北京市丰台区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作（含答案）
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北京市丰台区三年（2020-2022）高考英语模拟试题分题型分层-写作
一、建议信
1．（2021·北京丰台·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和学校英国交换生Chris一起报名参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演，但是你因故不能参加。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 不能参加的原因；
3. 解决办法建议。
注意：1. 词数100字左右；
2. 文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2022·北京丰台·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将开展每天锻炼一小时的活动。请你给交换生 Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1．邀请理由：
2．锻炼的具体安排。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hu
三、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·北京丰台·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim发来邮件询问你近期在家通过网络学习的情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 你每天的学习安排；
2. 你的收获。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、推荐信
4．（2022·北京丰台·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校来自英国的交换生Jim发邮件请你推荐一门学校特色课程：请你用英文给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你推荐的课程；
2.你的理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2020·北京丰台·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim即将来京，并打算 利用周末时间游览一处北京古代建筑。他发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你的推荐；2.说明理由。
注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
6．（2021·北京丰台·统考一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris和你都喜欢观察和记录生活。他在邮件中询问你记录生活的方式，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 你记录生活的方式（日记、vlog等）；
2. 你的感受与收获。
注意：1. 词数不少于100字；
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
六、图画作文
7．（2020·北京丰台·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为提高学生的生活技能，你们班上周组织了一次“厨艺秀”。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记， 记述整个过程。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2020·北京丰台·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“科技让生活更美好”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述参观科技公司的整个过程。
注意： 词数不少于60。
提示词：3D打印机 3D printer
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参考答案：
1．Dear Chris,
I feel terribly sorry that I can't make my way to our show on the Festival of Traditional Culture.
Unfortunately, I hurt myself accidentally when I was playing basketball last night. As a result, I'm suffering a badly fractured arm, which means it's impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show will be blown up.
Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. As an enthusiast, he's an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.
I do understand you need me badly but I still hope you could forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Chris写封道歉信，向他道歉并解释不能参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演出：show→performance
建议：recommend→suggest
原谅：forgive→pardon
意外地：accidentally = by accident
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：As an enthusiast, he's an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.
拓展句：As an enthusiast, he's not only an excellent Taiji player, but also very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a result, I'm suffering a badly fractured arm, which means it's impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show will be blown up. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. (运用了现在分词短语作状语，recommend后省略that引导的宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
2．Dear Jim,
How’s everything going I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, One-hour Workout Every Day.
I know you’re really into sports, and the workout is just perfect for you. It’s a good chance to build up your body and sweat away your stress.
The workout is scheduled on every weekday from 5 pm to 6 pm. We will first gather at the school field for a 10-minute warmup. After that, you can choose either to exercise indoors or outdoors. Sports like swimming, basketball and badminton are all available in our indoor stadium. If you prefer to exercise in the open air, you can run laps or play football to burn your calories.
I’m looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加你校将开展每天锻炼一小时的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：join in →take part in
喜欢：be into → be fond of
机会：chance →opportunity
期望：look forward to →expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, One-hour Workout Every Day.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, which is called One-hour Workout Every Day.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s a good chance to build up your body and sweat away your stress. (运用了it作形式主语，真正主语为不定式的结构)
[高分句型2] If you prefer to exercise in the open air, you can run laps or play football to burn your calories. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3．Dear Jim,
Thanks for your concern and I’m glad to share my experience of e-learning.
My day begins from 8 am. I have online lessons in the morning following the school schedule. Can you believe we even have indoor P.E. classes to keep fit In the afternoon, I read, review or preview my lessons according to my plan. In case of problems, I will ask my teachers for help or discuss with my classmates online.
Compared with classroom learning, e-learning requires self-discipline. Encouraged by my teachers and parents, I’ve become more disciplined and learned to manage time more effectively.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim发来邮件询问你近期在家通过网络学习的情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 你每天的学习安排；2. 你的收获。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：thanks for (感谢)；online lessons (网课)；keep fit (保持健康)；according to(根据)；in case of (假如)；discuss with (讨论)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Can you believe we even have indoor P.E. classes to keep fit 运用宾语从句；Encouraged by my teachers and parents, I’ve become more disciplined and learned to manage time more effectively.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Jim,
How is it going I’m writing to recommend a distinctive course to you — Chinese Kungfu.
This course is perfect for you. First, it is great for your overall health. Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible. It can also reduce your stress and keep you in a relaxed mood. What’s more, the course is interactive. During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others. I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.
Are you ready to give it a go Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向来自英因的交换生Jim发邮件推荐一门学校特色课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐：recommend→suggest/advise
此外：besides → what’s more
包括：involve→include
合作：cooperate with→ deal with/get along well with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others.
拓展句：When you are training, you can get positive feedback and learn how you can cooperate with others.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
5．Dear Jim,
I’m pleased to learn that you’re coming to Beijing. I’m writing to recommend you an amazing ancient architecture in Beijing—the Summer Palace.
The Summer Palace is located in the western suburbs of Beijing and it’s easy to go there by bus. This ancient royal garden is beautifully composed of palaces, temples, gardens and lakes. It is the largest garden in China, which has been enjoying great popularity. What’s more, the Summer Palace is also the center of cultural and historical relics. I’m sure you will be amazed at the wonderful place.
Finally, I do hope that you will have a good time in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向朋友介绍一处北京古代建筑。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明推荐的地方
2.推荐理由
1）介绍位置。（location）
2）自然风光。（natural scenery）
3）文化历史意义。（cultural and historical meaning）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be pleased to; recommend; be located in; beautifully; be composed of; largest; the center of; have a good time
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m pleased to learn that you’re coming to Beijing.
2. I’m writing to recommend you an amazing ancient architecture in Beijing—the Summer Palace.
3. The Summer Palace is located in the western suburbs of Beijing.
4. This ancient royal garden is beautifully composed of palaces, temples, gardens and lakes.
5. It is the largest garden in China.
6. What’s more, the Summer Palace is also the center of cultural and historical relics.
7. I do hope that you will have a good time in China..
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：It is the largest garden in China, which has been enjoying great popularity.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be pleased to; be located in; have a good time等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Possible version 1:
Dear Chris,
How is everything going Knowing that you’re curious about how I take a record of my life, I’m more than happy to share it with you.
Since I was a little child, I’ve been friends with diary, with whom I can share my deepest feelings and thoughts. When I read my diary page by page, all my memories flash back clearly to me. It’s a really valuable record of my growth.
Nowadays, many teenagers around me prefer to share their vlogs on the social media like bilibili or WeChat momets. But as for me, diary is like wine, the longer, the better. It will be my life-lasting friend.
What about you I’m looking forward to your earliest reply. （129words）
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Chris,
How are you doing It’s a pleasure to receive your email asking me about the ways I record my daily life and I’d love to share them with you.
I have developed a habit of keeping a diary since I was young. My diary is not only the place where I take down whatever happens to me but a best friend who I can tell my deepest feelings and thoughts to.
Recently, I have been experimenting with vlog, which, as you know, is an increasingly popular way of recording life. Videoing the cherished moments and sharing them on social media is such an experience that I have gained great pleasure from it.
In my opinion, whatever the way is, it is to prepare you to have a taste of the beauty of life. What do you think of it
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Chris回封邮件，告诉他你记录生活的方式。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1. 你记录生活的方式（日记、vlog等）；
2. 你的感受与收获。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be curious about；take a record of；share…with…；be friends with；page by page；as for；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing that you’re curious about how I take a record of my life, I’m more than happy to share it with you.
2.Since I was a little child, I’ve been friends with diary, with whom I can share my deepest feelings and thoughts.
3. When I read my diary page by page, all my memories flash back clearly to me.
4. It’s a really valuable record of my growth.
5. Nowadays, many teenagers around me prefer to share their vlogs on the social media like bilibili or WeChat moments.
6. But as for me, diary is like wine, the longer, the better.
7. It will be my life-lasting friend.
8. I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系： But
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you’re curious about how I take a record of my life, I’m more than happy to share it with you.(现在分词knowing作状语)
[高分句型2] Since I was a little child, I’ve been friends with diary, with whom I can share my deepest feelings and thoughts.(with whom引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] When I read my diary page by page, all my memories flash back clearly to me.(when引导时间状语从句)
7．Last Friday, our teacher announced that in order to improve students' life skills, our class would organize a "cooking show" activity, which required everyone to make a meal for their parents that weekend. On hearing this, everyone was very excited and thought about what they planned to make. As it was my first-time cooking, I decided to start with something simple, so I planned to make two simple stir-fries. Although I came across some troubles during the process, under the guidance of my parents, I finally made it. When the hot food was served, my parents praised me for my delicious food and pointed out what to be improved. The next day, my classmates and I shared our experiences at the class meeting. We all agreed that it was a meaningful activity, which not only improved our life skills, but also gave us a chance to express our gratitude to our parents.
【分析】本篇书面表达是图画作文，要求根据四幅图的内容写一篇周记。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求根据四幅图的内容写一篇周记：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为提高学生的生活技能，你们班上周组织了一次“厨艺秀”。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记， 记述整个过程，时态应为一般过去时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； improve（提高），life skill（生活技能），require（要求），cooking show（厨艺秀），stir-fry（一盘炒菜）， meaningful（有意义的），serve（端菜上桌）及gratitude（感谢）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有in order to（为了），make a meal (做饭)，under the guidance of （在……的指导下），point out（指出），think about（考虑），make it（成功）以及come across（遇到），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Last Friday, our teacher announced that in order to improve students' life skills, our class would organize a "cooking show" activity, which required everyone to make a meal for their parents that weekend.”及“We all agreed that it was a meaningful activity, which not only improved our life skills, but also gave us a chance to express our gratitude to our parents.”，状语从句“As it was my first-time cooking, I decided to start with something simple, so I planned to make two simple stir-fries.”及“Although I came across some troubles during the process, under the guidance of my parents, I finally made it.”，宾语从句和非谓语动词“On hearing this, everyone was very excited and thought about what they planned to make.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
8．Last Friday, our class organized an activity themed “Technology makes life better”.
In the morning, we set off for a technology company. An engineer there welcomed us and gave a lecture on 3D printing, introducing its history, development and application in fields like architecture, medicine, etc. Then he showed us how the 3D printer works. We were amazed at the magic of technology and couldn’t wait to give it a try. Our group first designed a 3D model of a bike and then operated the printer as instructed. Watching the bike gradually taking shape, we felt excited. When all our works were displayed on the table, we admired them and some took photos to record this unforgettable experience.
This is really an educative and eye-opening activity in which I was impressed with the convenience and benefits brought by technology.
【分析】这是一篇图画类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“科技让生活更美好”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述参观科技公司的整个过程。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：set off (出发)；3D printer (3D打印机)；architecture (建筑学)；be amazed at (惊讶于)；give it a try (尝试)；be impressed with(对……印象深刻)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Then he showed us how the 3D printer works.运用宾语从句；When all our works were displayed on the table, we admired them and some took photos to record this unforgettable experience.运用了时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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一、建议信
1．（2021·北京丰台·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和学校英国交换生Chris一起报名参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演，但是你因故不能参加。请你给Chris写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达歉意；
2. 不能参加的原因；
3. 解决办法建议。
注意：1. 词数100字左右；
2. 文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、邀请信
2．（2022·北京丰台·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校将开展每天锻炼一小时的活动。请你给交换生 Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：
1．邀请理由：
2．锻炼的具体安排。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hu
三、感谢信/祝贺信
3．（2020·北京丰台·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim发来邮件询问你近期在家通过网络学习的情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 你每天的学习安排；
2. 你的收获。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
四、推荐信
4．（2022·北京丰台·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你校来自英国的交换生Jim发邮件请你推荐一门学校特色课程：请你用英文给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你推荐的课程；
2.你的理由。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，
Dear Jim,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．（2020·北京丰台·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim即将来京，并打算 利用周末时间游览一处北京古代建筑。他发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你的推荐；2.说明理由。
注意：1.词数不少于50；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
五、其他应用文
6．（2021·北京丰台·统考一模）假如你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Chris和你都喜欢观察和记录生活。他在邮件中询问你记录生活的方式，请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 你记录生活的方式（日记、vlog等）；
2. 你的感受与收获。
注意：1. 词数不少于100字；
2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。
Dear Chris,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
六、图画作文
7．（2020·北京丰台·统考二模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为提高学生的生活技能，你们班上周组织了一次“厨艺秀”。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记， 记述整个过程。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2020·北京丰台·统考一模）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“科技让生活更美好”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述参观科技公司的整个过程。
注意： 词数不少于60。
提示词：3D打印机 3D printer
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参考答案：
1．Dear Chris,
I feel terribly sorry that I can't make my way to our show on the Festival of Traditional Culture.
Unfortunately, I hurt myself accidentally when I was playing basketball last night. As a result, I'm suffering a badly fractured arm, which means it's impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show will be blown up.
Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. As an enthusiast, he's an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.
I do understand you need me badly but I still hope you could forgive me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国交换生Chris写封道歉信，向他道歉并解释不能参加学校下个月举办的“传统文化节”节目展演的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
演出：show→performance
建议：recommend→suggest
原谅：forgive→pardon
意外地：accidentally = by accident
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：As an enthusiast, he's an excellent Taiji player. Besides, Jim is very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.
拓展句：As an enthusiast, he's not only an excellent Taiji player, but also very cooperative and easygoing, who's the most suitable person I can think of.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a result, I'm suffering a badly fractured arm, which means it's impossible for me to practice Taijiquan for at least a month and my show will be blown up. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Knowing that you have been waiting for this moment so long, I strongly recommend Jim replace me. (运用了现在分词短语作状语，recommend后省略that引导的宾语从句用了虚拟语气)
2．Dear Jim,
How’s everything going I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, One-hour Workout Every Day.
I know you’re really into sports, and the workout is just perfect for you. It’s a good chance to build up your body and sweat away your stress.
The workout is scheduled on every weekday from 5 pm to 6 pm. We will first gather at the school field for a 10-minute warmup. After that, you can choose either to exercise indoors or outdoors. Sports like swimming, basketball and badminton are all available in our indoor stadium. If you prefer to exercise in the open air, you can run laps or play football to burn your calories.
I’m looking forward to your participation.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给交换生Jim写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加你校将开展每天锻炼一小时的活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：join in →take part in
喜欢：be into → be fond of
机会：chance →opportunity
期望：look forward to →expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, One-hour Workout Every Day.
拓展句：I’m writing to invite you to join in our school’s fitness program, which is called One-hour Workout Every Day.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s a good chance to build up your body and sweat away your stress. (运用了it作形式主语，真正主语为不定式的结构)
[高分句型2] If you prefer to exercise in the open air, you can run laps or play football to burn your calories. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3．Dear Jim,
Thanks for your concern and I’m glad to share my experience of e-learning.
My day begins from 8 am. I have online lessons in the morning following the school schedule. Can you believe we even have indoor P.E. classes to keep fit In the afternoon, I read, review or preview my lessons according to my plan. In case of problems, I will ask my teachers for help or discuss with my classmates online.
Compared with classroom learning, e-learning requires self-discipline. Encouraged by my teachers and parents, I’ve become more disciplined and learned to manage time more effectively.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇提纲类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim发来邮件询问你近期在家通过网络学习的情况。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1. 你每天的学习安排；2. 你的收获。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：thanks for (感谢)；online lessons (网课)；keep fit (保持健康)；according to(根据)；in case of (假如)；discuss with (讨论)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Can you believe we even have indoor P.E. classes to keep fit 运用宾语从句；Encouraged by my teachers and parents, I’ve become more disciplined and learned to manage time more effectively.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4．Dear Jim,
How is it going I’m writing to recommend a distinctive course to you — Chinese Kungfu.
This course is perfect for you. First, it is great for your overall health. Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible. It can also reduce your stress and keep you in a relaxed mood. What’s more, the course is interactive. During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others. I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.
Are you ready to give it a go Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向来自英因的交换生Jim发邮件推荐一门学校特色课程。
【详解】1.词汇积累
推荐：recommend→suggest/advise
此外：besides → what’s more
包括：involve→include
合作：cooperate with→ deal with/get along well with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During the training, you can get positive feedback and learn how to cooperate with others.
拓展句：When you are training, you can get positive feedback and learn how you can cooperate with others.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese Kungfu involves a lot of body movements, which can make you stronger and more flexible.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I’m sure you can benefit a lot from it.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
5．Dear Jim,
I’m pleased to learn that you’re coming to Beijing. I’m writing to recommend you an amazing ancient architecture in Beijing—the Summer Palace.
The Summer Palace is located in the western suburbs of Beijing and it’s easy to go there by bus. This ancient royal garden is beautifully composed of palaces, temples, gardens and lakes. It is the largest garden in China, which has been enjoying great popularity. What’s more, the Summer Palace is also the center of cultural and historical relics. I’m sure you will be amazed at the wonderful place.
Finally, I do hope that you will have a good time in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，向朋友介绍一处北京古代建筑。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1.表明推荐的地方
2.推荐理由
1）介绍位置。（location）
2）自然风光。（natural scenery）
3）文化历史意义。（cultural and historical meaning）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be pleased to; recommend; be located in; beautifully; be composed of; largest; the center of; have a good time
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m pleased to learn that you’re coming to Beijing.
2. I’m writing to recommend you an amazing ancient architecture in Beijing—the Summer Palace.
3. The Summer Palace is located in the western suburbs of Beijing.
4. This ancient royal garden is beautifully composed of palaces, temples, gardens and lakes.
5. It is the largest garden in China.
6. What’s more, the Summer Palace is also the center of cultural and historical relics.
7. I do hope that you will have a good time in China..
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：It is the largest garden in China, which has been enjoying great popularity.这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；也使用了一些固定词组，如be pleased to; be located in; have a good time等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Possible version 1:
Dear Chris,
How is everything going Knowing that you’re curious about how I take a record of my life, I’m more than happy to share it with you.
Since I was a little child, I’ve been friends with diary, with whom I can share my deepest feelings and thoughts. When I read my diary page by page, all my memories flash back clearly to me. It’s a really valuable record of my growth.
Nowadays, many teenagers around me prefer to share their vlogs on the social media like bilibili or WeChat momets. But as for me, diary is like wine, the longer, the better. It will be my life-lasting friend.
What about you I’m looking forward to your earliest reply. （129words）
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Chris,
How are you doing It’s a pleasure to receive your email asking me about the ways I record my daily life and I’d love to share them with you.
I have developed a habit of keeping a diary since I was young. My diary is not only the place where I take down whatever happens to me but a best friend who I can tell my deepest feelings and thoughts to.
Recently, I have been experimenting with vlog, which, as you know, is an increasingly popular way of recording life. Videoing the cherished moments and sharing them on social media is such an experience that I have gained great pleasure from it.
In my opinion, whatever the way is, it is to prepare you to have a taste of the beauty of life. What do you think of it
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Chris回封邮件，告诉他你记录生活的方式。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分总法
要求：
1. 你记录生活的方式（日记、vlog等）；
2. 你的感受与收获。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
be curious about；take a record of；share…with…；be friends with；page by page；as for；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1.Knowing that you’re curious about how I take a record of my life, I’m more than happy to share it with you.
2.Since I was a little child, I’ve been friends with diary, with whom I can share my deepest feelings and thoughts.
3. When I read my diary page by page, all my memories flash back clearly to me.
4. It’s a really valuable record of my growth.
5. Nowadays, many teenagers around me prefer to share their vlogs on the social media like bilibili or WeChat moments.
6. But as for me, diary is like wine, the longer, the better.
7. It will be my life-lasting friend.
8. I’m looking forward to your earliest reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系： But
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you’re curious about how I take a record of my life, I’m more than happy to share it with you.(现在分词knowing作状语)
[高分句型2] Since I was a little child, I’ve been friends with diary, with whom I can share my deepest feelings and thoughts.(with whom引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型3] When I read my diary page by page, all my memories flash back clearly to me.(when引导时间状语从句)
7．Last Friday, our teacher announced that in order to improve students' life skills, our class would organize a "cooking show" activity, which required everyone to make a meal for their parents that weekend. On hearing this, everyone was very excited and thought about what they planned to make. As it was my first-time cooking, I decided to start with something simple, so I planned to make two simple stir-fries. Although I came across some troubles during the process, under the guidance of my parents, I finally made it. When the hot food was served, my parents praised me for my delicious food and pointed out what to be improved. The next day, my classmates and I shared our experiences at the class meeting. We all agreed that it was a meaningful activity, which not only improved our life skills, but also gave us a chance to express our gratitude to our parents.
【分析】本篇书面表达是图画作文，要求根据四幅图的内容写一篇周记。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求根据四幅图的内容写一篇周记：假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。为提高学生的生活技能，你们班上周组织了一次“厨艺秀”。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记， 记述整个过程，时态应为一般过去时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； improve（提高），life skill（生活技能），require（要求），cooking show（厨艺秀），stir-fry（一盘炒菜）， meaningful（有意义的），serve（端菜上桌）及gratitude（感谢）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有in order to（为了），make a meal (做饭)，under the guidance of （在……的指导下），point out（指出），think about（考虑），make it（成功）以及come across（遇到），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“Last Friday, our teacher announced that in order to improve students' life skills, our class would organize a "cooking show" activity, which required everyone to make a meal for their parents that weekend.”及“We all agreed that it was a meaningful activity, which not only improved our life skills, but also gave us a chance to express our gratitude to our parents.”，状语从句“As it was my first-time cooking, I decided to start with something simple, so I planned to make two simple stir-fries.”及“Although I came across some troubles during the process, under the guidance of my parents, I finally made it.”，宾语从句和非谓语动词“On hearing this, everyone was very excited and thought about what they planned to make.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
8．Last Friday, our class organized an activity themed “Technology makes life better”.
In the morning, we set off for a technology company. An engineer there welcomed us and gave a lecture on 3D printing, introducing its history, development and application in fields like architecture, medicine, etc. Then he showed us how the 3D printer works. We were amazed at the magic of technology and couldn’t wait to give it a try. Our group first designed a 3D model of a bike and then operated the printer as instructed. Watching the bike gradually taking shape, we felt excited. When all our works were displayed on the table, we admired them and some took photos to record this unforgettable experience.
This is really an educative and eye-opening activity in which I was impressed with the convenience and benefits brought by technology.
【分析】这是一篇图画类写作。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“科技让生活更美好”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述参观科技公司的整个过程。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：set off (出发)；3D printer (3D打印机)；architecture (建筑学)；be amazed at (惊讶于)；give it a try (尝试)；be impressed with(对……印象深刻)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Then he showed us how the 3D printer works.运用宾语从句；When all our works were displayed on the table, we admired them and some took photos to record this unforgettable experience.运用了时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
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