grandma started to do square dancing ____8____
after supper. Since then, she have been in love with square dancing ____9____
Now she is more healthier. However, some neighbors have a complaint ____10____
against the people which do square dancing. They think that ____11____
the music is such loud that they can’t fall asleep at night. ____12____
In my opinion, people can’t do square dancing because it is ____13____
a good way of keeping health. But they should think about the feelings ____14____
of other peoples and they shouldn’t make a lot of noises. ___15___
That’s all. Thank you!
请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分；
3. 将答案写在答题卷上，写在本卷上无效。
Meals in China is different in some ways from meals in the West. In China, lunch is usually served in about 12 o’clock. As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much early than the people in the West. Generally speaking(一般而言), for dinner, there are lots of dish and chopsticks are use to get most of the food. Besides(此外), Chinese people liked to talk about food, but it’s a good topic(话题) during a meal. When you are having a dinner with the old, you should ask old to eat first and look after them careful. The golden rule is: when you are in China, watch the Chinese and do as them do.
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文中共有10处错误, 每句中最多有两处错误。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Jimmy lost his job a few months ago. One day, he decided taking a job interview. His appointment is at 10 am and it was already 8: 30 am. While waiting at a bus, Jimmy saw an old man kicking the tyre of his car. Jimmy gave him a hand. The old man wondered how many he should pay for Jimmy’s help.Jimmy said there was no need to pay him; he just helped nobody in need, and he had to rush for an interview. An old man offered to give him a lift for Jimmy’s gift. Jimmy got dirty after he repaired the car, so he didn’t have much time to wash the dirt off. One by one, many people left for the interviewer’s office. Finally his name called. To Jimmy’s surprise, the old man he helped early in the morning was the manager of the company. Very soon, Jimmy became one part of the company.
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参考答案：
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【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍了自己的父亲，作者认为自己的父亲是最好的父亲。
【详解】第一行“my father was a farmer”中我的爸爸是一个农民，是客观事实，用一般现在时，可知was错误，需改为is。
第一行由“forty-five”可知，后面接可数名词复数，所以year错误，需改为years。
第二行由后面的“than”可知，应该用old的比较级，所以old错误，需改为older。
第二行中的“he is used to tell me”以及前面的“When I was young”可知，应该是他过去常告诉我学习的重要性，used to意为“过去常常”，所以is used错误，需把is去掉。
第三行由后面的“English”可知，应该用little修饰不可数名词，所以few错误，需改为little。
第四行中的“good advices”中advice是不可数名词，所以advices错误，需改为advice。
第五行中的“learn my lessons good”，good是形容词，learn是动词，要用副词来修饰动词，所以good错误，需改为well。
第五行中的“very strict in me”以及固定搭配be strict with sb“对某人严格”可知，in错误，需改为with。
第六行中的“I’ll never forgets”以及一般将来时的构成：主语+will+动词原形可知，forgets错误，需改为forget。
第六行中“best father”以及形容词最高级前要加定冠词the可知，best前面需加the。
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【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍了自己的父亲，作者认为自己的父亲是最好的父亲。
【详解】错误1：句意：我住在乡下，我的爸爸是一个农民。根据“live”可知用一般现在时，主语“my father”后用is而不用was。故was改为is。
错误2：句意：他现在45岁。根据“forty-five”可知years要用复数形式。故year改为years。
错误3：句意：因为常年艰苦工作，他看起来比他的实际年龄更老一些。根据“than”可知此处用old的比较级older。故old改为older。
错误4：当我年轻的时候，他过去经常给我讲学习的重要性。根据“When I was young”可知主句应用过去时态，used to do sth.“过去常常做某事”。故删掉is。
错误5：句意：爸爸几乎不了解英语和其他的科目，但是他经常给我一些好的关于怎样学好课程的建议。根据“English and other ...”可知是除英语外的其他科目，subject用复数形式。故subject改为subjects。
错误6：句意：爸爸几乎不了解英语和其他的科目，但是他经常给我一些好的关于怎样学好课程的建议。advice是不可数名词，无复数形式。故advices改为advice。
错误7：句意：爸爸几乎不了解英语和其他的科目，但是他经常给我一些好的关于怎样学好课程的建议。根据“to learn my lessons ...”可知此处用副词修饰动词，good的副词形式为well。故good改为well。
错误8：句意：他不仅对我很友善并且对我很严厉。be strict with sb.“对某人要求严格”。故in改为with。
错误9：句意：在他的帮助下，我取得了很大的进步，但是我不会忘记他教给我的东西。will后接动词原形。故删掉to。
错误10：我认为我爸爸是世界上最好的而爸爸。形容词最高级“best”前要加定冠词the。故在best前加the。
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【小题1】call — called
【小题2】fell∧ in 【小题3】others — other 【小题4】but/Although 去掉 【小题5】means — meaning 【小题6】listen — listening 【小题7】pronounce — pronunciation 【小题8】listen — listening 【小题9】are — is 【小题10】of — to
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章讲述作者通过看英语电影学习英语。
【小题1】Then one day I watched an English movie call Toy Story.然后一天我看了一个叫《玩具总动员》的电影。句中的call应用其过去分词做后置定语表被动，故call变为called。
【小题2】 I fell love with this exciting and funny movie!我爱上了这个令人兴奋和有趣的电影。fall in love with“爱上”符合语境，故fell后添加in。
【小题3】So I began to watch others English movies, too. 所以我也开始看其它的英语电影。movies“电影”名词，其前应用形容词修饰，故others变为other。
【小题4】Although I could not understand everything the characters said, but their body language and the expressions on their faces helped me to get the means.尽管我不能理解人物说的每一件事，但是他们的肢体语言和他们脸上的表情帮助我明白意思。although和but不能连用，故划掉but或Although。
【小题5】Although I could not understand everything the characters said, but their body language and the expressions on their faces helped me to get the means.尽管我不能理解人物说的每一件事，但是他们的肢体语言和他们脸上的表情帮助我明白意思。mean“意思是”动词，此处应用名词，故means变为meaning。
【小题6】I also realized I could get the meaning by listen for the key words.我也意识到我能通过听关键词来理解意思。by“通过”介词，后续动名词，故listen变为listening。
【小题7】My pronounce improved as well by listening to the conversations in English movies. 通过听英语电影里的对话我的发音也改善了。my“我的”形容词性物主代词，后续名词，故pronounce变为pronunciation。
【小题8】 I discovered that listen to something interesting are the secret of language learning.我发现听一些有趣的事是语言学习的秘诀。that引导宾语从句，其主语为listen to something interesting，动词作主语应用动名词形式，故listen改为listening。
【小题9】I discovered that listen to something interesting are the secret of language learning.我发现听一些有趣的事是语言学习的秘诀。that引导宾语从句，其主语为listen to something interesting，动名词作主语，谓语动词用第三人称单数，故are变为is。
【小题10】I discovered that listen to something interesting are the secret of language learning.我发现听一些有趣的事是语言学习的秘诀。the secret to“……的秘诀”，故of变为to。
4．In Sunday morning, a terrible accident happened to my best friend Tom. While he is riding a
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【导语】本文主要讲述了汤姆在路上骑自行车听音乐时遭遇了交通事故，作者在医院看见汤姆，告诉他过马路一定要小心，不是每个司机都会遵守交通规则。
【详解】“In Sunday morning, a terrible accident happened to my best friend Tom While he is riding a bike to the supermarket”表示“星期天早上，我最好的朋友汤姆骑自行车去超市时发生了一场可怕的事故”，Sunday morning是具体的一天，用时间介词on修饰，故填In—On。
“In Sunday morning, a terrible accident happened to my best friend Tom While he is riding a bike to the supermarket”表示“星期天早上，我最好的朋友汤姆骑自行车去超市时发生了一场可怕的事故”，根据“happened”可知，从句表示过去某个时刻正在发生的事情，用过去进行时was/were doing的结构，主语he是第三人称单数形式，助动词用was，故填is—was。
“the car suddenly came out”表示“一辆汽车突然开了出来”，“一辆汽车”是泛指，且car是以辅音音素开头的，用不定冠词a修饰，故填the—a。
“Tom was listening music on his bike and he didn’t pay attention to the car”表示“汤姆在自行车上听音乐，他没有注意到汽车”，listen是不及物动词，要接to才能接宾语，故填listening后加to。
“Luckily, the driver in the car was such careless that he didn’t stop in time and hit Tom”表示“不幸运的是，司机太粗心了，他没有及时停车，撞到了汤姆”，汤姆被车撞到了，这是一件不幸的事，故填Luckily—Unluckily。
“Luckily, the driver in the car was such careless that he didn’t stop in time and hit Tom”表示“不幸运的是，司机太粗心了，他没有及时停车，撞到了汤姆”，修饰形容词careless，引用so…that引导结果状语从句，故填such—so。
“When I saw he in the hospital, he regretted what he did in the morning”表示“当我在医院看到他时，他后悔早上的所作所为”，动词saw后接人称代词宾格作宾语，故填he—him。
“Because there are much cars in the street and not every driver follows the rules”表示“因为街上有很多车，并不是每个司机都遵守规则”，修饰可数名词cars要用many，故填much—many。
“Because there are much cars in the street and not every driver follows the rules, so you must be careful when you cross the road”表示“因为街上有很多车，并不是每个司机都遵守规则，所以当你过马路时必须小心”，because和so不能连用，所以要去掉so，故填：去掉so。
“Safety is the more important thing in life”表示“安全是生命中更重要的事”，根据“in life”可知，三者以上的比较要用最高级，important的最高级是most important，故填more—most。
5．geting—getting；they—their；are—were；go—went；glove—gloves；anything—something；an—a；in—on；real—really；but—and。
【导语】本文主要讲述了Tony和Jane为母亲准备了不同的母亲节礼物，作者赞同Jane准备的礼物，打算下一年的母亲节也为母亲准备一张漂亮的画。
【详解】“As Mother’s Day was geting close”表示“随着母亲节的临近”，get的ing形式是getting，故把geting改为getting。
“many children were thinking about what gift to buy for they mothers”表示“许多孩子都在想买什么礼物给他们的母亲”，修饰名词mothers，要用形容词性物主代词their，故把they改为their。
“and so are Tony and Jane”表示“Tony和Jane也是”，描述过去发生的事情，be动词要用were，故把are改为were。
“Tony asked his father for one hundred yuan and go to buy a pair of glove”表示“Tony向父亲要了一百元钱，去买了一双手套”，根据asked可知，句子是一般过去时，动词用过去式，故把go改为went。
“Tony asked his father for one hundred yuan and go to buy a pair of glove”表示“Tony向父亲要了一百元钱，去买了一双手套”，a pair of修饰复数名词，故把glove改为gloves。
“Jane decided to do anything meaningful instead of buying an usual gift”表示“Jane决定做些有意义的事，而不是买一份普通的礼物”，anything常用于否定句或疑问句，肯定句用something，故把anything改为something。
“Jane decided to do anything meaningful instead of buying an usual gift”表示“Jane决定做些有意义的事，而不是买一份普通的礼物”，usual是以辅音音素开头的，用a修饰，故把an改为a。
“In the end, she painted a nice picture by heart and wrote the following words in it”表示“最后，她用心画了一幅漂亮的画，并在上面写下了下面的话”，在图片上写了一些话，应用介词on，故把in改为on。
“Her mother was real moved when she received it”表示“她母亲收到信时真的很感动”，修饰形容词moved，要用副词really，故把real改为really。
“I agree with Jane, but I think I’d do the same as her next Mother’s Day”表示“我同意简的看法，我想在下一个母亲节我也会这样做”，“I agree with Jane”与“I think I’d do the same as her next Mother’s Day”是并列关系，用and连接，故把but改为and。
6．exciting改为excited 7．talk后加about 8．little改为few 9．have改为has 10．more改为much 11．which改为who/that 12．such改为so 13．can’t改为can 14．health改为healthy 15．peoples改为people
【分析】本文作者谈论对于广场舞的看法，并给出自己的建议。
6．Today, I’m very exciting to speak here今天，我很激动能在这里演讲。此处形容词在句中修饰人。所以将exciting改为excited。
7．I'd like to talk my grandma我想谈谈我的奶奶。talk about sb“谈论关于某人”。所以在talk后加about。
8．A little months ago, my grandma started to do square dancing after supper.几个月前，我奶奶晚饭后开始跳广场舞。“months”是可数名词复数，用a few修饰。所以将little改为few。
9．Since then, she have been in love with square dancing.从那时起，她就爱上了方块舞。主语是“she”，助动词用has。所以将have改为has。
10．Now she is more healthier.现在她更健康了。healthier.本身就是形容词比较级，其前不用more修饰。所以将more改为much。
11．However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people which do square dancing.然而，一些邻居对跳广场舞的人有不满。此处含定语从句，先行词是the people，指人。所以将which改为who/that。
12．They think that the music is such loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.他们认为音乐太吵了，他们晚上无法入睡。loud是形容词，应该用so修饰。所以将such改为so。
13．In my opinion, people can’t do square dancing because it is a good way of keeping health.在我看来，人们不能跳广场舞，因为它是保持健康的好方法。跳广场舞是保持健康的好方法，所以可以跳广场舞。所以将can’t改为can。
14．In my opinion, people can’t do square dancing because it is a good way of keeping health.在我看来，人们不能跳广场舞，因为它是保持健康的好方法。keep healthy“保持健康”，用形容词作表语。所以将health改为healthy。
15．But they should think about the feelings of other peoples and they shouldn’t make a lot of noises.但是他们应该考虑到其他人的感受，他们不应该制造很多噪音。people是单复同形的名词，不加s。所以将peoples改为people。
16．is改为are 17．in改为at 18．early改为earlier 19．dish改为dishes 20．use改为used 21．liked改为like 22．but改为so 23．old前加the 24．careful改为carefully 25．them改为they
【导语】本文是说明文，主要讲述了中国饮食方面的习俗。
16．Meals in China is different in some ways from meals in the West.“中国的一餐和西方（国家）的在很多方面都不一样”。句子的主语为Meals，谓语应用复数形式。故is改为are。
17．In China, lunch is usually served in about 12 o’clock.“在中国，午餐大概在12点左右进行”。at表示“在（某一时刻）”，12点为点时间，应用at。故in改为at。
18．As for dinner, Chinese people eat it much early than the people in the West.“对于晚餐，中国吃得比西方人更早”。than为比较级标志，early应用其比较级形式。故early改为earlier。
19．Generally speaking(一般而言), for dinner, there are lots of dish… “一般而言，对于晚餐，有很多菜……”。a lot of修改可数名词复数或不可数名词，dish“菜品”，为可数名词。故dish改为dishes。
20．…chopsticks are use to get most of the food.“筷子被用来吃大部分的食物。chopsticks与use为被动关系，be used to do sth.“被用来做某事”。故use改为used。
21．Chinese people liked to talk about food“中国人喜欢讨论食物”。文章讲的是客观事实，应用一般现在时。故liked改为like。
22．but it’s a good topic(话题) during a meal.“但是那是吃饭时的好话题”。本句与前一句构成因果关系，故but改为so。
23．…you should ask old to eat first…“……你应该让长辈先吃……”。the+形容词表示一类人。故old前加the。
24．…look after them careful.“……并且细心地照顾他们”。副词修饰动词，修饰look after应用副词，故careful改为carefully。
25．when you are in China, watch the Chinese and do as them do.“当你在中国时，观察人们并按他们的做。”as引导从句，后应跟主谓结构。them为宾格，故them改为they。
26．taking—to take 27．is—was 28．at—for 29．many—much 30．nobody—somebody
31．An—The
32．for—as
33．so—but
34．去掉for
35．called—was called
【导语】本文主要讲了吉米在去面试的路上帮助了一个老人，最后发现那个老人是他面试的公司的经理，于是他成为了公司的一员。
26．decide“决定”，其常用搭配为decide to do sth“决定做某事”，其后接动词的不定式。故把taking改为to take。
27．从开头第一句“Jimmy lost his job a few months ago.”可知本文时态为一般过去时，be动词is应改为过去式was。故把is改为was。
28．短语wait for表示“等待”，是固定搭配。故把at改为for。
29．how many“多少”后接可数名词复数形式，句子“…he should pay for Jimmy’s help.”表示应该为吉米的帮助付费多少钱，而金钱是不可数的，应该用how much。故把many改为much。
30．根据句子“he just helped nobody in need,”可知，吉米拒绝要酬劳，仅仅是帮助一些有需要帮助的人，nobody“没有人”，不符合题意，应用somebody“一些人”。故把nobody改为somebody。
31．根据前文的“While waiting at a bus, Jimmy saw an old man kicking the tyre of his car.”可知old man在前文已经出现过，此处是第二次提及, 用定冠词the表示特指。故把An改为The。
32．根据句子“An old man offered to give him a lift for Jimmy's gift.”可知一位老人想载他一程作为礼物，for表示“为……”，as“作为”符合题意。故把for改为as。
33．由前一句“Jimmy got dirty after he repaired the car, ”可知吉米由于修车而弄脏了，却没有时间来清洗，前后是转折关系，用but表示。故把so改为but。
34．根据句子“One by one, many people left for the interviewer's office.”可知，人们一个接一个地离开了面试官的办公室，left for表示“前往”，不符合题意，而left表示“离开”符合题意。故把for去掉。
35．根据句子“Finally his name called.”可知是想表达最终吉米的名字被叫到了，name和动词call之间是动宾关系，用被动语态，其结构为be+过去分词，此处be动词用was。故把called改为was called。