北京市东城区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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北京市东城区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、申请信
1．（2020·北京东城·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你从英国笔友Jim的来信中得知他所在的大学正在招募国际学生参加暑期夏令营活动。你有意参加。请给该大学写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感兴趣；
2. 你打算参加的原因；
3. 询问相关信息。
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2022·北京东城·统考二模）假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你校高三年级将举行纪念高中毕业的植树活动。请给你校外籍教师Jim写邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍活动：
2. 发出邀请。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022·北京东城·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。目前，市动物园正在为一只幼虎全球征名。请给你的英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍活动；
2. 邀请参加。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2022·北京东城·统考模拟预测）假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。近日你校外籍教师Jim为你们年级做了关于心理健康的线上讲座。请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢；
2. 收获。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2021·北京东城·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英语俱乐部的上一任外教Jim为你们推荐了一位新外教。作为俱乐部负责人，请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．讲述新外教给予的帮助。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
6．（2022·北京东城·统考模拟预测）假设你是学校英语俱乐部的负责人李华，请给俱乐部的新任外籍指导教师Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 欢迎并介绍情况；
2. 表达需求和期待。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五、其他应用文
7．（2022·北京东城·统考模拟预测）假设你是红星中学学生李华。近日你打算参加学校举行的英文诗歌朗诵比赛。请你给外籍教师Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你的困难；
2.寻求建议。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2021·北京东城·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。毕业在即，同学们想请曾在你班学习的英国学生Jim录制一段视频。作为班长，请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.视频内容；
2.其它相关事项。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
六、图画作文
9．（2020·北京东城·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序给学校英文报投稿，记述你所居住的小区在你的建议下建立爱心驿站的过程。
注意：1. 词数不少于60;
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词： 物业 the management department
Last week, a rest station was set up at my suggestion in our community. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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试卷第1页，共3页
参考答案：
1．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m from Hongxing Middle School, Beijing, China. I have heard about the summer camp for international students offered by your university. I am very interested in the project.
I have been looking for opportunities to experience campus life in the UK, which will definitely help improve my English and deepen my understanding of the English culture. Therefore, I’m writing to you to learn more about the upcoming project in your university.
I would be grateful if you provide me with some detailed information. First, what activities will be included in the summer camp Apart from this, I also want to know the exact time and fee for the camp.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你从英国笔友Jim的来信中得知他所在的大学正在招募国际学生参加暑期夏令营活动。你有意申请参加。请给该大学写封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感兴趣；2. 你打算参加的原因；3. 询问相关信息。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：hear about(听说)；the summer camp (夏令营)；be interested in(感兴趣)；look for(寻找)；deepen (加深)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、现在进行时、一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成进行时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I would be grateful if you provide me with some detailed information.运用了if引导的条件状语从句；I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.运用it作形式宾语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Jim,
On behalf of Senior 3 students, I’m writing to invite you to take part in a tree-planting activity in the suburb next Saturday.
The activity aims to celebrate our graduation. It might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life. We will plant trees and in the meantime plant seeds of hope for the future! We believe the young trees will grow up, healthy and strong, just like us.
Since you have been with us for 3 years and witnessed our growth, we do hope you can come. So would you like to join us
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你校外籍教师Jim写邮件，邀请他参加你校高三年级即将举行的纪念高中毕业的植树活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→attend
目的是：aim to→be designed to
享受：enjoy→appreciate
同时：in the meantime→meanwhile
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The activity aims to celebrate our graduation. It might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life.
拓展句：The activity aims to celebrate our graduation, which might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you have been with us for 3 years and witnessed our growth, we do hope you can come. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] We believe the young trees will grow up, healthy and strong, just like us. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
3．Dear Jim,
How are you doing recently I’m writing to tell you some information. At present, the city zoo is seeking a name for a young tiger globally.
The young tiger was born in the city zoo last month. The city zoo hopes to seek a name for it, which can not only meet the characteristics of tigers, but also represent Chinese culture. People from all over the world can participate in this activity.
Since I know you are interested in animals, I sincerely invite you to join it. I wonder if you have any special thoughts about this activity. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加市动物园为幼虎全球征名的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近怎么样？How are you doing recently →How is it going recently
现在：at present→now
代表： represent →stand for
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At present, the city zoo is seeking a name for a young tiger globally.
拓展句：At present, the city zoo is holding an activity whose aim is to seek a name for a young tiger globally.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since I know you are interested in animals, I sincerely invite you to join it.（运用了Since引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】I wonder if you have any special thoughts about this activity.（运用了if引导的宾语从句）
4．Dear Jim,
Having been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
Due to the impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, we can only communicate with you online. But it is the first time that I realize the importance of mental health, especially for us at this stage. First of all, I understand that as students, only when we hold a positive attitude towards life and study, can we have a happy life and achieve good grades. What’s more, we must have a correct sense of autonomy and be able to control our emotions well. Last but not least, to learn to live in harmony with classmates should be put inthe first place to integrate well into the class.
The letter paper is very short, but the harvest is very large. All in all, thank you very much for this lecture, which will have a profound impact on my life. I am expecting that the COVID-19 pandemic will end soon and that I can have the opportunity to communicate with you face to face.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校外籍教师Jim写信，表示对他召开线上心理健康讲座的感谢以及自己的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thank→gratitude
重要性：importance→ significance
培养：have→cultivate
影响：impact→effect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
拓展句：Because I have been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But it is the first time that I realize the importance of mental health, especially for us at this stage.（运用了that引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】All in all, thank you very much for this lecture, which will have a profound impact on my life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear Jim,
Hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to thank you for recommending Ms Smith.
She is such a wonderful teacher, a valuable addition to the club. She impresses us with her expertise and kindness. With her help, we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school’s most popular club.
Also, Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area. Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences. Most importantly, we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.
We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again. Well, so much about us. What’s new in your life Do keep us updated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Jim写一封电子邮件，感谢他给与你校英语俱乐部的帮助。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1．表示感谢；
2．讲述新外教给予的帮助。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
impress…with…；engage in；come up with；make a difference；
第三步：连词成句
1. She is such a wonderful teacher, a valuable addition to the club.
2. She impresses us with her expertise and kindness.
3. With her help, we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school’s most popular club.
4. Also, Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area.
5. Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books
6. These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences.
7. Most importantly, we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.
8. We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：Also，Most importantly
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but(供参考)
4.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books (how引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again.(why引导宾语从句)
6．Dear Jim,
On behalf of the students of our English club, I’m writing to convey our genuine welcome to you. Here are some of our expectations for your English class.
First, keen as a majority of students are on learning English, some of us find it difficult to communicate with a native-speaker, so you might as well speak a little bit slowly at the beginning so that we can understand you better. Besides, knowing that you are such a learned scholar, we would appreciate it if you could help us gain an insight into western culture by exposing us to more classic English novels. Last but not least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给给俱乐部的新任外籍指导教师Jim写一封邮件，欢迎并介绍情况，同时表达需求和期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：convey→express
喜爱：be keen on→ be fond of
困难的：difficult→ tough
理解：understand→ comprehend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First, keen as a majority of students are on learning English, some of us find it difficult to communicate with a native-speaker,
拓展句：First, though a majority of students are keen on learning English, some of us find it difficult to communicate with a native-speaker,
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, keen as a majority of students are on learning English, some of us find it difficult to communicate with a native-speaker, so you might as well speak a little bit slowly at the beginning so that we can understand you better.（运用了倒装句，动词不定式作真正的宾语，so that引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, knowing that you are such a learned scholar, we would appreciate it if you could help us gain an insight into western culture by exposing us to more classic English novels. （运用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句，if引导的虚拟语气，省略to的动词不定式作宾补，动名词作宾语）
7．Dear Mr. Jim,
I’m writing to share the exciting news that our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend and I am eager to have a try. Hoping to be well prepared for this competition, I wonder whether it’s convenient for you to give me some advice.
As a Chinese student, I have difficulty in speaking English well, so your corrections on my pronunciation and intonation will be of great value to me. Most importantly, what I need are the skills of recitation, which I believe will perfect my performance.
I’d appreciate it if you could take some time to guide me through all these difficulties. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Jim发一封邮件讲述在准备英文诗歌朗诵比赛遇到的困难，并希望得到他的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望：be eager to→desire to
比赛：contest→competition
建议：advice→suggestio
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’d appreciate it if you could take some time to guide me through all these difficulties.
拓展句：I hope that you will take some time to help me overcome all these difficulties. If so, I would be very grateful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to share the exciting news that our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend and I am eager to have a try.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Hoping to be well prepared for this competition, I wonder whether it’s convenient for you to give me some advice.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句)
8．参考范文：
Dear Jim,
How are you doing It's been a while and we all miss you. I' m writing to invite you to join us in a special event.
You know, we'll graduate in June. It's a pity that you can't be present at the graduation ceremony. But we do hope you can attend in a different way. Would you like to record a short video to express your wishes And it'll be great if you also share with us your life in Britain. I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony and it's bound to bring back fond memories of our time together.
Sounds fun, right Please email it to me by next Sunday, and if you need assistance of any kind, I'd be more than happy to help.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给曾在班里学习的英国学生Jim写一封电子邮件，介绍将要录制的视频的内容和其它相关事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出席：be present at→attend
表达：express→convey
一定：be bound to do→be sure to do
帮助：assistance→support
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony and it's bound to bring back fond memories of our time together.
拓展句：I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony which is bound to bring back fond memories of our time together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It's a pity that you can't be present at the graduation ceremony. (运用了it作形式主语)
[高分句型2] But we do hope you can attend in a different way. (运用了助动词do对谓语动词进行强调)
9．Last week, a rest station was set up at my suggestion in our community.
One day on my way home, I noticed several deliverymen crowding at the entrance to our community. At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea. I decided to do something for them. I went to the management department of our community and suggested setting up a rest station for those deliverymen. The manager listened carefully and thought highly of my suggestion.
The next day, a poster was put up on the bulletin board in our community to call on people to donate. Many neighbors expressed their support and contributed some money. Some food and snacks were prepared soon.
On Friday afternoon, I returned home after school as usual. To my delight, a rest station had been set up. Several deliverymen and one cleaner were having a rest at the station. Some were drinking water, while others were having fruits. Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement. What a meaningful experience! A small act of kindness can make a big difference.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。记述你所居住的小区在你的建议下建立爱心驿站的过程。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.记述你帮忙建立爱心驿站的过程。
2.词数不少于60。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
came up with; set up; think highly of; contribute; a sense of achievement
第三步：连词成句
1. At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea.
2. I went to the management department of our community and suggested setting up a rest station for those deliverymen.
3. The manager listened carefully and thought highly of my suggestion.
4. Many neighbors expressed their support and contributed some money.
5. Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1. 表示文章结构顺序：活动的原因；活动的内容；活动的意义
2. 表示并列补充关系：while; after; and; suddenly
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高级表达方式，如who引导的定语从句：At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea.；现在分词作状语：Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement.等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
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一、申请信
1．（2020·北京东城·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你从英国笔友Jim的来信中得知他所在的大学正在招募国际学生参加暑期夏令营活动。你有意参加。请给该大学写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感兴趣；
2. 你打算参加的原因；
3. 询问相关信息。
注意：1．词数不少于50；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2022·北京东城·统考二模）假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。你校高三年级将举行纪念高中毕业的植树活动。请给你校外籍教师Jim写邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍活动：
2. 发出邀请。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．（2022·北京东城·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。目前，市动物园正在为一只幼虎全球征名。请给你的英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 介绍活动；
2. 邀请参加。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
三、感谢信/祝贺信
4．（2022·北京东城·统考模拟预测）假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。近日你校外籍教师Jim为你们年级做了关于心理健康的线上讲座。请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 感谢；
2. 收获。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2021·北京东城·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英语俱乐部的上一任外教Jim为你们推荐了一位新外教。作为俱乐部负责人，请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．表示感谢；
2．讲述新外教给予的帮助。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、告知信/通知
6．（2022·北京东城·统考模拟预测）假设你是学校英语俱乐部的负责人李华，请给俱乐部的新任外籍指导教师Jim写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 欢迎并介绍情况；
2. 表达需求和期待。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五、其他应用文
7．（2022·北京东城·统考模拟预测）假设你是红星中学学生李华。近日你打算参加学校举行的英文诗歌朗诵比赛。请你给外籍教师Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你的困难；
2.寻求建议。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2021·北京东城·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。毕业在即，同学们想请曾在你班学习的英国学生Jim录制一段视频。作为班长，请你给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.视频内容；
2.其它相关事项。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
六、图画作文
9．（2020·北京东城·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序给学校英文报投稿，记述你所居住的小区在你的建议下建立爱心驿站的过程。
注意：1. 词数不少于60;
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词： 物业 the management department
Last week, a rest station was set up at my suggestion in our community. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m from Hongxing Middle School, Beijing, China. I have heard about the summer camp for international students offered by your university. I am very interested in the project.
I have been looking for opportunities to experience campus life in the UK, which will definitely help improve my English and deepen my understanding of the English culture. Therefore, I’m writing to you to learn more about the upcoming project in your university.
I would be grateful if you provide me with some detailed information. First, what activities will be included in the summer camp Apart from this, I also want to know the exact time and fee for the camp.
Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你从英国笔友Jim的来信中得知他所在的大学正在招募国际学生参加暑期夏令营活动。你有意申请参加。请给该大学写封邮件，内容包括：1. 表示感兴趣；2. 你打算参加的原因；3. 询问相关信息。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：hear about(听说)；the summer camp (夏令营)；be interested in(感兴趣)；look for(寻找)；deepen (加深)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用现在完成时、现在进行时、一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成进行时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I would be grateful if you provide me with some detailed information.运用了if引导的条件状语从句；I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me an early reply.运用it作形式宾语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear Jim,
On behalf of Senior 3 students, I’m writing to invite you to take part in a tree-planting activity in the suburb next Saturday.
The activity aims to celebrate our graduation. It might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life. We will plant trees and in the meantime plant seeds of hope for the future! We believe the young trees will grow up, healthy and strong, just like us.
Since you have been with us for 3 years and witnessed our growth, we do hope you can come. So would you like to join us
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你校外籍教师Jim写邮件，邀请他参加你校高三年级即将举行的纪念高中毕业的植树活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→attend
目的是：aim to→be designed to
享受：enjoy→appreciate
同时：in the meantime→meanwhile
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The activity aims to celebrate our graduation. It might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life.
拓展句：The activity aims to celebrate our graduation, which might be one of the few occasions when all of us can get together to enjoy senior high school life.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Since you have been with us for 3 years and witnessed our growth, we do hope you can come. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] We believe the young trees will grow up, healthy and strong, just like us. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
3．Dear Jim,
How are you doing recently I’m writing to tell you some information. At present, the city zoo is seeking a name for a young tiger globally.
The young tiger was born in the city zoo last month. The city zoo hopes to seek a name for it, which can not only meet the characteristics of tigers, but also represent Chinese culture. People from all over the world can participate in this activity.
Since I know you are interested in animals, I sincerely invite you to join it. I wonder if you have any special thoughts about this activity. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加市动物园为幼虎全球征名的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近怎么样？How are you doing recently →How is it going recently
现在：at present→now
代表： represent →stand for
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At present, the city zoo is seeking a name for a young tiger globally.
拓展句：At present, the city zoo is holding an activity whose aim is to seek a name for a young tiger globally.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since I know you are interested in animals, I sincerely invite you to join it.（运用了Since引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】I wonder if you have any special thoughts about this activity.（运用了if引导的宾语从句）
4．Dear Jim,
Having been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
Due to the impact of the COVID-19 pandemic, we can only communicate with you online. But it is the first time that I realize the importance of mental health, especially for us at this stage. First of all, I understand that as students, only when we hold a positive attitude towards life and study, can we have a happy life and achieve good grades. What’s more, we must have a correct sense of autonomy and be able to control our emotions well. Last but not least, to learn to live in harmony with classmates should be put inthe first place to integrate well into the class.
The letter paper is very short, but the harvest is very large. All in all, thank you very much for this lecture, which will have a profound impact on my life. I am expecting that the COVID-19 pandemic will end soon and that I can have the opportunity to communicate with you face to face.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校外籍教师Jim写信，表示对他召开线上心理健康讲座的感谢以及自己的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：thank→gratitude
重要性：importance→ significance
培养：have→cultivate
影响：impact→effect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Having been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
拓展句：Because I have been benefited a lot from your online mental health seminar, I am writing to express my thanks to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But it is the first time that I realize the importance of mental health, especially for us at this stage.（运用了that引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】All in all, thank you very much for this lecture, which will have a profound impact on my life.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear Jim,
Hope this email finds you well. I’m writing to thank you for recommending Ms Smith.
She is such a wonderful teacher, a valuable addition to the club. She impresses us with her expertise and kindness. With her help, we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school’s most popular club.
Also, Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area. Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences. Most importantly, we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.
We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again. Well, so much about us. What’s new in your life Do keep us updated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给Jim写一封电子邮件，感谢他给与你校英语俱乐部的帮助。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1．表示感谢；
2．讲述新外教给予的帮助。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
impress…with…；engage in；come up with；make a difference；
第三步：连词成句
1. She is such a wonderful teacher, a valuable addition to the club.
2. She impresses us with her expertise and kindness.
3. With her help, we have engaged in activities of all kinds and we are now our school’s most popular club.
4. Also, Ms Smith came up with the idea to donate English books to students in a rural area.
5. Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books
6. These reading materials will surely help enrich their experiences.
7. Most importantly, we feel the joy of being able to make a difference.
8. We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：Also，Most importantly
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but(供参考)
4.表因果关系：So
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Can you imagine how happy they were when receiving those books (how引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] We believe you are part of why all these have happened, so please allow me to say thank you again.(why引导宾语从句)
6．Dear Jim,
On behalf of the students of our English club, I’m writing to convey our genuine welcome to you. Here are some of our expectations for your English class.
First, keen as a majority of students are on learning English, some of us find it difficult to communicate with a native-speaker, so you might as well speak a little bit slowly at the beginning so that we can understand you better. Besides, knowing that you are such a learned scholar, we would appreciate it if you could help us gain an insight into western culture by exposing us to more classic English novels. Last but not least, please give us some guidance and training in our pronunciation, because we all hope to speak English fluently and clearly just as you native speakers do. Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给给俱乐部的新任外籍指导教师Jim写一封邮件，欢迎并介绍情况，同时表达需求和期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：convey→express
喜爱：be keen on→ be fond of
困难的：difficult→ tough
理解：understand→ comprehend
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First, keen as a majority of students are on learning English, some of us find it difficult to communicate with a native-speaker,
拓展句：First, though a majority of students are keen on learning English, some of us find it difficult to communicate with a native-speaker,
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, keen as a majority of students are on learning English, some of us find it difficult to communicate with a native-speaker, so you might as well speak a little bit slowly at the beginning so that we can understand you better.（运用了倒装句，动词不定式作真正的宾语，so that引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】Besides, knowing that you are such a learned scholar, we would appreciate it if you could help us gain an insight into western culture by exposing us to more classic English novels. （运用了现在分词作状语，that引导宾语从句，if引导的虚拟语气，省略to的动词不定式作宾补，动名词作宾语）
7．Dear Mr. Jim,
I’m writing to share the exciting news that our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend and I am eager to have a try. Hoping to be well prepared for this competition, I wonder whether it’s convenient for you to give me some advice.
As a Chinese student, I have difficulty in speaking English well, so your corrections on my pronunciation and intonation will be of great value to me. Most importantly, what I need are the skills of recitation, which I believe will perfect my performance.
I’d appreciate it if you could take some time to guide me through all these difficulties. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Jim发一封邮件讲述在准备英文诗歌朗诵比赛遇到的困难，并希望得到他的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
渴望：be eager to→desire to
比赛：contest→competition
建议：advice→suggestio
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’d appreciate it if you could take some time to guide me through all these difficulties.
拓展句：I hope that you will take some time to help me overcome all these difficulties. If so, I would be very grateful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to share the exciting news that our school will hold an English Poetry Reading Contest next weekend and I am eager to have a try.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】Hoping to be well prepared for this competition, I wonder whether it’s convenient for you to give me some advice.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句)
8．参考范文：
Dear Jim,
How are you doing It's been a while and we all miss you. I' m writing to invite you to join us in a special event.
You know, we'll graduate in June. It's a pity that you can't be present at the graduation ceremony. But we do hope you can attend in a different way. Would you like to record a short video to express your wishes And it'll be great if you also share with us your life in Britain. I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony and it's bound to bring back fond memories of our time together.
Sounds fun, right Please email it to me by next Sunday, and if you need assistance of any kind, I'd be more than happy to help.
Yours,
Li Hua.
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给曾在班里学习的英国学生Jim写一封电子邮件，介绍将要录制的视频的内容和其它相关事项。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出席：be present at→attend
表达：express→convey
一定：be bound to do→be sure to do
帮助：assistance→support
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony and it's bound to bring back fond memories of our time together.
拓展句：I bet the video will be a hit at the ceremony which is bound to bring back fond memories of our time together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It's a pity that you can't be present at the graduation ceremony. (运用了it作形式主语)
[高分句型2] But we do hope you can attend in a different way. (运用了助动词do对谓语动词进行强调)
9．Last week, a rest station was set up at my suggestion in our community.
One day on my way home, I noticed several deliverymen crowding at the entrance to our community. At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea. I decided to do something for them. I went to the management department of our community and suggested setting up a rest station for those deliverymen. The manager listened carefully and thought highly of my suggestion.
The next day, a poster was put up on the bulletin board in our community to call on people to donate. Many neighbors expressed their support and contributed some money. Some food and snacks were prepared soon.
On Friday afternoon, I returned home after school as usual. To my delight, a rest station had been set up. Several deliverymen and one cleaner were having a rest at the station. Some were drinking water, while others were having fruits. Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement. What a meaningful experience! A small act of kindness can make a big difference.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。记述你所居住的小区在你的建议下建立爱心驿站的过程。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：记叙文。
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时。
结构：总分法。
要求：
1.记述你帮忙建立爱心驿站的过程。
2.词数不少于60。
第二步：列提纲（重点短语）
came up with; set up; think highly of; contribute; a sense of achievement
第三步：连词成句
1. At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea.
2. I went to the management department of our community and suggested setting up a rest station for those deliverymen.
3. The manager listened carefully and thought highly of my suggestion.
4. Many neighbors expressed their support and contributed some money.
5. Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1. 表示文章结构顺序：活动的原因；活动的内容；活动的意义
2. 表示并列补充关系：while; after; and; suddenly
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高级表达方式，如who引导的定语从句：At the sight of the workers who were sweating over the work, I suddenly came up with an idea.；现在分词作状语：Seeing the bright smiles on their faces, I felt a sense of achievement.等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。
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